nice map
fix X)jericho2442 wrote:
you have a silenced sliderslide and slidertick, this is Not allowed. You can have one silenced, but not both
Easy
00:27:500 (4) - timing on this note is odd and does not really follow the song good, i advise a timing like this
01:00:269 (3,4,5) - broken spacing, all have the same timing but different spacing, you need to move (4,5) more apart
01:16:192 (1,2,3,4) - smaller spacing here feels like an small anti jump pattern, we really advise to not do such spacing changes in a easy
00:38:577 (1,2) - due to the song having no proper beat at this point, i would advise to unstack this note so it is easier to read
00:48:269 (3,4) - same
01:12:731 (4) - i would suggest a new combo here to split the vocal lines up
Normal
00:53:346 (3,4) - i would suggest unstacking these notes, that way it makes the timing of the pattern easier to read and also makes the slider after easier to read
Summer
01:13:192 (3,4) - this jump played bad, i would really advise to give this the same spacing as the two notes before it
Insane
00:51:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - im really really not sure about the spacing in this combo, the way the first part does a stack then 1/2 movement, then at (5,6,1) it does the same size movement but at 1/1 timing, its extremely confusing and i found it very annoying when playing, i do advise to have a fiddle with this part and try to space it out abit better.
01:12:731 (1,2,3) - this plays really bad, the spacing is all the same even though the timing is completely different, it does not feel like a antijump or z-spacing, you need to make the spacing here make sense
fixShiki wrote:
Let's go!
看来只有hitsound能处理下了
[Easy]
00:15:961 (3,4) - 我建议把(3)尾部的whistle加到(4)上去
00:22:654 (4) - 尾部whistle
00:23:346 (1) - 去掉whistle
00:27:731 (4,5) - (4)的开头和(5)都加上whistle?
00:33:500 (3) - 最后一个whistle
00:38:115 (4) - whistle漏掉了??
00:43:654 (1) - new combo?
[Normal]
00:02:577 (3) - 尾部whistle
00:03:500 (5) - whistle
00:05:346 (4) - 尾部whistle
00:06:038 (5) - ^
00:20:115 (4) - whistle?
00:20:577 (1,2,3,4) - 不要把(1)(2)(3)都堆到(4)的头上来, 三个以上的堆叠我感觉不太好, 把它们分开?
00:25:423 (1) - 后移1/2拍, 然后减一repeat, ctrl+r, 记得要重新弄hitsound
00:42:731 (5) - new combo?
00:48:269 (5) - 去掉头上的whistle, 改到尾巴那里
[Summer]
前面那一段我觉得有点奇怪,明明都是whistle为主,突然插入一段clap的,然后后面又是whistle为主 ;_;
00:46:423 (1) - 头部的whistle可以去掉了
我觉得这个音效有点乱,找不到什么规律 ;_;
[Insane]
00:12:500 (2) - 这里你有两个选择,一个是头部改clap,另一个是把下面三个弄了SPOILER00:22:654 (4) - whistle00:15:038 (1) - 尾巴whistle?
00:18:038 (2) - 头部whistle?
00:20:807 (2) - 头部whistle?
00:34:884 (2) - 像这样??SPOILER00:46:077 (4) - 去掉whistle[attachment=0:86951]29.jpg[/attachment:86951]
01:09:038 (9) - 如果jump就不要静音, 这个声音很小
最后那里clap有点乱 D:/me hugs 326
fix X)_Kiva wrote:
some suggestions spacing and hitsounds in ['Summer] mod via irc.
00:57:961 (1,2,3,4,1) - SPACING
01:16:884 (3) - CLAP
good luck
AR6 I think it's findOdaril wrote:
As per your request.
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.
Generalhmm...It seems ..there is no 'game' in the tagbut if you mean the message's, ive change into 'EmotionAVG/ADV'
- "game" is too generic of a tag imo. Remove it ?
Easyafter fix the errors before this one the comboburst doesnt hidden the repeat>< adjust spacing
- The difficulty settings are way too high for an Easy.
- I honestly found this to be... extremely weird. I was first surprised by the hitsounds, then the map itself felt weird (but I can't really explain why since I don't know it myself ><). And there are way too many 1/2 beats to my taste
1.weird hitsound D: maybe use the standard better but i prefer this one XD
2.about the 1/2 ive change some of it
delete00:15:731 (2) -
delete00:21:500 (2) - and00:20:577 (1) - finish at 00:21:500
delete00:26:807 (2) -- 00:12:269 (1) - This slider appears too soon after the spinner. Remember new players spin slowly, and need some time to readjust their aim. It is also way too far from the center of the screen so soon after the spinner.
delete00:12:269 (1) -and add a note 00:12:500 (1) -- 00:20:577 (1,2) - I tend to think stacks are too confusing for Easy diffs, because they make rhythms unclear and harder to read.
- 00:24:961 (4) - For notes stacked under sliders, add to the stacking issues the fact that due to the stacking, it often looks bad :/
00:24:961 (4) - fix- 00:28:423 (5,1) - Extremely confusing jumps. It makes the timing look like 2/1 while it is 1/1.
00:28:423 (5) -delete 00:27:731 (4) -finish at 00:28:423- 00:45:038 (6) - Kick sliders are confusing because the number of repeats can't really be guessed, and generally in Easy diffs, the slider speed is so low that the cursor hides the repeat arrow.
change into a slider- 01:18:269 (4) - Same, except this time the repeat arrow is also hidden by the hitburst.
