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Enrique Iglesias - Dimelo

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Gonzvlo
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Gonzvlo
General
  1. Usa los mismos colores para todas las diff, Los colores de Easy parecen ser los mejores por que se ven bien con los Skin Elements.
  2. "Star2" es muy grande, debería ser 52x50
  3. Agregar los Sliderb0,1... del skin default no son necesarios, sugiero que los elimines.
  4. Es necesario agregar "approachcircle"
Normal
  1. 00:16:753 (2) - Muevelo 2 grids a la derecha, para que el spacing sea el correcto. No olvides mover las siguientes notas también.
  2. 00:20:406 (6,7) - Unstack, Los stacks son muy difíciles para los principiantes.
  3. 00:23:536 (1) - Muevelo un poco para que no este en el mismo lugar que el borde del ultimo slider.
  4. 00:23:536 (1,2) - La misma sugerencia de los stacks.
  5. 00:25:101 (4,5) - El spacing no es el mismo es un poco mas amplio, reducelo 1/2 grids.
  6. 00:27:188 (7) - Probablemente muchos repeats para una dificultad como esta, Reduce a solo 2 repeats y agrega 2 circulos ó 1 slider.
  7. 00:41:536 (2,3) - Reduce el spacing un poco usando distance snap (Recuerda 0.8x)
  8. 00:44:927 (6) - Uh este está muy lejos reduce el spacing.
  9. 00:46:493 (8) - ^
  10. 00:47:797 (1,2,3,4) - Aunque los jumps son pequeños, las notas están posicionadas en 1/2 así que sugeriría que uses el spacing normal.
  11. 00:50:145 (2,3) - Sugiero eliminar este stack.
  12. 00:56:145 (4,5) - ^
  13. 01:00:580 (3) - Muchos repeats? Sugiero usar solo 2 y agregar circulos ó un slider.
  14. 01:20:927 (2) - Esto está muy lejos, acercalo más a la otra nota.
  15. 01:38:406 (3) - ^
  16. 01:40:232 (2) - Sugiero quitar el stack, especialmente por el slider anterior.
  17. 01:59:797 (1) - Sería bueno separa este slider y luego seguir con la secuencia (Por el New Combo)
  18. 45,805 - Este timing point no está bien posicionado por unos cuantos ms, posiciónalo justo en la linea blanca.
  19. Lo mismo pasa con los otros timing points, asegurate que están bien posicionados (Los que inician o terminan un Kiai)
  20. Asegurate que todo en la dificultad está correctamente espaciado con 0.8x, vi por ahí algunos errores menores que no los señalé pero están ahí , asi que si quieres los arreglas.

Hard
  1. Haz un re-snap a todas las notas ya que no están correctamente... "Snaped"
  2. 00:23:536 (1) - Remueve el New combo.
  3. 00:37:887 (1,2,3) - Distancialos un poco de acuerdo con distance snap.
  4. 00:53:017 (9,1) - Este stack se ve mal , recomiendo quitarlo.
  5. 01:37:884 (1) - Quita el New Combo.
  6. 02:08:145 (6) - New Combo.
  7. 02:10:232 (1) - Remueve el New Combo.
  8. 02:37:101 - Kiai time debería terminar aquí
  9. 45,805 - Este timing point no está bien posicionado por unos cuantos ms, posiciónalo justo en la linea blanca.
  10. Lo mismo pasa con los otros timing points, asegurate que están bien posicionados (Los que inician o terminan un Kiai)
Darck360's Insane
  1. 00:19:232 (2) - Muevelo a: 00:19:362, suena mejor.
  2. 00:50:666 (8,1) - Swap los New Combo.
  3. 01:02:927 (10) - Sería genial si bajaras el volumen poco a poco para este slider.
  4. 01:09:449 (4) - New Combo para mantener la consistencia.
  5. 02:14:666 (5) - ^
  6. 02:37:101 - Kiai time debería terminar aquí.
  7. 45,805 - Este timing point no está bien posicionado por unos cuantos ms, posiciónalo justo en la linea blanca.
  8. Lo mismo pasa con los otros timing points, asegurate que están bien posicionados (Los que inician o terminan un Kiai)
Cool (:
Anto
401 posts
Joined February 2010
Anto
vivere <3333 :)
Cheedar
95 posts
Joined December 2008
Cheedar
nice map.
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere
All fixed~

Edit: Updated (=
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
hello~



Normal

Slider Tick Rate ~ 2

00:20:927 (7,1) - spacing

01:00:580 (3) - remove a single return. spinner here and start 01:03:188 (1) and finish here 01:05:275

01:09:971 (5) - new combo

01:19:362 (3,1) - spasing

01:53:275 (1,2,3,4) - ^

02:28:(753) (1) - finish

02:30:319 (5,1) - spasing

02:37:101 - finish

Hard

02:00:840 (1) - move a 02:01:623 (1). 02:00:840 ~ 02:01:362 - slider mb?

02:37:101 - finish kiai time

[Insane]

00:51:319 (3) - move a 00:51:449 (3). 00:51:319 (2) - circle

Cool song ~

S T A R ~
Last edited by ZLOdeuka- , edited 1 time in total.
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere
SPOILER

ZLOdeuka wrote:

hello~

[General]

Normal

Slider Tick Rate ~ 2

00:20:927 (7,1) - spacing

01:00:580 (3) - remove a single return. spinner here and start 01:03:188 (1) and finish here 01:05:275

01:09:971 (5) - new combo

01:19:362 (3,1) - spasing

01:53:275 (1,2,3,4) - ^

02:28:(753) (1) - finish

02:30:319 (5,1) - spasing

02:37:101 - finish

Hard

02:00:840 (1) - move a 02:01:623 (1). 02:00:840 ~ 02:01:362 - slider mb?

