This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jeudi 12 mai 2011 at 18:34:18

Artist: ClariS
Title: Drop
Tags: LRJ Alice Clara kz livetune _LRJ_
BPM: 133
Filesize: 6808kb
Play Time: 04:05
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4,58 stars, 402 notes)
2. Normal (2,95 stars, 323 notes)

Download: ClariS - Drop
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st collab with LRJ <3

Normal : Ok !
Hard : Ok !
SB : Ok !

Finished and ready for mods,
Enjoy o/

Supah Star ! <3

Thanks for your star Qrool

The combo colors are so random~ ;u; Just a suggestion, how about these colors? :3

Combo1 : 105,75,90
Combo2 : 250,210,210
Combo3 : 225,245,240

[Hard]
00:04:850 (6) - Maybe new combo?

[Normal]
00:05:301 (3) - Maybe new combo?
01:44:549 (1) - Maaaybe bit too soon after spinner in Normal diff? >:
03:32:369 (1) - ^
04:01:692 (1) - ^

Useless mod, I can't find anything~ Great work<3

These combo colors are much better, thank you !

Now, let's wait LRJ for the fixs on his parts~

Lanttu wrote:

[Hard]
00:04:850 (6) - Maybe new combo? Nope ~

[Normal]
00:05:301 (3) - Maybe new combo? Nope ~
01:44:549 (1) - Maaaybe bit too soon after spinner in Normal diff? >: Done.
03:32:369 (1) - ^ Done.
04:01:692 (1) - ^ Done.

Useless mod, I can't find anything~ Great work<3

o/

Download: Kz (livetune) feat. ClariS - Drop (Fight69) [Normal].osu

Here's my useless mod~

[Overall]
Awww sweet song~ Star

[Timing]
BPM: 133.000 (Okay~)
Offset: 3,930 (Weird to start at the 3rd beat ;w;)

[Normal]
00:54:474 (2) - Second point: x:200 y:136
02:47:030 (2) - Weird to start here... Maybe truncate it and then place at 02:47:256 ?
03:18:158 (1,2,3) - Change the hitsounds to those of [Hard]?
03:25:376 (1,2) - ^
03:32:369 (1) - To quick after a spinner?


[Hard]
00:47:256 (2) - Finish?
00:55:151 (3) - x:112 y:144
01:26:955 (1) - Second point Left 1 grid
01:28:309 (3) - ^
02:54:249 (2) - x:268 y:280
03:25:602 (2) - Whistle?
03:44:098 (1) - Second point: x:272 y:80 | Last point: x:352 y:80
03:45:452 (3) - ^
03:57:632 (1) - Delete New Combo?
04:05:752 - Place a note and start spinner at 04:05:978 ?

cute :3

Everything has been fixed, thank you Miu Matsuoka !

Also, thank you Charsi for your star :3

hihi~
some suggestions...

[General]
lovely song.

[Normal]
00:03:164(1) - quite weird...
00:38:465(x) - why not a note here?
01:10:269(4) - new combo.
02:26:059(4) - new combo.

[Hard]
00:04:856(6) - new combo.
01:43:089(x) - the spinner starts here?
03:01:472(4) - make it overlay 03:00:570(2) more perfectly.
04:00:232(x) - the spinner starts here?
04:05:871(x) - ^

go rank this map plz!
so
star~

Woah I love this map <3 ~
Cute BG , cute SB , cute mapper haha~ >w<

Sry for delay ;w;

General
-It's kz (livetune) not Kz (livetune) , it's a tiny issue but kz (livetune) is original..
-Wasn't this song only from kz (livetune) ? Add ClariS to tags then
-delete .osb ...but who cares nowadays...for the beauty ? ;3

