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Lady Gaga - Alejandro

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ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
Overall
Set lead-in time on all diffs to zero since all of the diffs start 15secs into the song.
Your MP3 is 320kbps. Please make it 192kbps

Skin
the spinner circle wobbles ingame

Alejandro - i see this diff isn't finished yet
1 unsnapped note
01:06:242 (6) - place on red tick?
01:38:818 (1) - remove new combo?
01:42:454 (4) - new combo?
01:50:939 (1) - remove new combo?
02:46:697 (5) - new combo to be consistent?

EDIT: since two of the diffs aren't completed i would probably move it back to WIP
Roberto - How come the difficulty settings in this diff are lower than Fernando , You should map to the end since the easiest diff is mapped to the end
153 unsnapped notes
00:48:514 (5) - new combo and remove the combo newcombo at (1)?
01:32:154 (1,2,3) - why does this have the same spacing as this: 01:41:851 (1,2,3) -
01:39:427 (6,1) - spacing
02:04:576 (4,5) - 1 grid right so that it is lined up with (3)?
02:42:151 (5,6) - spacing

Fernando - How come the difficulty settings in this diff are higher than Roberto? I think you should use the custom clap during the kiai time instead of the soft clap.
01:41:697 (T) - add kiai to this timing section
02:20:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - although the bpm is slow, i don't think this should be in the easiest diff
02:59:272 (T) - add kiai to this timing section

Taiko
11 unsnapped notes
Niva
Global Moderator
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Niva
Here you go, the 192-kbps mp3.
Remember to change the name to 102 - Lady GaGa - Alejandro.mp3"
SPOILER
http://www.mediafire.com/?7kq239uclh4tcb3
Selee
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Joined February 2010
Selee
Timing:
BPM: 198.000
Offset: 24335

You can adjust the sliders by using 1/2 of original slider velocity

btw..in Alejandro diff, you'd better not stack 01:17:329 (3,5,7,8,9,10), if you stack these, you'll find that 5 and 6 wouldn't be in a staight line,

Also taiko diff's timing is different from other diff...
DarkDunskin
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Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
Here's the other half from my diff.
I'll fix the timing Problems later :/
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Axey
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Joined October 2009
Axey
hi ! mod time./
just suggestions.

[Fernando]
01:10:056(3)-I think there can add note (3) , move the spinner backward at 01:10:359- and end in 01:11:571-
01:11:571(1)-change clap to finish is better?
01:36:420(6)-add clap
01:41:723-add kiai time
02:27:632(1)-the same suggetion with 01:10:056- , spinner change clap to finish is better?

[Roberto]
01:03:086(1)-can add finish?
01:51:268(7)-add note?
02:46:420(3)-add note or spacing
03:44:602(6)-^

[Alejandro]
00:39:272(4)-add note
I think ar-1 is better..

nice song ^^ nice map //me shoot starr
Mantis
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Mantis
star!
PotsBreaker
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PotsBreaker
8-) 8-) star
DarkDunskin
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Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
Hi
I changed the timing now in Taikojandro, should be finde now :)
Sorry for being so stupid yesterday ^^"
I just had the wrong MP3 and that made the new offset sound weird :/
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gustjr1997
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Screenagers
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DarkDunskin
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Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
Sry to bother you again :/

There where some unsnapped notes left in my diff, but I fixed them now.
Please update it.

Download: Lady GaGa - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Taikojandro].osu
Niva
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3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Finished my part, don't forget to add my name in the tags.
Used 1.5x because it comforts me more xD

PS : Do not kudosu

Download: Lady GaGa - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Alejandro].osu
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riffy
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riffy
8-) NYA!!!
Mastodonio
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Mastodonio
Hello,as you asked me:

General:
A bit nazi,but your BG size is 1023x767. This won't be hard to make it 1024x768
In your map, in 'Source' you wrote 'The Fame Monster' , but in 'Alejandro' difficulty you wrote just 'The Fame'!!! So,write there the word 'Monster' too.
why did you put here Audio Lead-in 1,5 seconds? Put it away.

Fernando:
HP Drain 4 is a bit high - I'd make it 3
03:09:147 - object isn't snapped! it's a critical error - resnap it.

Roberto:
00:34:602 - object isn't snapped! resnap it!
00:38:238 - ^
01:04:905 - ^
02:06:420 - ^
I inderstand,that 'Fernando' is a guest difficulty,but this difficulty has to he harder anyway,so make here HP Drain higher..put 4
Put Overall difficulty 4
Put Aprroach rate 5?