02:37:101 - finish kiai time

[Insane]

00:51:319 (3) - move a 00:51:449 (3). 00:51:319 (2) - circle

Cool song ~

S T A R ~

Thanks ♥!

Edit: Updated ^^
Sallad4ever
2,942 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Hi vivere

[General]
- in the song folder I saw the slideb set, but it's not complete. You need to add sliderb0 and sliderb1 so it'll show up. Or you can delete all the sliderb png, then full submit it
- add an approach circle, take it from the template skin if you want
- 1.8 mb for the bg? wow...
- the hitsound on both Normal and Hard is very few, try adding a 1/1 clap pattern like in darck's diff. That way your hitsound will be a lot better
- what is the viv in the tag means?

[Normal]
Make the kiai in this diff the same with Hard diff
00:15:188 (1) - shorten this slider 1/2 beat
00:27:188 (7) - ^
00:28:753 (8) - add finish at the end of the slider?
00:41:797 (3) - I don't see how this timing section is used, remove it if it's not used
00:56:666 (5) - unstack this?
01:20:145 (1) - spacing is too far, if this is a jump it's not a very good one
01:40:232 (2) - unstack this?
01:51:449 (2) - ^ or stack it perfectly under 01:48:058 (1)
02:08:927 (2) - fix the spacing please
02:30:840 (1) - this sounds better if you move it back 1/2 beat
02:31:884 (x) - add a note here if you do ^
I don't like the spacing inconsistencies here, try to use only 1 spacing, 1x distance snap is a good one

[Hard]
HP drain + 2 please
01:35:014 (2) - anti jump?
01:54:449 (4,5) - not a good stack, might as well stack them all or spread them
02:18:319 (10) - add finish?
02:29:014 (4,5,6,7) - hmm what are this notes following to? mapping the vocal is better here imo
in the harder diff, the spacing could be more variant, but try not to overuse them. Especially for the normal spacing between notes

[darck's Insane]
This is play more like a hard then an insane
00:52:493 (4) - remove this and lengthen 00:51:449 (3) by 1/4 beat
01:46:232 (10) - the whistle sounds weird imo, remove it?
Plays very nice, but the pattern are to flat. Next time try to make a more interesting pattern (symmetry, cutting slider, etc)

Good luck with your map ;)
~star
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere
SPOILER

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi vivere

[General]
- in the song folder I saw the slideb set, but it's not complete. You need to add sliderb0 and sliderb1 so it'll show up. Or you can delete all the sliderb png, then full submit it
- add an approach circle, take it from the template skin if you want
- 1.8 mb for the bg? wow...
- the hitsound on both Normal and Hard is very few, try adding a 1/1 clap pattern like in darck's diff. That way your hitsound will be a lot better
- what is the viv in the tag means?

[Normal]
Make the kiai in this diff the same with Hard diff
00:15:188 (1) - shorten this slider 1/2 beat
00:27:188 (7) - ^
00:28:753 (8) - add finish at the end of the slider?
00:41:797 (3) - I don't see how this timing section is used, remove it if it's not used
00:56:666 (5) - unstack this?
01:20:145 (1) - spacing is too far, if this is a jump it's not a very good one
01:40:232 (2) - unstack this?
01:51:449 (2) - ^ or stack it perfectly under 01:48:058 (1)
02:08:927 (2) - fix the spacing please
02:30:840 (1) - this sounds better if you move it back 1/2 beat
02:31:884 (x) - add a note here if you do ^
I don't like the spacing inconsistencies here, try to use only 1 spacing, 1x distance snap is a good one

[Hard]
HP drain + 2 please
01:35:014 (2) - anti jump?
01:54:449 (4,5) - not a good stack, might as well stack them all or spread them
02:18:319 (10) - add finish?
02:29:014 (4,5,6,7) - hmm what are this notes following to? mapping the vocal is better here imo
in the harder diff, the spacing could be more variant, but try not to overuse them. Especially for the normal spacing between notes

[darck's Insane]
This is play more like a hard then an insane
00:52:493 (4) - remove this and lengthen 00:51:449 (3) by 1/4 beat
01:46:232 (10) - the whistle sounds weird imo, remove it?
Plays very nice, but the pattern are to flat. Next time try to make a more interesting pattern (symmetry, cutting slider, etc)

Good luck with your map ;)
~star

Thanks :>

PS: Updated
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Hola

Tags:viv?

Normal
02:16:232(3) - remove whistle on the slider(not 02:16:232 and 02;18:319)

suggestions
00:48:319(3) - remove clap
00:56:145(4) - remove finish at the end of slider and add a whistle hitsound in the end
01:00:580(3) - add clap at the 2nd repeating arrow(01:01:623)
01:38:406(3) - remove finish
01:38:666(4) - add finish

Hard
3rd kiai time start at 01:05:275

00:33:917(6) - make symetric


suggestions
00:56:666(6) - remove clap
01:04:493(2) - finish at the end of the slider
01:06:319(2) - clap
01:06:580(3) - remove clap
01:38:406(7) - remove clap
01:07:362(4) - clap

darck360's Insane

suggestions
00:45:188(9) - remove clap at the beginning
00:51:449(3) - make symetric
00:56:406(1) - remove finish and add clap

star~
Colin Hou
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4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. actually, when i saw 'by: Vivere' on the BG, i thought you were the singer
  2. and even in darck360's diff, there is still by: Vivere lol
[darck360]:
  1. use AR7, 8 is not the best choice and, this is a Hard diff +_+
[Hard]:
  1. 00:55:623 (4,5,6,7) - strange stack, set stack leniency +2 in this diff
star~
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere

H-boy wrote:

Hola

Tags:viv?

