This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, August 25, 2012 at 7:03:42 PM

Artist: ShaNa
Title: Lonely Person (TV Size)
Source: Fairy Tail
Tags: siu_leaf wendy sherrie__fay
BPM: 150
Filesize: 5340kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (0.86 stars, 63 notes)
2. Hard (4.74 stars, 250 notes)
3. LeAfLet's Normal (3.2 stars, 105 notes)

Download: ShaNa - Lonely Person (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Fairy Tail ED 7
Love Wendy<3

~Process~
easy - 100%
Leaflet's Normal - 100%
hard - 100%
lyric sb- 100%

Thanks for all modders >_<!!!!! Help me so much!
Thanks sherrie__fay for making wonderful effect and the refining of SB!

SORRY TO ALL MODDERS BUT INSANE DIFF SEEMS A BIT OVERMAPPED. I AM NOT ABLE TO FIX IT I DECIDED TO DELETE IT SORRY AGAIN TO ALL WHO HAVE MOD THIS DIFF I'm REALLY SORRY ABOUT THIS..

精品！

offset應該放在168
kbps應該要在128~192之內, 你256的kbps太高了

[easy]
00:13:590 (3) - 上1格
00:28:790 (2) - 落1格
00:34:390 (2,3,4) - 這裏有點微妙.. 通常小葉做這類的版面是將在打直或打橫的slider複製到其他位置, 然後旋轉30, 60...等, 再放好排版
00:47:990 (1) - 不建議有jump

[Hard]
00:01:968 (4,5,6) - 左1格
00:06:768 (8) - 左1格同落1格
00:06:968 (9) - 上面有跟住做的話, 這個左1格
00:07:768 (1,2) - 把(1)推上一格, 把(2)推左一格和上一格
00:11:768 (3) - snapping
00:14:168 (1,3) - (1)上1格, (3)落1格
00:24:168 (1,2) - 右1格
00:26:168 (9) - 落1格
00:30:168 (5) - 右1格
00:31:968 (6) - 左1格
00:45:168 (1,2,3) - 把之前的3個note複製過來旋轉180度不好嗎.. (1)的位置不變
00:45:768 (1,2) - 建議和00:46:168 (1,2)的間距一樣
01:00:968 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 上1格?

[insane]
看你的圖不斷1.6x > 1.7x > 1.6x
00:29:968 (8) - 「 2.05x > 1.73x 」<---- (滴汗
其實呢.. 圈圈密的時候Lv3的格格會做出輕微的間距問題, 建議放完note後用Lv4去整理1下
喜歡的話Lv3也可以, 不相差太大的話嗯嗯嗯
所以這個diff先不mod了

Star~ >w<

SiU_LeAf wrote:

offset應該放在168
kbps應該要在128~192之內, 你256的kbps太高了 file size 也不太大。我想問題不大。。

[easy]
00:13:590 (3) - 上1格 fixed
00:28:790 (2) - 落1格 fixed
00:34:390 (2,3,4) - 這裏有點微妙.. 通常小葉做這類的版面是將在打直或打橫的slider複製到其他位置, 然後旋轉30, 60...等, 再放好排版 要轉得太標準的話。snap起來不太好看。先留著
00:47:990 (1) - 不建議有jump fixed

[Hard]
00:01:968 (4,5,6) - 左1格 fixed
00:06:768 (8) - 左1格同落1格 fixed
00:06:968 (9) - 上面有跟住做的話, 這個左1格 fixed
00:07:768 (1,2) - 把(1)推上一格, 把(2)推左一格和上一格 fixed
00:11:768 (3) - snapping fixed
00:14:168 (1,3) - (1)上1格, (3)落1格 fixed
00:24:168 (1,2) - 右1格 fixed
00:26:168 (9) - 落1格 fixed
00:30:168 (5) - 右1格 fixed
00:31:968 (6) - 左1格 fixed
00:45:168 (1,2,3) - 把之前的3個note複製過來旋轉180度不好嗎.. (1)的位置不變 fixed
00:45:768 (1,2) - 建議和00:46:168 (1,2)的間距一樣 fixed
01:00:968 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 上1格? fixed上一格+右一格

[insane]
看你的圖不斷1.6x > 1.7x > 1.6x 嗯...其實這個是1.6>1.7>1.8........嘛,反正蛋痛的東西是留給觸手玩的= =
00:29:968 (8) - 「 2.05x > 1.73x 」<---- (滴汗 fixed
其實呢.. 圈圈密的時候Lv3的格格會做出輕微的間距問題, 建議放完note後用Lv4去整理1下
喜歡的話Lv3也可以, 不相差太大的話嗯嗯嗯
所以這個diff先不mod了

非常非常感謝小葉的modding 和 IRC pre-modding/timing
話說是怎餵兩粒kd的

star~

hi~>w</

[General]:

1. Title: Lonely Person (TV size)
2. Source:Fairy Tail
   remove Fairy Tail from Tag
3. mp3 bit rate 192~128kbps I will fix the mp3 for you~
   http://puu.sh/1z9x no need to chage the timing. just replace this mp3 and full submit
4. delete osb

[Insane]:

1. 00:18:768 (8) - New combo
2. 00:22:868 (2) - delete note?
3. 00:25:568 (9) - New combo
4. 00:28:068 (7) - delete note?
5. 00:59:568 (1) - Remove New combo
6. 01:14:968 (14) - delete note?
7. 01:18:366 - Green line re snap maybe 01:18:368 -

[Hard]:

1. HP-1?
2. 00:51:568 (1) - Remove New combo
3. 00:51:768 (1) - ^
4. 00:59:968 (1) - ^
5. 01:11:968 (1,1,1) - ^
6. 01:18:366 - Green line re snap

[Easy]:

1. 01:04:590 (1) - spin end 01:06:190 -
2. 01:18:690 (1) - spin end 01:23:190 -
3. 00:53:986 - Green line re snap maybe 00:53:990 -
4. 01:18:386 - ^ 01:18:390 -
   Fine~

need a Normal to fill the gap between Easy and Hard imo
good luck
+star~

S o r d a wrote:

hi~>w</

[General]:

1. Title: Lonely Person (TV size) fixed
2. Source:Fairy Tail fixed
   remove Fairy Tail from Tag fixed
3. mp3 bit rate 192~128kbps I will fix the mp3 for you~
   http://puu.sh/1z9x no need to chage the timing. just replace this mp3 and full submit fixed! thanks a lot
4. delete osb fixed

[Insane]:

1. 00:18:768 (8) - New combo fixed
2. 00:22:868 (2) - delete note? fixed
3. 00:25:568 (9) - New combo fixed
4. 00:28:068 (7) - delete note? not this one~but deleted 00:29:468
5. 00:59:568 (1) - Remove New combo fixed
6. 01:14:968 (14) - delete note? I think it is OK, keep it first.
7. 01:18:366 - Green line re snap maybe 01:18:368 - placed on 01:17:968~

[Hard]:

1. HP-1? fixed
2. 00:51:568 (1) - Remove New combo fixed
3. 00:51:768 (1) - ^ fixed
4. 00:59:968 (1) - ^ fixed
5. 01:11:968 (1,1,1) - ^ fixed
6. 01:18:366 - Green line re snap fixed

[Easy]:

1. 01:04:590 (1) - spin end 01:06:190 - I think the effect is better here o_o..
2. 01:18:690 (1) - spin end 01:23:190 - fixed
3. 00:53:986 - Green line re snap maybe 00:53:990 - fixed~great observation XD
4. 01:18:386 - ^ 01:18:390 - fixed
   Fine~

need a Normal to fill the gap between Easy and Hard imo haha...lazy to do so, maybe someone wants to do it XD?
good luck
+star~

Thank you very much for the modding and star!

thx reqs~

mapset is good!!

[General]
so,loud hitsounds.

+star~

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

mapset is good!!

[General]
so,loud hitsounds.

+star~

Thank you !

I like loud hitsounds D:
maybe this is my style of making maps~haha
but fine~ I will try to make them a 90% or lower in some section~

done.
因為你的音效太不合小葉的波長所以不用了
No kd

Download: ShaNa - Lonely Person (TV size) (chungskale) [LeAfLet's Nor.].osu

[General]
Countdown is useless. Please remove it from all diffs (Song Setup --> Storyboarding --> Uncheck "Enable countdown").

[Skin]
You should add score-comma, score-dot, score-percent and score-x because you have custom score number.

[Easy]
00:51:190 (1) - End at 00:52:790 - ? (because it ends too close to 00:53:990 (1) - )
01:04:590 (1) - End at 01:05:990 - ?

LeAfLet's Nor.
00:33:390 (5) - Add clap at end.
00:49:390 (4) - ^

[Hard]
Add some clap like LeAfLet's Nor.?
00:45:768 (1,2,1,2) - I think it's too difficult for a Hard. I suggest something like:
00:45:768 (1) - 3 grid up, 1 grid left (grid size level 3)
00:45:968 (2) - 1 grid down, 1 grid left
00:46:168 (1) - 2 grid up, 2 grid left
00:46:368 (2) - 2 grid down, 2 grid left

Nice map. Insane is a bit overmapped to me

Star~

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]
Countdown is useless. Please remove it from all diffs (Song Setup --> Storyboarding --> Uncheck "Enable countdown").

[Skin] fixed

[Easy]
00:51:190 (1) - End at 00:52:790 - ? (because it ends too close to 00:53:990 (1) - ) i think this one is still ok. the start of kiai so one white line gap is enough~
01:04:590 (1) - End at 01:05:990 - ? ^

LeAfLet's Nor.
00:33:390 (5) - Add clap at end.
00:49:390 (4) - ^

[Hard]
Add some clap like LeAfLet's Nor.? haha. I am not so good at using clap sound like her
00:45:768 (1,2,1,2) - I think it's too difficult for a Hard. I suggest something like:
00:45:768 (1) - 3 grid up, 1 grid left (grid size level 3)
00:45:968 (2) - 1 grid down, 1 grid left
00:46:168 (1) - 2 grid up, 2 grid left
00:46:368 (2) - 2 grid down, 2 grid left fixed~good idea

Nice map. Insane is a bit overmapped to me

Star~

thank you for modding :3

[Easy]
00:43:990 (5) - Don't particularly like where this ends, but if it's fine, that's alright.