Taikojandro:
Sorry,but I can't mod taiko)

Alejandro:
Hp Drain 8 O.O That is too crazy. Put at least 7..but better 6
Approach Rate 8 looks better here

Well,I found some critical errors - I think it's enough to change yet..call me back later when you will ask more moddings from other people and I will recheck.
Nice song,star.
HellDawn
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Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
HellDawn

Giorgos wrote:

Hello,as you asked me:

General:
A bit nazi,but your BG size is 1023x767. This won't be hard to make it 1024x768 Fixed
In your map, in 'Source' you wrote 'The Fame Monster' , but in 'Alejandro' difficulty you wrote just 'The Fame'!!! So,write there the word 'Monster' too.Oh :o
why did you put here Audio Lead-in 1,5 seconds? Put it away. Fixed.

Fernando:
HP Drain 4 is a bit high - I'd make it 3Tonoicutzu die! fixed!
03:09:147 - object isn't snapped! it's a critical error - resnap it.Fixed

Roberto:
00:34:602 - object isn't snapped! resnap it! fixed
00:38:238 - ^
01:04:905 - ^
02:06:420 - ^
I inderstand,that 'Fernando' is a guest difficulty,but this difficulty has to he harder anyway,so make here HP Drain higher..put 4
Put Overall difficulty 4
Put Aprroach rate 5? oh :3

Taikojandro:
Sorry,but I can't mod taiko) :cry:

Alejandro:
Hp Drain 8 O.O That is too crazy. Put at least 7..but better 6
Approach Rate 8 looks better here Okey.

Well,I found some critical errors - I think it's enough to change yet..call me back later when you will ask more moddings from other people and I will recheck.
Nice song,star.

Thank you :3
Tony
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Tony
hahaha =)))))
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
vivere
Hi ^^/

[Fernando]:
  1. As I told you... this diff is a bit hard to be an easy, therefore, follow these suggestions...
    •Approach Rate: -2
    •Overall Difficulty: -1
  1. Here's the mod:
  2. 01:10:091- End this spinner at 01:11:606 with clap.
  3. 01:15:546 (3,4,5)- These three circles are too closed, therefore, move the (4) one grid down and the (5) two grids down.
  4. 01:16:455 (6,7,8)- The same... you must separate, 7-6, and 8-7 (7, one grid down and 8, two grids down). Like this:
    SPOILER
  5. 01:44:333 (3,4,5)- Here too, these three notes are separated. Move (4) 3 grids: 1grid right, 1 grid up and 1 grid right again. And (5) 6 gids: 4 right and 2 up
  6. 01:45:546 (6,7,8)- The same with 3,4,5... but here you should move (7) 1 grid left, 1 grid down and 1 grid left and (8) 4 grids left and 2 down... Like this:
    SPOILER
  7. 02:13:727 (4)-Move this circle 5 grids down.
  8. 02:14:940 (7)- The same, but in this case move it 5 grids up.
  9. 02:33:121 (3,4,5)- same as "01:15:546 (3,4,5)", move (4) 1 grid down, and (5) 2 grids.
  10. 02:34:030 (6,7,8)- Here too, but here move (7) 1 grid up, and (8) 2 grids up.
  11. 02:57:061 (4)- Move this slider 1 grid left, because it's close to (3).
  12. 03:00:697 (2)- Finish in the beginning?
  13. 03:01:909 (3,4,5)- Again... These three notes are close, Like these three notes 03:03:121 (6,7,8). One of the options is moving (5) 3 grids right and 4 grids up. and (7) 3 grids left and 4 grids down.
  14. 03:31:000 (3)- Move this circle one grid right.
  15. 03:35:849 (3,4,5)- ;_; ... move (4) 1 grid left, down, left and (5) 4 grids left and 2 down.
  16. 03:37:061 (6,7,8)- You make me sad T_T
  17. 03:50:394 (3,4,5)- The same... (4) 1 grid down, and (5) 2 grids
  18. 03:51:606 (6,7,8)- ^, but in this case... up. Like this...
    SPOILER
  19. 04:14:637 (4)- Move this slider 1 grin left.
  20. 04:19:485 (3,4,5)- Asdasdasd.
  21. 04:20:697 (6,7,8)- ^
  22. 04:26:985- Start this spinner in 04:26:909
  1. Well, that's all... I think xD
[Roberto]:
  1. PLEASE, USE A CLAP EVERY FOUR WHITE TICKS, BUT ONLY IN KIAIS.
  1. 00:31:000 (3)- Why no a new combo?.
  2. 01:10:293- Can this slider start here: 01:10:091, and end here : 01:11:606?
  3. 01:29:131 (4)- Woops, move this clircle towards 01:29:182 , and add clap.
  4. 02:13:727 (2)- Move this circle 1 grid left.
  5. 02:25:546 - Add clap?
  6. 02:48:879 (x)- Add a note? Like this:
    SPOILER
  7. 03:27:414 - Move this Inherited Point to 03:27:364 or 03:27:667.
  8. 03:46:556 - start this Inherited Point in 03:46:758. and end this: 03:46:859 at 03:46:909.
  1. I like this diff :>
[Alejandro]:
  1. 00:27:667 (x)- Add a note below 5?
  2. 00:34:333 ~ 00:34:485 - Add two notes, above (2)
  3. 00:39:333 (x)- Put a note? Like this...
    SPOILER
  4. 00:40:546 (x)- Put a note here?
  5. 01:04:637 (x)- ^
  6. 01:31:354 - Move this Inherited Point to 01:31:303 or 01:31:455.
  7. 01:33:424 (1)- Add clap in the repeat.
  8. 01:40:697 (1)- Add a clap at the end.
  9. 01:44:940 (3)- Move 1 grid left.
  10. 02:24:333 (3)- Move this circle towards 02:24:182 and below 2 (If you'll do this, remeber reducing the spacing between 4 and 5. Like this:
    SPOILER
  11. 03:52:061 (4)- Add clap?
  12. 04:27:212 (x)- Put a note like this...
    SPOILER
  1. Well done! :>
_________________
That's all ^.~/

