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Aoi Yuuki - Mata Ashita

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Sandpig
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年6月16日 at 13:04:59

Artist: Aoi Yuuki
Title: Mata Ashita
Source: Puella Magi Madoka Magica
Tags: See You Tomorrow Character Song Mahou Shoujo SiRiRu bakabaka KanaRin
BPM: 125
Filesize: 7471kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. BK's Normal (4.16 stars, 341 notes)
  2. Easy (2.15 stars, 216 notes)
  3. Hard (4.9 stars, 508 notes)
  4. Kana's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1045 notes)
  5. S i R i R u's Insane (4.93 stars, 565 notes)
Download: Aoi Yuuki - Mata Ashita
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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the character song of Madoka \:D/

Easy - by me
Normal - by bakabaka
Hard - by me
Insane - by S i R i R u
Taiko - by KanaRin

enjoy -w-
KanaRin
#1
bakabaka
#2 :P
Colin Hou
#3 <3

nice and flowing so far
Cyril Scarlet
:)

Download: RuRu.rar
SagisawaYomi
:) Madoka~~~
#5
KanaRin
[lllllllllllllllll-30%--------------]
Kotone
女神><
Selee
Title: Mata Ashita
Source: Puella Magi Madoka Magica
Tags: See You Tomorrow Character Song Mahou Shoujo

:)

Miu Matsuoka
Man you beat my speed ;w;
Topic Starter
Sandpig
updated

thx ruru for your nice diff :)
bakabaka
vivicat
☆ミ
KanaRin
真是要知道這麼難做Taiko diff 的歌
要在3次副歌想不同梗的難度阿 T.T
Anyway,最後都完成了 >w<
PS. Taiko BG我要Ruru的BG ,你懂做就幫我吧~

Taiko Oni Level 6 ~ 7.

Download: Aoi Yuuki - Mata Ashita (Sandpig) [Kana's Taiko Oni].osu
Boom-PA0
:) good!
Orgol
加油~
lovhin456
Hi! Here's my mod ~
EDIT; I forgot, you said we can mod4mod, so mod http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28643 please ? Thanks.

General;
- Try these colors >w<
Combo1 : 251,168,166
Combo2 : 253,108,137

Skin;
- Try this comboburst

Easy;
- Wow, so many inheriting timing sections !
- 01:26:735 >> I think you should extend this slider until 01:27:695 and add a note on the next white tick
- 02:55:775 >> I think the slider should start here
- 03:26:495 >> ^
- Really nice and relaxing easy

BK's Normal;
- AR +1 ?
- 00:58:655 >> Add a note ?
- 03:08:495 >> Add a finish ? Adjust the volume as you like
- 03:12:335 >> ^
- 03:33:456 >> Curve better ?

Hard;
- 02:05:135 >> New combo ?
- 03:41:135 >> ^

S i R i R u's Insane;
- Good

* Star ~ + 2kd stars ~
Topic Starter
Sandpig

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Here's my mod ~
EDIT; I forgot, you said we can mod4mod, so mod http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28643 please ? Thanks.

General;
- Try these colors >w<
Combo1 : 251,168,166
Combo2 : 253,108,137

nice xD

Skin;
- Try this comboburst
SPOILER
[attachment=0:7766d]comboburst.png[/attachment:7766d]

thx xD

Easy;
- Wow, so many inheriting timing sections ! :3
- 01:26:735 >> I think you should extend this slider until 01:27:695 and add a note on the next white tick ok
- 02:55:775 >> I think the slider should start here yeah but this will make this diff harder, so I choose to use 1/2
- 03:26:495 >> ^
- Really nice and relaxing easy thx ^^

BK's Normal;
- AR +1 ?
- 00:58:655 >> Add a note ?
- 03:08:495 >> Add a finish ? Adjust the volume as you like
- 03:12:335 >> ^
- 03:33:456 >> Curve better ?