Normal
02:16:232(3) - remove whistle on the slider(not 02:16:232 and 02;18:319) 02:17:275 :P

suggestions
00:48:319(3) - remove clap ok
00:56:145(4) - remove finish at the end of slider and add a whistle hitsound in the end mmm... ok
01:00:580(3) - add clap at the 2nd repeating arrow(01:01:623) ^
01:38:406(3) - remove finish ^
01:38:666(4) - add finish ^

Hard
3rd kiai time start at 01:05:275 ~

00:33:917(6) - make symetric No
[attachment=0:3a5c6]3.png[/attachment:3a5c6]

suggestions
00:56:666(6) - remove clap ok
01:04:493(2) - finish at the end of the slider ^
01:06:319(2) - clap ^
01:06:580(3) - remove clap ^
01:38:406(7) - remove clap ^
01:07:362(4) - clap ^

darck360's Insane

suggestions
00:45:188(9) - remove clap at the beginning ok
00:51:449(3) - make symetric No :/
00:56:406(1) - remove finish and add clap ^

star~
Thanks for you mod ^^

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
actually, when i saw 'by: Vivere' on the BG, i thought you were the singer lol
and even in darck360's diff, there is still by: Vivere lol Changed xD

[darck360]:
use AR7, 8 is not the best choice and, this is a Hard diff +_+

[Hard]:
00:55:623 (4,5,6,7) - strange stack, set stack leniency +2 in this diff

star~
Ty ^^


Updated!
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere
need more mods :<
Xeno_old
120 posts
Joined June 2009
Xeno_old
Beat placement is good, for all the difficulties, but I personally feel, this map-set can be made a LOT better, if you focus a little more on your sliders.

[Normal]
00:44:927 (6,7) - Minor Spacing
00:56:666 (5,1) - ^
01:19:362 (3,1) - Critical Spacing!
01:55:884 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Shouldn't be in a normal, in my opinion =p

[Hard]
00:33:971 (6) - Ugly.
00:55:623 (4,5,6,7) - Combo Colors + Background, makes this hard to read.
01:13:884 (1) - My heart cries when I see sliders like this :<
01:35:014 (2) - ^

[darck360's Insane]

00:52:493 (4) - doesn't follow music, and makes no sense. recommend you delete it.

Apart from that, your sliders also make go :<
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere

Xeno32 wrote:

Beat placement is good, for all the difficulties, but I personally feel, this map-set can be made a LOT better, if you focus a little more on your sliders.

[Normal]
00:44:927 (6,7) - Minor Spacing
00:56:666 (5,1) - ^
01:19:362 (3,1) - Critical Spacing!
01:55:884 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Shouldn't be in a normal, in my opinion =p

[Hard]
00:33:971 (6) - Ugly. ?
00:55:623 (4,5,6,7) - Combo Colors + Background, makes this hard to read. No D:
01:13:884 (1) - My heart cries when I see sliders like this :< wth? I like this
01:35:014 (2) - ^ ^

[darck360's Insane]

00:52:493 (4) - doesn't follow music, and makes no sense. recommend you delete it. Ok :>

Apart from that, your sliders also make go :< :/


Ty :>

PS: Updated
Slowmotion_old
112 posts
Joined May 2010
Slowmotion_old
Normal
00:20:927 (7) - this sliders it's ugly a bit .. change it
00:30:319 (1) - why this spin here?
00:38:145 (1) - ^
00:47:797 (1,2,4) - very finishes isn't good IMO
01:09:971 (1,2,3) - i don't like of their sliders, it's so ugly IMO
01:40:753 (1) - why this spinner?
01:45:449 (1) - ^
01:48:058 (1) - IMO its a bad slider =/

Hard
00:53:275 (1,2,3,4) - be creative :D
01:40:753 (2,4,6) - ^
01:55:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:12:319 (1,2,3,4) - ^ O.o

darck360's Insane
it's perfect ;)

i like the song :D good look vivere


artpiggo
315 posts
Joined December 2009
artpiggo
Normal

00:20:927 (7) - not good one
00 47 792 1,2,3,4 distance snap
01 32 406 ^
01 54 840 flip horizon and rotate clockwise 90
01 57 449 should use 1,2 template
02 32 406 should parallel to slider 1

Hard

I think kiai time should same in all diff
distance snap in many point isn't fixed I think it's around 1.3-1.2x fixed it.
00 18 580 flip horizon maybe
00 41 536 should straight to previous one
00 59 014 should parallel to 1,2,3
01 12 319 maybe reverse selection it
01 17 014 not beautiful one and should symmetry to 5
01 21 188 should be new combo and rotate it
02 05 797 should be equal to slider 1
02 10 753 should be same as 1,2,3 in reverse one

Insane is very smooth map ! I only miss at 00 57 840 ! Can you get rid of it? It'll be better I think : D

ah! one more thing, the brown combo color is too confuse , it's the same as background . Can you fix it, please? :(

Star !
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez

vivere wrote:

BAT/MAT Request please. ^^
Guess I can't do much now >.<

what i can do is give a star :D
good luck :3
Hyguys
1,272 posts
Joined May 2010
Hyguys
kudos stared.
Last edited by Hyguys , edited 1 time in total.
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere

Weezy wrote:

vivere wrote:

BAT/MAT Request please. ^^
Guess I can't do much now >.<

what i can do is give a star :D
good luck :3

Hyguys wrote:

stared
Thanks guys <333!
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere

Slowmotion wrote:

Normal
00:20:927 (7) - this sliders it's ugly a bit .. change it
00:30:319 (1) - why this spin here?
00:38:145 (1) - ^
00:47:797 (1,2,4) - very finishes isn't good IMO
01:09:971 (1,2,3) - i don't like of their sliders, it's so ugly IMO
01:40:753 (1) - why this spinner?
01:45:449 (1) - ^
01:48:058 (1) - IMO its a bad slider =/

Hard
00:53:275 (1,2,3,4) - be creative :D
01:40:753 (2,4,6) - ^
01:55:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:12:319 (1,2,3,4) - ^ O.o

darck360's Insane
it's perfect ;)

i like the song :D good look vivere

artpiggo wrote:

Normal

00:20:927 (7) - not good one
00 47 792 1,2,3,4 distance snap
01 32 406 ^
01 54 840 flip horizon and rotate clockwise 90
01 57 449 should use 1,2 template
02 32 406 should parallel to slider 1

Hard

I think kiai time should same in all diff
distance snap in many point isn't fixed I think it's around 1.3-1.2x fixed it.
00 18 580 flip horizon maybe
00 41 536 should straight to previous one
00 59 014 should parallel to 1,2,3
01 12 319 maybe reverse selection it
01 17 014 not beautiful one and should symmetry to 5
01 21 188 should be new combo and rotate it
02 05 797 should be equal to slider 1
02 10 753 should be same as 1,2,3 in reverse one

Insane is very smooth map ! I only miss at 00 57 840 ! Can you get rid of it? It'll be better I think : D

ah! one more thing, the brown combo color is too confuse , it's the same as background . Can you fix it, please? :(

Star !
fixed, Thanks

PS: too, sliders changed in Normal and Hard :>

PS 2: Updated!
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
General-
· El Kiai Time está hecho para darle énfasis a los coros en la canción. Los coros se mantienen iguales durante todas las dificultades, así que te recomiendo uses los mismos Kiai Time en todas las diff, incluso la de darck.
· Los colores se confunden con el BG, en especial el café más oscuro. Utiliza un color que se distinga claramente del fondo
· Linda skin

Normal-
La verdad siento que el spacing está algo raro, la diferencia entre 1/2 y 1/1 sigue siendo muy poca, con cosas como esta.
00:21:710 (1,2,3) - Preocupado por que el spacing es similar a 1/1 de distancia. Trata de hacer que se vea así
01:19:362 (3,1) - Spacing. Acerca (1) a (3)

Hard-
00:52:232 (6,7) - Spacing. Este es bastante ovbio .-.
Wow, exclenete trabajo mejorando los sliders, estas son las cosas que me hacen sentir orgulloso, mejoras rápidas :D! ¿Ves que si puedes hacer sliders agradables a la vista?

darck's-
Muy bien! Me sorprende lo que has mejorado con hitsounds!

Los mapas estan bien, re-revisa tu spacing una ultima vez y avisame cuando hayas hecho los mods.
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere

Krisom wrote:

General-
· El Kiai Time está hecho para darle énfasis a los coros en la canción. Los coros se mantienen iguales durante todas las dificultades, así que te recomiendo uses los mismos Kiai Time en todas las diff, incluso la de darck. Hecho.
· Los colores se confunden con el BG, en especial el café más oscuro. Utiliza un color que se distinga claramente del fondo Listo.
· Linda skin Gracias :$

Normal-
La verdad siento que el spacing está algo raro, la diferencia entre 1/2 y 1/1 sigue siendo muy poca, con cosas como esta.
00:21:710 (1,2,3) - Preocupado por que el spacing es similar a 1/1 de distancia. Trata de hacer que se vea así
01:19:362 (3,1) - Spacing. Acerca (1) a (3)

Hard-
00:52:232 (6,7) - Spacing. Este es bastante ovbio .-. No entiendo >.<!!, pero ya esta "corregido" y creo que esta bien lol
Wow, exclenete trabajo mejorando los sliders, estas son las cosas que me hacen sentir orgulloso, mejoras rápidas :D! ¿Ves que si puedes hacer sliders agradables a la vista? Para que me vas a hacer poner colorado <.<

darck's-
Muy bien! Me sorprende lo que has mejorado con hitsounds!

Los mapas estan bien, re-revisa tu spacing una ultima vez y avisame cuando hayas hecho los mods.
Hyguys
1,272 posts
Joined May 2010
Hyguys
Mod for you <33333
Normal
00:21:971 Whistle
00:22:493 ^
00:23:014 ^^
00:23:536 Spacing Ftw
00:43:882 New combo
01:02:666 (omfg 666) Clap
01:20:145 Spacing :VVVVVV
01:40:232 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51830 *trollface*
02:33:188 (all combo) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51831 *trollface* , if u didn't understand just pm me

Hard
00:49:623 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51832 :V

Only this. btw
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere

Hyguys wrote:

Mod for you <33333
Normal
00:21:971 Whistle
00:22:493 ^
00:23:014 ^^
00:23:536 Spacing Ftw
00:43:882 New combo
01:02:666 (omfg 666) Clap
01:20:145 Spacing :VVVVVV
01:40:232 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51830 *trollface*
02:33:188 (all combo) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51831 *trollface* , if u didn't understand just pm me

Hard
00:49:623 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51832 :V

Only this. btw
Thx Bakentai :>
vivicat
618 posts
Joined February 2010
vivicat
☆ミ
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere

vivicat wrote:

☆ミ
vivi <3
Kenezz
osu! Alumni
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Joined September 2009
Kenezz
Kenezz's Star~
Wajuu! :3
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere

KenezzEdward wrote:

Kenezz's Star~
Wajuu! :3
:3
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
General
Add an Easy ? It will make the spread better. And you need an easier diff.
It would be better if Normal and Hard didn't have the same slider speed... oh well
The darkest grey blends with the background.

