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Charles445

Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon

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Charles445 2011-03-31T22:23:29+00:00

I think you should make the circles not grayscale, add some color into it!
The background is a bit orange/yellow, you could add an orange color to the custom colors.

Normal
Tickrate 1
There are many spacing problems in this difficulty, you should go through the map and fix the spacing.
Combos get a bit high for the easiest difficulty, you should add more new combos
00:54:580 - These kind of sudden spacing changes are not a good idea for the easiest difficulty.
01:09:971 (1,2,3) - These kind of sliders are very confusing for a Normal
01:39:188 - Unexpected amount of repeats
02:11:275 - Very unexpected amount of repeats
02:30:840 - This slider doesn't make sense.

Hard
The slider velocity seems too slow, it heavily contrasts with the spacing.
There are many spacing problems in this difficulty, you should go through the map and fix the spacing.

darck360's Insane
Tickrate 1
01:20:666 - The repeat is pretty hidden by the previous hitburst.
Odaril pointed this out already, why didn't you fix it?

It's an okay map, the spacing is what's really hurting it right now.

ManuxP

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ManuxP 2011-05-03T18:05:53+00:00

FTW!! sta bien chvr! ojala sea rankeada pronto ke ya la perfeccione

perepepepe

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perepepepe 2011-05-05T22:46:10+00:00

Ta bueno el map

vivere

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vivere 2011-05-05T23:00:27+00:00

KRZY

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KRZY 2011-05-06T00:24:21+00:00

Hello~

[Normal]
01:12:058 (7) - One repeat less, and...
01:14:145 (1) - ...instead of using a looong slider to cover a whole section, try mapping a bit more creatively :3
01:39:188 (1,2) - Considering this difficulty is a [Normal], the location of these notes may be difficult for players to follow right after the spinner. Might be better to move them to the center of the screen.
02:01:623 (4) - 1 grid left

[Hard]
00:23:536 (2) - Same issue I pointed out in [Normal]. This may work too, but it might be better if you tried to map more creatively, following either the vocals or the background instruments rather than using a long slider to cover a lot of time.
00:26:145 (4) - ^
00:44:406 (1) - ^
00:47:014 (3) - ^
00:49:362 (4,5,6) - Pretty hard to read, I know it's used widely but perhaps moving it away from the slider might work too~
01:13:884 (4) - Same as 00:23:536 (2)
01:32:406 (1) - ^

[darck360's Insane]
00:51:449 (3) - Move this slider one blue tick behind and add a note so that there are three notes before the slider begins instead of two. Remove 00:52:493 (4).

Could use some more beat-following, but as it is a vocal-dominant slow song, just flowing through the music with sliders might not be a bad idea either :3

Star!

vivere

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vivere 2011-05-06T02:29:35+00:00

KRZY wrote:
Hello~

[Normal]
01:12:058 (7) - One repeat less, and...
01:14:145 (1) - ...instead of using a looong slider to cover a whole section, try mapping a bit more creatively :3 I can't be more creative :'<.
01:39:188 (1,2) - Considering this difficulty is a [Normal], the location of these notes may be difficult for players to follow right after the spinner. Might be better to move them to the center of the screen. Ok.
02:01:623 (4) - 1 grid left Done.

[Hard]
00:23:536 (2) - Same issue I pointed out in [Normal]. This may work too, but it might be better if you tried to map more creatively, following either the vocals or the background instruments rather than using a long slider to cover a lot of time. Changed.
00:26:145 (4) - ^ ^
00:44:406 (1) - ^ ^
00:47:014 (3) - ^ ^
00:49:362 (4,5,6) - Pretty hard to read, I know it's used widely but perhaps moving it away from the slider might work too~ already changed
01:13:884 (4) - Same as 00:23:536 (2) Changed.
01:32:406 (1) - ^ I like it :/

[darck360's Insane]
00:51:449 (3) - Move this slider one blue tick behind and add a note so that there are three notes before the slider begins instead of two. Remove 00:52:493 (4). Done.

Could use some more beat-following, but as it is a vocal-dominant slow song, just flowing through the music with sliders might not be a bad idea either :3

Star!