Hard
*00:20:194 (5) - Move it so it doesn't touch (4) ?
*00:54:480 (2) - Start NC here ?
*01:07:111 (1) - Remove NC ?
*01:08:916 (3) - Remove finish? It comes too sudden and out of nowhere for me..
*01:27:638 (2) - Reduce distance a bit
*01:48:615 (1) - Fade out instead of silence? (from here on : 01:50:420 )
*02:02:826 (1,2,3,4,1,....) - make NCs like this?
*(NAZI) 02:08:916 (5) - Move 1 grid left (so it looks symmetric with 1,2,3,4)
*(NAZI) 02:53:578 (1) - Move 1 grid right (so (7) is in the curve of the slider)
*03:04:405 (4) - Make this a spinner?
*03:44:104 (1,2) - Woah these slider look strange ...consider making the more beautiful?
*03:44:104 (1,2) - Reduce distance?
*03:58:089 (4) - Touches HP-Drainbar...reduce squarepattern-distance a bit?
*04:05:984 (1) - Fade out instead of silence?

Normal

*00:03:164 (1) - blue tick? o_O
*01:08:465 (1) - Remove finish
*01:48:615 (1) - fade out instead of silence?
*02:24:254 (1) - remove finish
*03:04:405 (1) - Fade out instead of silence?
*03:40:495 (1) - remove NC (Take a look at 01:23:352^^)
*04:05:984 (1) - Make a circle here and move spinner 1 red tick later?
*04:05:984 (1) - Fade out instead of silence?

STAR !!

Magicphoenix wrote:

Woah I love this map <3 ~
Cute BG , cute SB , cute mapper haha~ >w<

Sry for delay ;w;

General
-It's kz (livetune) not Kz (livetune) , it's a tiny issue but kz (livetune) is original.. Okay
-Wasn't this song only from kz (livetune) ? Add ClariS to tags then Are you sure ? I've found that kz is the composer and ClariS the singers, I think I'll just use "ClariS" as a artist, like ClariS - Irony maps (yeah, kz composed this song too)
-delete .osb ...but who cares nowadays...for the beauty ? ;3 I'll lose my SB if I do that :<

Hard
*00:20:194 (5) - Move it so it doesn't touch (4) ? Okay
*00:54:480 (2) - Start NC here ? Okay
*01:07:111 (1) - Remove NC ? Okay
*01:08:916 (3) - Remove finish? It comes too sudden and out of nowhere for me.. I don't think so :/
*01:27:638 (2) - Reduce distance a bit It's okay for me
*01:48:615 (1) - Fade out instead of silence? (from here on : 01:50:420 ) Okay
*02:02:826 (1,2,3,4,1,....) - make NCs like this? Okay
*(NAZI) 02:08:916 (5) - Move 1 grid left (so it looks symmetric with 1,2,3,4) Okay
*(NAZI) 02:53:578 (1) - Move 1 grid right (so (7) is in the curve of the slider) Uh ? 7 ?
*03:04:405 (4) - Make this a spinner? Nope
*03:44:104 (1,2) - Woah these slider look strange ...consider making the more beautiful? It should be better like that
*03:44:104 (1,2) - Reduce distance? Nope
*03:58:089 (4) - Touches HP-Drainbar...reduce squarepattern-distance a bit? Okay
*04:05:984 (1) - Fade out instead of silence? Okay

Normal

*00:03:164 (1) - blue tick? o_O Whoops, forgot to replace it after changing timing, my mistake >.>
*01:08:465 (1) - Remove finish Nope
*01:48:615 (1) - fade out instead of silence? Okay
*02:24:254 (1) - remove finish Nope
*03:04:405 (1) - Fade out instead of silence? Okay
*03:40:495 (1) - remove NC (Take a look at 01:23:352^^) I don't even know why there was a NC here xD
*04:05:984 (1) - Make a circle here and move spinner 1 red tick later? Okay
*04:05:984 (1) - Fade out instead of silence? Okay

STAR !!

Thank you Magicphoenix !

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~
some suggestions...

[General]
lovely song.

