I guess since there are more diffs now, I'm giving this one another look again~
GeneralSo you added the diff's from jericho and Hikato.
Why not add their names to the Tags? :3
The Filesize is 23.1 MB. Can you get it to < 20 MB somehow? ><
EasyMost Inherited Timing Sections are 10ms to late~
It doesn't affect the map in general though, but the section at 03:03:890 should be fixed~
I would like to see that you fix those other timing sections as well then... .,.
02:29:192 (1) - Uhm well, can you make this slider two ticks shorter, so that it end on the white tick?
Combos are good to me, I don't like those custom hitsounds but well....
Next diff~
NormalSame as Easy, Inherited Timing Sections are 10ms too late~
00:41:380 (3) - Make this one end at 00:41:848~
01:50:755 (3) - ^, let it end at 01:51:223 though~
01:58:255 (3) - ^, let it end at 01:58:723~
02:28:255 (3) - I guess I'm pretty much fine with it here, but since you used the other "pattern" more frequently, with that one slider being this tad longer, I would like to see that being changed here as well (make this slider end at 02:28:723~)
02:30:130 (3) - ^, (make this one end at 02:30:598~)
I guess that's all for Normal...
HikafunHere are also some timing sections 10ms late, but not that much..... maybe change this~
00:19:348 (1) - Sharp slider is sharp.... can you make this one a bit smoother?
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Like this maybe~)
00:20:755 (1) - ^
00:28:255 (6) - Add NC? o.o
00:29:192 (1) - Remove NC? :3, can you make it so that , 00:28:255 (6) and 00:29:192 (1) are symmetrical? (basically 1 two grids left~)
Can you add something from 00:38:098 - 00:39:036? (Maybe a break like jericho did from 02:32:005 - 02:33:880 in his diff~, feel free to add a Spinner or Slider though~)
^, from 01:00:598 - 01:01:536 this time~
01:18:294 (4) - Can you try and stack the end of this one with 01:17:473 (1)?
01:23:801 (1,2,1) - Oh gawd, this spacing.... ;_;, It's not like this is not playable, but I'm not sure what you intend to do with that there (it just looks weird...)~ can you fix it maybe to something
like this~? (Maybe chage the Combo pattern to 123, 123 or 123456 as well then~)
Can you add something from 02:32:473 - 02:33:411? (Spinner/Slider/Break?) :3
03:00:598 (1,1,1,1) - Can you change this to a 1234 Combo-Pattern?
For some reason, the first half of this map is awesome and at the same time some parts are not, and the second half is just awesome.
Onto the next diff~
HardProblem with Inherited Timing Sections seems fixed here..., some are still 10ms late though~
02:28:255 (3) - Let this one end at 02:28:723?
02:30:130 (3) - ^ at 02:30:598 though~
I guess there's a slider missing from 02:44:192 - 02:44:661 and that this is not intended?
Other than that, no problems with this map~
jericho2442's Rave!!00:15:364 (1) - Can you let this one stack with the end of 00:15:598 (2)?
00:17:239 (1) - ^, 00:17:473 (2)~
00:19:114 (1) - ^, 00:19:348 (2)~
Can you add something from 00:38:098 - 00:39:036? (Maybe a Break like you did from 02:32:005 - 02:33:880~)
^, from 01:00:598 - 01:01:536 this time~
^, from 01:47:473 - 01:48:880 this time~
Timing-Section at 01:48:880 (where it's supposed to be?) is 10 ms to late~ (at 01:48:890~)
Very nice diff other than that, I like your usage of hitsounds and how you used your combo colours~ (1/2 for non-Kiai Parts, and 3/4 for Kiai-Parts)
Well that's it, you already got a star from me some months ago~