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Topic Starter
Para la proxima, no te retractes de lo que digas <3. Ah... y gracias por la star ^^SilentAssasint wrote:
Star ^^
Yo lo "convencí" de que lo arreglara -.-"vivere wrote:
Para la proxima, no te retractes de lo que digas <3. Ah... y gracias por la star ^^SilentAssasint wrote:
Star ^^
Topic Starter
XDDDAntu Villegas wrote:
Yo lo "convencí" de que lo arreglara -.-"
QUE ALGUIEN RANKEE ESTO DE UNA VEZ!! u.u
I think you should make the circles not grayscale, add some color into it!
The background is a bit orange/yellow, you could add an orange color to the custom colors.
Normal
Tickrate 1
There are many spacing problems in this difficulty, you should go through the map and fix the spacing.
Combos get a bit high for the easiest difficulty, you should add more new combos
00:54:580 - These kind of sudden spacing changes are not a good idea for the easiest difficulty.
01:09:971 (1,2,3) - These kind of sliders are very confusing for a Normal
01:39:188 - Unexpected amount of repeats
02:11:275 - Very unexpected amount of repeats
02:30:840 - This slider doesn't make sense.
Hard
The slider velocity seems too slow, it heavily contrasts with the spacing.
There are many spacing problems in this difficulty, you should go through the map and fix the spacing.
darck360's Insane
Tickrate 1
01:20:666 - The repeat is pretty hidden by the previous hitburst.
Odaril pointed this out already, why didn't you fix it?
It's an okay map, the spacing is what's really hurting it right now.
The background is a bit orange/yellow, you could add an orange color to the custom colors.
Normal
Tickrate 1
There are many spacing problems in this difficulty, you should go through the map and fix the spacing.
Combos get a bit high for the easiest difficulty, you should add more new combos
00:54:580 - These kind of sudden spacing changes are not a good idea for the easiest difficulty.
01:09:971 (1,2,3) - These kind of sliders are very confusing for a Normal
01:39:188 - Unexpected amount of repeats
02:11:275 - Very unexpected amount of repeats
02:30:840 - This slider doesn't make sense.
Hard
The slider velocity seems too slow, it heavily contrasts with the spacing.
There are many spacing problems in this difficulty, you should go through the map and fix the spacing.
darck360's Insane
Tickrate 1
01:20:666 - The repeat is pretty hidden by the previous hitburst.
Odaril pointed this out already, why didn't you fix it?
It's an okay map, the spacing is what's really hurting it right now.
FTW!! sta bien chvr! ojala sea rankeada pronto ke ya la perfeccione 
Ta bueno el map
Hello~
[Normal]
01:12:058 (7) - One repeat less, and...
01:14:145 (1) - ...instead of using a looong slider to cover a whole section, try mapping a bit more creatively :3
01:39:188 (1,2) - Considering this difficulty is a [Normal], the location of these notes may be difficult for players to follow right after the spinner. Might be better to move them to the center of the screen.
02:01:623 (4) - 1 grid left
[Hard]
00:23:536 (2) - Same issue I pointed out in [Normal]. This may work too, but it might be better if you tried to map more creatively, following either the vocals or the background instruments rather than using a long slider to cover a lot of time.
00:26:145 (4) - ^
00:44:406 (1) - ^
00:47:014 (3) - ^
00:49:362 (4,5,6) - Pretty hard to read, I know it's used widely but perhaps moving it away from the slider might work too~
01:13:884 (4) - Same as 00:23:536 (2)
01:32:406 (1) - ^
[darck360's Insane]
00:51:449 (3) - Move this slider one blue tick behind and add a note so that there are three notes before the slider begins instead of two. Remove 00:52:493 (4).
Could use some more beat-following, but as it is a vocal-dominant slow song, just flowing through the music with sliders might not be a bad idea either :3
Star!
[Normal]
01:12:058 (7) - One repeat less, and...
01:14:145 (1) - ...instead of using a looong slider to cover a whole section, try mapping a bit more creatively :3
01:39:188 (1,2) - Considering this difficulty is a [Normal], the location of these notes may be difficult for players to follow right after the spinner. Might be better to move them to the center of the screen.
