KanaRin wrote:

[Normal]
01:16:803 (x) - Add a Note & clap here sounds better?
Added.
02:12:833 (1) - Add Finish at the frist of the slider? No hitsounds have a bit boring.
No cymbals there.
02:19:892 (1) - ^
No cymbals there.
02:26:950 (1) - ^
No cymbals there.

[Hard]
- Snapping x1!
Fixed.
00:39:251 (3) - Add Finish at the first of the slider? Sounds better.
No cymbals there.
00:42:781 (3) - ^
No cymbals there.
00:46:310 (3) - ^
No cymbals there.
01:25:186 (3) - ^
No cymbals there.
01:28:715 (3) - ^
No cymbals there.
01:32:245 (3) - ^
No cymbals there.
02:12:833 (1) - ^
No cymbals there.
02:19:892 (1) - ^
No cymbals there.
02:26:950 (1) - ^
No cymbals there.

Magical Pokie wrote:

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00:48:736- this note too early
Chorus synced.

IceBeam wrote:

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00:28:663 (1) - Eh,well,I'm mosty agree that there's enough time to read,but still..yes,beginners may click earlier and it looks kinda weird,anyway.The only thing I could suggest,if you don't want to remap this pattern in a better way, is to flip it horizontally,as you used some little jumps before,it won't cause much probs,I think.
Fixed.

00:48:736 (5) - It's out of rhytm,really D: Move it to 00:48:957.
Extended repeat slider instead.
01:34:009 (5) - ^ Continue to 01:34:891.
Extended repeat slider instead.
01:48:127 (1) - I'd add finish.
X
01:53:421 (2) - Too close to previous object.
Fixed.
01:55:186 (1) - ^
Fixed.
01:56:951 (2) - ^
Fixed.

Now I have a feeling that patterns are more important for you then rhytm,rules and etc.
But really,it's all about your creativity.I agree that sometimes there isn't much choice to make another patterns,but it doesn't mean that you must break all rules to follow symmetria and make cute sliders.That's why I hope you will fix spacing/rhytm lacks I've pointed above.
This is an easy mapset, there is not much choice to make the map looks nice.
I'll focus on other things more than symmetry patterns if I make very hard maps.

And also,just my opinion about finishes and hitsounds overall.I'm mostly agree with KanaRin's suggestions,in the moments like 02:19:891 you really should add finish,not because there's a cymbal or anything,just because it sounds better,much better with it.Without finishes,such repetitive music sounds a bit boring and monotonous.
People have different tastes anyway. For me, I don't mind hitwhistles or hitclaps, but I don't like hitfinishes on the other places that doesn't heard in the song. They usually sounds weird (this map too).

[Hard]
02:37:649 (4) - Remove this note,please,it's completely out.
Flute sound there, easily noticeable.
02:52:375 (3,4) - New combo due to changed spacing?
Play fine.

1. From the second offset (00:53:369 - ) to the end of the song, your offset seems 10~15ms late. Try to add 10~20ms on all offsets except the first one.
2. Try to find a good comboburst? orz orz orz I'm sure this anime have so much artworks already so you should be abble to find a good one of Mami to do it.
3. Try to find some cool guest diff? :3

1. Hp Drain and Overall Difficulty -1 maybe?
2. 00:14:104 (4,5,6,1) - Hum there's more spacing on this part, fix it?Especially at 00:15:427 (6,1) -
   00:18:075 (1,2,3,4,5) - select this pattern and go some grid down to fix this? :3
3. 00:24:693 (4,5,6) - Well same here for the spacing since it's a copy paste.
4. 00:28:663 (1,2,3,4) - Here I think the spacing is a bit low.
5. 00:48:736 (5) - A bit hard to hit, why don't you make a slider like on [Hard]?
6. 01:00:039 (5,1) - Fix the spacing? A bit to high. (but try to not put (1) over the slider (3) :3 )
7. 01:10:627 (5,1) - Same here since it's a copy paste
8. 01:21:656 (1,2,3) - Reduce a bit the spacing for those 3 sliders?
9. 01:37:539 (2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Uh...Reduce the spacing in this part? Especially 01:42:833 (4,5) - and 01:46:803 (8,9) -
10. 01:51:656 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Try to make a more regular spacing on this part?
11. 01:56:951 (2,1) - Reduce spacing?
12. 02:01:362 (3,1) - ^
13. 02:21:656 (4) - Tiny stack error.
14. 02:30:480 (1,2) - Make a shape for those slider so you can reduce the spacing between them?
15. 02:28:715 (4) - Same here since it's copy paste
16. 02:32:245 (2,1) - Reduce spacing?
17. 02:37:539 (1,2,3,4) - ^
18. 02:44:598 (1,2) - ^ (The spacing is x1,18 on this part without the bpm change :3)
19. 02:52:375 (1,2,1) - Well I don't think this is a good thing for the easier diff but I won't ask you to change it.