01:04:590 (1) - This spinner is a bit close to the next note. That's fine, but in easy it may be hard for some people...
[Nor.]
Good :3

[Hard]
00:45:168 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - Huge difficulty jump ;_;

[Insane]
00:51:368 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - You started this on a red tick, so it feels strange, and the combos don't really match up to where the song is. Either move it to a white tick, or start it later, and shorten every other combo.

Feels a bit over-mapped too...


But well, these are all suggestions... I starred :3

update.

你應該把小葉的名字加在Tags裏.

Download: ShaNa - Lonely Person (TV size) (chungskale) [LeAfLet's Nor.].osu

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
00:43:990 (5) - Don't particularly like where this ends, but if it's fine, that's alright. fixed~maybe some misclick on it.

01:04:590 (1) - This spinner is a bit close to the next note. That's fine, but in easy it may be hard for some people...ok, spinner deleted
[Nor.]
Good :3

[Hard]
00:45:168 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - Huge difficulty jump ;_; :D

[Insane]
00:51:368 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - You started this on a red tick, so it feels strange, and the combos don't really match up to where the song is. Either move it to a white tick, or start it later, and shorten every other combo. fixed

Feels a bit over-mapped too... overmap is cool ! Well~i will make it easier


But well, these are all suggestions... I starred :3

thanks for suggestions and star

SiU_LeAf wrote:

update.

你應該把小葉的名字加在Tags裏.

收到~

requested by 小葉

[General]
1) source的"fairy tail", f和t要大階嗎?
2) 請在easy,hard,insane中也加audio lead-in 約1至2秒, 步驟為按f4 -> audio -> lead-in (seconds)
3) 個人意見，雖然知道soft-hitwhistle和soft-hitfinish有分別，但......玩的時候實在是不太能察覺的
4) 再者，或嘗試用附件的hitsound? (以下有關hitsound的mod都是以提供的hitsound為標準的)

[Easy]
1) 玩了頭幾秒就覺得你濫用左soft-hitwhistle果隻hitsound, 一般黎講，呢隻hitsound唔可以用得太密，個人建議，在一段結束後先用呢隻sound收尾會好d
2) 我嘗試用我提供ge hitsound重新演繹過呢個difficulty, 你睇下o唔ok，純粹參考，請隨便修改。
(另，kiai果part我盡量地保留返你d soft-hitfinish，唔想改太多style，但其實已經改左好多 Orz)
00:19:990 加一有whistle note? 及 00:20:790 加一有clap note? (因為easy難度的關係，或把00:19:990至00:20:790這3個notes變成一個有reverse的slider?)
00:33:590 (1) - remove new combo?
00:34:390 (2) - new combo?

[leaaflet's nor.]
msn + IRC modded

改呢2個diff改左我成2個幾鐘 Orz, 你試下參考下easy同normal ge hitsound，再改改hard同insane.. 如果有問題，歡迎搵我 (拍肩

Download: EASY+HITSOUNDx2.rar

update.

Thanks Vikon!! >.<

Download: LeAfLet.rar

Star～

good map

Vikon wrote:

requested by 小葉

[General]
1) source的"fairy tail", f和t要大階嗎? fixed
2) 請在easy,hard,insane中也加audio lead-in 約1至2秒, 步驟為按f4 -> audio -> lead-in (seconds) fixed
3) 個人意見，雖然知道soft-hitwhistle和soft-hitfinish有分別，但......玩的時候實在是不太能察覺的
4) 再者，或嘗試用附件的hitsound? (以下有關hitsound的mod都是以提供的hitsound為標準的)

[Easy]
1) 玩了頭幾秒就覺得你濫用左soft-hitwhistle果隻hitsound, 一般黎講，呢隻hitsound唔可以用得太密，個人建議，在一段結束後先用呢隻sound收尾會好d 如果轉用第個hitsound, 成個效果就唔同晒, 姐係style 都唔係而家呢種。。所以只可以大量減少使用, 盡量做返用黎收尾.
2) 我嘗試用我提供ge hitsound重新演繹過呢個difficulty, 你睇下o唔ok，純粹參考，請隨便修改。
(另，kiai果part我盡量地保留返你d soft-hitfinish，唔想改太多style，但其實已經改左好多 Orz)
00:19:990 加一有whistle note? 及 00:20:790 加一有clap note? (因為easy難度的關係，或把00:19:990至00:20:790這3個notes變成一個有reverse的slider?)
00:33:590 (1) - remove new combo? fixed
00:34:390 (2) - new combo? fixed


改呢2個diff改左我成2個幾鐘 Orz, 你試下參考下easy同normal ge hitsound，再改改hard同insane.. 如果有問題，歡迎搵我 (拍肩

首先唔該晒你既建議同整埋例子T_T!
我決定左easy都留返呢種style, 唔用你個d hitsound了。因為始終hard同insane 我都係想保留。

hard 同insane 我已經係開頭到用少左~
但係我想保留preview point後面個d, 我既感覺係玩起上黎會投入d.. o_o;

