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Nakagawa Haruna - pile up HURRICANE!

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Rare
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Rare
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月1日 at 17:51:12

Artist: Nakagawa Haruna
Title: pile up HURRICANE!
Source: Sakaagari Hurricane
Tags: game op swish quintitem
BPM: 157
Filesize: 15103kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. 5item's Hard (4.39 stars, 149 notes)
  2. Easy (1.87 stars, 88 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 355 notes)
  4. swish's Normal (3.44 stars, 118 notes)
Download: Nakagawa Haruna - pile up HURRICANE!
Download: Nakagawa Haruna - pile up HURRICANE! (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3
Normal by swish
Hard by quintitem
Last edited by Rare , edited 25 times in total.
Cyde
25 posts
Joined May 2010
Cyde
star :)
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
wa-

Download: Nakagawa Haruna - pile up HURRICANE! (Short ver.) (R a r e) [swish's Normal].osu
rrtyui
Former osu! Champion: 2014
744 posts
Joined May 2010
rrtyui
hahaha :D
subarasikibuta
559 posts
Joined May 2009
subarasikibuta
:)
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare
Cyde
rrtyui
3kinnagi

thx for star ;)

swish
thx for star and normal dif. :)
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
:3
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Hinacle
ヽ( ゜ 3゜)ノ
Rare
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Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare
Hinacle
thx for star ;)

quintitem
thx for star and Hard diff :oops:
namazun
namazun
:3
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Takos
ganbatte!
Norn_NNN
203 posts
Joined February 2011
Norn_NNN
star~~ :)
Patchouli
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Patchouli
:)
Potofu
Former osu! Champion: 2014
70 posts
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Potofu
らぁれぇ！！！

star :T
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare
namazun
Takos
Norn_NNN
Patchouli
SoraMy

thx for star :oops:
wiza
73 posts
Joined March 2010
wiza
rare^^!
HopaOoo
55 posts
Joined July 2009
HopaOoo
kamihumen
KSHR
Global Moderator
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Joined July 2010
KSHR
先にstarだけ
音のヘルプetc..はちょっとまってね（（はーと... ｹﾞﾛｯ..
nimba_old
101 posts
Joined May 2010
nimba_old
られさんなのかれあさんなのか
cLyt1e
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cLyt1e
star :)
Rare
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Topic Starter
Rare
wiza
BeatHopper
KSHR
nimba
cLyt1e

thx for star :oops:
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
;)
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
Liking the song that you are mapping ^^ So some suggestions.
[General]
- Disable letterbox during breaks (Song Setup > Storyboard > Misc Toggles).
- Delete .osb from song folder unless you plan to have a storyboard.
- No kiai time in [swish's Normal] & [5item's Hard]
- Add swish and quintitem to tags They made you guest difficulties so you should add them to tags. Not sure, but did quintitem make you Hard? If not, add whoever made you hard to tags. Add for all difficulties.
[Easy]
Seems fine, need to be check by a more experience modder as some notes feel a little off.
[swish's Normal]
Nice difficulty, just need to fix kiai time for this diff.
[5item's Hard]
- Change tick rate to 1 so that it's the same as other difficulties.
Nice difficulty again, just fix kiai time.
[Insane]
- Beginning feels offbeat, try
00:00:498 (1) End slider on 00:00:690 (white tick)
00:02:887 (7) Remove this slider and add a circle to 00:02:982
Be sure to check spacing after this.
- Would prefer a slightly higher slider velocity (1.70 or 1.80).

Overall, need some tweak in Easy and Insane from an experience modder. But overall, good map so starred!
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare

merchat7 wrote:

Liking the song that you are mapping ^^ So some suggestions.
[General]
- Disable letterbox during breaks (Song Setup > Storyboard > Misc Toggles).
- Delete .osb from song folder unless you plan to have a storyboard.
- No kiai time in [swish's Normal] & [5item's Hard]
- Add swish and quintitem to tags They made you guest difficulties so you should add them to tags. Not sure, but did quintitem make you Hard? If not, add whoever made you hard to tags. Add for all difficulties.
[Easy]
Seems fine, need to be check by a more experience modder as some notes feel a little off.
[swish's Normal]
Nice difficulty, just need to fix kiai time for this diff.
[5item's Hard]
- Change tick rate to 1 so that it's the same as other difficulties.
Nice difficulty again, just fix kiai time.
[Insane]
- Beginning feels offbeat, try
00:00:498 (1) End slider on 00:00:690 (white tick)
00:02:887 (7) Remove this slider and add a circle to 00:02:982
Be sure to check spacing after this.
- Would prefer a slightly higher slider velocity (1.70 or 1.80).