02:01:623 (4) - 1 grid left
[Hard]
00:23:536 (2) - Same issue I pointed out in [Normal]. This may work too, but it might be better if you tried to map more creatively, following either the vocals or the background instruments rather than using a long slider to cover a lot of time.
00:26:145 (4) - ^
00:44:406 (1) - ^
00:47:014 (3) - ^
00:49:362 (4,5,6) - Pretty hard to read, I know it's used widely but perhaps moving it away from the slider might work too~
01:13:884 (4) - Same as 00:23:536 (2)
01:32:406 (1) - ^
[darck360's Insane]
00:51:449 (3) - Move this slider one blue tick behind and add a note so that there are three notes before the slider begins instead of two. Remove 00:52:493 (4).
Could use some more beat-following, but as it is a vocal-dominant slow song, just flowing through the music with sliders might not be a bad idea either :3
Star!
Topic Starter
Thanks <3KRZY wrote:
Hello~
[Normal]
01:12:058 (7) - One repeat less, and...
01:14:145 (1) - ...instead of using a looong slider to cover a whole section, try mapping a bit more creatively :3 I can't be more creative :'<.
01:39:188 (1,2) - Considering this difficulty is a [Normal], the location of these notes may be difficult for players to follow right after the spinner. Might be better to move them to the center of the screen. Ok.
02:01:623 (4) - 1 grid left Done.
[Hard]
00:23:536 (2) - Same issue I pointed out in [Normal]. This may work too, but it might be better if you tried to map more creatively, following either the vocals or the background instruments rather than using a long slider to cover a lot of time. Changed.
00:26:145 (4) - ^ ^
00:44:406 (1) - ^ ^
00:47:014 (3) - ^ ^
00:49:362 (4,5,6) - Pretty hard to read, I know it's used widely but perhaps moving it away from the slider might work too~ already changed
01:13:884 (4) - Same as 00:23:536 (2) Changed.
01:32:406 (1) - ^ I like it :/
[darck360's Insane]
00:51:449 (3) - Move this slider one blue tick behind and add a note so that there are three notes before the slider begins instead of two. Remove 00:52:493 (4). Done.
Could use some more beat-following, but as it is a vocal-dominant slow song, just flowing through the music with sliders might not be a bad idea either :3
Star!
Edit: Updated
hey 0/
[Normal]
00:48:580 (4) - remove finish
01:20:145 (1,2) - 1/8 slider~ so much http://puu.sh/1Uxv
02:11:275 (3) - they're may not understand the slider end.for example http://puu.sh/1UxU
02:19:623 (6) - add finsh last slider
02:37:623 - kiaitime end line here 02:37:232 -
[Hard]
00:25:884 (10) - new combo
00:35:275 (1) - hidden reverse
01:15:971 (10) - new combo
01:35:275 (3) - remove clap last slider
01:37:362 (4,6,7,8) - add clap ?
02:12:058 (13) - add finish
02:37:623 - same as Normal diff
[darck360's Insane]
OD 7
00:51:580 (4) - how about this?http://puu.sh/1UyI
01:20:666 (2) - hidden(?)slider reverse
02:11:797 (1) - same as others diff
star~
[Normal]
00:48:580 (4) - remove finish
01:20:145 (1,2) - 1/8 slider~ so much http://puu.sh/1Uxv
02:11:275 (3) - they're may not understand the slider end.for example http://puu.sh/1UxU
02:19:623 (6) - add finsh last slider
02:37:623 - kiaitime end line here 02:37:232 -
[Hard]
00:25:884 (10) - new combo
00:35:275 (1) - hidden reverse
01:15:971 (10) - new combo
01:35:275 (3) - remove clap last slider
01:37:362 (4,6,7,8) - add clap ?
02:12:058 (13) - add finish
02:37:623 - same as Normal diff
[darck360's Insane]
OD 7
00:51:580 (4) - how about this?http://puu.sh/1UyI
01:20:666 (2) - hidden(?)slider reverse
02:11:797 (1) - same as others diff
star~
Topic Starter
Thank you. And thanks for modding <3val0108 wrote:
hey 0/ Hi o/
[Normal]
00:48:580 (4) - remove finish
01:20:145 (1,2) - 1/8 slider~ so much http://puu.sh/1Uxv. Well, I don't uderstand you D: but ... If you want to say "that's hard". I'll tell you that these sliders are easy xD.
