Combo1 : 105,75,90
Combo2 : 250,210,210
Combo3 : 225,245,240
o/Lanttu wrote:
[Hard]
00:04:850 (6) - Maybe new combo? Nope ~
[Normal]
00:05:301 (3) - Maybe new combo? Nope ~
01:44:549 (1) - Maaaybe bit too soon after spinner in Normal diff? >: Done.
03:32:369 (1) - ^ Done.
04:01:692 (1) - ^ Done.
Useless mod, I can't find anything~ Great work<3
Thank you Magicphoenix !Magicphoenix wrote:
Woah I love this map <3 ~
Cute BG , cute SB , cute mapper haha~ >w<
Sry for delay ;w;
General
-It's kz (livetune) not Kz (livetune) , it's a tiny issue but kz (livetune) is original.. Okay
-Wasn't this song only from kz (livetune) ? Add ClariS to tags then Are you sure ? I've found that kz is the composer and ClariS the singers, I think I'll just use "ClariS" as a artist, like ClariS - Irony maps (yeah, kz composed this song too)
-delete .osb ...but who cares nowadays...for the beauty ? ;3 I'll lose my SB if I do that :<
Hard
*00:20:194 (5) - Move it so it doesn't touch (4) ? Okay
*00:54:480 (2) - Start NC here ? Okay
*01:07:111 (1) - Remove NC ? Okay
*01:08:916 (3) - Remove finish? It comes too sudden and out of nowhere for me.. I don't think so :/
*01:27:638 (2) - Reduce distance a bit It's okay for me
*01:48:615 (1) - Fade out instead of silence? (from here on : 01:50:420 ) Okay
*02:02:826 (1,2,3,4,1,....) - make NCs like this? Okay
*(NAZI) 02:08:916 (5) - Move 1 grid left (so it looks symmetric with 1,2,3,4) Okay
*(NAZI) 02:53:578 (1) - Move 1 grid right (so (7) is in the curve of the slider) Uh ? 7 ?
*03:04:405 (4) - Make this a spinner? Nope
*03:44:104 (1,2) - Woah these slider look strange ...consider making the more beautiful? It should be better like that
*03:44:104 (1,2) - Reduce distance? Nope
*03:58:089 (4) - Touches HP-Drainbar...reduce squarepattern-distance a bit? Okay
*04:05:984 (1) - Fade out instead of silence? Okay
Normal
*00:03:164 (1) - blue tick? o_O Whoops, forgot to replace it after changing timing, my mistake >.>
*01:08:465 (1) - Remove finish Nope
*01:48:615 (1) - fade out instead of silence? Okay
*02:24:254 (1) - remove finish Nope
*03:04:405 (1) - Fade out instead of silence? Okay
*03:40:495 (1) - remove NC (Take a look at 01:23:352^^) I don't even know why there was a NC here xD
*04:05:984 (1) - Make a circle here and move spinner 1 red tick later? Okay
*04:05:984 (1) - Fade out instead of silence? Okay
STAR !!
Thank you JauiPlaY !JauiPlaY wrote:
hihi~
some suggestions...
[General]
lovely song.
[Normal]
00:03:164(1) - quite weird... Yeah, forgot to replace it
00:38:465(x) - why not a note here? I don't want to make this diff too hard
01:10:269(4) - new combo. Okay
02:26:059(4) - new combo. Okay
[Hard]
00:04:856(6) - new combo. Okay
01:43:089(x) - the spinner starts here? Nope, it's already okay like that for me and the spinner will appear a bit too fast
03:01:472(4) - make it overlay 03:00:570(2) more perfectly. Okay
04:00:232(x) - the spinner starts here? Same thing than the other spinner
04:05:871(x) - ^ ^
go rank this map plz!
so
star~
Merci KuraiKuraiPettan wrote:
General
- Supprime le "Kz (livetune) feat. ClariS - Drop (Fight69).osb" et fullsubmit. Okay
- Ton Background n'est pas 4/3, et ca rend la miniature moche. Prend ce Background :
Merci pour le bg :3
Hard
00:17:938 (3) - Finish au lieu du whistle Okay
01:46:811 (5) - Cette note fais bizarre, elle je trouve dans le "vide" et sonne assez moche a mon avis. Okay, supprimé
02:19:292 (3) - Finish au début ? Nope
02:49:969 (4) - Si le jump est fais exprès, alors met un new combo Okay
04:05:307 (3) - Finish à la place du whistle Okay
Bon c'tout~
Indeed, it's a very short mod, but this pattern looks better now : Thanks !frost-b-spec wrote:
nice!
little modding
[Normal]
2.27.863(1) - 1grid up Fixed
+star~
Thanks Tenshi-nyan ! :3Tenshi-nyan wrote:
heya.