你好

[General]
- 你必須加入approachcircle.png和spinner-approachcircle.png (可以複製黏貼默認skin的)
- 請把歌詞storyboard的空白部分去掉, 會造成較老舊的電腦lag
- 統一Audio lead-in, 目前每個難度都不一樣, 另外建議使用2000, 否則在Easy上來不及跑完hp-bar
- 音效實在是失衡的太嚴重了, 雖然你用的這個finish是好聽也搭配歌, 但是因為迴音的關係顯得特別那啥..刻意顯擺? 好歹也是有節奏感夠強的背景鼓的一首歌, 挑些地方(KIAI內佳)放clap吧; 尤其是Hard/Insane這種歌詞密度較高的, 節奏感不夠強, 聽聽看你Normal的guest diff作者對音效的處理吧~

[Easy]
- 建議開著distance snap檢查一次排版讓整張圖都是1.2x, 我現在只幫你提一點看起來就很明顯spacing error的部分
<00:09:990> (1) 去掉此點的finish
<00:14:390> (3) ^
<00:16:390> (1) ^
<00:17:590> (1,1,2) keep the same spacing
<00:21:590> (3) finish改放起頭

[Normal]
- 第一段有些因為切換sound sample set而導致突然跑出來的sliderslide音效, 建議你修正一下 (6條綠線)
- AR+1~2,
<00:59:990> (1) new combo改擺(2) sync lyric
<01:12:790> (1) ^

[Hard]
- 去掉音效上的意見, 蠻滿意的難度
<01:02:190> (7,8,9) spacing error

[Insane]
- HP drain -1 (有些1.5拍的blank扣的頗兇)
- 是沒什麼違規的地方, 但我個人覺得你的stream似乎是為了讓你的難度看起來像是個[Insane]硬是加進來的, 三個以上的1/4擺在一起唯一我覺得能接受的地方是52:390-53:590這串, 其他的部分聽歌曲沒有stream的感覺, 你的hitsound又實在太輕了, 玩起來並不是那麼令人滿意, 帶難度進map的方式其實很多譬如說jump, 建議你減少一點1/4的比例

star

[Easy]
00:21:590 (3) - add finish
00:27:990 (1) - ^
00:39:190 (4) - ^
00:51:190 (1) - end 00:53:190
01:18:590 (1) - start 01:18:990

[Normal]
01:19:390 (1) - end 01:23:190 ?

[Hard]
AR6?
00:35:790 (1) - remove new combo
00:37:190 (4) - new combo
00:38:390 (1) - remove new combo

[Insane]
00:02:790 (1) - new combo
00:55:190 (1) - new combo?
00:59:990 (1) - remove new combo
01:03:790 (1) - new combo?

ヽ(●´w｀○)ﾉ☆

loveFantasy wrote:

你好 HI~

[General]
- 你必須加入approachcircle.png和spinner-approachcircle.png (可以複製黏貼默認skin的) 加了~
- 請把歌詞storyboard的空白部分去掉, 會造成較老舊的電腦lag ok
- 統一Audio lead-in, 目前每個難度都不一樣, 另外建議使用2000, 否則在Easy上來不及跑完hp-bar ok
- 音效實在是失衡的太嚴重了, 雖然你用的這個finish是好聽也搭配歌, 但是因為迴音的關係顯得特別那啥..刻意顯擺? 好歹也是有節奏感夠強的背景鼓的一首歌, 挑些地方(KIAI內佳)放clap吧; 尤其是Hard/Insane這種歌詞密度較高的, 節奏感不夠強, 聽聽看你Normal的guest diff作者對音效的處理吧~ 好的。。我想過了,我加了個有回音又重一點的clap。感覺應該會更可以接受?

[Easy]
- 建議開著distance snap檢查一次排版讓整張圖都是1.2x, 我現在只幫你提一點看起來就很明顯spacing error的部分 我有失誤了" 開始的1.2x是錯的,我改回整個排版1.0x~
<00:09:990> (1) 去掉此點的finish fixed
<00:14:390> (3) ^ fixed
<00:16:390> (1) ^ fixed
<00:17:590> (1,1,2) keep the same spacing fixed
<00:21:590> (3) finish改放起頭 fixed

[Normal]
- 第一段有些因為切換sound sample set而導致突然跑出來的sliderslide音效, 建議你修正一下 (6條綠線)
- AR+1~2,
<00:59:990> (1) new combo改擺(2) sync lyric
<01:12:790> (1) ^

[Hard]
- 去掉音效上的意見, 蠻滿意的難度
<01:02:190> (7,8,9) spacing error fixed

[Insane]
- HP drain -1 (有些1.5拍的blank扣的頗兇) ok
- 是沒什麼違規的地方, 但我個人覺得你的stream似乎是為了讓你的難度看起來像是個[Insane]硬是加進來的, 三個以上的1/4擺在一起唯一我覺得能接受的地方是52:390-53:590這串, 其他的部分聽歌曲沒有stream的感覺, 你的hitsound又實在太輕了, 玩起來並不是那麼令人滿意, 帶難度進map的方式其實很多譬如說jump, 建議你減少一點1/4的比例 老實說。這個難度是我一時興奮做出來的XD 而有關jump的排列方法我實在不太在行。我盡量地試試減少連打,改成jump吧~

star

Insane, Hard preview point後的節奏大大加強了~
感謝建議!!!!