• Nothing to say, great map <3

ykcarrot wrote:

Why do you use mute slidertick? Also slidertick rate 2 really fits at music IMO. Try to use this file.
Yeah, there are high-hats in every red tick, except just one section(02:47:271 (5)).
You need to mute some of ticks. You can use Normal C1 for muting slidertick. Don't be lazy! >w<
Thanks for the idea

By the way, I'd like to add some whistles in the map.. It's so flat.
Added in few parts.

Kurosanyan wrote:

[General]

1. From the second offset (00:53:369 - ) to the end of the song, your offset seems 10~15ms late. Try to add 10~20ms on all offsets except the first one.
   Add 10~20ms? Sounds too late for me.
2. Try to find a good comboburst? orz orz orz I'm sure this anime have so much artworks already so you should be abble to find a good one of Mami to do it.
   Added.
3. Try to find some cool guest diff? :3
   Sorry, I don't take osu! guest diff for this song

[Normal]

1. Hp Drain and Overall Difficulty -1 maybe?
   Fixed.
2. 00:14:104 (4,5,6,1) - Hum there's more spacing on this part, fix it?
   Distance snap checked and they're fine.
   Especially at 00:15:427 (6,1) - 00:18:075 (1,2,3,4,5) - select this pattern and go some grid down to fix this? :3
   Fixed.
3. 00:24:693 (4,5,6) - Well same here for the spacing since it's a copy paste.
   I think they're fine.
4. 00:28:663 (1,2,3,4) - Here I think the spacing is a bit low.
   Spacing is not necessary to be equaled in the whole map. Just pay attention how playable are they.
5. 00:48:736 (5) - A bit hard to hit, why don't you make a slider like on [Hard]?
   Fixed.
6. 01:00:039 (5,1) - Fix the spacing? A bit to high. (but try to not put (1) over the slider (3) :3 )
   Fixed.
7. 01:10:627 (5,1) - Same here since it's a copy paste
   Fixed.
8. 01:21:656 (1,2,3) - Reduce a bit the spacing for those 3 sliders?
   Fixed.
9. 01:37:539 (2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Uh...Reduce the spacing in this part? Especially 01:42:833 (4,5) - and 01:46:803 (8,9) -
   X
10. 01:51:656 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Try to make a more regular spacing on this part?
    X
11. 01:56:951 (2,1) - Reduce spacing?
    X
12. 02:01:362 (3,1) - ^
    X
13. 02:21:656 (4) - Tiny stack error.
    Fixed.
14. 02:30:480 (1,2) - Make a shape for those slider so you can reduce the spacing between them?
    X
15. 02:28:715 (4) - Same here since it's copy paste
    Fixed.
16. 02:32:245 (2,1) - Reduce spacing?
    X
17. 02:37:539 (1,2,3,4) - ^
    X
18. 02:44:598 (1,2) - ^ (The spacing is x1,18 on this part without the bpm change :3)
    Fixed.
19. 02:52:375 (1,2,1) - Well I don't think this is a good thing for the easier diff but I won't ask you to change it.
    Fixed.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Hard
00:16:751 (4) - reduce the volume for this? the whistles feel a lil' bit too loud here
00:20:722 (5,6) - ^
01:02:686 (5,1,2) - ^
01:06:656 (7,8) - ^
01:35:333 (7,8,1) - ^
02:40:627 (1,2,3) - ^
Reduced and replaced the hitsound file.