Star <3
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eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
[general]
keep the kiai same at every diff?

[A]
00:27:970 (7) - not stack well
00:39:788 (6) - new combo because of 5's spacing change
00:41:000 (10) - ^
01:00:697 (4,7) - I think they should be new combo
02:42:515 (4) - end at 02:42:970 ?
02:43:121 (5) - spacing
03:39:485 (4) - move it to 03:39:637 or add a note at 03:39:637 ?
03:47:591 (1,2) - wrong timing , if you cant get a right one , maybe try use a slider to instead of them?

awesome sliders o.o

[R]
you can add more hitsounds...

00:56:455 (1) - spacing
00:59:788 (4,5,1) - maybe a bit hard to read?
01:09:182 (4) - new combo
01:31:606 (7) - spacing
02:09:485 (8) - ^
02:34:637 (1) - maybe this jump is too hard for a normal diff
03:04:940 (5) - spacing
03:37:970 (3) - jump not fit

[F]
open AIMOD and check every spacing problem(lazy to list

[Alejandro] is really good
but there're too many spacing problems at other diffs , check it plz o.o
HellDawn
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Topic Starter
HellDawn

vivere wrote:

Hi ^^/

[Fernando]:
  1. As I told you... this diff is a bit hard to be an easy, therefore, follow these suggestions... u.u
    •Approach Rate: -2 Fix'd
    •Overall Difficulty: -1
:3
  1. Here's the mod:
  2. 01:10:091- End this spinner at 01:11:606 with clap. Fix'd
  3. 01:15:546 (3,4,5)- These three circles are too closed, therefore, move the (4) one grid down and the (5) two grids down. Fix'd
  4. 01:16:455 (6,7,8)- The same... you must separate, 7-6, and 8-7 (7, one grid down and 8, two grids down). Like this:
    SPOILER
    Fix'd
  5. 01:44:333 (3,4,5)- Here too, these three notes are separated. Move (4) 3 grids: 1grid right, 1 grid up and 1 grid right again. And (5) 6 gids: 4 right and 2 up Ok
  6. 01:45:546 (6,7,8)- The same with 3,4,5... but here you should move (7) 1 grid left, 1 grid down and 1 grid left and (8) 4 grids left and 2 down... Like this:
    SPOILER
    Fix'd
  7. 02:13:727 (4)-Move this circle 5 grids down. :3
  8. 02:14:940 (7)- The same, but in this case move it 5 grids up. Fix'd
  9. 02:33:121 (3,4,5)- same as "01:15:546 (3,4,5)", move (4) 1 grid down, and (5) 2 grids. Fix'd
  10. 02:34:030 (6,7,8)- Here too, but here move (7) 1 grid up, and (8) 2 grids up. Fix'd
  11. 02:57:061 (4)- Move this slider 1 grid left, because it's close to (3). Fix'd
  12. 03:00:697 (2)- Finish in the beginning? Fix'd
  13. 03:01:909 (3,4,5)- Again... These three notes are close, Like these three notes 03:03:121 (6,7,8). One of the options is moving (5) 3 grids right and 4 grids up. and (7) 3 grids left and 4 grids down. Fix'd
  14. 03:31:000 (3)- Move this circle one grid right. Fix'd
  15. 03:35:849 (3,4,5)- ;_; ... move (4) 1 grid left, down, left and (5) 4 grids left and 2 down. Fix'd
  16. 03:37:061 (6,7,8)- You make me sad T_T u_u
