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DJPop

ykcarrot wrote:

Why do you use mute slidertick? Also slidertick rate 2 really fits at music IMO. Try to use this file.
Yeah, there are high-hats in every red tick, except just one section(02:47:271 (5)).
You need to mute some of ticks. You can use Normal C1 for muting slidertick. Don't be lazy! >w<
Thanks for the idea :)

By the way, I'd like to add some whistles in the map.. It's so flat.
Added in few parts.


Kurosanyan wrote:

[General]
  1. From the second offset (00:53:369 - ) to the end of the song, your offset seems 10~15ms late. Try to add 10~20ms on all offsets except the first one.
    Add 10~20ms? Sounds too late for me.
  2. Try to find a good comboburst? orz orz orz I'm sure this anime have so much artworks already so you should be abble to find a good one of Mami to do it.
    Added.
  3. Try to find some cool guest diff? :3
    Sorry, I don't take osu! guest diff for this song :(
[Normal]
  1. Hp Drain and Overall Difficulty -1 maybe?
    Fixed.
  2. 00:14:104 (4,5,6,1) - Hum there's more spacing on this part, fix it?
    Distance snap checked and they're fine.
    Especially at 00:15:427 (6,1) - 00:18:075 (1,2,3,4,5) - select this pattern and go some grid down to fix this? :3
    Fixed.
  3. 00:24:693 (4,5,6) - Well same here for the spacing since it's a copy paste.
    I think they're fine.
  4. 00:28:663 (1,2,3,4) - Here I think the spacing is a bit low.
    Spacing is not necessary to be equaled in the whole map. Just pay attention how playable are they.
  5. 00:48:736 (5) - A bit hard to hit, why don't you make a slider like on [Hard]?
    Fixed.
  6. 01:00:039 (5,1) - Fix the spacing? A bit to high. :( (but try to not put (1) over the slider (3) :3 )
    Fixed.
  7. 01:10:627 (5,1) - Same here since it's a copy paste
    Fixed.
  8. 01:21:656 (1,2,3) - Reduce a bit the spacing for those 3 sliders?
    Fixed.
  9. 01:37:539 (2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Uh...Reduce the spacing in this part? Especially 01:42:833 (4,5) - and 01:46:803 (8,9) -
    X
  10. 01:51:656 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Try to make a more regular spacing on this part?
    X
  11. 01:56:951 (2,1) - Reduce spacing?
    X
  12. 02:01:362 (3,1) - ^
    X
  13. 02:21:656 (4) - Tiny stack error.
    Fixed.
  14. 02:30:480 (1,2) - Make a shape for those slider so you can reduce the spacing between them?
    X
  15. 02:28:715 (4) - Same here since it's copy paste
    Fixed.
  16. 02:32:245 (2,1) - Reduce spacing?
    X
  17. 02:37:539 (1,2,3,4) - ^
    X
  18. 02:44:598 (1,2) - ^ (The spacing is x1,18 on this part without the bpm change :3)
    Fixed.
  19. 02:52:375 (1,2,1) - Well I don't think this is a good thing for the easier diff but I won't ask you to change it.
    Fixed. :P
Tenshi-nyan
HeyHey,

Nice work with the hitsounds...

Hard
I almost laughed when I saw GridLevel 1 :<

00:16:751 (4) - reduce the volume for this? the whistles feel a lil' bit too loud here
00:20:722 (5,6) - ^
01:02:686 (5,1,2) - ^
01:06:656 (7,8) - ^
01:35:333 (7,8,1) - ^
02:40:627 (1,2,3) - ^


00:48:736 (4) - start this at 00:48:516 - extend it to 00:49:398 - , add a clap to start and end
01:01:362 (4,5) - these 2 slider are kinda ugly... use less sliderpoints for those
02:37:318 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it like this, the stream feels really weird otherwise. http://puu.sh/1R7x
02:42:612 (1,2,3) - remove whistles from 1 and 2

Normal
00:38:810 - add note + clap -- it's just asking to be there.

Pretty nice map ^^
Can't really think of anything good for this... is good to go ranked.
AngelHoney
all suggestions o.o;

Hard

00:48:736 (4) - change rhythm like this ? http://puu.sh/1R89
00:53:369 - maybe BPM 132 ?
00:57:403 - offset +20ms(57423) ?
01:00:039 - offset +10ms(60039) ?
01:38:862 (6) - return+1 ?
02:44:598 - offset 164648ms , bpm 67 ?

:) :) :)
Snowy Dream
DJPop ;)
Topic Starter
DJPop

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Hard
00:16:751 (4) - reduce the volume for this? the whistles feel a lil' bit too loud here
00:20:722 (5,6) - ^
01:02:686 (5,1,2) - ^
01:06:656 (7,8) - ^
01:35:333 (7,8,1) - ^
02:40:627 (1,2,3) - ^
Reduced and replaced the hitsound file.