I think the difficulty settings that is no need to change, so sorry
Normalfix too (i think it's hard to read this part
- I think tick rate 2 sounds better (and it would be more consistent with the other diffs)
sounds great XD- This is way to difficult for a Normal for various reasons. Renaming it to Hard is the easiest way to go. Assuming you did rename to Hard:
i wonder normal ;_;so sorry orz- 00:20:577 (1,2,3,4) - These anti-jumps are too unexpected and confusing, even for a Hard.
Summerfix
- If this is the guest diff, name it "MisakaMikoto's Summer" at least. I still don't see why this has a custom name when all the over diffs have a regular one.
The creator agree the name of this diff called 'summer', I think it's find XD (why isnt it called fall or autumn D:)- Sweet Hard =o just a few things:
- 00:22:654 (1,2) - Weird jump. Why did you use a jump here ? o.o
fix- 00:37:654 (1,2,3) - These notes sound weird. Mapping to silence is difficult, I know, so I think it'd be better to just leave this part noteless ?
00:35:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add'6',and '7'turn intorepeat- 00:45:038 (1,2,3) - Same.
00:45:038 (1,2,3) - delete- 01:04:423 (3,4) - Confusing placement: it looks like (3) has actually 2 repeats and makes the rhythm after (3) confusing.
all fuix by myself he is lazy !(╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻
Insane
- I find this not to fit the song at all. The AR seems too high to me, and the 1/4 and jumps don't fit imo... The diff is fine and plays well though.
fix><Rukarioman wrote:
General:
- From what I know Anime openings/endings have to be called TV Size and not Short Ver.
Easy:
00:20:577 (1) - Short sliders with more than one repeat are confusing for new players to read.
00:38:577 (1) - ^
00:58:884 (1,2,3) - Please widen this spacing more, so the spacing in the combo is consistent.
01:18:269 (4) - Again, short sliders with more than one repeat.
Normal:
00:25:423 (1,2) - A jump like this in a normal is a bit too much imo
Summer:
01:02:807 (3,4,5) - Move all the notes 2 grids to the left so the spacing is right.
ThanksGarven wrote:
IRC modding.SPOILER07:13 <Garven> : In Insane: 01:09:961 - Start kiai here
07:14 <Shinki> : fix(include all diff?...
07:14 <Garven> : All other diffs start there. ;p
07:14 <Garven> : Only insane didn't
07:14 <Shinki> : my mistake ;_;
07:15 <Garven> : In Easy: 00:52:884 (3) - This didn't play well to me. Felt better at 00:52:654 -
07:17 <Garven> : Normal: 00:35:346 (1) - This was kind of strange. Would work better as just two circles at 00:35:346 - and 00:35:807 -
07:17 <Garven> : 00:45:038 (5) - A four-hit repeat was kind of weird - especially when you stacked it
07:19 <Garven> : I think I see why Sakura was thinknig the timing was weird
07:19 <Garven> : 01:13:192 (1,2,3,4) -
07:19 <Garven> : The singer gets really off during this part
07:20 <Garven> : But the background music stays in time.
07:20 <Shinki> : hmm, yup..
07:21 <Garven> : Summer: 00:21:731 (3,4,5,1,2) - Strange having the increased spacing here.
07:21 <Garven> : 00:39:500 (1,2) - Eeeh
07:22 <Garven> : Felt better like this: http://puu.sh/6MSS
07:24 <Garven> : 00:42:731 (5) - This is kinda ugly. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/6MT5
07:24 <Shinki> : I havent finish fixing the normal part OTZ so sorry....
07:24 <Garven> : No worries, the chat won't go away.
07:24 <Garven> : Ugh, that example I gave is pretty ugly too
07:25 <Shinki> : :O
07:26 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/6MTl
07:26 <Garven> : There we go
07:27 <Garven> : 01:06:500 (1,2,3,4) - I didn't like how this flowed
07:27 <Garven> : You move up then go for the smooth long slider in the opposite direction.
07:27 <Garven> : It's not very smooth to play.
07:28 <Garven> : It'd be cool if you could continue the counter-clockwise motion with the slider instead of going down and clockwise
07:28 <Garven> : 01:09:500 (1,2,3,4) - This just sounds really bad against the music - especially during such a powerful moment.
07:29 <Garven> : 01:18:269 (1) - Lower the volume on this please ><
07:30 <Garven> : In Insane: 00:25:654 (4,5,6) - This is a really awkward place to put this kind of rhythm
07:30 <Garven> : Doing it at 00:25:192 - would fit better
07:31 <Garven> : 00:33:961 (1) - It'd be cool to put this in the center of the two triangles you made
07:32 <Garven> : 00:35:346 (1) - Why is spacing so huge during such a soft part of the song?
07:33 <Garven> : 01:09:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Instead of a stream leading into this part, I think a triplet rhythm would give a more powerful feel.
07:33 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/6MU3
Edit:
After like 4 more rounds of IRC modding, I think we're good to go here.
Bubbled!
:U
osuplayer111 wrote:
[Summer]
00:24:038 (2,3,4) - The spacing between these notes doesn't seem so good. Space them properly.
01:22:423 (x) - Make the kiai end here like you did on the other difficulties.
[Insane]
00:34:654 (x) - Remove this break, it's totally useless.
Let me know when you've fixed everything so I'll be able to rank this.
osuplayer111 wrote:
Looks pretty good now to me!
Ranked~