  17. 03:50:394 (3,4,5)- The same... (4) 1 grid down, and (5) 2 grids Fix'd
  18. 03:51:606 (6,7,8)- ^, but in this case... up. Like this...
    SPOILER
    Fix'd
  19. 04:14:637 (4)- Move this slider 1 grin left.Fix'd
  20. 04:19:485 (3,4,5)- Asdasdasd. :) :) :) :) :)
  21. 04:20:697 (6,7,8)- ^ Fix'd
  22. 04:26:985- Start this spinner in 04:26:909
Fix'd
  1. Well, that's all... I think xD
thanx

[Roberto]:
  1. PLEASE, USE A CLAP EVERY FOUR WHITE TICKS, BUT ONLY IN KIAIS.
o.o
  1. 00:31:000 (3)- Why no a new combo?. Fix'd
  2. 01:10:293- Can this slider start here: 01:10:091, and end here : 01:11:606? Fix'd
  3. 01:29:131 (4)- Woops, move this clircle towards 01:29:182 , and add clap. Fix'd
  4. 02:13:727 (2)- Move this circle 1 grid left. Fix'd
  5. 02:25:546 - Add clap? Fix'd
  6. 02:48:879 (x)- Add a note? Like this:
    SPOILER
    Fix'd
  7. 03:27:414 - Move this Inherited Point to 03:27:364 or 03:27:667. ..
  8. 03:46:556 - start this Inherited Point in 03:46:758. and end this: 03:46:859 at 03:46:909.
...
  1. I like this diff :>
8-)

[Alejandro]:
  1. 00:27:667 (x)- Add a note below 5? Fix'd
  2. 00:34:333 ~ 00:34:485 - Add two notes, above (2) Fix'd
  3. 00:39:333 (x)- Put a note? Like this...
    SPOILER
  4. 00:40:546 (x)- Put a note here? Fix'd
  5. 01:04:637 (x)- ^ Fix'd
  6. 01:31:354 - Move this Inherited Point to 01:31:303 or 01:31:455. ...
  7. 01:33:424 (1)- Add clap in the repeat.Fix'd
  8. 01:40:697 (1)- Add a clap at the end. Fix'd
  9. 01:44:940 (3)- Move 1 grid left.Fix'd
  10. 02:24:333 (3)- Move this circle towards 02:24:182 and below 2 (If you'll do this, remeber reducing the spacing between 4 and 5). Like this:
    SPOILER
    Fix'd
  11. 03:52:061 (4)- Add clap?Fix'd
  12. 04:27:212 (x)- Put a note like this...
    SPOILER
Fix'd
  1. Well done! :>
Thanx !
_________________
That's all ^.~/

Star <3
HellDawn
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Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
HellDawn

goodbye wrote:

[general]
keep the kiai same at every diff? Fix'd

[A]
00:27:970 (7) - not stack well Fix'd
00:39:788 (6) - new combo because of 5's spacing change Fix'd
00:41:000 (10) - ^ Fix'd
01:00:697 (4,7) - I think they should be new combo Fix'd
02:42:515 (4) - end at 02:42:970 ? No u.u
02:43:121 (5) - spacing Fix'd
03:39:485 (4) - move it to 03:39:637 or add a note at 03:39:637 ? No u.u
03:47:591 (1,2) - wrong timing , if you cant get a right one , maybe try use a slider to instead of them? Fix'd

awesome sliders o.o Thanx <3

[R]
you can add more hitsounds... u.u

00:56:455 (1) - spacing Fix'd
00:59:788 (4,5,1) - maybe a bit hard to read? huh
01:09:182 (4) - new combo Fix'd
01:31:606 (7) - spacing Fix'd
02:09:485 (8) - ^ Fix'd
02:34:637 (1) - maybe this jump is too hard for a normal diff u.u
03:04:940 (5) - spacing Fix'd
03:37:970 (3) - jump not fit o.o