Thanks <3

Edit: Updated

PotsBreaker

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PotsBreaker 2011-05-06T05:54:39+00:00

val0108

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val0108 2011-05-06T23:52:08+00:00

hey 0/
[Normal]
00:48:580 (4) - remove finish
01:20:145 (1,2) - 1/8 slider~ so much http://puu.sh/1Uxv
02:11:275 (3) - they're may not understand the slider end.for example http://puu.sh/1UxU
02:19:623 (6) - add finsh last slider
02:37:623 - kiaitime end line here 02:37:232 -

[Hard]
00:25:884 (10) - new combo
00:35:275 (1) - hidden reverse
01:15:971 (10) - new combo
01:35:275 (3) - remove clap last slider
01:37:362 (4,6,7,8) - add clap ?
02:12:058 (13) - add finish
02:37:623 - same as Normal diff

[darck360's Insane]
OD 7
00:51:580 (4) - how about this?http://puu.sh/1UyI
01:20:666 (2) - hidden(?)slider reverse
02:11:797 (1) - same as others diff

star~

vivere

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vivere 2011-05-07T04:26:08+00:00

val0108 wrote:
hey 0/ Hi o/
[Normal]
00:48:580 (4) - remove finish
01:20:145 (1,2) - 1/8 slider~ so much http://puu.sh/1Uxv. Well, I don't uderstand you D: but ... If you want to say "that's hard". I'll tell you that these sliders are easy xD.
02:11:275 (3) - they're may not understand the slider end.for example http://puu.sh/1UxU Changed.
02:19:623 (6) - add finsh last slider Done.
02:37:623 - kiaitime end line here 02:37:232 - Nope, I like it

[Hard]
00:25:884 (10) - new combo Done.
00:35:275 (1) - hidden reverse Done?.
01:15:971 (10) - new combo Done.
01:35:275 (3) - remove clap last slider Ok.
01:37:362 (4,6,7,8) - add clap ? Oh that's good. Thanks.
02:12:058 (13) - add finish Done.
02:37:623 - same as Normal diff Nope, I like it

[darck360's Insane]
OD 7
00:51:580 (4) - how about this?http://puu.sh/1UyI what do you mean?
01:20:666 (2) - hidden(?)slider reverse Changed.
02:11:797 (1) - same as others diff No, I like it xd

star~

Thank you. And thanks for modding <3

Edit: Updated!

Saten

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Saten 2011-05-08T04:22:50+00:00

Estrella~

vivere

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vivere 2011-05-08T05:10:36+00:00

Saten-san wrote:
Estrella~

Thank you ;3

Screenagers

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Screenagers 2011-05-08T07:53:35+00:00

OzzyOzrock

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OzzyOzrock 2011-05-09T02:02:33+00:00

[Normal]
01:09:971 (5,6,7) - Estas notas confundiran a muchos, pero creo que esta bien tenerlos...
01:20:145 (1,2,3,4) - Esto tambien, pero aun, esto es normal no facil...

Ehhhhh, esta bien. :3

[Hard]
01:55:884 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Arregla esto para que no sea tan confuso...

Mm, esta bien... :3

[Insane]
pro

estralalalala

gustjr1997

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gustjr1997 2011-05-09T09:17:43+00:00

vivere

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vivere 2011-05-09T15:36:39+00:00

gustjr1997 wrote:
8-)

Screenagers wrote:
8-)

Thanks :3

Katsu_old_1

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Katsu_old_1 2011-05-09T16:51:53+00:00

star =w= ♥

Pereira006

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Pereira006 2011-05-09T20:14:54+00:00

hello~~ ♥

this just my suggestions !

[Normal]

01:57:971 (1) - New combo?

perfect diff

Hard

01:38:666 (1) - New combo? if you do this remove new combo at 01:38:927 (3)

lmfao perfect diff

Insane

I can´t find wrong sorry

lmfao aswome

STAR ! ho also don´t sayd neko because i give star xD

vivere

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vivere 2011-05-09T23:38:35+00:00

OzzyOzrock wrote:
[Normal]
01:09:971 (5,6,7) - Estas notas confundiran a muchos, pero creo que esta bien tenerlos...
01:20:145 (1,2,3,4) - Esto tambien, pero aun, esto es normal no facil...

Ehhhhh, esta bien. :3

[Hard]
01:55:884 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Arregla esto para que no sea tan confuso... Esto esta hecho intencionalmente :>.

Mm, esta bien... :3

[Insane]
pro

estralalalala

Gracias por tu mod <3

Pereira006 wrote:
hello~~ ♥ Hi <3

this just my suggestions !

[Normal]

01:57:971 (1) - New combo? Ok =O

perfect diff

Hard

01:38:666 (1) - New combo? if you do this remove new combo at 01:38:927 (3) Done.

lmfao perfect diff

Insane

I can´t find wrong sorry

lmfao aswome

STAR ! ho also don´t sayd neko because i give star xD

ok hahah. Thank you for modding ^^/

Edit: Updated!

Antu Villegas

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Antu Villegas 2011-05-10T01:03:55+00:00

Link de descarga (.rar): Puush

Preview

Imagen recortada

Edit:

Agregado Suavizado Gausiano 2,0 y iluminación y saturación aumentada...