Normal
The spacing is this diff is very inconsistent. It seems to change with every new combo. For a Normal, it's too hard to play, especially for the easiest diff of the mapset.
This is way too hard to be the easiest diff of the mapset (it's even too hard for a regular Normal).
00:20:927 (7,1) - Spacing issue: they are space the same way as (6,7) but the time gap is 1/2 and not 1/1. It makes that pattern confusing, not to mention the 1/4 kick sliders that feel really out of place in a Normal.
(nazi) 00:46:493 (9) - one grid right so the spacing is consistent
00:54:580 (1,2) - The spacing is the same as it was in the previous combo, but the time difference is 1/2 and not 1/1. Again, it makes the pattern very confusing.
00:56:666 (5) - Is slightly too close to (4).
01:09:971 (1,2,3) - This kind of slider is too confusing imo for the easiest diff of the mapset.
01:17:797 (2,3) - Ugly overlap.
01:19:362 (3,1) - Spacing: the distance is almost the same as between (2) and (1) and the time gap is not the same.
01:20:145 (1,2) - Same. Not to mention the spacing is not consistent within the combo. The spacing between two consecutive notes is never the same in this combo.
01:32:406 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing: the distance is not the same while the time difference is.
01:39:188 (1) - Confusing kick slider. You should remove one repeat and replace it with a circle.
01:42:840 (1) - I'm not sure having a note so soon after the spinner in the center if the screen is a good idea. You should place it either down so that the spacing is consistent with (2), either up.
02:04:232 (1) - Same. Here you can just flip the slider so that it starts closer to the bottom of the screen.
02:10:232 (1,2,3) - 1/4 kick sliders fell out of place in a Normal diff, especially the third one which has 6 repeats and is extremely confusing, regarding the previous patterns.
02:13:884 (4) - Feels out of place again.
02:28:493 (1) - Same.
02:35:014 (8) - The slow down here makes no sense. It actually is confusing because unexpected after such a long 1/2 stream.

Hard
Irregular spacing here again. I'm only pointing out the worst errors, but you should self-mod your map very thoroughly.
00:15:188 (1,2,3) - They are not spaced evenly while the time gap is the same.
00:21:449 (5,1,2) - Same.
00:58:493 (2,3,4) - Same.
01:13:884 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This part lacked hitsounds :(
02:29:014 (4,5,6,7,8) - This stream doesn't make much sense and is actually confusing to play because of the spacing used.

darck360's Insane
00:51:449 (3,4) - Weird rhythm... You should delete (4) and make (3) end when it was.
00:57:840 (1) - You should delete this note. Notes starting on blue ticks are confusing and hard to read, because the spacing you use doesn't make much difference between a 3/4 gap and a 1/1 gap.
01:20:666 (2) - This slider's repeat is hidden by hitbursts.
Antu Villegas
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Antu Villegas
Hitcircleoverlay:

Elegi :B

1. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/60079

2. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/60082

Descarga :B

1.

2.
SilentAssasint
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SilentAssasint
Star ^^
vivere
752 posts
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Topic Starter
vivere

SilentAssasint wrote:

Star ^^
Para la proxima, no te retractes de lo que digas <3. Ah... y gracias por la star ^^
Antu Villegas
242 posts
Joined December 2009
Antu Villegas

vivere wrote:

SilentAssasint wrote:

Star ^^
Para la proxima, no te retractes de lo que digas <3. Ah... y gracias por la star ^^
Yo lo "convencí" de que lo arreglara -.-"
vivere
752 posts
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Topic Starter
vivere

Antu Villegas wrote:

Yo lo "convencí" de que lo arreglara -.-"
XDDD
VelperK
osu!catch Champion
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VelperK
QUE ALGUIEN RANKEE ESTO DE UNA VEZ!! u.u
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445
I think you should make the circles not grayscale, add some color into it!
The background is a bit orange/yellow, you could add an orange color to the custom colors.

Normal
Tickrate 1
There are many spacing problems in this difficulty, you should go through the map and fix the spacing.
Combos get a bit high for the easiest difficulty, you should add more new combos
00:54:580 - These kind of sudden spacing changes are not a good idea for the easiest difficulty.
01:09:971 (1,2,3) - These kind of sliders are very confusing for a Normal
01:39:188 - Unexpected amount of repeats
02:11:275 - Very unexpected amount of repeats
02:30:840 - This slider doesn't make sense.

Hard
The slider velocity seems too slow, it heavily contrasts with the spacing.
There are many spacing problems in this difficulty, you should go through the map and fix the spacing.

darck360's Insane
Tickrate 1
01:20:666 - The repeat is pretty hidden by the previous hitburst.
Odaril pointed this out already, why didn't you fix it?

