Shiki wrote:

:3

[Easy]
00:17:796 (1) - 减一个repeat，然后开头加个whistle?
00:20:565 (1,2) - 我觉得这里可能有点难，考虑减一个repeat?
00:23:334 (1) - ^
01:14:796 (6) - 复制(4)然后中心对称?
01:22:411 - 这条绿线删掉，kiai在上一条结束

[Summer]
>_> 其实我不知道为什么要叫Summer，背景明明是秋天
00:08:104 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里的正方形歪了
00:15:488 (3) - 去掉clap?
00:17:796 (1) - 去掉尾部的clap?
00:24:027 (2,3,4,5) - 这里间距突然变小了.. 而且(3) (4) (5)我觉得不要叠起来好点
00:39:488 (3) - 间距小了
00:40:873 (5) - ^
00:51:258 (5,6,7) - ^
01:00:258 (6) - ^
01:14:104 (1) - new combo?

[Hard]
00:13:412 (4,5,6) - 像这样?

SPOILER

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01:09:258 (1,5) - 删掉(1) (5)的whistle?
01:22:411 - 这条绿线和Easy一样处理

加油~

xykbear wrote:

Fantasy~
*基本只是建议，新手mod啊～

[General]
视频码率略高了
这么美的图不加个皮肤么？
转盘的声音有点小吵，改成无声或者自定义音效吧～
！去掉stroryboard>letterbox during breaks.你是带视频的不需要这个
？尽量不要默认难度名和自定义难度名混用

[Hard]
00:09:028 (3,1,3) - 这三个点可以叠的更好点？
00:19:643 (7,9,10,11) - 这边搞重叠的话实际游戏中有点难看啊
00:35:334~00:57:950 - 这段感觉可以加音量渐变啊(00:35:334,00:46:411,00:57:950)
//hitsound缺少音量变化听着有点疲劳啊～特别是这种明显的hitsound

[Summer]
00:10:642 (1) - finish,和[hard]保持一致
00:32:796 (1) - 终点到00:33:950
00:56:104 (1) - finish
01:18:258 (1) - 最后这个还是静音比较好
//总体音量感受同上，但音效方面比[Hard]丰富而感觉好多了

[easy]
00:17:334 (5,2) - 这种堆叠不适合新手
00:20:565 (1) - 去掉一个往复并把00:21:488 (2)移动。要保持一致
01:18:950 (5) - 这个点不太适合做成重叠
//作为easy难度排列很好，但也要注意尽量不要出现space问题啊！

Gomo Psivarh wrote:

326教练早

[general]
所有diff去掉letterbox during breaks

[Summer]
陷阱比较多...比hard陷阱还多的感觉...
01:18:258 (1) - 在01:21:950结束

[easy]
01:05:796 (4,1) - 换成silder?

BONUS 80000!

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Heya.

General
The video has audio in it, update it with a version without sound.


Hard
To be honest, I don't like this diff. The pace of the song isn't quite fit for all those jumps. But that's just my opinion, so pay no attention to it.

00:19:874 (8) - add a New combo here because of the jump.
00:21:951 (5) - ^
00:25:181 (7) - ^
00:51:951 (6) - ^
01:02:335 (10) - ^
01:09:027 (9) - I wouldn't put this ontop of the stream, it's a common combobreaker :<
01:09:950 (7) - add New combo here
01:11:797 (1) - remove New combo
01:12:720 (3) - add new combo

Summer
00:42:027 (6) - add New combo due to jump
00:51:027 (4) - anti-jump ;_;
01:02:334 (1) - anti-jump ;_;

I don't like those anti-jumps, they kinda damage the flow, I'd fix them if I were you. Or at least add a New combo for them.

Easy
00:12:258 (1) - turn the reverse arrow in the opposite direction, this is too confusing for beginners otherwise
00:17:796 (1) - ^

How about mapping the break? 10 seconds... C'mon, don't be lazy.

01:03:027 (6) - bad spacing (too close)
01:18:950 (5) - remove this note, and add an additional repeat to the previous slider

1. 00:06:488 - Add note

1. 00:01:181 - like this
   
2. 00:45:027 (6,1) - near

S o r d a wrote:

[overall]:
Fine

[Hard]:

1. 00:06:488 - Add note

[summer]:
Fine

[Easy]:

1. 00:01:181 - like this
   
2. 00:45:027 (6,1) - near

Really nice map~>_<
go go ranked>_>
sorry short mod no kds please

yangzd88 wrote:

某沙包's 2b mod

[Timing]
24258ms 3/4
46410ms 4/4
58873ms 4/4

[EZ]
00:08:565 - whistle?
00:15:950 - ^
00:31:181 - ^
00:49:181 (4) - 注意重叠
01:06:950 (1,2) - 这神spacing坑爹呢

[夏]
难度名卖萌=w=
00:32:796 (1) - finish
00:51:258 (1,3) - 弧线拉的太直了..?
01:07:181 (4) - [人体工学]ctrl+r

[HD]
00:33:951 (1) - 放在00:33:028 (3)与y轴对称处?

JauiPlaY wrote:

hi~
一些建议:

[General]
fine.

[Easy]
00:03:448(x) - 加个有whistle的note
00:06:258(x) - ^
00:15:719(x) - 去掉这个note?
00:20:565(1,2) - 把1折返3次,然后去掉2?
00:23:334(1) - 去掉所有折返,然后在00:24:027加个note?
01:19:410(x) - 加个note

[Summer]
这个难度名有点怪异...
00:09:027(1) - 去掉nc
00:09:258(2) - 去掉这个note
00:09:488(3) - nc
00:10:411(7,1) - 后面那个spinner应该在7那里开始...
00:17:565(9) - 去掉这个note
00:26:104(1,2) - 这两个调换一下正好合歌词...
00:27:719(4) - 我觉得用00:27:027(3)的对称体会好看得多...
00:32:565(5,1) - 后面那个spinner应该在5那里开始...
00:37:181(x) - 这里和后面的两根白线加note
00:38:796(2,3) - spacing
00:40:873(5,6) - ^
00:47:795(6) - nc
01:01:873(9,1,2,3) - !@#@$%&^spacing
剩下的combo最好也规范一下,建议5-9之间

[Hard]
01:19:871(1) - 起始于01:19:756
combo最好规范一下,建议5-9之间
awesome diff!

fartownik wrote:

General:

- Add a space in the title between the word "Redleaf" and "(Short ver.)"
- Timing fix:
offset: 725 (+6)
time signature : 3/4
Delete all red sections apart from the first one. They're unneeded because the entire song should be made with 3/4 metronome.
Do it on all difficulties.


[Hard]

This is totally not a Hard. Rename to Insane.

HP Drain & Overall Difficulty +1/2 ticks?

00:43:642 (4) - Every different slider velocity must start with a new combo.
00:50:564 (3) - ^
01:19:871 (1) - Silent the spinner?


[Summer]

THIS is a Hard.

00:39:488 (3) - New combo (read up).
00:50:564 (3,1) - Spacing.
01:01:873 (9,1) - SPACING. If it's meant to be a anti-jump, you didn't do it very well. Fix.
01:03:026 - I miss a note here. Add one please.
01:12:719 (5) - New combo?
01:13:411 (8,1,2) - Spacing. Again.

Really weird spacing changes in some places. Please take care of it.


[Easy]

00:17:334 (5,1) - Please... no anti-jumps on easy. Fix spacing.


That's all I can find.
Good map, I really enjoyed these hitsounds.