GeneralThe BG is 960x768. Resize it so it's a 4:3 res, like 1024x768lol didn't see Kurai's mod above. Yeah, already fixed xD
Hmm... I think the song could really need some claps for hitsounds. At least I'd love to hear some claps in the map. For me, it doesn't sound very well with the song, that's why I haven't added them, but it's just my personnal opinion, if more people agree with you, I'll change that (that will mean that my opinions sucks xD)
Hard
Nice map, nothing here...
Normal
00:47:262 (2) - add finish? Okay
01:01:247 (1) - 1 grid up + left? Okay
01:08:465 (1) - remove the finish? since there is no finish in the music. Yeah, but it sound well IMO
02:24:254 (1) - ^ ^
Nice maps, just do something with the claps :<
Thank you so much Samah !Samah wrote:
[General]
Disable the letterboxing. Disabled
Is there something to put in Source? As far as I know, this song is not from a anime or something else
To be ranked, your beatmap set needs to have at least one difficulty with <= 3 stars. If you reduce Normal's OD by 1, it should drop it to just under 3. Don't always rely on this as a cheap way to reduce star rating though. Okay lol
[Normal]
04:06:209 - Unnecessary timing point. I think you got the volumes off by 5% compared to the same section for Hard.
00:17:036 (2) - One right. Fixed
00:36:209 (5,1) - Having a separate combo here looks strange, even though it fits the music. They are not separate anymore now, I guess it still fits the music
00:42:525 (4,1) - ^ Fixed
01:20:194 (3) - Whistle.
01:20:645 (4) - Remove whistle.
01:21:096 (5) - Whistle.
01:21:547 (1) - Whistle at the end.
01:22:450 (2) - Remove whistle from the start, add whistle at the end.
01:25:157 (2) - Remove whistle from the end.
01:26:510 (3) - Whistle.
01:37:337 (4) - Whistle. Every HS changes until here has been fixed
02:45:006 (6) - One right. Okay
02:48:615 (1,2,3,1) - You might be able to shuffle this around a bit so that the (3) lines up with the slider nicely. I guess it's okay now
03:03:051 (1) - Whistle. Okay
03:42:299 (2) - Remove whistle from end, add whistle to repeat. Okay
03:43:653 (3) - Whistle. Okay
03:49:517 (5) - Whistle. Okay
03:59:217 (3) - Remove whistle from end. Okay
04:00:119 (4) - Add whistle or finish. A finish sounds better for me
[Hard]
00:37:111 (2,3) - One right, for symmetry with (7). I guess you mean 1 grid right xD
00:56:961 (6) - Whistle at the end. Okay
01:22:450 (6) - One left, for symmetry with the next slider (1). Fixed
01:42:074 (2) - Remove whistle from end. Nope, sounds nice for me
01:42:976 (3) - Whistle. Nope~
01:46:811 (5) - Delete. Fixed
02:26:510 (3) - Finish at the start might be unnecessary. Indeed, fixed
02:31:021 (1) - Whistle. Oh, I forgot it here xD Thanks !
02:35:532 (1) - This looks icky starting a combo here. Seems ok for me
02:37:337 (1) - ^ ^
03:00:796 (3) - Whistle at the end. Okay
03:01:472 (4) - Remove whistle from the start, add whistle to the end. Okay
03:02:149 (5) - Delete. Okay
03:02:375 (6) - Remove whistle, add finish. Okay
03:18:841 (3) - Whistle? Why not
03:39:593 (2) - One right, for symmetry with the next slider (1).
03:56:735 (1,2,3,4) - You might be able to make this quadrilateral look a little more regular. At the moment it looks kinda squished at the top. Looks better now
04:03:728 (4,1,4) - I can see you've disabled grid to place the first (4) here, then flipped it to make (1). You need to also make the second (4) line up. Copy (1) and flip it again. Fixed
Great song, and really solid maps. Get it ranked!
Thank you Colin Hou for your mod !Colin Hou wrote:
[General]:lol ok
- 04:09:480 (T) - unused section in both diffs. Deleted
- snap the sections for KIAI Resnapped
- add tags: _LRJ_, and it should be 'kz' not 'Kz' (nazi :3)
[Hard]:Okay
- 00:23:803 (6) - new combo Okay
- 00:31:021 (5) - ^ Okay
- 02:09:818 (T) - add note?
star~ Thanks !
and don't forget to edit this thread's title Sure xD
Thanks OzzyOzrock for your star !OzzyOzrock wrote:
[Normal]
Good
Copy-paste? Yeah, copy-paste
[Hard]
Same as above Same as above
star~
Everything else has been fixed, thank you !James2250 wrote:
-I think the breaks near the end are slightly overdoing it but up to you I won't change them, they're fine like that IMO
Normal:
-Might want to do HP -1 as this is the easiest difficulty
00:44:104 (3,4,5) - no whistles here to follow your pattern?
01:42:976 (4,1) - stack these?
Hard:
02:17:487 (3) - I would move this pattern around slightly just so the repeat is always clearly visible
Everything else looks good
Fuuu-Colin Hou wrote:
congratz~
you forgot the kudosu for James2250