02:11:275 (3) - they're may not understand the slider end.for example http://puu.sh/1UxU Changed.
02:19:623 (6) - add finsh last slider Done.
02:37:623 - kiaitime end line here 02:37:232 - Nope, I like it
[Hard]
00:25:884 (10) - new combo Done.
00:35:275 (1) - hidden reverse Done?.
01:15:971 (10) - new combo Done.
01:35:275 (3) - remove clap last slider Ok.
01:37:362 (4,6,7,8) - add clap ? Oh that's good. Thanks.
02:12:058 (13) - add finish Done.
02:37:623 - same as Normal diff Nope, I like it
[darck360's Insane]
OD 7
00:51:580 (4) - how about this?http://puu.sh/1UyI what do you mean?
01:20:666 (2) - hidden(?)slider reverse Changed.
02:11:797 (1) - same as others diff No, I like it xd
star~
Edit: Updated!
Estrella~
[Normal]
01:09:971 (5,6,7) - Estas notas confundiran a muchos, pero creo que esta bien tenerlos...
01:20:145 (1,2,3,4) - Esto tambien, pero aun, esto es normal no facil...
Ehhhhh, esta bien. :3
[Hard]
01:55:884 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Arregla esto para que no sea tan confuso...
Mm, esta bien... :3
[Insane]
pro
estralalalala
01:09:971 (5,6,7) - Estas notas confundiran a muchos, pero creo que esta bien tenerlos...
01:20:145 (1,2,3,4) - Esto tambien, pero aun, esto es normal no facil...
Ehhhhh, esta bien. :3
[Hard]
01:55:884 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Arregla esto para que no sea tan confuso...
Mm, esta bien... :3
[Insane]
pro
estralalalala
Topic Starter
gustjr1997 wrote:
8-)
Thanks :3Screenagers wrote:
8-)
star =w= ♥
hello~~ ♥
this just my suggestions !
[Normal]
01:57:971 (1) - New combo?
perfect diff
Hard
01:38:666 (1) - New combo? if you do this remove new combo at 01:38:927 (3)
lmfao perfect diff
Insane
I can´t find wrong sorry
lmfao aswome
STAR ! ho also don´t sayd neko because i give star xD
this just my suggestions !
[Normal]
01:57:971 (1) - New combo?
perfect diff
Hard
01:38:666 (1) - New combo? if you do this remove new combo at 01:38:927 (3)
lmfao perfect diff
Insane
I can´t find wrong sorry
lmfao aswome
STAR ! ho also don´t sayd neko because i give star xD
Topic Starter
Gracias por tu mod <3OzzyOzrock wrote:
[Normal]
01:09:971 (5,6,7) - Estas notas confundiran a muchos, pero creo que esta bien tenerlos...
01:20:145 (1,2,3,4) - Esto tambien, pero aun, esto es normal no facil...
Ehhhhh, esta bien. :3
[Hard]
01:55:884 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Arregla esto para que no sea tan confuso... Esto esta hecho intencionalmente :>.
Mm, esta bien... :3
[Insane]
pro
estralalalala
ok hahah. Thank you for modding ^^/Pereira006 wrote:
hello~~ ♥ Hi <3
this just my suggestions !
[Normal]
01:57:971 (1) - New combo? Ok =O
perfect diff
Hard
01:38:666 (1) - New combo? if you do this remove new combo at 01:38:927 (3) Done.
lmfao perfect diff
Insane
I can´t find wrong sorry
lmfao aswome
STAR ! ho also don´t sayd neko because i give star xD
Edit: Updated!