Lalarun wrote:

:oops:

[Easy]
00:21:590 (3) - add finish fixed
00:27:990 (1) - ^ fixed
00:39:190 (4) - ^ fixed
00:51:190 (1) - end 00:53:190 fixed
01:18:590 (1) - start 01:18:990 fixed

[Normal]
01:19:390 (1) - end 01:23:190 ?

[Hard]
AR6?
00:35:790 (1) - remove new combo fixed
00:37:190 (4) - new combo fixed
00:38:390 (1) - remove new combo fixed

[Insane]
00:02:790 (1) - new combo fixed
00:55:190 (1) - new combo? fixed
00:59:990 (1) - remove new combo fixed
01:03:790 (1) - new combo? fixed

ヽ(●´w｀○)ﾉ☆

Thank you (* >w<)b

说实话没什么值得mod的，我只是觉得normal有些地方难了，不过你有个简单的easy，所以没问题，hard有个jump的地方，我不是很理解，虽然音乐上可能会有些那种感觉，但是对于整个图来说并不适合，不过没有miss，所以倒也能接受，只是牵强的感觉。Insane，我完全感觉不到歌曲，从这个难度的排列和节奏上，感觉只是很生硬的在做这个难度。这个歌曲其实不适合做成这样。如果非要说，什么非常不喜欢的，就是skin吧，skin本身也没问题，就是打出300，100，50什么的，竟然是变小...通常都是变大的.这些都是个人感觉罢了。不用给我kds.

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

说实话没什么值得mod的，我只是觉得normal有些地方难了，不过你有个简单的easy，所以没问题，hard有个jump的地方，我不是很理解，虽然音乐上可能会有些那种感觉，但是对于整个图来说并不适合，不过没有miss，所以倒也能接受，只是牵强的感觉。Insane，我完全感觉不到歌曲，从这个难度的排列和节奏上，感觉只是很生硬的在做这个难度。这个歌曲其实不适合做成这样。如果非要说，什么非常不喜欢的，就是skin吧，skin本身也没问题，就是打出300，100，50什么的，竟然是变小...通常都是变大的.这些都是个人感觉罢了。不用给我kds.

呃。。
Insane 排列方面。想辦法改善中。
SKIN 方面。我想是我太習慣用這種了。
看來很多人也不喜歡這個。。
我應該會把他換回default的。

heya.

General
Both BG pics are super-low quality. Can you find better pics?

Insane
Decrase the volume. Avoid volume above 70%.
The hitsounds can be improved. Lemme fix them for you.
The whistles in the beginning are OK, but please redo the section with the claps.
The clap pattern goes like this:

00:28:790 (9) - clap. already there, good.
00:29:390 (3) - add clap.
00:29:590 (4) - remove clap.
00:30:990 (3) - add clap.
00:31:190 (4) - remove clap.
00:32:590 (3) - add clap.
00:32:790 (4) - remove clap-
00:33:590 (2) - add clap
00:33:990 (4) - remove clap
00:35:590 (1) - ^
00:35:790 (2) - add clap

and so on. this goes on the entire map. try to experiment a lil' bit around, trust me, it sounds much better!
If you want me to, call me ingame and I can update the map with improved hitsounds. Ain't I a nice guy?

The map itself is fine.

Hard
Decrase the volume. Avoid volume above 70%.
Same thing for the hitsounds as in Insane. It's better to learn how to do proper hitsounds. The map would be so much more fun with awesome hitsounds.

Leafnetl
00:26:390 (1) - bad spinner... start at 00:26:790 - end at 00:27:990 - and put some extra notes at 00:28:390 - and 00:28:790 -
00:31:990 - add clap to the slidertick
00:34:390 (1) - add whistle to repeat
00:35:590 (2) - ^
00:38:390 (6) - add clap. remove whistle
00:43:990 (1) - whistle to repeat
00:48:790 (4) - add whistle
00:53:990 (1) - add clap to 1st slidertick
00:55:790 (3) - add whitsle
01:00:390 (2,3) - ^
01:01:190 (5) - ^
01:03:590 (2) - ^
01:03:990 (3) - remove whistle
01:06:990 (2) - add whistle
01:07:590 (4) - ^
01:09:190 (6) - ^
01:11:190 (3,4,5,6) - trying to change the hitsound pattern... well, is fine, but it sounds bad IMO.
01:13:190 (2,3) - add whistle
01:13:990 (5) - ^
01:14:990 (7) - ^
01:16:590 (2) - ^
01:17:190 (4) - remove clap, add whistle
01:18:390 (9) - add clap to slidertick?


waahh... the mod turned out longer than I thought...

[LeAfLet's Nor.]
00:23:990 (1,2,3,4) - Not the LV of Normal
00:37:990 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ (Normal should not have combo 8 in a diff)
00:48:390 (2,3,4) - ^
00:46:790 (4,5,1) - ^
01:16:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

Other diff....
Do you mine me to help you to remake the sound effect? ><

I just change the sound effect, after some day help u to mod it. ><
too busy.