[F]
open AIMOD and check every spacing problem(lazy to list ok

[Alejandro] is really good Thanx <3
but there're too many spacing problems at other diffs , check it plz o.o
ok u.u
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
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Aleks719
General
The Fame Monster is a name of album. Remove it from source, add it to the tags.
"XavierJones" in tags. What did he make? write about it or remove.

Alejandro
OD -1
I don't like nc here. there are 3 combo, 12 combo... Try to keep combo-numbers without big different
As for me, nc mod is very nazi, try to recheck diff without modders.
Soo, try to add some hitsounds after 1st half of song.
00:53:121 (2) - clap to the end
00:53:576 (3) - clap to the start
00:54:485 (6,7) - add claps
01:06:303 (7) - remove note
01:06:455 (x) - add note
01:06:606 (x) - add note
01:35:546 (4,5) - make it parallel
01:37:515 (x) - add note
01:38:727 (x) - ^
02:47:364 (1) - imo, better
SPOILER

208,336,167364,6,0,B|208:32|208:32|296:48|328:104|296:176|224:184|224:184|280:256|368:344,1,737.999978005887
227364 [T] useless timing point
227629 [T] volume +15%
03:59:940 (6) - too low. Replace it higher

Roberto
Very low quantity of hitsounds
Use distance snap
Map this diff until the end.
00:27:970 (4,2) - don't like this overlap
00:38:879 (5,1,2,3) - hard to read for normal
00:56:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - use distance snap, it was very confused
00:58:879 (1,2,3,4) - hard to read
01:17:364 (6,1) - spacing, too far
02:01:909 (3,4) - ^
02:04:940 (5,6) - ^
02:47:970 (1,2,3,4) - use distance snap, it was very confused

Fernando
Stats (hp, od) higher than in Roberto. Fix it. Make lower here or higher in Roberto.
00:58:273 (1) - finish sounds bad her. try whistle.
01:22:515 (1,2) - spacing, but intuitive
02:13:424 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - antijumps? xD keep distance please. from here to the end.
02:55:849 (3,4) - spacing, too far
04:13:424 (3,4) - ^
SSkiLLeTT
3 posts
Joined April 2011
SSkiLLeTT
Nice song and beatmap :3
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
Random Star...

Like it
Loctav
Popcorn Fairy
4,496 posts
Joined February 2009
Loctav
Like the song, like the taiko map.
+1.
Yusu Aoi
214 posts
Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi
Hi:) here's my mod;))

Fernando:
I've found nothing:)

Roberto:
Hmm,, need to work more on hitsounds?? use the same normal custom clap as in Fernando?:)) and maybe try to keep the pattern what I wrote here?? It's taking time to write all claps places so I hope You'll understand what I mean ;)
00:33:424 (3) add clap?
00:34:030 (4) add finish?
00:34:637 (5) add clap?
00:38:273 (3) ^
00:39:485 (1) ^
00:40:697 (4) ^
00:41:909 (1) ^
00:43:121 (4) ^
I think in chorus would be nice this pattern:
01:13:121 (2) add clap on beginning and on the end of slider?
01:14:333 (5,1) add clap?
01:16:758 (4,5) ^
01:17:970 (2) add clap on beginning and on the end of slider?
01:19:182 (5) ^
01:21:606 (3,4) add clap on note (3) and add a clap on the beginning of slider (4)?
01:22:818 (5) add clap on the beginning and in the middle of slider?
01:24:030 (2,3) add clap?
01:26:455 (1,2) ^
01:27:667 (4,5) ^
01:28:879 (7) ^
01:31:303 (10,11) add a clap on note (10) and add clap on the beginning of slider (11)?
01:36:455 (1) and from this notes would be ok the first pattern? clap?
01:37:061 (2) add a clap on the end of slider?
01:38:879 (4) ^
01:40:091 add clap?
01:41:303 ^
01:41:909 (1) add clap on the end?
01:43:121 (2) ^
01:44:940 (3) add clap in the middle of slider?
01:46:152 (1) add clap on the beginning of slider?
01:47:364 (2) add clap on the end?
01:48:576 (4) ^
01:49:788 add clap?
01:51:000 ^
Try to keep the first patten in next verse and the second pattern in chorus???