Overall, need some tweak in Easy and Insane from an experience modder. But overall, good map so starred!
thx for good advice~ ^^
I think it's ok~ to change SV is needless. not fixed.
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7

R a r e wrote:

merchat7 wrote:

Liking the song that you are mapping ^^ So some suggestions.
[General]
- Disable letterbox during breaks (Song Setup > Storyboard > Misc Toggles).
- Delete .osb from song folder unless you plan to have a storyboard.
- No kiai time in [swish's Normal] & [5item's Hard]
- Add swish and quintitem to tags They made you guest difficulties so you should add them to tags. Not sure, but did quintitem make you Hard? If not, add whoever made you hard to tags. Add for all difficulties.
[Easy]
Seems fine, need to be check by a more experience modder as some notes feel a little off.
[swish's Normal]
Nice difficulty, just need to fix kiai time for this diff.
[5item's Hard]
- Change tick rate to 1 so that it's the same as other difficulties.
Nice difficulty again, just fix kiai time.
[Insane]
- Beginning feels offbeat, try
00:00:498 (1) End slider on 00:00:690 (white tick)
00:02:887 (7) Remove this slider and add a circle to 00:02:982
Be sure to check spacing after this.
- Would prefer a slightly higher slider velocity (1.70 or 1.80).

Overall, need some tweak in Easy and Insane from an experience modder. But overall, good map so starred!
thx for good advice~ ^^
I think it's ok~ to change SV is needless. not fixed.
No kudosu ? :P
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare
>>merchat7
I think your post is advice, not modding.
and, did you post maps(which were made by beginner mappers) to get kds ?
if so, you should suggest more imo. what do you think about that ?
anyway, ok. I give kds if you want.
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
Hmm, not really sure what you are asking. I only check maps for errors and flow. Basically, i check your song folder (mp3, video, image, .osb files) and make sure they are all ok. I also make sure your start and end are consistence. Break are the same, preview all the same and etc. I also play test them at least once. I try to check mainly "beginner map" since am a beginner modder. I just start mapping a month ago and my first mod post was 1 week ago, so i can't give many advice on how to make your beatmap nicer and etc. Reason i ask for kudosu is because i was wondering if my post was of any help to you at all.

Regarding beginner map, i only mod song that i like, so i search some song on osu and found some beatmaps. I do not look at whether the mapper is a beginner or not, i just test the song. Some song need a lot of work so i give general advice for them to fix it first (use higher distant snapping , more slider velocity, soft hitsound etc.) and then when they fix it i'll try to do a more indepth mod. Example here... General advice: viewtopic.php?p=942979#p942979 In depth mod: viewtopic.php?p=944067#p944067.

I admit, some of my mod post are crap, but some map don't need many changes anyway. I asked for kudosu since you said that my post was helpful. I thought you forgot to give kudosu. Anyway up to you to decide.

Edit 01/01/12: If you want me to remod, feel free to pm
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia
M4M~

General
Insaneだけコンボカラーが違う
Insaneだけオフセットが違う
InsaneだけLetterboxInBreaksがない

Videoのサイズが1:50秒で13Mと大き目なのでちょっと小さくする事をおすすめします

Easy
00:32:791 (3) - remove whistle
00:34:320 (5) - newcombo
00:40:244 (5) - ^
01:00:307 (4) - ^
01:10:817 (1) - 中心から遠い & 始点finish
01:28:588 (5) - overlapするのであんまりこの配置はオススメしません

swish
00:15:212 (1) - finish
00:30:689 (7) - 終点finish
01:06:422 (1,1) - 微妙にfollow vocalするよりこんな感じで1にfinishおいてみては～
http://puu.sh/lBZF
01:19:798 (5) - 終点finish
01:21:709 (3) - finish
01:36:231 (2) - 折り返しにfinish
01:37:760 (3) - 赤線まで伸ばしてfinish

5item
fine

Insane
AR-1　HD+1
from AIBat
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01:39:285 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:476 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:005 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:196 (9) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:07:565 (5,6,1) - spacing揃えた方が見た目的にgood
00:23:998 (6,7) - ちょっと近い
00:31:259 (3,1) - newcombo入れ替え
01:38:328 - KIAI終点ここ
01:24:571 (6,1,2,3,4) - 01:12:724 (1,2,3,4,5) - みたいに音付けてみてはー

いい曲
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Rare

Melophobia wrote:

M4M~ >w<

General
Insaneだけコンボカラーが違う 揃えるの忘れてました fixed
Insaneだけオフセットが違う ^
InsaneだけLetterboxInBreaksがない ^

Videoのサイズが1:50秒で13Mと大き目なのでちょっと小さくする事をおすすめします 誰かに頼んでみます！！


Easy
00:32:791 (3) - remove whistle
00:34:320 (5) - newcombo
00:40:244 (5) - ^
01:00:307 (4) - ^
01:10:817 (1) - 中心から遠い & 始点finish
01:28:588 (5) - overlapするのであんまりこの配置はオススメしません Easy全部直しました！！！！

Insane
AR-1　HD+1 fixed
from AIBat
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
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00:37:280
00:55:624
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00:56:770
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Resnapped all notes
00:07:565 (5,6,1) - spacing揃えた方が見た目的にgood ok
00:23:998 (6,7) - ちょっと近い fixed
00:31:259 (3,1) - newcombo入れ替えok
01:38:328 - KIAI終点ここ fixed
01:24:571 (6,1,2,3,4) - 01:12:724 (1,2,3,4,5) - みたいに音付けてみてはー 白線にwhistle加えてみました！

いい曲 thanks :D
thanks for modding !!!!!!!!!
確認不足でほんと申し訳ない :(
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