Link de descarga (.rar): Puush

Preview

Last edited by Antu Villegas 2011-05-10T17:24:13+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

vivere

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vivere 2011-05-10T01:11:45+00:00

Antu Villegas wrote:
Link de descarga (.rar): Puush

Preview

Imagen recortada

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! THANKS <3

DJPop

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Here since the beginning

DJPop 2011-05-10T13:16:35+00:00

~Normal~
00:44:927 (7) - new combo

~Hard~
00:27:710 (9) - move the end of slider to the right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:04:884 (5) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:710 (7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)

~darck360's Insane~
00:15:449 (4) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:31:623 (8) - ^

+Star

vivere

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vivere 2011-05-10T19:57:57+00:00

DJPop wrote:
~Normal~
00:44:927 (7) - new combo

~Hard~
00:27:710 (9) - move the end of slider to the right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:04:884 (5) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:710 (7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)

~darck360's Insane~
00:15:449 (4) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:31:623 (8) - ^

+Star

All fixed. Thank you :>

Edit: Updated!

Neko_Ray

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Neko_Ray 2011-05-12T02:58:05+00:00

aaaa neko-sick mod~

Normal
Slider Tick Rate: 1. Por que? por esto: 01:13:623 para adelante

Hard
01:06:580 (3): Clap al principio?
01:08:406 (6): Clap
01:09:449 (1): Termina aquí 01:10:493 y agrégale clap en los dos lados
01:11:014 (2): Arráncale el clap
01:11:275 (3,4): Clap aquí
02:05:014 (2): Yo lo cambiaría por 3 circles

tenga la estrella !

Kenezz

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Kenezz 2011-05-12T03:11:22+00:00

Kenezz's Bakaircmod~
Dimelo vivere!!
<3

vivere

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vivere 2011-05-12T03:16:32+00:00

Kenezz wrote:
Kenezz's Bakaircmod~
Dimelo vivere!!
<3

Thank you for your baka mod <3. ~~Ilu ♥~~

Edit:

Neko_Ray wrote:
aaaa neko-sick mod~

Normal
Slider Tick Rate: 1. Por que? por esto: 01:13:623 para adelante Ok o.o.

Hard
01:06:580 (3): Clap al principio? Suena feo, No
01:08:406 (6): Clap ...Lo mismo, suena feo xD
01:09:449 (1): Termina aquí 01:10:493 y agrégale clap en los dos lados No ;_;
01:11:014 (2): Arráncale el clap Tampoco...
01:11:275 (3,4): Clap aquí Nop
02:05:014 (2): Yo lo cambiaría por 3 circles Cambiado~

tenga la estrella !

1- No sirves para hacer htisound mod :>
2- Tu mod si que es sick (en el mal sentido) :>
3- Thanks for the star

^ jk

Edit2: Updated!

Last edited by vivere 2011-05-17T16:11:32+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

RhaiizoN

RhaiizoN 2011-05-12T03:47:03+00:00

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Neko_Ray

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Neko_Ray 2011-05-12T04:17:21+00:00

vivere wrote:
1- No sirves para hacer htisound mod :>
2- Tu mod si que es sick (en el mal sentido) :>
3- Thanks for the star

Jaja! perro !

vivere

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vivere 2011-05-12T16:02:41+00:00

Neko_Ray wrote:
vivere wrote:
1- No sirves para hacer htisound mod :>
2- Tu mod si que es sick (en el mal sentido) :>
3- Thanks for the star
Jaja! perro !

xD

The 08 team_Bourdon

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The 08 team_Bourdon 2011-05-13T02:22:25+00:00

Hi Hi~~ :3
i just can give some suggestion~

Normal
00:21:710 (1,2,3) - this three note looks like hard style.
00:50:145 (2) - down+left+up 1 grid?
00:56:145 (4) - why don't do a same slider like previous slider?
01:13:101 (8) - down+left 6 grid?
01:13:623 (1) - down 1 grid, left 5 grid?
01:40:232 (2) - delete this circle, and use the previous slider end to here.
01:55:362 (4) - ^, use the previous slider do a 1 reverse arrow? (i don't likes this slider pattern

02:10:232 (1,2,3) - this three note looks like hard style.
02:13:884 (4) - don't do this slider at normal~
02:28:493 (1) - ^
02:30:840 (1) - start from here.. the note looks confusing @.@

Hard
00:16:232 (3) - down 1 grid, left 2 grid?
00:24:971 (8) - delete this circle?
01:21:840 (10) - up 3 grid?
01:21:971 (11) - up 1 grid?
01:38:666 (1,2,3) - down+left 1 grid?
02:11:275 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this note looks confusing @.@
02:29:536 (6,7) - out of music.

darck360's Insane

* your slider looks is very simple~

01:13:101 (6) - right+up 1 grid?
01:13:362 (1,2,3) - right+up 4 grid?
01:18:840 (7) - left 1 grid?
01:19:623 (8) - ^

-------------
Nice mapset!!!