00:44:940 too much distance between (3) and (4)00:45:546?
00:47:061 too low distance between (3) and (1)00:47:970?
00:55:243 (4,1,2,3) too low distance?
00:58:879 (1,2,3,4 ,5) take them together 1 grid down?
01:37:061 (2) 1 grid right?
01:38:273 (4,5,6) 1 grid right?
01:43:121 (2,3) too low distance between them?
01:51:303 add here a note?
02:01:909 (3,4) too much distance between them?
02:14:637 (5,6,1) too low distance?
02:47:970 (1,2,3,4,5) too low distance?
02:49:182 (5,1) low distance?
02:56:758 (1,2) ^
03:03:728 (3,4) too much distance?
03:34:637 (5) 1 grid left?
03:35:849 (2,3) too much distance?
03:44:940 (7,8) too low distance?

Alejandro:
01:41:606 - 01:51:000maybe map this part better? ;)
hmmm.. I don't understand the jumps here :) but, I'm not so good at osu! standard yet to play an Insane so I won't tell anything about jumps :))

The best pattern hitsounds thought is on Fernando diff :)
Here's a star! :)
And remember, it's just my suggetsions!:))
Good luck!:)
aabc271
osu! Alumni
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aabc271
Hi ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by HellDawn

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Taikojandro]

The BPM change in 02:20:697 is quite misleading and players are likely to miss. Change the x0.75 timing line from 140697 to 141000 ?

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:47:970 - ( 21 ~ 24 ) Change to o o o o o ? ( Add the last note also )

00:59:182 - ( 35 ) Red note ?

01:52:818 - ( 6 ) ^

02:06:152 - ( 25 ) ^

02:07:364 - ( 30 ) ^

03:14:940 - ( 25 ~ 26 ) Change to o o ?

03:23:121 - ( 61 ~ 62 ) Change to o o ?

The map is OK overall ~

Rating : 8/10

Star and good luck ~ ;)

No need to kds this post ~
DarkDunskin
1,875 posts
Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
Fixed:
- BPM at 02:20:697
- 00:59:182 - ( 35 ) Red note ?
- 01:52:818 - ( 6 ) ^
- 02:06:152 - ( 25 ) ^
- 02:07:364 - ( 30 ) ^

thank you aabc for you mod :)

Download: Lady GaGa - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Taikojandro].osu
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,812 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
Gott, nenn es doch einfach ,,Dunskin's Taiko Oni". Man weis gar nicht was das für ein Schwirigkeitsgrad ist.
Nixnez
295 posts
Joined April 2010
Nixnez
Belated 6th request from mod queue.

[General]
- (Very minor issue) System asks for save after resnapping all notes.
- Some nice whistle pattern during kiai time would be nice. Currently they're only used sparingly.

[Fernando]
- 00:51:606 - Felt like missing something here, no?
- 01:37:061 (1,2,3,4) and similar beat patterns, particularly repeating slider (1) and (3) - Don't think this is a suitable pattern for a Easy, two repeating sliders with different repeating beats. Not really against it if it's a Normal though.

[Roberto]
- Why this difficulty ends much earlier compared to others? D:
- 00:56:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice shape, but timing wise....hmm. If you insist of keeping that shape, try adding a beat at 00:57:364?
- 01:41:909 (1,2) - Will be nice to tweak this pair of sliders, they're the same slider but currently doesn't look that nice beside each other.
- 02:31:000 (3) - Looks nice if it's designed to half-blanket 02:30:697 (2) instead of tilting one way?