Download: ShaNa - Lonely Person (TV size) (chungskale) [Insane].osu

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

General
Both BG pics are super-low quality. Can you find better pics?

Decrase the volume. Avoid volume above 70%.
Same thing for the hitsounds as in Insane. It's better to learn how to do proper hitsounds. The map would be so much more fun with awesome hitsounds.

So difficult to find a nice BG pics orz..
weak in using hitsounds lllOrz..
Learning to do better

KingsAL2 wrote:

I just change the sound effect, after some day help u to mod it. ><
too busy.

a lot of enthusiastic person help me to make an example 。A。!!
I am so happy LOL
i have made some changes already~maybe still too many sounds using in it?

General: nice beat. really liked playing insane, interesting ideas used. star already =)
easy:
00:39:990 (1) - jump in easy? omg?
00:40:790 (2) - why here finish? (or i am deaf and can't hear is the rhythm diferrent from previous?) anyway delete finish at the end and add whistle here 00:42:390 (3) -
00:43:990 (5) - add whistle
00:47:990 (1) - add whistle?
00:50:390 (3) - ^
01:06:390 (6,1) - maybe make clap at the beggining of slider 1?

normal:
00:06:590 (2) - this has 3 claps but why this only 1 clap?00:08:790 (1) -
00:26:390 (1) - maybe end spinner here than add circle 00:28:790 (x) -
00:39:190 (1) - here... finish doesn't really sounds like finish... =/
00:50:390 (1) - why nc?

Hard:
00:06:990 (9) - delete? (it just doesn't fit there >.< or maybe fit.. i don't know =/ it's up to you)
00:41:590 (8) - ^
00:44:390 (1,2,3,1,2) - ok those are fine... but don't you think that this 00:45:790 (1,2,1,2) - is too much? ( even if it's hard it mustn't me sooo hard)
00:53:590 (1) - hmmm maybe delete this, and just make spinner longer? i think that would be better.

insane:
as i previously said, very good insane tricky but i liked it. (first try got fc, second, SS)
don't think that it needs change. For me it's fine now. Maybe mat's will find smth wrong there but i don't think so.

P.S. oh and sory for so long mod, i was very busy

nicktoons wrote:

General: nice beat. really liked playing insane, interesting ideas used. star already =)
easy:
00:39:990 (1) - jump in easy? omg? ooops. fixed
00:40:790 (2) - why here finish? (or i am deaf and can't hear is the rhythm diferrent from previous?) anyway delete finish at the end and add whistle here 00:42:390 (3) - fixed
00:43:990 (5) - add whistle fixed
00:47:990 (1) - add whistle? there is a finish on 00:47:190 (6) .So i'm not going to add this one~
00:50:390 (3) - ^ fixed
01:06:390 (6,1) - maybe make clap at the beggining of slider 1? a bit late. keep first.

Hard:
00:06:990 (9) - delete? (it just doesn't fit there >.< or maybe fit.. i don't know =/ it's up to you)
00:41:590 (8) - ^ I will keep it~ i think like something missing when it is deleted
00:44:390 (1,2,3,1,2) - ok those are fine... but don't you think that this 00:45:790 (1,2,1,2) - is too much? ( even if it's hard it mustn't me sooo hard) OK, fixed
00:53:590 (1) - hmmm maybe delete this, and just make spinner longer? i think that would be better. fixed~

insane:
as i previously said, very good insane tricky but i liked it. (first try got fc, second, SS) <.< thank you and nice SS!
don't think that it needs change. For me it's fine now. Maybe mat's will find smth wrong there but i don't think so.

P.S. oh and sory for so long mod, i was very busy

thank you >.>!
the modding has been just on time since the hitsounds were changed a lot in these few days

[general]
The audio-lead-in is not unique.

[Insane]
00:13:390 (10) - whistle?
00:16:390 (1,2,3) - 唔知點解唔係幾夾...

[bakaleaf's normal]
make some hitsound loud-soft variation? x_x

no kds

quick mod only here orz so tired

Download: ShaNa - Lonely Person (TV size) (chungskale) [LeAfLet's Nor.].osu

=w="

最后一个难度 拉条速度1.0太慢了吧o.o
歌词做的很劣质的感觉诶o.ob 有空用心做的好看一些吧
每个难度的combo 颜色不一样
大概说一下而已no kds
歌很好听0v0 加油/~
☆ミ

你好

[General]
最后的转圈结束在01:22:390

[SB]
13.png和14.png一起消失的，其他的歌词都是一句一句消失O.O

[Easy]
00:24:390 (1,2,3) - 节奏不对
00:33:590 (8) - new combo
00:37:590 (3) - ^
00:56:390 (3) - ^
01:18:990 (1) - 开始在01:18:790

[Hard]
00:28:590 (2) - 移至00:28:790
00:28:990 (1) - remove
00:29:190 (2) - new combo