00:48:736 (4) - start this at 00:48:516 - extend it to 00:49:398 - , add a clap to start and end
Changed in another way.
01:01:362 (4,5) - these 2 slider are kinda ugly... use less sliderpoints for those
Cannot reduce slider tick rate any more.
02:37:318 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it like this, the stream feels really weird otherwise. http://puu.sh/1R7x
ok ok >.< since most people point this out.
02:42:612 (1,2,3) - remove whistles from 1 and 2
Removed.

Normal
00:38:810 - add note + clap -- it's just asking to be there.
Added.

AngelHoney wrote:

Hard
00:48:736 (4) - change rhythm like this ? http://puu.sh/1R89
Changed in another way.
00:53:369 - maybe BPM 132 ?
133 sounds better.
00:57:403 - offset +20ms(57423) ?
Fixed.
01:00:039 - offset +10ms(60039) ?
Fixed.
01:38:862 (6) - return+1 ?
X
02:44:598 - offset 164648ms , bpm 67 ?
Fixed.
Sumisola
Here is the modding~

[Normal]

Nice map, especially the hitsound.I like it very much!

01:17:686 - (4) - new combo
02:08:862 - (4) - new combo
02:09:744 - (1) - delete new combo
02:15:921 - (4) - new combo
02:16:803 - (1) - delete new combo
02:46:375 - (3,4,5) - arranging them in a line or a triangle may be better???

[Hard]

00:03:957 - add a note
00:04:839 - ^
00:05:722 - ^
00:06:163 - ^
00:06:604 - ^
00:07:045 - ^
00:21:383 (6) - move this note to the next white line or add a note on the next white line
00:34:398 (6) - how about change it into a 1/1 return slider?
00:48:516 - how about add a note here?
01:20:333 (8) - change it to a 1/2 return slider?
01:24:303 (4) - ^
01:58:053 (6) - spacing?or just in propose?
02:11:509 (8) - change it to 3 single circle?
02:25:627 (8) - ^

A pretty fantastic map!!!~~~
I like your song!!Like your video~ :) :)
Topic Starter
DJPop

Sumisola wrote:

[Normal]
01:17:686 - (4) - new combo
Fixed.
02:08:862 - (4) - new combo
Fixed.
02:09:744 - (1) - delete new combo
Fixed.
02:15:921 - (4) - new combo
X
02:16:803 - (1) - delete new combo
X
02:46:375 - (3,4,5) - arranging them in a line or a triangle may be better???
Fixed.


[Hard]
00:03:957 - add a note
00:04:839 - ^
00:05:722 - ^
00:06:163 - ^
00:06:604 - ^
00:07:045 - ^
I don't map before 00:07:486

00:21:383 (6) - move this note to the next white line or add a note on the next white line
X
00:34:398 (6) - how about change it into a 1/1 return slider?
X
00:48:516 - how about add a note here?
Fixed.
01:20:333 (8) - change it to a 1/2 return slider?
X
01:24:303 (4) - ^
X
01:58:053 (6) - spacing? or just in propose?
Proposed
02:11:509 (8) - change it to 3 single circle?
X
02:25:627 (8) - ^
X
lzy
star for senpai
artpiggo
good mapping as ever


star & pink one for you <3
Magical Pokie
lol
KanaRin
Done.
It's Taiko Oni 7+ ~ 8.

Anyway , can you add the Taiko BG & Name tag for our diff? =w=
Seems like you know it Haha.

Start ~ 01:39:303 - Kanpakyin
01:41:068 ~ End - KanaRin

=w=/

Download: ice - Theme of Tomoe Mami (DJPop) [KPY & Kana's Taiko].osu
kanpakyin
Star
Kurai
Ok, nothing wrong in your map :)
But maybe HP drain rate +1 in Hard. In my opinion it will be nicer.
Good luck~
Lance
( ´∀`)┌★
The creator has said if he were to do a sequel to Madoka he would want to make it a SoL.

...I'd watch it.
DJNightmare
Modded in IRC, Not much to mod thought O_O
Starred for awesomeness! althought i dunno what song and anime is this O_O And i wont understand lol
HeatKai
mod4mod :D

modding using distance snap ;)

[normal]
00:09:251 (3) - spacing
00:14:986 (5) - ^
00:19:840 (3) - ^
00:25:575 (5) - ^
00:28:663 (1) - I wonder if this okay :\ because the spacing is so bad but its shape nice with other sliders.
01:07:990 (1) - spacing
01:15:931 (2) - end of the slider put finish :)
01:17:696 (4) - spacing
01:47:696 (9) - new combo
01:48:137 (1) - remove new combo
02:52:830 (1) - finish :)