~Normal~
00:44:927 (7) - new combo
~Hard~
00:27:710 (9) - move the end of slider to the right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:04:884 (5) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:710 (7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
~darck360's Insane~
00:15:449 (4) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:31:623 (8) - ^
+Star
00:44:927 (7) - new combo
~Hard~
00:27:710 (9) - move the end of slider to the right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:04:884 (5) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:710 (7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
~darck360's Insane~
00:15:449 (4) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:31:623 (8) - ^
+Star
Topic Starter
All fixed. Thank you :>DJPop wrote:
~Normal~
00:44:927 (7) - new combo
~Hard~
00:27:710 (9) - move the end of slider to the right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:04:884 (5) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:710 (7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
~darck360's Insane~
00:15:449 (4) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:31:623 (8) - ^
+Star
Edit: Updated!
aaaa neko-sick mod~
Normal
Slider Tick Rate: 1. Por que? por esto: 01:13:623 para adelante
Hard
01:06:580 (3): Clap al principio?
01:08:406 (6): Clap
01:09:449 (1): Termina aquí 01:10:493 y agrégale clap en los dos lados
01:11:014 (2): Arráncale el clap
01:11:275 (3,4): Clap aquí
02:05:014 (2): Yo lo cambiaría por 3 circles
tenga la estrella !
Normal
Slider Tick Rate: 1. Por que? por esto: 01:13:623 para adelante
Hard
01:06:580 (3): Clap al principio?
01:08:406 (6): Clap
01:09:449 (1): Termina aquí 01:10:493 y agrégale clap en los dos lados
01:11:014 (2): Arráncale el clap
01:11:275 (3,4): Clap aquí
02:05:014 (2): Yo lo cambiaría por 3 circles
tenga la estrella !
Kenezz's Bakaircmod~
Dimelo vivere!!
<3
Dimelo vivere!!
<3
Topic Starter
Thank you for your baka mod <3.Kenezz wrote:
Kenezz's Bakaircmod~
Dimelo vivere!!
<3
Edit:
1- No sirves para hacer htisound mod :>Neko_Ray wrote:
aaaa neko-sick mod~
Normal
Slider Tick Rate: 1. Por que? por esto: 01:13:623 para adelante Ok o.o.
Hard
01:06:580 (3): Clap al principio? Suena feo, No
01:08:406 (6): Clap ...Lo mismo, suena feo xD
01:09:449 (1): Termina aquí 01:10:493 y agrégale clap en los dos lados No ;_;
01:11:014 (2): Arráncale el clap Tampoco...
01:11:275 (3,4): Clap aquí Nop
02:05:014 (2): Yo lo cambiaría por 3 circles Cambiado~
tenga la estrella !
2- Tu mod si que es sick (en el mal sentido) :>
3- Thanks for the star
^ jk
Edit2: Updated!
Jaja! perro !vivere wrote:
1- No sirves para hacer htisound mod :>
2- Tu mod si que es sick (en el mal sentido) :>
3- Thanks for the star
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray wrote:
Jaja! perro !vivere wrote:
1- No sirves para hacer htisound mod :>
2- Tu mod si que es sick (en el mal sentido) :>
3- Thanks for the star
Hi Hi~~ :3
i just can give some suggestion~
Normal
00:21:710 (1,2,3) - this three note looks like hard style.
00:50:145 (2) - down+left+up 1 grid?
00:56:145 (4) - why don't do a same slider like previous slider?
01:13:101 (8) - down+left 6 grid?
01:13:623 (1) - down 1 grid, left 5 grid?
01:40:232 (2) - delete this circle, and use the previous slider end to here.
01:55:362 (4) - ^, use the previous slider do a 1 reverse arrow? (i don't likes this slider pattern
02:10:232 (1,2,3) - this three note looks like hard style.
02:13:884 (4) - don't do this slider at normal~
02:28:493 (1) - ^
02:30:840 (1) - start from here.. the note looks confusing @.@
Hard
00:16:232 (3) - down 1 grid, left 2 grid?
00:24:971 (8) - delete this circle?
01:21:840 (10) - up 3 grid?
01:21:971 (11) - up 1 grid?
01:38:666 (1,2,3) - down+left 1 grid?
02:11:275 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this note looks confusing @.@
02:29:536 (6,7) - out of music.
darck360's Insane
* your slider looks is very simple~
01:13:101 (6) - right+up 1 grid?