[Alejandro]
- Interesting slider velocity, 1.23x?
- 01:15:186/01:16:398/01:16:398/01:20:034/01:32:212 and 03:59:940/04:00:243 - Unused timing section?
- 00:39:182 (3,4,5) and 00:40:394 (2,3,4) - Weird spacing here IMO, it spoils the flow. Either do stacked triplets or spreaded triplet streams?
- 01:06:455 (7,8,9) - Same thing as above. Unless you intend to do jumps on the 3rd beats for all these...
- 02:31:303 (4,5,6) - Slightly larger jumps compared to the rest. Just saying.
- 03:41:909 (1,2,3,4) - The hitsound pattern confused me!...Just my own complain. XD
- Don't quite get the transition of spacing during the second kiai time, 1.5x spacing mixed with slower 1.0x lesser spacings. At least keep the second part's spacing consistent?(I know this one's a collab difficulty, but still eh)

Been a while since I've last modded maps. Hope I don't miss anything major. Good luck~
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Changed some hitsounds in my collab part.
I've tried 1.0x, but 1.5x is definitely a LOT better and easier to map (:

Download: Lady GaGa - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Alejandro].osu
DarkDunskin
1,875 posts
Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
Hey Helldawn
I changed my mind about my diffs name, because many people are complaining that they can't see how hard my diff is.
Could you please rename it to "Dunskin's Taiko Oni"?
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
HellDawn

DarkDunskin wrote:

Hey Helldawn
I changed my mind about my diffs name, because many people are complaining that they can't see how hard my diff is.
Could you please rename it to "Dunskin's Taiko Oni"?
Sure.
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006
hello~~

Some Suggestions
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[Fernado]

1/6 Why?
OD -1 ? most better play but this just my IMO
00:34:940 (1) - Remove new combo and 00:35:243 (1) - New combo?
00:43:121 (1) - New combo?
00:45:546 (4) - New combo and 00:45:849 (2) - Remove new combo?
00:48:576 (2) - Remove new combo
00:51:000 (6) - Remove new combo and 00:51:606 (1) - put new combo? Note:if you fix this so put new combo at 00:53:424 (1) and end remove new combo at 00:53:727 (2)
00:55:243 (5) - New combo and 00:56:455 (2) - remove new combo and 00:57:061 (1) - new combo
00:59:182 (2,4) - Weird stack with 01:01:303 (1) - the start slider try better stack or unstack and make curve slider (IMO)
01:03:121 (6) - Remove new combo and 01:03:727 (7) - New combo?
01:29:788 (1) - New combo?
02:12:212 (1) - New combo and 02:12:818 (3) - Remove new combo
02:37:061 (5) - the end slider are weird stack with 02:38:273 (7) - the start slider

lot patterns combo weird look this http://osu.ppy.sh/images/beatspacing.jpg
That sometime people or me i play this so weird patterns i get forever 100x so pleasse fix but you can sayd "no" and why? xD
but slider and notes is aswome better ryhthm :)
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[Alenjadro]

01:02:515 (4) - Remove new combo and 01:03:121 (1) - new combo?
01:06:152 (5,6,7,8) - Grid 1 Dowm make better stack
01:29:788 (8) - ugly slider is not my fan lol you wanna this http://puu.sh/3fYq ? if yes so fix spacing or New combo if you wanna jump at 01:31:606 (9)
02:08:424 (4) - Nice arc :)

this is really fine for me but sometime weird patterns well this is hard lol
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that all and STAR !
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
General
probably needs an easier diff, 4 star is too high for the easiest, and slider velocity is kinda high as well in Fernando

Fernando
great diff, but not great for an easiest diff
03:47:970 - maybe end the map right here, right now it sounds a bit bland, like a sudden/random stop

Roberto
i'm no taiko expert, but some of the 1/4 stacks sound a bit off, i don't know

Alejandro
perfect :3
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
HellDawn

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

Some Suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Fernado]

1/6 Why?
OD -1 ? most better play but this just my IMO
00:34:940 (1) - Remove new combo and 00:35:243 (1) - New combo?
00:43:121 (1) - New combo?
00:45:546 (4) - New combo and 00:45:849 (2) - Remove new combo?
00:48:576 (2) - Remove new combo
00:51:000 (6) - Remove new combo and 00:51:606 (1) - put new combo? Note:if you fix this so put new combo at 00:53:424 (1) and end remove new combo at 00:53:727 (2)
00:55:243 (5) - New combo and 00:56:455 (2) - remove new combo and 00:57:061 (1) - new combo
00:59:182 (2,4) - Weird stack with 01:01:303 (1) - the start slider try better stack or unstack and make curve slider (IMO)
01:03:121 (6) - Remove new combo and 01:03:727 (7) - New combo?
01:29:788 (1) - New combo?
02:12:212 (1) - New combo and 02:12:818 (3) - Remove new combo
02:37:061 (5) - the end slider are weird stack with 02:38:273 (7) - the start slider

lot patterns combo weird look this http://osu.ppy.sh/images/beatspacing.jpg
That sometime people or me i play this so weird patterns i get forever 100x so pleasse fix but you can sayd "no" and why? xD
but slider and notes is aswome better ryhthm :)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Alenjadro]