Hard;
- 02:05:135 >> New combo ? ok
- 03:41:135 >> ^ ok

S i R i R u's Insane;
- Good

* Star ~ + 2kd stars ~

thx for mod and I'll mod yours asap xD
Peace_old_1
star~ ;)
bambool
star.
Regou
Star~~~ :)
ken710
期待 :)
Mei_coN
圆神V5,圆神永存~~~ :)
Suimya
;)
Haruhi_sama
I like this song,and this map.
:)
yongtw123
Hi hi~

[Easy]
01:31:535 (2,1) - spacing too far?
01:34:415 (1) - eh.. a blue tick note? why not land at 01:34:895?

[BK's Normal]
00:50:735 (1) - this play out okay to me but for a Normal diff I won't suggest so
01:26:735 (5) - whistle at end?
01:31:535 (1) - finish at end?
02:43:535 (1) - i don't think switching to normal hitsound set sounds good at repeat
03:29:615 (1) - curve this?

[Kana's Taiko Oni]
unable to mod taiko so skip~

[Hard]
I kinda feel the pattern can be...tidier.

00:50:975 (6) - uh...why not end slider at 00:51:215? Sounds way better IMO
01:05:135 (6,7,8) - this triplet...plays a bit awkward IMO
01:05:375 (7) - remove finish and add it 01:05:615 here?
01:06:335 (2) - add note?
01:07:055 (5) - end at 01:07:295?
01:07:775 (6) - just a rhythm suggestion:
01:15:695 (2) - i totally did not expect this to be a 1/16 beat (spacing)
01:19:535 (2) - ^

[S i R i R u's Insane]
00:59:855 (5,6) - maybe go with vocal instead?

==============

soothing song~
star!
Topic Starter
Sandpig

yongtw123 wrote:

Hi hi~

[Easy]
01:31:535 (2,1) - spacing too far?
01:34:415 (1) - eh.. a blue tick note? why not land at 01:34:895? remapped this part

[BK's Normal]
00:50:735 (1) - this play out okay to me but for a Normal diff I won't suggest so
01:26:735 (5) - whistle at end?
01:31:535 (1) - finish at end?
02:43:535 (1) - i don't think switching to normal hitsound set sounds good at repeat
03:29:615 (1) - curve this?

[Kana's Taiko Oni]
unable to mod taiko so skip~

[Hard]
I kinda feel the pattern can be...tidier. aimed to map a insane but I think it's a hard actually.

00:50:975 (6) - uh...why not end slider at 00:51:215? Sounds way better IMO ok
01:05:135 (6,7,8) - this triplet...plays a bit awkward IMO
01:05:375 (7) - remove finish and add it 01:05:615 here?
01:06:335 (2) - add note?
01:07:055 (5) - end at 01:07:295?
01:07:775 (6) - just a rhythm suggestion: [attachment=0:252bb]01.jpg[/attachment:252bb] remapped this part
01:15:695 (2) - i totally did not expect this to be a 1/16 beat (spacing) changed
01:19:535 (2) - ^ changed

[S i R i R u's Insane]
00:59:855 (5,6) - maybe go with vocal instead?

==============

soothing song~
star!

thx for mod :)
wmfchris
taiko mod

00:01:055 - k k d
[before 0:11 better not to put triplets since there's no drum sound?]
00:16:895 - kdd
00:38:015 - k k d D
01:35:135 - d
01:44:495 - k d k k d k
01:46:175 - d
01:49:535 - ^
01:50:015 - k d d k k d
01:53:855 - d
02:46:655 - d d K
03:53:135 - [1/2] kk dkdd

Rating: 8/10
Cyril Scarlet
kanpakyin
Nazi mod.

