lovhin456 wrote:
Lunet;
- I don't really like your hitsound placing, it sounds random
- To all the green timing sections that have 100% volume, lower them to 90% or 80%, because some claps and finishes sound too loud fixed
- 00:06:936 >> Remove whistle, add finish fixed
- 00:08:001 >> Remove the repeat and extend to the white tick ?
- 00:42:439 >> The repeat is covered with (2)s hitburts a little, I don't know if it is alright fixed
- 01:03:031 >> Too soon after the spinner, shorten the spinner so it ends at the previous white tick fixed
- 01:03:741 >> New combo and finish at start fixed
- 01:05:161 >> New combo fixed
- 01:52:025 >> Too soon after a spinner fixed
- 02:05:516 (6~1) >> Spacing, a jump isn't a nice idea bit changed
- 02:48:119 >> Remove a repeat and extend to the white tick ?
- 03:05:161 >> Too soon after a spinner fixed
- 03:07:646 (1,2,3) >> Spacing fixed
- 03:16:522 >> Too soon after a spinner fixed
- 03:27:883 >> ^ fixed
- 03:36:403 (3,4) >> I think these are unnecessary, delete them ?
- 03:37:113 >> Move to the previous tick ?
Thank you for modding~IceBeam wrote:
[Lunet]
Why soft hitsounds? They don't fit this song at all. changed to Normal hitsounds
Hitsounds are way random..
00:29:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Absolutely nothing here,and then 00:36:403 (4,5,6) - 3 claps in a row all of a sudden.
I think it'd be better if you use them to keep/create some rhytm.bit changed~
So now I can't really mod hitsounds,cause everything looks wrong to me,sorry.
01:42:084 (5,6,7,8) - It's kinda out of rhytm and lyrics. Try this:
1)Move 01:42:439 (6) - to 01:42:261.
2) Then add a note at 01:42:616.
3) Then remove both 01:42:794 (7,8)
4) Finally add 2 notes at 01:42:971 and 01:43:149. not kinda out of rhythm,I think.
02:00:545 (4) - Repeat should be at 02:01:256. bit changed~
02:05:871 (1) - Huh,jump? Fix distance please.Fixed
02:17:764 (x) - This break is over 20 seconds. I'm not sure if it's rankable.ok~ =~=
02:50:250 (6) - Move to 02:50:086? ?

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