yay Toradora :<
So many guest diffs. How about you make more diffs on your own for the next maps? :>
GladiHmm just my opinion but I don't quite like the soft hitsounds.
01:19:651 (1,2,3,4) - Would be awesome if those were in Normal, and would be even better if there was a finish at (4).
01:20:776 (2) - Have a Normal Finish here.
01:22:276 (1) - ^
01:23:776 (1) - ^
01:25:651 (1,2,3,4) - Normal hitsounds + finish at (4)
Sounds much better.
Ami-InsaneSoft hitsounds again... eh... I'd use more Normals. :<
Reduce overall volume by 10% ?
00:04:089 (6) - spread this out? I kinda dislike this stack after a triplet...
00:13:651 (1,2,3,4,5) - this combo doesn't look that great. how about moving (4) 5 grids down?
00:17:964 (5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ahh... I hate it when triplets are that close to each other. Can't tell them apart. Spread them out a lil' bit more?
00:26:589 (1) - add clap
00:36:901 (1,2,3,4) - geh... stack them normally or spread them out completly? also, there should be a 5th note at 00:37:276
00:39:339 (3) - 1 grid up
00:46:464 (4) - 1 grid right ... also, consider making this slider into a longer, single-repeat slider
00:50:964 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - mad jumps right after a spinner are no-like for me D:
00:59:776 (2) - 1 grid down
00:59:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - kinda offbeat, arrange it lilke this
01:15:901 (6) - 1 grid right
01:16:276 (1) - huge jump :<
01:17:401 (5) - 1 grid left
01:18:339 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - clusterfuck-combo... me no-likey.
01:21:339 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - wtf is that? ugly as hell.
animaskThis is a Hard? Feels more like a Normal to me... At least it doesn't feel like a Hard.
Reduce volume by 10%
Try to use more claps to keep a consistent hitsound pattern.
00:05:776 - add a note riiiiiight here.
00:11:964 - ^
00:22:651 - bad break. just copy-paste 00:21:339 (1,2,3) - 1 more time.
01:20:776 (1) - Whaaaat... Just slap a 10 second long spinner in here... right...
Wait... no. Remove that spinner and map this part. Mr. Lazy.
HellzeroVolume - 10%
since it's supposed to be a Normal, it's not necessary, but...
SPOILER00:15:151 - add note
00:16:651 - add note
00:16:651 - add note
00:19:839 - I'd like this break to be mapped.
00:26:964 (3) - move to 00:27:151 -
starting from 00:37:464 (1) - Kinda bad clap pattern. Nothing in the music suggests a clap here. Do this instead:
00:37:464 (1) - remove clap from start, add finish instead, add clap to end
00:38:214 (2) - remove clap from start, add clap to end
00:38:964 (3) - ^
00:39:714 (4) - ^
00:40:464 (1) - remove clap
00:40:651 (2) - add clap to repeat
00:41:401 (3) - ^
00:45:901 (1) - ^
00:46:464 (2) - remove clap
00:46:839 (3) - add clap
00:47:214 (4) - remove clap
and so on. Please... do that. You just have to move most claps back by 1 white tick.
01:14:776 (1) - add finish
01:16:276 (2) - ^
01:20:776 (3) - ^
01:22:276 (4) - ^
TetaVolume -10%
Too many finishes in here... at least place them where it makes more sense, like where the music has a similar sound...
I guess it's fine...
OK... too much which disturbs me, so I can't star this map yet. Good luck, though.
long mod is long