Lesjuh wrote:

01:08:019 ~ 01:30:686 - Kiai time?

Also I think the combo colour white blends too much with the BG. It's that my skin has darker hitcircles so it will probably look worse with default ones.

Hyper
00:25:519 (2) - End this slider one tick earlier (1/4) Or don't make the jumps so wide they're impossible to predict. done
00:26:686 (3) - ^
00:49:352 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Exactly the same pattern gets boring/frustrating the second time.
01:00:019 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:05:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

Taiko
01:22:684 (2) - Unsnapped! fixed

Another
00:09:353 (1) - End this slider one tick earlier (1/4) Or remap this part because it doesn't fit the song at all.
00:10:019 (2) - ^
00:10:686 (1) - ^
00:11:352 (2) - ^
00:12:019 (1) - ^
00:12:685 (2) - ^
00:29:353 (1,2,3,4) - Nasty difficulty jump! Place these a little closer to each other. done
00:34:603 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:57:352 (1) ~ 01:06:520 (8) - This is ridiculous.
01:32:686 (1,2,3) - Class-A mindfuck.
01:42:686 (16,1,2) - ^
01:44:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ Either remove the first note of this stream or distance snap it to 01:44:186 (10).

Hard
I highly recommend AR +1
00:45:352 (1) - End this spinner @ 00:46:352 so players won't get donfused with the hitcircles soon after it. It also looks/sounds better.
01:19:852 (2,3) - Remove these notes and extend 01:18:686 (1) by one tick.*
01:19:936 (3) - Remove this note
01:21:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't fit the music...
01:23:186 (7) - ...and this is plain off.
01:24:019 (1) - Shorten by one tick
01:26:686 (1) - End on the previous white tick.
01:31:686 (1,2,3) - Move closer to the previous object. done
01:33:352 (2,3) - Feels too empty between those two objects.
01:38:019 (1) - Give it 5 ticks and move the two beats after it closer to this slider.
01:38:686 (3,1) - Feels too empty between those two objects.
01:45:352 (1) - End one tick earlier to prevent confusion.
01:47:186 (3) - ^
01:49:352 (1) - End on the previous white tick.

Normal
01:29:352 - Why end so early? Song is not even 2 minutes and ending this early feels odd. I think the ending is good.

That's it!

DJPop wrote:

~Normal~
00:12:353 (6) - new combo done
Come on, don't be lazy. End the map at 01:52:019 done

~Hard~
01:26:352 (6,1) - too far
TIMING 28,186 - remove done
TIMING 34,519 - remove done

~Another~
01:16:186 (2,4) - move right 1 grid (Lv4) done

~Hyper~
TIMING 28,186 - remove done
TIMING 30,602 - remove done



+Star

1. That artist is weird. Is it really two spaces between wa. and remixed? And even then, why does it get interpreted everywhere else as a single space? I'd put only one space anyway, just to be safe, in case some parser fails due to this. Something also tells me remixed celas should be in parentheses or something but I know how awkward the japanese artists can get.
2. Shiirn is right about the metronome, there's really no reason to leave it where it is right now. Or at least, I can't find a valid reason to leave it like that.
3. Is it just me or the hitsound volume is really low? I can't really discern what is happening due to this. The mp3 might be too loud, too, I don't know.
4. Heh, there's obviously a difference between our timing UOs since I get around -9ms of what you have.
5. I can see Shiirn's point with the difficulty names, and I see no harm in changing them.
6. Wow, that's some messed up difficulty sorting, buddy. There's not much you can do about them anyway.

1. I overall don't like this difficulty much, if at all... it just feels 'shapeless' and cluttered, like an amateur did it. It is very confusing to play in such cluttered spacing.

Gens wrote:

[General]

1. That artist is weird. Is it really two spaces between wa. and remixed? And even then, why does it get interpreted everywhere else as a single space? I'd put only one space anyway, just to be safe, in case some parser fails due to this. Something also tells me remixed celas should be in parentheses or something but I know how awkward the japanese artists can get.
2. Shiirn is right about the metronome, there's really no reason to leave it where it is right now. Or at least, I can't find a valid reason to leave it like that.
3. Is it just me or the hitsound volume is really low? I can't really discern what is happening due to this. The mp3 might be too loud, too, I don't know.
4. Heh, there's obviously a difference between our timing UOs since I get around -9ms of what you have.
5. I can see Shiirn's point with the difficulty names, and I see no harm in changing them.
6. Wow, that's some messed up difficulty sorting, buddy. There's not much you can do about them anyway.

[Hard]

1. I overall don't like this difficulty much, if at all... it just feels 'shapeless' and cluttered, like an amateur did it. It is very confusing to play in such cluttered spacing.

[Hyper]

01:28:019 (1,2,3,4,5) - These don't seem to follow the music much, and they could have a more readable spacing...

[Another]

00:57:352 - Is this even possible? yes,see the picture,and,I have played this part many times by myself,and I have asked some of my friends play it.
01:12:019 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is purely cosmetic but they're very misaligned and look pretty ugly. I'd change the whole pattern altogether.

That's it from my part, I guess.

Combo1 : 251,225,49
Combo2 : 162,234,53
Combo3 : 87,204,249
Combo4 : 245,75,152

lovhin456 wrote:

* Overall, this for me is not ready yet for a bubble/rank

Shiirn wrote:

General
Akiyama Mio K-ON as tags? oh wow, i laughed so hard i nearly threw up.

soulfear wrote:

Should I laugh at you?

Shiirn wrote:

SPOILER

lovhin456 wrote:

* Overall, this for me is not ready yet for a bubble/rank

soulfear maps never are
General
Akiyama Mio K-ON as tags? oh wow, i laughed so hard i nearly threw up.
Another
00:09:342 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These are still here?! I don't care if some random shitlicker S'd it, this is outright retarded.
Hyper
00:25:509 (2,3,4) - See Anot-

Hell, you didn't even look at my post, did you? I could probably directly copy+paste my mod from before while taking out Gens' mod. Oh, that's right, he can bubble your shit! Of course you'd listen to him! Let the rest of the plebeians just go lick themselves, aye?
You're so bloody lazy that you poop out what is obvious to the world a draft of a map (By the gods above, I hope this is a draft, I'd hate to see one of yours otherwise) and don't ever go back to change anything unless it's absolutely essential to get your turd-child ranked (because that seems to be all you care about), this is further proofed by the fact that you threw down tags that are obviously wrong but will obviously get you lots of plays.

Your mapping have not improved an iota since your first ranked maps, you still have the same crappy attitude, and you still reject entirely logical and fine mods unless they're coming from a mat or bat since their opinions are obviously the only ones worthy of mention. I would sleep well knowing you never ranked another map again after you shat out the crapfest that was akai tsukunise (hell, the fucking NAME was wrong! it's Akai KUTSUnise, ye dumb-) alas a lot of the bullshit you do is not distinctly unrankable (hopefully, yet).

If you need this to be translated so you can understand it, give me a ring. I'm not so lazy as to not find a translator for you. Not that you'll even read half of my post anyway.

akrolsmir wrote:

SPOILER

This must be the most... shall we say... colorful post I've ever seen grace the osu! forums. Actually, it probably takes the cake for anything written I've read this decade. Or watched or heard, for that matter. I'm almost scared now to open up the beatmap. Don't you ever find yelling at people like this to be a bit counterproductive? Fortunately (or unfortunately), most of this will be lost on soulfear. (And out of sheer curiosity, could you really find a translator who would be able and willing to reiterate your somewhat unique style adequately into Chinese?)