[Normal]
00:03:164(1) - quite weird... Yeah, forgot to replace it
00:38:465(x) - why not a note here? I don't want to make this diff too hard
01:10:269(4) - new combo. Okay
02:26:059(4) - new combo. Okay

[Hard]
00:04:856(6) - new combo. Okay
01:43:089(x) - the spinner starts here? Nope, it's already okay like that for me and the spinner will appear a bit too fast
03:01:472(4) - make it overlay 03:00:570(2) more perfectly. Okay
04:00:232(x) - the spinner starts here? Same thing than the other spinner
04:05:871(x) - ^ ^

go rank this map plz!
so
star~

Thank you JauiPlaY !

EDIT : Holy sh-
I totally forgot your kudosus, I'm really sorry guys !

Lol was spacing out a bit while mod...delete .osb when SB is there ..haha^^

Star

Star~

General
- Supprime le "Kz (livetune) feat. ClariS - Drop (Fight69).osb" et fullsubmit.
- Ton Background n'est pas 4/3, et ca rend la miniature moche. Prend ce Background :

Hard
00:17:938 (3) - Finish au lieu du whistle
01:46:811 (5) - Cette note fais bizarre, elle je trouve dans le "vide" et sonne assez moche a mon avis.
02:19:292 (3) - Finish au début ?
02:49:969 (4) - Si le jump est fais exprès, alors met un new combo
04:05:307 (3) - Finish à la place du whistle

Bon c'tout~

nice!

little modding

[Normal]
2.27.863(1) - 1grid up

+star~

heya.

General
The BG is 960x768. Resize it so it's a 4:3 res, like 1024x768 lol didn't see Kurai's mod above.
Hmm... I think the song could really need some claps for hitsounds. At least I'd love to hear some claps in the map.

Hard
Nice map, nothing here...

Normal
00:47:262 (2) - add finish?
01:01:247 (1) - 1 grid up + left?
01:08:465 (1) - remove the finish? since there is no finish in the music.
02:24:254 (1) - ^

Nice maps, just do something with the claps :<

[General]
Disable the letterboxing.
Is there something to put in Source?
To be ranked, your beatmap set needs to have at least one difficulty with <= 3 stars. If you reduce Normal's OD by 1, it should drop it to just under 3. Don't always rely on this as a cheap way to reduce star rating though.

[Normal]
04:06:209 - Unnecessary timing point. I think you got the volumes off by 5% compared to the same section for Hard.
00:17:036 (2) - One right.
00:36:209 (5,1) - Having a separate combo here looks strange, even though it fits the music.
00:42:525 (4,1) - ^
01:20:194 (3) - Whistle.
01:20:645 (4) - Remove whistle.
01:21:096 (5) - Whistle.
01:21:547 (1) - Whistle at the end.
01:22:450 (2) - Remove whistle from the start, add whistle at the end.
01:25:157 (2) - Remove whistle from the end.
01:26:510 (3) - Whistle.
01:37:337 (4) - Whistle.
02:45:006 (6) - One right.
02:48:615 (1,2,3,1) - You might be able to shuffle this around a bit so that the (3) lines up with the slider nicely.
03:03:051 (1) - Whistle.
03:42:299 (2) - Remove whistle from end, add whistle to repeat.
03:43:653 (3) - Whistle.
03:49:517 (5) - Whistle.
03:59:217 (3) - Remove whistle from end.
04:00:119 (4) - Add whistle or finish.

[Hard]
00:37:111 (2,3) - One right, for symmetry with (7).
00:56:961 (6) - Whistle at the end.
01:22:450 (6) - One left, for symmetry with the next slider (1).
01:42:074 (2) - Remove whistle from end.
01:42:976 (3) - Whistle.
01:46:811 (5) - Delete.
02:26:510 (3) - Finish at the start might be unnecessary.
02:31:021 (1) - Whistle.
02:35:532 (1) - This looks icky starting a combo here.
02:37:337 (1) - ^
03:00:796 (3) - Whistle at the end.
03:01:472 (4) - Remove whistle from the start, add whistle to the end.
03:02:149 (5) - Delete.
03:02:375 (6) - Remove whistle, add finish.
03:18:841 (3) - Whistle?
03:39:593 (2) - One right, for symmetry with the next slider (1).
03:56:735 (1,2,3,4) - You might be able to make this quadrilateral look a little more regular. At the moment it looks kinda squished at the top.
04:03:728 (4,1,4) - I can see you've disabled grid to place the first (4) here, then flipped it to make (1). You need to also make the second (4) line up. Copy (1) and flip it again.