It's an okay map, the spacing is what's really hurting it right now.
ManuxP
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ManuxP
FTW!! sta bien chvr! ojala sea rankeada pronto ke ya la perfeccione :twisted:
perepepepe
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perepepepe
Ta bueno el map
vivere
752 posts
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Topic Starter
vivere
:)
KRZY
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
4,850 posts
Joined May 2009
KRZY
Hello~

[Normal]
01:12:058 (7) - One repeat less, and...
01:14:145 (1) - ...instead of using a looong slider to cover a whole section, try mapping a bit more creatively :3
01:39:188 (1,2) - Considering this difficulty is a [Normal], the location of these notes may be difficult for players to follow right after the spinner. Might be better to move them to the center of the screen.
02:01:623 (4) - 1 grid left

[Hard]
00:23:536 (2) - Same issue I pointed out in [Normal]. This may work too, but it might be better if you tried to map more creatively, following either the vocals or the background instruments rather than using a long slider to cover a lot of time.
00:26:145 (4) - ^
00:44:406 (1) - ^
00:47:014 (3) - ^
00:49:362 (4,5,6) - Pretty hard to read, I know it's used widely but perhaps moving it away from the slider might work too~
01:13:884 (4) - Same as 00:23:536 (2)
01:32:406 (1) - ^

[darck360's Insane]
00:51:449 (3) - Move this slider one blue tick behind and add a note so that there are three notes before the slider begins instead of two. Remove 00:52:493 (4).


Could use some more beat-following, but as it is a vocal-dominant slow song, just flowing through the music with sliders might not be a bad idea either :3

Star!
vivere
752 posts
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Topic Starter
vivere

KRZY wrote:

Hello~

[Normal]
01:12:058 (7) - One repeat less, and...
01:14:145 (1) - ...instead of using a looong slider to cover a whole section, try mapping a bit more creatively :3 I can't be more creative :'<.
01:39:188 (1,2) - Considering this difficulty is a [Normal], the location of these notes may be difficult for players to follow right after the spinner. Might be better to move them to the center of the screen. Ok.
02:01:623 (4) - 1 grid left Done.

[Hard]
00:23:536 (2) - Same issue I pointed out in [Normal]. This may work too, but it might be better if you tried to map more creatively, following either the vocals or the background instruments rather than using a long slider to cover a lot of time. Changed.
00:26:145 (4) - ^ ^
00:44:406 (1) - ^ ^
00:47:014 (3) - ^ ^
00:49:362 (4,5,6) - Pretty hard to read, I know it's used widely but perhaps moving it away from the slider might work too~ already changed
01:13:884 (4) - Same as 00:23:536 (2) Changed.
01:32:406 (1) - ^ I like it :/

[darck360's Insane]
00:51:449 (3) - Move this slider one blue tick behind and add a note so that there are three notes before the slider begins instead of two. Remove 00:52:493 (4). Done.


Could use some more beat-following, but as it is a vocal-dominant slow song, just flowing through the music with sliders might not be a bad idea either :3

Star!
Thanks <3

Edit: Updated
PotsBreaker
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8-)
val0108
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val0108
hey 0/
[Normal]
00:48:580 (4) - remove finish
01:20:145 (1,2) - 1/8 slider~ so much http://puu.sh/1Uxv
02:11:275 (3) - they're may not understand the slider end.for example http://puu.sh/1UxU
02:19:623 (6) - add finsh last slider
02:37:623 - kiaitime end line here 02:37:232 -

[Hard]
00:25:884 (10) - new combo
00:35:275 (1) - hidden reverse
01:15:971 (10) - new combo
01:35:275 (3) - remove clap last slider
01:37:362 (4,6,7,8) - add clap ?
02:12:058 (13) - add finish
02:37:623 - same as Normal diff


[darck360's Insane]
OD 7
00:51:580 (4) - how about this?http://puu.sh/1UyI
01:20:666 (2) - hidden(?)slider reverse
02:11:797 (1) - same as others diff

star~
vivere
752 posts
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vivere

val0108 wrote:

hey 0/ Hi o/
[Normal]
00:48:580 (4) - remove finish
01:20:145 (1,2) - 1/8 slider~ so much http://puu.sh/1Uxv. Well, I don't uderstand you D: but ... If you want to say "that's hard". I'll tell you that these sliders are easy xD.
02:11:275 (3) - they're may not understand the slider end.for example http://puu.sh/1UxU Changed.
02:19:623 (6) - add finsh last slider Done.
02:37:623 - kiaitime end line here 02:37:232 - Nope, I like it

[Hard]
00:25:884 (10) - new combo Done.
00:35:275 (1) - hidden reverse Done?.
01:15:971 (10) - new combo Done.
01:35:275 (3) - remove clap last slider Ok.
01:37:362 (4,6,7,8) - add clap ? Oh that's good. Thanks.
02:12:058 (13) - add finish Done.
02:37:623 - same as Normal diff Nope, I like it


[darck360's Insane]
OD 7
00:51:580 (4) - how about this?http://puu.sh/1UyI what do you mean?
01:20:666 (2) - hidden(?)slider reverse Changed.
02:11:797 (1) - same as others diff No, I like it xd

star~
Thank you. And thanks for modding <3

Edit: Updated!
Saten
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Saten
Estrella~
vivere
752 posts
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vivere

Saten-san wrote:

Estrella~
Thank you ;3
Screenagers
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Screenagers
8-)
OzzyOzrock
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OzzyOzrock
[Normal]
01:09:971 (5,6,7) - Estas notas confundiran a muchos, pero creo que esta bien tenerlos...
01:20:145 (1,2,3,4) - Esto tambien, pero aun, esto es normal no facil...

Ehhhhh, esta bien. :3

[Hard]
01:55:884 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Arregla esto para que no sea tan confuso...

Mm, esta bien... :3

[Insane]
pro

estralalalala
gustjr1997
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8-) 8-)
vivere
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vivere

gustjr1997 wrote:

8-) 8-)

Screenagers wrote:

8-)
Thanks :3
Katsu_old_1
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Katsu_old_1
star =w= ♥
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
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Pereira006
hello~~ ♥

this just my suggestions !