[Insane]
AR-1
有些地方的三连感觉有点微妙
音效是vivicat的建议
00:01:390(1) - remove whistle
(2) - clap
00:04:190(3) - remove whistle
00:05:790(6) - ^
00:10:190(2) - ^
00:16:990(3) - 拉条的折返点^
00:17:790(1) - remove new combo
00:18:390( ) - new combo
00:19:190(1) - remove new combo,remove clap
00:22:990(2) - 开头的finish去掉
00:24:790(4) - new combo
00:39:190(9) - add whistle
00:52:790(1) - add clap
00:53:190(1) - ^
00:53:590(5) - 去掉clap，用普通whistle
00:02:190 (5,6,7) - 换成slider
00:07:190 (x) - add note
00:13:590 (x) - ^
00:16:490 (2) - remove
00:21:590 (6) - 换成slider，结束在00:21:790
00:21:990 (1,2,3) - 换成slider
00:41:790 (1) - remove
00:41:990 (2) - new combo
00:42:390 (1) - remove NC
00:43:390 (1) - remove
然后同上的new combo修改，间距也需要

加油star

Beren wrote:

你好

[General]
最后的转圈结束在01:22:390 fixed

[SB]
13.png和14.png一起消失的，其他的歌词都是一句一句消失O.O 那句歌詞太短了, 太快消失好像不太好。

[Easy]
00:24:390 (1,2,3) - 节奏不对 fixed
00:33:590 (8) - new combo fixed
00:37:590 (3) - ^ 不改這個~
00:56:390 (3) - ^ fixed
01:18:990 (1) - 开始在01:18:790 fixed

[Hard]
00:28:590 (2) - 移至00:28:790
00:28:990 (1) - remove 換成slider吧。
00:29:190 (2) - new combo 前面變成slider我想可以不用了

[Insane]
AR-1 fixed
有些地方的三连感觉有点微妙
音效是vivicat的建议
00:01:390(1) - remove whistle 好
(2) - clap 好
00:04:190(3) - remove whistle 好
00:05:790(6) - ^ 好
00:10:190(2) - ^ 好
00:16:990(3) - 拉条的折返点^ 好
00:17:790(1) - remove new combo 好
00:18:390( ) - new combo 好
00:19:190(1) - remove new combo,remove clap 好
00:22:990(2) - 开头的finish去掉 不改~
00:24:790(4) - new combo 好
00:39:190(9) - add whistle 好
00:52:790(1) - add clap 好
00:53:190(1) - ^ 好
00:53:590(5) - 去掉clap，用普通whistle 好
00:02:190 (5,6,7) - 换成slider 好
00:07:190 (x) - add note 好
00:13:590 (x) - ^ 不改~
00:16:490 (2) - remove 好
00:21:590 (6) - 换成slider，结束在00:21:790 好
00:21:990 (1,2,3) - 换成slider 好
00:41:790 (1) - remove 好
00:41:990 (2) - new combo 好
00:42:390 (1) - remove NC 好
00:43:390 (1) - remove 好
然后同上的new combo修改，间距也需要 好

加油star

感謝你們的modding

vivicat wrote:

最后一个难度 拉条速度1.0太慢了吧o.o
歌词做的很劣质的感觉诶o.ob 有空用心做的好看一些吧
每个难度的combo 颜色不一样
大概说一下而已no kds
歌很好听0v0 加油/~
☆ミ

我覺得1.0還可以。
歌詞阿...缺乏專業改圖軟件。非常困難 ._.;
謝謝你喔~

AudioLeadIn没统一
都改为2000吧

Easy

总体上没什么问题

00 08 790 - whistle?
00 15 190 - ^
00 43 990 - 1st waypoint x y - 72 280 2nd waypoint x y - 192 336 3rd waypoint x y - 304 272
00 56 390 - move 1 gird right (lv3)
00 57 990 - move 1 grid down (lv3)

LeAfLet's Nor.

hitsounds → nice~

00 09 590 - clap
00 14 790 - remove clap if so remove another clap at 00 21 190
00 42 590 - or rather add a whistle
00 53 990 - kiai start at here?
00 55 190 - reduce volume by 20% for this circle
01 09 590 - whistle

Hard

---

Insane

感觉上三连加的不合适的地方

00 13 190 -
00 16 490 -
00 21 990 -


starrrr

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

AudioLeadIn没统一
都改为2000吧

Easy

总体上没什么问题

00 08 790 - whistle? yes!
00 15 190 - ^ added
00 43 990 - 1st waypoint x y - 72 280 2nd waypoint x y - 192 336 3rd waypoint x y - 304 272 ok
00 56 390 - move 1 gird right (lv3) fixed
00 57 990 - move 1 grid down (lv3) fixed


Insane

感觉上三连加的不合适的地方

00 13 190 -
00 16 490 -
00 21 990 -
。。這些昨晚改好了~可能忘了update , thanks!

starrrr

thanks modding !_!