Great song, and really solid maps. Get it ranked!

KuraiPettan wrote:

General
- Supprime le "Kz (livetune) feat. ClariS - Drop (Fight69).osb" et fullsubmit. Okay
- Ton Background n'est pas 4/3, et ca rend la miniature moche. Prend ce Background :

SPOILER

Merci pour le bg :3

Hard
00:17:938 (3) - Finish au lieu du whistle Okay
01:46:811 (5) - Cette note fais bizarre, elle je trouve dans le "vide" et sonne assez moche a mon avis. Okay, supprimé
02:19:292 (3) - Finish au début ? Nope
02:49:969 (4) - Si le jump est fais exprès, alors met un new combo Okay
04:05:307 (3) - Finish à la place du whistle Okay

Bon c'tout~

Merci Kurai

frost-b-spec wrote:

nice!

little modding

[Normal]
2.27.863(1) - 1grid up Fixed

+star~

Indeed, it's a very short mod, but this pattern looks better now : Thanks !

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

heya.

General
The BG is 960x768. Resize it so it's a 4:3 res, like 1024x768 lol didn't see Kurai's mod above. Yeah, already fixed xD
Hmm... I think the song could really need some claps for hitsounds. At least I'd love to hear some claps in the map. For me, it doesn't sound very well with the song, that's why I haven't added them, but it's just my personnal opinion, if more people agree with you, I'll change that (that will mean that my opinions sucks xD)

Hard
Nice map, nothing here...

Normal
00:47:262 (2) - add finish? Okay
01:01:247 (1) - 1 grid up + left? Okay
01:08:465 (1) - remove the finish? since there is no finish in the music. Yeah, but it sound well IMO
02:24:254 (1) - ^ ^

Nice maps, just do something with the claps :<

Thanks Tenshi-nyan ! :3

Samah wrote:

[General]
Disable the letterboxing. Disabled
Is there something to put in Source? As far as I know, this song is not from a anime or something else
To be ranked, your beatmap set needs to have at least one difficulty with <= 3 stars. If you reduce Normal's OD by 1, it should drop it to just under 3. Don't always rely on this as a cheap way to reduce star rating though. Okay lol

[Normal]
04:06:209 - Unnecessary timing point. I think you got the volumes off by 5% compared to the same section for Hard.
00:17:036 (2) - One right. Fixed
00:36:209 (5,1) - Having a separate combo here looks strange, even though it fits the music. They are not separate anymore now, I guess it still fits the music
00:42:525 (4,1) - ^ Fixed
01:20:194 (3) - Whistle.
01:20:645 (4) - Remove whistle.
01:21:096 (5) - Whistle.
01:21:547 (1) - Whistle at the end.
01:22:450 (2) - Remove whistle from the start, add whistle at the end.
01:25:157 (2) - Remove whistle from the end.
01:26:510 (3) - Whistle.
01:37:337 (4) - Whistle. Every HS changes until here has been fixed
02:45:006 (6) - One right. Okay
02:48:615 (1,2,3,1) - You might be able to shuffle this around a bit so that the (3) lines up with the slider nicely. I guess it's okay now
03:03:051 (1) - Whistle. Okay
03:42:299 (2) - Remove whistle from end, add whistle to repeat. Okay
03:43:653 (3) - Whistle. Okay
03:49:517 (5) - Whistle. Okay
03:59:217 (3) - Remove whistle from end. Okay
04:00:119 (4) - Add whistle or finish. A finish sounds better for me