[Normal]

01:57:971 (1) - New combo?

perfect diff :)

Hard

01:38:666 (1) - New combo? if you do this remove new combo at 01:38:927 (3)

lmfao perfect diff :)

Insane

I can´t find wrong sorry :(

lmfao aswome

STAR ! ho also don´t sayd neko because i give star xD
vivere
752 posts
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vivere

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Normal]
01:09:971 (5,6,7) - Estas notas confundiran a muchos, pero creo que esta bien tenerlos...
01:20:145 (1,2,3,4) - Esto tambien, pero aun, esto es normal no facil...

Ehhhhh, esta bien. :3

[Hard]
01:55:884 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Arregla esto para que no sea tan confuso... Esto esta hecho intencionalmente :>.

Mm, esta bien... :3

[Insane]
pro

estralalalala
Gracias por tu mod <3


Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~ ♥ Hi <3

this just my suggestions !

[Normal]

01:57:971 (1) - New combo? Ok =O

perfect diff :)

Hard

01:38:666 (1) - New combo? if you do this remove new combo at 01:38:927 (3) Done.

lmfao perfect diff :)

Insane

I can´t find wrong sorry :(

lmfao aswome

STAR ! ho also don´t sayd neko because i give star xD
ok hahah. Thank you for modding ^^/

Edit: Updated!
Antu Villegas
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Antu Villegas
Link de descarga (.rar): Puush

Preview

Imagen recortada :D

Edit:

Agregado Suavizado Gausiano 2,0 y iluminación y saturación aumentada...

Link de descarga (.rar): Puush

Preview
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vivere
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vivere

Antu Villegas wrote:

Link de descarga (.rar): Puush

Preview

Imagen recortada :D
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! THANKS <3
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Normal~
00:44:927 (7) - new combo

~Hard~
00:27:710 (9) - move the end of slider to the right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:04:884 (5) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:710 (7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)

~darck360's Insane~
00:15:449 (4) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:31:623 (8) - ^


+Star
vivere
752 posts
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Topic Starter
vivere

DJPop wrote:

~Normal~
00:44:927 (7) - new combo

~Hard~
00:27:710 (9) - move the end of slider to the right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:04:884 (5) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:710 (7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)

~darck360's Insane~
00:15:449 (4) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:31:623 (8) - ^


+Star
All fixed. Thank you :>

Edit: Updated!
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Neko_Ray
aaaa neko-sick mod~

Normal
Slider Tick Rate: 1. Por que? por esto: 01:13:623 para adelante

Hard
01:06:580 (3): Clap al principio?
01:08:406 (6): Clap
01:09:449 (1): Termina aquí 01:10:493 y agrégale clap en los dos lados
01:11:014 (2): Arráncale el clap
01:11:275 (3,4): Clap aquí
02:05:014 (2): Yo lo cambiaría por 3 circles

tenga la estrella !
Kenezz
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Kenezz
Kenezz's Bakaircmod~
Dimelo vivere!!
<3
vivere
752 posts
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vivere

Kenezz wrote:

Kenezz's Bakaircmod~
Dimelo vivere!!
<3
Thank you for your baka mod <3. Ilu ♥

Edit:

Neko_Ray wrote:

aaaa neko-sick mod~

Normal
Slider Tick Rate: 1. Por que? por esto: 01:13:623 para adelante Ok o.o.

Hard
01:06:580 (3): Clap al principio? Suena feo, No :P
01:08:406 (6): Clap ...Lo mismo, suena feo xD
01:09:449 (1): Termina aquí 01:10:493 y agrégale clap en los dos lados No ;_;
01:11:014 (2): Arráncale el clap Tampoco...
01:11:275 (3,4): Clap aquí Nop :P
02:05:014 (2): Yo lo cambiaría por 3 circles Cambiado~

tenga la estrella !
1- No sirves para hacer htisound mod :>
2- Tu mod si que es sick (en el mal sentido) :>
3- Thanks for the star :D
^ jk

Edit2: Updated!
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RhaiizoN
RhaiizoN
* 8-) *
Neko_Ray
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Neko_Ray

vivere wrote:

1- No sirves para hacer htisound mod :>
2- Tu mod si que es sick (en el mal sentido) :>
3- Thanks for the star :D
Jaja! perro !
vivere
752 posts
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Topic Starter
vivere

Neko_Ray wrote:

vivere wrote:

1- No sirves para hacer htisound mod :>
2- Tu mod si que es sick (en el mal sentido) :>
3- Thanks for the star :D
Jaja! perro !
xD
The 08 team_Bourdon
710 posts
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The 08 team_Bourdon
Hi Hi~~ :3
i just can give some suggestion~

Normal
00:21:710 (1,2,3) - this three note looks like hard style.
00:50:145 (2) - down+left+up 1 grid?
00:56:145 (4) - why don't do a same slider like previous slider?
01:13:101 (8) - down+left 6 grid?
01:13:623 (1) - down 1 grid, left 5 grid?
01:40:232 (2) - delete this circle, and use the previous slider end to here.
01:55:362 (4) - ^, use the previous slider do a 1 reverse arrow? (i don't likes this slider pattern :(
02:10:232 (1,2,3) - this three note looks like hard style.
02:13:884 (4) - don't do this slider at normal~
02:28:493 (1) - ^
02:30:840 (1) - start from here.. the note looks confusing @.@

Hard
00:16:232 (3) - down 1 grid, left 2 grid?
00:24:971 (8) - delete this circle?
01:21:840 (10) - up 3 grid?
01:21:971 (11) - up 1 grid?
01:38:666 (1,2,3) - down+left 1 grid?
02:11:275 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this note looks confusing @.@
02:29:536 (6,7) - out of music.