[hard]
00:13:222 (4) - new combo
00:21:383 (6) - remove whistle
00:23:810 (5) - add whistle
00:30:207 (5) - remove whistle , add finish
00:31:751 (1) - remove clap , add whistle :3
01:34:681 (6) - at the starting remove whistle , add clap
02:18:137 (7) - new combo
02:52:719 (1) - finish :)

[KPY & Kana taiko]
lol , they two always make taiko diff for you :D
but still nice :D

Hp drain rate , circle size , approach rate , Overall difficulty = 5

the Kanpakyin name , please use darker colour.
because cannot see his name clearly :\
Kanarin name is clear.
Kanpakyin not clear :P

all nice :D
Topic Starter
DJPop

HeatKai wrote:

[normal]
00:09:251 (3) - spacing
X
00:14:986 (5) - ^
X
00:19:840 (3) - ^
X
00:25:575 (5) - ^
X
00:28:663 (1) - I wonder if this okay :\ because the spacing is so bad but its shape nice with other sliders.
It's OK
01:07:990 (1) - spacing
X
01:15:931 (2) - end of the slider put finish :)
X
01:17:696 (4) - spacing
X
01:47:696 (9) - new combo
Fixed.
01:48:137 (1) - remove new combo
Fixed.
02:52:830 (1) - finish :)
X

[hard]
00:13:222 (4) - new combo
Added.
00:21:383 (6) - remove whistle
X
00:23:810 (5) - add whistle
X
00:30:207 (5) - remove whistle , add finish
X
00:31:751 (1) - remove clap , add whistle :3
X
01:34:681 (6) - at the starting remove whistle , add clap
X
02:18:137 (7) - new combo
X
02:52:719 (1) - finish :)
X

the Kanpakyin name , please use darker colour.
because cannot see his name clearly :\
Kanarin name is clear.
Kanpakyin not clear :P
Fixed.
banvi
:)
Kotone
www
cacipan
:)
Mok
Nice <3 Mami <333

[General]
OMG THE SPINNER IS REALLY MADE ME LAUGH A LOT xD

[Normal]
00:24:692 (4,5) - Aren't cuter like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/85959

[Hard]
Awesome.

I can't mod taiko, sorry ç_ç

Edit: I forgot to say that's a mod4mod, as we discussed via pm.
Topic Starter
DJPop

Mok wrote:

[Normal]
00:24:692 (4,5) - Aren't cuter like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/85959
Fixed.
Pizzicato
:D
Kokizi
star~
Thite
:)
Krisom
General-
· The 20% volume sections at the end of the song might be a tad to soft. Make it 30% or something?
· 01:04:019 - Add a red timing section here just to fix the metronome.

Hard-
Nothing to poke at

Normal-
01:58:725 (1,2) - This spacing is a tad too close imo.

Taiko-
Well, the SB pulsations like 00:53:369, 01:41:068 and 01:14:597 are kinda extreme fur the song, I mean, the maximum size and the time on the screen is too much imo. That's up to you though.
00:53:369 - Check kanpy's name, it has two layers from here and up to 01:14:597, and one is bigger than the other (making the SB look kinda awkward)
01:48:127 - Check Kana's name here and up to 02:05:774, it has two layers here too, one is bigger and also has a different fading.

I love what you did with the sliderticks, let me know when you're done.
Kaona
☆彡
rrtyui
DJPopppppppppp>w<
Topic Starter
DJPop

Krisom wrote:

General-
· The 20% volume sections at the end of the song might be a tad to soft. Make it 30% or something?
Fixed.
· 01:04:019 - Add a red timing section here just to fix the metronome.
Added.

Normal-
01:58:725 (1,2) - This spacing is a tad too close imo.
Fixed.

Taiko-
Well, the SB pulsations like 00:53:369, 01:41:068 and 01:14:597 are kinda extreme fur the song, I mean, the maximum size and the time on the screen is too much imo. That's up to you though.
Fixed.
00:53:369 - Check kanpy's name, it has two layers from here and up to 01:14:597, and one is bigger than the other (making the SB look kinda awkward)
Fixed.
01:48:127 - Check Kana's name here and up to 02:05:774, it has two layers here too, one is bigger and also has a different fading.
Fixed.
Osu Tatakae Ouendan
Star'd
-myun-
star 8-)
Ksaice
nice~
Krisom
Rechecked, everything seems nice and tidy.
It's dangerous to go alone, so take this (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Rucker
:D
Andrea
Some IRC Mod.

- Reduced the Approach Rate by 1 tick on Normal.
- Centered the Difficulty Settings on Taiko difficulty.
- Changed the Background Colour on Taiko difficulty from Yellow to Black.

Ranked~
net45291
RANKED !! :D
Mitiai
wow. Nice map :)
senaya
there is a version with real chorus, if someone is interested
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mJxaKOGy_UA

nice map ;)
arien666
;_;
Sorry for not checking this song orz
Forgive me please orz
artpiggo
so rapid ranked map of yours. congratz :3
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