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Nishizawa Ayumu (CV: Takahashi Mikako) - Kimi Fan

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yongtw123
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yongtw123
Keep poking me XDDD

Overall
三大點
1.音效
SPOILER
整體都不錯就只差音效
這clap下的有些亂
我拿[Normal]來說
00:10:020 (3) - 要clpa的應該是slidertick而不是結尾
簡單說 如果要"有規律"的下clap 通常是第二和第四白線穩定的下
要不然聽起來不自然
再舉個例子: 01:28:665 (3) - 這就對了

另外[Insane]所用的音效組合和[Normal]不太一樣
甚至音量都有差
建議兩個難度都調整為一樣的
(我比喜歡[Normal]的)

在你修完音效之前我這次掀不會看音效
I won't be modding hitsound this time until next time you fixed it.
2.難度分配
SPOILER
最簡單的難度3點多顆星
規則裡面有一條是最簡單的難度必須低於三顆星
(除非你有超棒的理由超過)

我是建議將[Normal]下修
然後加個中繼難度
3.Skin
SPOILER
要不要來個專屬的spinner background?
目前雖然是和BG一樣 但是位置有點微妙不同看起來就...(略

另外
pause-overlay 和 fail-background的比例不太正確
都瘦瘦的

[Normal]
00:16:122 (4,5,6) - spacing錯了很明顯喔
00:30:698 (1) - 這combo太長了 適時加new combo吧
01:08:665 (1) - ^
01:23:240 (5,6) - 最好別這樣擺 對初學玩家太tricky了
01:56:461 (8) - 算是個小jump...應該ok吧@@
02:09:342 (1) - 呃 這邊開始用soft音效好點吧?
02:35:783 (3) - 這真的有點太上面了...

[Firce777's Taiko Oni!!!]
雖然我沒玩太鼓所以也不能說什麼
但是我覺得連打太多了...節奏感不佳@@

[Insane]
00:29:003 (10) - new combo? (另外要不要從這裡就開始x1.2BPM?
00:30:359 (1) - combo好長
00:33:071 (1) - ^
00:58:156 (4) - new combo? (請適時加new combo... 這mod我不重複了 後面自己判斷吧~)
01:56:800 (5,6,7,8) - 唔哇聽起來...(ry
01:59:681 (8,9) - ^
02:37:817 (7) - 離(6)太近了!
02:58:495 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 這邊跟歌詞我覺得好點...
03:27:986 (1,1) - 我是建議去掉這兩個break, 要不然就到song setup--> 勾掉letterbox during breaks
03:47:986 (2) - 之前在slider底下的都是1/8音, 現在出現1/16會混淆

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我覺得還差一些
所以給星就等之後囉~
加油!
bossandy
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bossandy
謝啦~yongtw123~
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[general]
-Preview time not unique.
-audio lead-in of taiko diff +500
-BG image @ 1023*767, though it's a bit nazi, but it's highly recommended to change into 1024*768
-failed- image in wrong resolution

[Taiko]
...
D:
-I think it's too streamful. The whole song remains the 1/2 beat only, so it's absolutely not suitable to put soooo many 1/4 inside. (so of them don't even fit the music)
-Maybe mainly 1/2 is better.
-A big difficulty gap from (taiko mode of) Insane from this one...
-End this with the same time as Insane (04:08)?

Not going to mod this in detail, plx remake them a bit then ask for recheck? :3
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
I won't mod the W.I.P map
PM me when you move to pending.
gowww
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gowww
8-)
Orange
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Orange
star~
Nymph
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Nymph
nice song~ star~
Firce777
Elite Mapper
530 posts
Joined February 2010
Firce777
fixed~

Download: Mikako Takahashi - Kimi Fan (bossandy) [Firce777's Taiko Oni!!!].osu
bossandy
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bossandy
謝謝Nymph_教我做storyboard~
非常感謝^_^
Hellzero
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Hellzero
I can't mod SB but
03:54:088 - so fast switch
04:03:240 - Hayate No Gotoku 11.jpg very fast move and stoped some time at the beginning

No kudos plz.

And kudosu star for you
Nymph
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Nymph
最近入手很多粉色的星星呢~ 来分一个~
AceproCX
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AceproCX
Star.ヽ(́◕◞౪◟◕‵)ﾉ
ooooooops
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ooooooops
巴哈社團支援 8-)
NanaYukari
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NanaYukari
>3<
Hanamura Yosuke
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Hanamura Yosuke
Star 支援
-[ ix Ishida xi ]-
Former osu!taiko Champion: #3
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-[ ix Ishida xi ]-
☆
HeatKai
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HeatKai
nice SB
8-)
Deif
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Deif
As you requested, here's the mod:

General:
  1. Tags: Remove "Character Song , the combat butler" from tags and add the creators of the guest difficulties: "palmolive Firce777" (Remember to make those changes in all diffies and then Full-submit).
  2. Different Offset in Taiko Oni.
  3. I strongly recommend finishing Easy and Normal.
Storyboard:
  1. BG and spinner-background should be resized to 1024x768 or 800x600.
palmo's Easy:
  1. Nice job! But you should let Easy players to hear the whole song.
Normal:
  1. 02:35:783 (3) - It's under the HP bar, you should move it from there.
  2. 02:45:952 (1,2) - Unstack them to make them easier to read for Normal players.
Insane:
  1. 02:57:817 (7) - New combo.
  2. 03:01:376 (7) - ^
  3. 04:08:665 (1) - Convert it into a spinner (end: 04:09:851?)
Firce777's Taiko Oni!!!:
  1. There's no Preview Point set in this diffy.
  2. Maybe rename it to "Firce777's Taiko Oni" w/o the exclamation marks?
  3. Nice job, no problem with those patterns =)
Pretty nice job here! The whole mapset is great ^^ Star~
Rucker
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Rucker
Good :)
Nymph
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Nymph
IRC mod~
IIlIIlIlIl
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IIlIIlIlIl
:lol:
Kanon
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Joined May 2009
Kanon
MOD来了~
整体
白色COMBO 颜色最好换掉 不然KIAI TIME闪的有点受不了。
SB有2张图脸都扁了。。修复一下吧。。我不懂SB，所以只好请你找别人帮忙啦。
(另外最好用同等质量或者类似风格的图片比较好，后面有2张真的看起来不是很顺眼）
NORMAL 和 EASY 最好全部做完，不然等你想RANK的时候,一些BAT还是会建议让你把它做完的。。

EASY
没找到好说的

NORMAL
00:19:173到00:38:495 这里节奏听起来很乱（以下是个人修改建议，你也可以参考自己后面同一段旋律的排列）
00:19:512 (1,2,3) - 这里滑条缩短2格，原先滑条结束位置放NOTE
00:24:935 (1) - 这个滑条变成2个短滑条
00:35:783 (1) - 这里可以http://puu.sh/2ebC改。。
后面做的还是可以的。

TAIKO
跳过

Insane
00:15:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里的跳建议多做几个TIME PANEL让HITSOUND 逐渐增大会比较有感觉
00:29:681到00:35:613 为什么这里突然NOTE密度变大，后面又变回来正常速度，而我觉得歌节奏并没有变化，没有必要吧，有点OVERMAP。而且这样一来这段到副歌前那段的HITSOUND听起来会很乱。
01:08:664 (1,3,5,7) - 这地方WHISTLE听起来比较多余，不如删掉？
01:11:037 (1) - ^
01:12:223 (3) - ^
01:17:817 (2,4) - ^
01:20:190 (1) - ^
01:24:596 (1,2) - ^
01:25:952 (3) - ^
02:33:410 (6) - ^
第二段KIAI 就把跟前面差不多地方的WHISLTE删掉，懒得一个一个贴了>.< 这些地方放WHISLTE 没有必要 反而会让人觉得这图很乱，只有结尾和纯音乐的地方用的我觉得不错。
03:45:190 (2,3) - 这里坑爹了 删掉一个吧。前面已经有串连打了，不需要在提高难度了吧？
04:05:444 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 结尾这样是可以的。。但是个人不喜欢，想想打图的人在连上800个COMBO以后在这里一直MISS不能FC会怎么想，对这幅图印象肯定是差多了。
总体上来说排列很用心，HITSOUND有点乱。

☆~~
HeatKai
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HeatKai
Yo yo :p
Got request from Crimmi's lovely queue :3

So here's the mod.

[general]

Please use 1024 x 768 for your starting BG , and SB BG 800 x 600

Approachcircle.png must 128 x 128

[palmo's easy]
eh , hey there :D

Approach rate +1

00:16:800 (4) - its confusing for easy , Make like this " http://puu.sh/2lr5 "
00:17:986 (5) - put other place :P
00:19:512 (1) - move it to other place :\ So near
00:24:935 (1) - spacing
00:35:783 (1,2,3) - can't you make one long repeat slider O.O ?
00:56:800 (1,2,3) - replace it with repeat slider " http://puu.sh/2lre "
01:12:393 (4) - make slider like this ." http://puu.sh/2lrh " " http://puu.sh/2lri "
01:13:410 (1) - ^ then check spacing :o
01:19:173 (1) - map like this " http://puu.sh/2lro"
01:28:664 (3) - make like this " http://puu.sh/2lrr "
01:30:020 (1) - remove it far :3

[normal]
00:19:512 (1) - reduce volume for this part ?
00:26:291 (3) - spacing
00:34:766 (8,9) - put it in front of the slider
02:08:665 (8) - delete.

[insane]
HP drain rate - 1

00:15:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - increase the volume lol , When I play , it seems like I didn't hit any circle -_-
00:35:105 (3) - remove clap
01:16:122 (2) - make it longer
01:23:240 (3,4,5) - It doesn't follow the rhythm that much XD its not should be like this though XD
01:57:139 (1) - spacing
02:09:003 (x) - add slider " http://puu.sh/2lse "
02:42:224 (4) - 1 grid right
02:45:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I fall in love with this stream * post for fun :3
02:49:681 (6,7,8) - change it based on the song :3
03:01:885 (9) - new combo
03:10:020 (5) - new combo
03:37:478 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make star better O.O
03:43:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make this stream smoother-looking ~

[taiko]
remove sb from this diff , If you put it O.O

[overall]

Go go Bossandy :D
Starred ~ *

Edited: Is it only me or someone else have same taught :3



THIS PIC scary :P
bossandy
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fix~
Hinagiku
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Hinagiku
:)
bossandy
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我想要remap !! 等我吧!!! 哈哈!!!
Noobita
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Noobita
best firce map
Noobita
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Noobita
EDIT: lag
bossandy
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Remap!!!!
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AIR

bossandy wrote:

我想要remap !! 等我吧!!! 哈哈!!!
说到做到nice
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