01:02:515 (4) - Remove new combo and 01:03:121 (1) - new combo?
01:06:152 (5,6,7,8) - Grid 1 Dowm make better stack
01:29:788 (8) - ugly slider is not my fan lol you wanna this http://puu.sh/3fYq ? if yes so fix spacing or New combo if you wanna jump at 01:31:606 (9)
02:08:424 (4) - Nice arc :)

this is really fine for me but sometime weird patterns well this is hard lol
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
that all and STAR !
All fixed ;)
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
General:
You definitely do need at least 1 more easier difficulty.
The correct capitalisation is Lady Gaga, not GaGa. If you don't believe me, do a quick google search for her.
Tick rate 2 should ideally be used across the difficulties, as the song is 1/2.
It's a bit weird to force default hitbursts and cursor for no apparent reason, as the player can use them anyway if they wish. Just seems to be taking up unnecessary space and time.

Alejandro:
00:36:455 (8) - New combo?
00:39:485 (5) - This spacing is very confusing, as 1/2 is spaced (basically) the same as 1/1 here. You may just want to move this with the previous stack to make a triple.
00:40:697 (4) - ^
00:50:394 (7) - New combo?
01:06:758 (8) - Less confusing as the spacing is more clearly different here, but still could be a stack.
01:11:000 (1) - I recommend you soften the end up by using a inherited section with 'soft' sampleset.
01:29:788 (8) - Confusing spacing again. You could just horizontally flip this.
01:41:909 onwards - It feels so odd to undermap so much in a chorus.
01:51:606 - Drag the start of the word 'break' to here?
02:23:121 (1) - Perhaps reverse (ctrl+r) so it fits in with the rest of the pattern more.
02:31:455 (5,6) - Yeah, this increased spacing is just too cruel and unfitting.
02:43:121 (5) - I wouldn't stack 1/1 under slider ends, since you've already used 1/2 stacks on them and it can be very confusing. I recommend spacing this away from the slider.
03:02:212 (1) - The whistle on the start of this slider feels a bit out of place. Either use more whistles or remove this one.
03:09:485 - Drag 'break' to here.
03:41:152 (3) - I can't hear anything this 1/4 repeat follows, and I honestly think it just feels a bit awkward.
03:59:940 (6) - Tiny, tiny nitpick, but you could move this further away from the bottom of the screen.

Roberto:
Please indicate this is a Taiko difficulty in the title :P

Fernando:
00:38:576 (4) - Move a grid left? I know, right.
01:16:758 (4) - Again, this could easily be read as 1/2 because of the stacking on slider ends, which you can avoid with spacing it away.
01:32:212 (1) - I'm not sure about these or their rankability. They look strange on MMsliders.
01:51:606 - Drag break to here?
02:01:303 (2) - Arguably confusing spacing.
02:20:697 - Drag break to here? Or 02:19:485 if that's too extreme.
02:36:152 (2,3,4) - I think these could be done more creatively than just back and forth beats. Oh well.
02:43:121 (1) - Kind of an unexpected jump, as it seems it would be reversed in the context of the combo.
03:43:727 (4) - New combo?
Please map that last chorus, there's no reason for you not to.

Keep tryin', I'll happily remod this fully if you add easier difficulties.
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
http://www.mediafire.com/?mc1vqecfwedc3a9

I'm not satisfied enough, though ):
Maybe i'll tweak some skin elements later xD

EDIT : Fixed spinner-background and sliderfollow circle

To NotShinta : I fixed everything in my part except for that 1/4 because I can't get a good pattern ><
Late, but thx for modding~
DarkDunskin
1,875 posts
Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
Fixed Timing Issues and Name blah blah.

Download: Lady GaGa - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
Hi :)

Here as requested, now my Normal diff~
I hope you will like it and accept it.. I think i made it good for you <3

Lady Gaga~

+Star

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Hanyuu's Normal].osu
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