Hope your map can fast to ranked

Good Luck~!
S-t-a-r~~~

Luvdic

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Luvdic 2011-05-16T22:34:26+00:00

Perdon por la super uber tardanza... me enferme... y sigo enfermo ;_;

insane:

02:26:797 (8) - Borralo, el triple no va aqui, en todo caso va en 02:27:058 -

Hard:

00:45:710 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Ughh, tantos objetos solapando a otros... se ve feo. Realmente te recomiendo que por lo menos
01:04:493 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Genial, el stream más alrgo en todo el map está en el hard, y no en el insane (ahem... recomiendo que reduzcas la dificultad en esta parte)
01:21:188 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
02:11:275 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^

02:29:014 (4,5,6,7,8) - Realmente pensaría más de dos veces antes de colocar esto, lo dejaría pasar si fuera la dificultad más difícil, pero... como no lo es...

Normal:

00:21:710 (1,2,3) - Estos sliders de 1/4 con 1 repeat, lo puedes cambiar por otros de 1/2 fácilmente: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/89213 por decir un ejemplo
02:10:232 (1,2,3) - ^ Realmente quiero enfatizar el hecho de que deberías evitar lo más que puedas el uso de 1/4 en la dificultad más fácil.
02:30:840 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Wii clusterfuck (esto, estéticamente se ve mal imo, sugiero que vuelvas a ordenarlos)

Lissette

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Lissette 2011-05-23T02:26:39+00:00

hola vivi~~<3

darck360's Insane
00:32:014 - borra timing section
01:13:623 - ^
01:26:145 (1) - terminalo aquí 01:27:710 y agrega nota aqui 01:28:232
02:12:047 - borra timing section

Star~

EDIT: Offset: 584 (By Alace-sensei)

vivere

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vivere 2011-05-23T03:53:36+00:00

Lissette wrote:
hola vivi~~<3

darck360's Insane
00:32:014 - borra timing section
01:13:623 - ^
01:26:145 (1) - terminalo aquí 01:27:710 y agrega nota aqui 01:28:232
02:12:047 - borra timing section

Star~

EDIT: Offset: 584 (By Alace-sensei)

Updated ^./

Lissette

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Lissette 2011-05-23T04:29:54+00:00

Bubble~

vivere

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vivere 2011-05-23T04:34:07+00:00

Lissette wrote:
Bubble~

thank you so much liss <3

PS: Also, Thanks for your irc modding >w<

Kenezz

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Kenezz 2011-05-23T04:55:45+00:00

Al fin \o/
Felicidades vivere ya te lo merecias ahora llora :'D

vivere

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vivere 2011-05-23T15:52:17+00:00

Kenezz wrote:
Al fin \o/
Felicidades vivere ya te lo merecias ahora llora :'D

Lolz xD

James2250

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James2250 2011-05-24T01:00:47+00:00

-Seeing as you have a custom cursor in your folder you also need to include some sort of cursor trail in there as well

Normal:
-Might want to do HP -1 for the easiest difficulty

Hard:
00:46:236 (1,2,3,4) - keep your spacing here equal or it can be kind of confusing
02:31:105 (3,4,5) - move this pattern around so the repeat is not hidden by the previous hitbursts

darck360's Insane:
01:16:236 (7,8,9,10) - kind of an odd place for a jump, I would remove it
01:28:236 (1) - doesn't need to be quite so quiet in my opinion

Everything else looks good, call me back after fixes and I should be able to rank

vivere

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vivere 2011-05-24T02:44:25+00:00

James2250 wrote:
-Seeing as you have a custom cursor in your folder you also need to include some sort of cursor trail in there as well Added new skin ^^/

Normal:
-Might want to do HP -1 for the easiest difficulty Done~

Hard:
00:46:236 (1,2,3,4) - keep your spacing here equal or it can be kind of confusing Fixed~
02:31:105 (3,4,5) - move this pattern around so the repeat is not hidden by the previous hitbursts Fixed~

darck360's Insane:
01:16:236 (7,8,9,10) - kind of an odd place for a jump, I would remove it Removed~
01:28:236 (1) - doesn't need to be quite so quiet in my opinion Fixed (removed the 2 timing points)~

Everything else looks good, call me back after fixes and I should be able to rank

Thanks James <3