[General]
  1. 把countdown關掉...沒啥用
  2. 為甚麼只有ruru的diff沒kiai(Why there haven't kiai time in Bakaru's diff? o.o)
  3. 建議你還是加上一個slider靜音..因為這首歌本來就很祥和..然後在soft-normal hitsound(slider)轉換的時候會發出slider滑塊的聲音:<效果就沒那麼好..
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:935(3.4)-這裏不要跟vocal?考慮到這是一個easy,3/4 slider+1/2紅線note新手可能會比較confuse..尤其節奏感比較差的就更難抓準.
  2. 00:30:575(1.2.3.4)-在easy裏真的不建議把1/2疊起來...不過算了
  3. 01:05:615(x)-這個slider加上whistle?感覺比較好..
  4. 01:23:855(6.1)-嘗試把這個(6)加2個reverse?然後(1)-刪除.在01:25:295-加一個一拍的slider?
  5. 02:02:975(3)-我覺得這裏換normal很怪...
[BK's Normal]
  1. 做為一個Normal..這個diff的AR過份了..
  2. 00:57:935(1)-移長1/2排對上vocal要不在00:58:655加一個note也行..
  3. 01:09:455(1)-這裏是高潮部分得開始,只用一條slider輕輕帶過表示這不分精彩不能
  4. 01:16:655(5)-這裏你漏了個Normal hitsound?
  5. 01:27:455(5)-高音位置,加個whistle?
  6. 01:30:935(2)-這裏是3/4我知道..但我也聽出這裏違和了,要是我..我寧願用1/2 or 1/1輕輕帶過算.
  7. 02:43:535(1)-藍線normal hitsound自重..表示違和情度無法形容..
  8. 02:47:615(4)-考慮在這裏開始Normal hitsound?
  9. 03:03:215(x)-從音樂以及notes密度來看..這裏怎樣都不適合放spinner,還是把這part給map掉..
  10. 03:43:055(1-5)-這個5角形歪了..請自行調整.
  11. 03:54:575(3)-Whistle?
在個人感覺上...這個diff的hitsound其實可以做得更好...而且在排版上slider弧度,花樣等都可以再做得好一點..但總體來說還是不錯的= ="

[BakaRin's Taiko]
  1. 把SV調到1.4 ,最多1.5 (1.6基本沒Taiko mapper會調而且打起來notes得密度也會怪怪)
  2. 把音量統一!然後全部調到soft-55%~65% 這剛剛好
  3. 00:09:935(39-42)-kd kd明顯和音樂不合..還是用kd dk把..
  4. 00:52:175(230-239)-pattern suggestion:dk kd kkd
  5. 01:04:535(292)-Remove this note.
  6. 01:42:095(459)-Big D here?
  7. 02:01:295(524-528)-這裏不適合加5連...把它變成一個1/2和一個3連..
  8. 02:39:935(707-709)-I prefer using kkk here.
  9. 03:20:015(~)-請檢查這部分kiai裏面的big notes.頻密次數達到 OooOooOoo 雖然也不是說不可以,但和整體難度偏離..這部分達oni7..其餘部分大約是oni6而且太多big notes也不好聽..
  10. 03:35:225(kiai)-1s Re-kiai在Taiko diff裏是不被允許的
  11. 03:44:015(1003)-Change to d.
  12. 03:44:975(1009-1012)-2-2 plet pattern不適合..可以嘗試1/2 orx xx的節奏效果.
  13. Ok.Then my rating here:(For reference only)
    -Pattern:4/5
    -Rhythm:4.5/5
    -Particular problems:-1
    Totally:7.5/10
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:415(x)-在這裏加個note?
  2. 00:18:935(x)-感覺在這裡加個note會好一點..
  3. 01:07:775(1)-這裏感覺欠缺了一個whistle.
  4. 01:18:095(2)-話說這裏spacing是不是由點問題?打起來怪怪的..
  5. 01:24:815(1)-如果你是想做4角跳的話這裏就要往上移一點...正方形歪掉了..
  6. 01:40:415(x)-Spinner加whistle?
  7. 03:04:175(1)-Remove New combo..沒有new combo的必要..(而且後面的jump不會很突然)
這不是你的mapping style阿 D:...感覺排版有點亂...介於你我的美感可能不同..所以我就不mod排版了(除非真的有甚麼接受不了.但這裏沒有 xD

[BakaRu's Insane]
  1. IMO..AR7 is more appropriate
  2. 01:15:215(4)-Remove whistle from this whole slider..seem a bit noisy.
  3. 01:43:755(4)-Increase 10~20% volume then whistle this note.
  4. 02:40:655-I'm strongly not suggest you reduce spacing suddenly and it is not fit the music too much,Player may feel confuse here.
  5. 03:20:015(1-8)-This jump pattern is really awkward!I don't know what you think about it..but I think you better to change an another pattern.
= =mod好了...好長阿..
Shirakawa Kotori
!圆神!
bakabaka
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