darck360's Insane

* your slider looks is very simple~

01:13:101 (6) - right+up 1 grid?
01:13:362 (1,2,3) - right+up 4 grid?
01:18:840 (7) - left 1 grid?
01:19:623 (8) - ^

-------------
Nice mapset!!! 8-)
Hope your map can fast to ranked :D
Good Luck~!
S-t-a-r~~~
Luvdic
2,113 posts
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Luvdic
Perdon por la super uber tardanza... me enferme... y sigo enfermo ;_;

insane:

02:26:797 (8) - Borralo, el triple no va aqui, en todo caso va en 02:27:058 -

Hard:

00:45:710 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Ughh, tantos objetos solapando a otros... se ve feo. Realmente te recomiendo que por lo menos
01:04:493 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Genial, el stream más alrgo en todo el map está en el hard, y no en el insane (ahem... recomiendo que reduzcas la dificultad en esta parte)
01:21:188 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
02:11:275 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^

02:29:014 (4,5,6,7,8) - Realmente pensaría más de dos veces antes de colocar esto, lo dejaría pasar si fuera la dificultad más difícil, pero... como no lo es...

Normal:

00:21:710 (1,2,3) - Estos sliders de 1/4 con 1 repeat, lo puedes cambiar por otros de 1/2 fácilmente: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/89213 por decir un ejemplo
02:10:232 (1,2,3) - ^ Realmente quiero enfatizar el hecho de que deberías evitar lo más que puedas el uso de 1/4 en la dificultad más fácil.
02:30:840 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Wii clusterfuck (esto, estéticamente se ve mal imo, sugiero que vuelvas a ordenarlos)
Lissette
osu! Alumni
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Lissette
hola vivi~~<3

darck360's Insane
00:32:014 - borra timing section
01:13:623 - ^
01:26:145 (1) - terminalo aquí 01:27:710 y agrega nota aqui 01:28:232
02:12:047 - borra timing section

Star~

EDIT: Offset: 584 (By Alace-sensei)
vivere
752 posts
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vivere

Lissette wrote:

hola vivi~~<3

darck360's Insane
00:32:014 - borra timing section
01:13:623 - ^
01:26:145 (1) - terminalo aquí 01:27:710 y agrega nota aqui 01:28:232
02:12:047 - borra timing section

Star~

EDIT: Offset: 584 (By Alace-sensei)
Updated ^./
Lissette
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Lissette
Bubble~
vivere
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vivere

Lissette wrote:

Bubble~
thank you so much liss <3

PS: Also, Thanks for your irc modding >w<
Kenezz
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Kenezz
Al fin \o/
Felicidades vivere ya te lo merecias ahora llora :'D
vivere
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vivere

Kenezz wrote:

Al fin \o/
Felicidades vivere ya te lo merecias ahora llora :'D
Lolz xD
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
-Seeing as you have a custom cursor in your folder you also need to include some sort of cursor trail in there as well

Normal:
-Might want to do HP -1 for the easiest difficulty

Hard:
00:46:236 (1,2,3,4) - keep your spacing here equal or it can be kind of confusing
02:31:105 (3,4,5) - move this pattern around so the repeat is not hidden by the previous hitbursts

darck360's Insane:
01:16:236 (7,8,9,10) - kind of an odd place for a jump, I would remove it
01:28:236 (1) - doesn't need to be quite so quiet in my opinion

Everything else looks good, call me back after fixes and I should be able to rank
vivere
752 posts
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Topic Starter
vivere

James2250 wrote:

-Seeing as you have a custom cursor in your folder you also need to include some sort of cursor trail in there as well Added new skin ^^/

Normal:
-Might want to do HP -1 for the easiest difficulty Done~

Hard:
00:46:236 (1,2,3,4) - keep your spacing here equal or it can be kind of confusing Fixed~
02:31:105 (3,4,5) - move this pattern around so the repeat is not hidden by the previous hitbursts Fixed~

darck360's Insane:
01:16:236 (7,8,9,10) - kind of an odd place for a jump, I would remove it Removed~
01:28:236 (1) - doesn't need to be quite so quiet in my opinion Fixed (removed the 2 timing points)~

Everything else looks good, call me back after fixes and I should be able to rank
Thanks James <3
James2250
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James2250
The new skin improvements look much nicer, everything else checks out

Ranked~
Anto
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Anto
aaa Gratz
Lizbeth
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Felicidades viveperv <333

/hyper hug
Sallad4ever
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Sallad4ever
finally rank
congratz~
;)
vivere
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vivere
Thanks ^.^/
Gonzvlo
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Gonzvlo
Casi un año pero lo lograste, felicitaciones vivere!
Luvdic
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Gonzvlo wrote:

Casi un año pero lo lograste, felicitaciones vivere!
Oh you >=o

Y felicidades vivere, de verdad se lo merece ;D
vivere
752 posts
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vivere

Gonzvlo wrote:

Casi un año pero lo lograste, felicitaciones vivere!

ErufenRito wrote:

Gonzvlo wrote:

Casi un año pero lo lograste, felicitaciones vivere!
Oh you >=o

Y felicidades vivere, de verdad se lo merece ;D
Gracias chicos ^.~/
Verdisphena
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D:<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
Alfin :D!
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
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eldnl
Felicitaciones :D
Fabi
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Joined September 2009
Fabi
Jaja, veo que lo cambiaste mucho desde la ultima vez :P. Felicitaciones che!
vivere
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Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
vivere
Gracias! :D
IkkiMinami
IkkiMinami
Good :) :)
vivere
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Joined April 2009
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vivere

IkkiMinami wrote:

Good :) :)
^^
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