01:13:362 (1,2,3) - right+up 4 grid?
01:18:840 (7) - left 1 grid?
01:19:623 (8) - ^
-------------
Nice mapset!!!
Hope your map can fast to ranked
Good Luck~!
S-t-a-r~~~
i just can give some suggestion~
Normal
00:21:710 (1,2,3) - this three note looks like hard style.
00:50:145 (2) - down+left+up 1 grid?
00:56:145 (4) - why don't do a same slider like previous slider?
01:13:101 (8) - down+left 6 grid?
01:13:623 (1) - down 1 grid, left 5 grid?
01:40:232 (2) - delete this circle, and use the previous slider end to here.
01:55:362 (4) - ^, use the previous slider do a 1 reverse arrow? (i don't likes this slider pattern
02:10:232 (1,2,3) - this three note looks like hard style.
02:13:884 (4) - don't do this slider at normal~
02:28:493 (1) - ^
02:30:840 (1) - start from here.. the note looks confusing @.@
Hard
00:16:232 (3) - down 1 grid, left 2 grid?
00:24:971 (8) - delete this circle?
01:21:840 (10) - up 3 grid?
01:21:971 (11) - up 1 grid?
01:38:666 (1,2,3) - down+left 1 grid?
02:11:275 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this note looks confusing @.@
02:29:536 (6,7) - out of music.
darck360's Insane
* your slider looks is very simple~
01:13:101 (6) - right+up 1 grid?
01:13:362 (1,2,3) - right+up 4 grid?
01:18:840 (7) - left 1 grid?
01:19:623 (8) - ^
-------------
Nice mapset!!!
Hope your map can fast to ranked
Good Luck~!
S-t-a-r~~~
Perdon por la super uber tardanza... me enferme... y sigo enfermo ;_;
insane:
02:26:797 (8) - Borralo, el triple no va aqui, en todo caso va en 02:27:058 -
Hard:
00:45:710 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Ughh, tantos objetos solapando a otros... se ve feo. Realmente te recomiendo que por lo menos
01:04:493 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Genial, el stream más alrgo en todo el map está en el hard, y no en el insane (ahem... recomiendo que reduzcas la dificultad en esta parte)
01:21:188 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
02:11:275 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
02:29:014 (4,5,6,7,8) - Realmente pensaría más de dos veces antes de colocar esto, lo dejaría pasar si fuera la dificultad más difícil, pero... como no lo es...
Normal:
00:21:710 (1,2,3) - Estos sliders de 1/4 con 1 repeat, lo puedes cambiar por otros de 1/2 fácilmente: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/89213 por decir un ejemplo
02:10:232 (1,2,3) - ^ Realmente quiero enfatizar el hecho de que deberías evitar lo más que puedas el uso de 1/4 en la dificultad más fácil.
02:30:840 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Wii clusterfuck (esto, estéticamente se ve mal imo, sugiero que vuelvas a ordenarlos)
insane:
02:26:797 (8) - Borralo, el triple no va aqui, en todo caso va en 02:27:058 -
Hard:
00:45:710 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Ughh, tantos objetos solapando a otros... se ve feo. Realmente te recomiendo que por lo menos
01:04:493 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Genial, el stream más alrgo en todo el map está en el hard, y no en el insane (ahem... recomiendo que reduzcas la dificultad en esta parte)
01:21:188 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
02:11:275 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
02:29:014 (4,5,6,7,8) - Realmente pensaría más de dos veces antes de colocar esto, lo dejaría pasar si fuera la dificultad más difícil, pero... como no lo es...
Normal:
00:21:710 (1,2,3) - Estos sliders de 1/4 con 1 repeat, lo puedes cambiar por otros de 1/2 fácilmente: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/89213 por decir un ejemplo
02:10:232 (1,2,3) - ^ Realmente quiero enfatizar el hecho de que deberías evitar lo más que puedas el uso de 1/4 en la dificultad más fácil.