00:48:736 (4) - start this at 00:48:516 - extend it to 00:49:398 - , add a clap to start and end
Changed in another way.
01:01:362 (4,5) - these 2 slider are kinda ugly... use less sliderpoints for those
Cannot reduce slider tick rate any more.
02:37:318 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it like this, the stream feels really weird otherwise. http://puu.sh/1R7x
ok ok >.< since most people point this out.
02:42:612 (1,2,3) - remove whistles from 1 and 2
Removed.

Normal
00:38:810 - add note + clap -- it's just asking to be there.
Added.

AngelHoney wrote:

Hard
00:48:736 (4) - change rhythm like this ? http://puu.sh/1R89
Changed in another way.
00:53:369 - maybe BPM 132 ?
133 sounds better.
00:57:403 - offset +20ms(57423) ?
Fixed.
01:00:039 - offset +10ms(60039) ?
Fixed.
01:38:862 (6) - return+1 ?
X
02:44:598 - offset 164648ms , bpm 67 ?
Fixed.

Sumisola wrote:

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01:17:686 - (4) - new combo
Fixed.
02:08:862 - (4) - new combo
Fixed.
02:09:744 - (1) - delete new combo
Fixed.
02:15:921 - (4) - new combo
X
02:16:803 - (1) - delete new combo
X
02:46:375 - (3,4,5) - arranging them in a line or a triangle may be better???
Fixed.


[Hard]
00:03:957 - add a note
00:04:839 - ^
00:05:722 - ^
00:06:163 - ^
00:06:604 - ^
00:07:045 - ^
I don't map before 00:07:486

00:21:383 (6) - move this note to the next white line or add a note on the next white line
X
00:34:398 (6) - how about change it into a 1/1 return slider?
X
00:48:516 - how about add a note here?
Fixed.
01:20:333 (8) - change it to a 1/2 return slider?
X
01:24:303 (4) - ^
X
01:58:053 (6) - spacing? or just in propose?
Proposed
02:11:509 (8) - change it to 3 single circle?
X
02:25:627 (8) - ^
X

HeatKai wrote:

[normal]
00:09:251 (3) - spacing
X
00:14:986 (5) - ^
X
00:19:840 (3) - ^
X
00:25:575 (5) - ^
X
00:28:663 (1) - I wonder if this okay :\ because the spacing is so bad but its shape nice with other sliders.
It's OK
01:07:990 (1) - spacing
X
01:15:931 (2) - end of the slider put finish
X
01:17:696 (4) - spacing
X
01:47:696 (9) - new combo
Fixed.
01:48:137 (1) - remove new combo
Fixed.
02:52:830 (1) - finish
X

[hard]
00:13:222 (4) - new combo
Added.
00:21:383 (6) - remove whistle
X
00:23:810 (5) - add whistle
X
00:30:207 (5) - remove whistle , add finish
X
00:31:751 (1) - remove clap , add whistle :3
X
01:34:681 (6) - at the starting remove whistle , add clap
X
02:18:137 (7) - new combo
X
02:52:719 (1) - finish
X

the Kanpakyin name , please use darker colour.
because cannot see his name clearly :\
Kanarin name is clear.
Kanpakyin not clear
Fixed.

Mok wrote:

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00:24:692 (4,5) - Aren't cuter like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/85959
Fixed.

Krisom wrote:

General-
· The 20% volume sections at the end of the song might be a tad to soft. Make it 30% or something?
Fixed.
· 01:04:019 - Add a red timing section here just to fix the metronome.
Added.

Normal-
01:58:725 (1,2) - This spacing is a tad too close imo.
Fixed.

Taiko-
Well, the SB pulsations like 00:53:369, 01:41:068 and 01:14:597 are kinda extreme fur the song, I mean, the maximum size and the time on the screen is too much imo. That's up to you though.
Fixed.
00:53:369 - Check kanpy's name, it has two layers from here and up to 01:14:597, and one is bigger than the other (making the SB look kinda awkward)
Fixed.
01:48:127 - Check Kana's name here and up to 02:05:774, it has two layers here too, one is bigger and also has a different fading.
Fixed.