[Hard]
00:37:111 (2,3) - One right, for symmetry with (7). I guess you mean 1 grid right xD
00:56:961 (6) - Whistle at the end. Okay
01:22:450 (6) - One left, for symmetry with the next slider (1). Fixed
01:42:074 (2) - Remove whistle from end. Nope, sounds nice for me
01:42:976 (3) - Whistle. Nope~
01:46:811 (5) - Delete. Fixed
02:26:510 (3) - Finish at the start might be unnecessary. Indeed, fixed
02:31:021 (1) - Whistle. Oh, I forgot it here xD Thanks !
02:35:532 (1) - This looks icky starting a combo here. Seems ok for me
02:37:337 (1) - ^ ^
03:00:796 (3) - Whistle at the end. Okay
03:01:472 (4) - Remove whistle from the start, add whistle to the end. Okay
03:02:149 (5) - Delete. Okay
03:02:375 (6) - Remove whistle, add finish. Okay
03:18:841 (3) - Whistle? Why not
03:39:593 (2) - One right, for symmetry with the next slider (1).
03:56:735 (1,2,3,4) - You might be able to make this quadrilateral look a little more regular. At the moment it looks kinda squished at the top. Looks better now
04:03:728 (4,1,4) - I can see you've disabled grid to place the first (4) here, then flipped it to make (1). You need to also make the second (4) line up. Copy (1) and flip it again. Fixed

Great song, and really solid maps. Get it ranked!

Thank you so much Samah !

Of course, thanks to RuRu for his star !

[General]:

1. 04:09:480 (T) - unused section in both diffs.
2. snap the sections for KIAI
3. add tags: _LRJ_, and it should be 'kz' not 'Kz' (nazi :3)

[Hard]:

1. 00:23:803 (6) - new combo
2. 00:31:021 (5) - ^
3. 02:09:818 (T) - add note?

star~

and don't forget to edit this thread's title :P

[Normal]
Good

Copy-paste?
[Hard]
Same as above

star~

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. 04:09:480 (T) - unused section in both diffs. Deleted
2. snap the sections for KIAI Resnapped
3. add tags: _LRJ_, and it should be 'kz' not 'Kz' (nazi :3)

lol ok

[Hard]:

1. 00:23:803 (6) - new combo Okay
2. 00:31:021 (5) - ^ Okay
3. 02:09:818 (T) - add note?

Okay

star~ Thanks !

and don't forget to edit this thread's title Sure xD

Thank you Colin Hou for your mod !

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Normal]
Good

Copy-paste? Yeah, copy-paste
[Hard]
Same as above Same as above

star~

Thanks OzzyOzrock for your star !

Nothing wrong to point out, really.

Bubbled~

Starred so hard.

@Squidifications : Thanks for your star !

uh, Rank naow

-I think the breaks near the end are slightly overdoing it but up to you

Normal:
-Might want to do HP -1 as this is the easiest difficulty
00:44:104 (3,4,5) - no whistles here to follow your pattern?
01:42:976 (4,1) - stack these?

Hard:
02:17:487 (3) - I would move this pattern around slightly just so the repeat is always clearly visible

Everything else looks good

James2250 wrote:

-I think the breaks near the end are slightly overdoing it but up to you I won't change them, they're fine like that IMO

Normal:
-Might want to do HP -1 as this is the easiest difficulty
00:44:104 (3,4,5) - no whistles here to follow your pattern?
01:42:976 (4,1) - stack these?

Hard:
02:17:487 (3) - I would move this pattern around slightly just so the repeat is always clearly visible

Everything else looks good

Everything else has been fixed, thank you !

Looks good now

Ranked~

(Yep you also get my 3000th post )

3000th post , congrats James ~

...

ZOMG CONGRATS FIGHT <333

Thank you so much James !

Also congrats for your 3000th post !

Fight69

yey for ClariS!

Yay gratz

congratz~

you forgot the kudosu for James2250

GG

Colin Hou wrote:

congratz~

you forgot the kudosu for James2250

Fuuu-
Stupid me :<
Kudosu'd, also thanks everyone !

gg !! really nice beatmap and nice sound

Thanks Y u y u k o !