02:30:840 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Wii clusterfuck (esto, estéticamente se ve mal imo, sugiero que vuelvas a ordenarlos)
hola vivi~~<3
darck360's Insane
00:32:014 - borra timing section
01:13:623 - ^
01:26:145 (1) - terminalo aquí 01:27:710 y agrega nota aqui 01:28:232
02:12:047 - borra timing section
Star~
EDIT: Offset: 584 (By Alace-sensei)
darck360's Insane
00:32:014 - borra timing section
01:13:623 - ^
01:26:145 (1) - terminalo aquí 01:27:710 y agrega nota aqui 01:28:232
02:12:047 - borra timing section
Star~
EDIT: Offset: 584 (By Alace-sensei)
Topic Starter
Updated ^./Lissette wrote:
hola vivi~~<3
darck360's Insane
00:32:014 - borra timing section
01:13:623 - ^
01:26:145 (1) - terminalo aquí 01:27:710 y agrega nota aqui 01:28:232
02:12:047 - borra timing section
Star~
EDIT: Offset: 584 (By Alace-sensei)
Bubble~
Topic Starter
thank you so much liss <3Lissette wrote:
Bubble~
PS: Also, Thanks for your irc modding >w<
Al fin \o/
Felicidades vivere ya te lo merecias ahora llora :'D
Felicidades vivere ya te lo merecias ahora llora :'D
Topic Starter
Lolz xDKenezz wrote:
Al fin \o/
Felicidades vivere ya te lo merecias ahora llora :'D
-Seeing as you have a custom cursor in your folder you also need to include some sort of cursor trail in there as well
Normal:
-Might want to do HP -1 for the easiest difficulty
Hard:
00:46:236 (1,2,3,4) - keep your spacing here equal or it can be kind of confusing
02:31:105 (3,4,5) - move this pattern around so the repeat is not hidden by the previous hitbursts
darck360's Insane:
01:16:236 (7,8,9,10) - kind of an odd place for a jump, I would remove it
01:28:236 (1) - doesn't need to be quite so quiet in my opinion
Everything else looks good, call me back after fixes and I should be able to rank
Normal:
-Might want to do HP -1 for the easiest difficulty
Hard:
00:46:236 (1,2,3,4) - keep your spacing here equal or it can be kind of confusing
02:31:105 (3,4,5) - move this pattern around so the repeat is not hidden by the previous hitbursts
darck360's Insane:
01:16:236 (7,8,9,10) - kind of an odd place for a jump, I would remove it
01:28:236 (1) - doesn't need to be quite so quiet in my opinion
Everything else looks good, call me back after fixes and I should be able to rank
Topic Starter
Thanks James <3James2250 wrote:
-Seeing as you have a custom cursor in your folder you also need to include some sort of cursor trail in there as well Added new skin ^^/
Normal:
-Might want to do HP -1 for the easiest difficulty Done~
Hard:
00:46:236 (1,2,3,4) - keep your spacing here equal or it can be kind of confusing Fixed~
02:31:105 (3,4,5) - move this pattern around so the repeat is not hidden by the previous hitbursts Fixed~
darck360's Insane:
01:16:236 (7,8,9,10) - kind of an odd place for a jump, I would remove it Removed~
01:28:236 (1) - doesn't need to be quite so quiet in my opinion Fixed (removed the 2 timing points)~
Everything else looks good, call me back after fixes and I should be able to rank
The new skin improvements look much nicer, everything else checks out
Ranked~
Ranked~
Felicidades viveperv <333
/hyper hug
/hyper hug
finally rank
congratz~
congratz~
Casi un año pero lo lograste, felicitaciones vivere!
Oh you >=oGonzvlo wrote:
Casi un año pero lo lograste, felicitaciones vivere!
Y felicidades vivere, de verdad se lo merece ;D
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Gonzvlo wrote:
Casi un año pero lo lograste, felicitaciones vivere!
Gracias chicos ^.~/ErufenRito wrote:
Oh you >=oGonzvlo wrote:
Casi un año pero lo lograste, felicitaciones vivere!
Y felicidades vivere, de verdad se lo merece ;D
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Alfin!
Alfin
!Felicitaciones
Jaja, veo que lo cambiaste mucho desde la ultima vez 
. Felicitaciones che!
. Felicitaciones che!