S t a r~

Took an image from Gelbooru and Wallpaperized it
The Sfx is a simple Smudge+Color


should be good

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Took an image from Gelbooru and Wallpaperized it
The Sfx is a simple Smudge+Color


should be good

hey! Good job !
This bg is good
Thank you~ you help me a lot XD

[General]
Map the last part if you want

[LeAfLet's Nor.]
Rename to "LeAfLet's Normal"
00:48:190 (x) - Add Hit Circle
00:50:190 (x) - Add Hit Circle

[Hard]
why you changed the spacing and used many jumps from 00:44:390 to 00:51:790
01:17:590 (8) - Add 1/1 Slider ( end to 01:17:990 ), if you want try like it seems to continue the earlier sliders ( ↓ )

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Map the last part if you want

[LeAfLet's Nor.]
Rename to "LeAfLet's Normal"
00:48:190 (x) - Add Hit Circle
00:50:190 (x) - Add Hit Circle

[Hard]
why you changed the spacing and used many jumps from 00:44:390 to 00:51:790
01:17:590 (8) - Add 1/1 Slider ( end to 01:17:990 ), if you want try like it seems to continue the earlier sliders ( ↓ )

SPOILER

all jumps removed
slider added~
thank you for the BG , modding and kudo star >w<!

chung～ > <

[Easy]
01:02:790 (3) - 这里可以用custom hitsound来修正clap的时间点
01:17:590 (4) - 这里感觉可以repeat一次再接spinner

[LeAfLet's Normal]
Awesome

[Hard]
00:44:390 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 这里我直接fail了...不过我最近变渣很多，而且是hard，倒是没啥
其他没发现啥 0.0

[Insane]
也没发现啥 0.0

图还不错，就是感觉circle太多有点单调了 0.0
Star~

-Pretty nazi but rename (TV size) to (TV Size) as that is how 99% of maps have it (also make the thread title match the title in game?)
-Not really a fan of the score - numbers, they fade into the background too much (just my opinion)

Easy:
00:33:590 (1,2) - switch new combo
01:14:390 (2,3,4) - continue previous clap pattern on these too?

LeAfLet's Normal:
00:37:990 (4) - add a clap on the end of this?

Hard:
Looks good

Insane:
00:22:790 (1) - remove new combo
00:29:990 (4) - new combo
00:39:190 (9,1) - space out more
00:55:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - not a good idea to do spacing like this, will confuse players too much
00:56:790 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^

Looks pretty good, just some minor things to look over

James2250 wrote:

-Pretty nazi but rename (TV size) to (TV Size) as that is how 99% of maps have it (also make the thread title match the title in game?) fixed~
-Not really a fan of the score - numbers, they fade into the background too much (just my opinion)

Easy:
00:33:590 (1,2) - switch new combo fixed
01:14:390 (2,3,4) - continue previous clap pattern on these too? sure~

LeAfLet's Normal:
00:37:990 (4) - add a clap on the end of this?

Hard:
Looks good

Insane:
00:22:790 (1) - remove new combo fixed
00:29:990 (4) - new combo fixed
00:39:190 (9,1) - space out more fixed
00:55:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - not a good idea to do spacing like this, will confuse players too much
00:56:790 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ok~ i filled the gap

Looks pretty good, just some minor things to look over

thank you for accepting my request >w<!
thanks for the mod~

As James noticed before,thread's title doesn't match with map.

Thread: ShaNa - One lonely(TV Size)
Map: ShaNa - Lonely Person (TV Size)

Why Kiai ends at 01:18:390? Maybe cut at least at 01:19:190?
Also,maybe start Kiai from 00:53:590? Cause it's the first beat in chorus.

[Easy]
00:19:190 (2) - I'd say it doesn't match rhytm perfectly.Maybe finish it at 00:19:990 and add another note to 00:20:790?
00:40:790 (2) - Finish.
01:13:590 - I'd remove this clap.

[Normal]
Fix Kiai,it starts too late.
00:25:790 (2) - Remove this?

[Hard]
00:09:990 - Add these notes? Look at timeline:
00:27:990 (6) - Add finish?
00:40:790 (6) - ^
00:59:990 (2) - ^
01:05:590 (1) - Ninja spinner Though it's perfectly rankable.

[Insane]
00:27:990 (6) - Finish?
Otherwise seems nice.

Good luck!
Star.

IceBeam wrote:

As James noticed before,thread's title doesn't match with map.

Thread: ShaNa - One lonely(TV Size)
Map: ShaNa - Lonely Person (TV Size)

Why Kiai ends at 01:18:390? Maybe cut at least at 01:19:190?
Also,maybe start Kiai from 00:53:590? Cause it's the first beat in chorus.

[Easy]
00:19:190 (2) - I'd say it doesn't match rhytm perfectly.Maybe finish it at 00:19:990 and add another note to 00:20:790?
00:40:790 (2) - Finish.
01:13:590 - I'd remove this clap.
all fixed~
[Normal]
Fix Kiai,it starts too late.
00:25:790 (2) - Remove this?

[Hard]
00:09:990 - Add these notes? Look at timeline:

SPOILER

added notes in another way~
00:27:990 (6) - Add finish?
00:40:790 (6) - ^
00:59:990 (2) - ^
01:05:590 (1) - Ninja spinner Though it's perfectly rankable.

[Insane]
00:27:990 (6) - Finish? whistle.
Otherwise seems nice.

Good luck!
Star.

thank you~

Hiii

[Easy]

00:47:190 (6) - New combo?
Fine.

[LeAfLet's Normal]

00:50:390 (1) - I don't know why you add noew combo here...Maybe remove it?
Fine.

[Hard]

00:28:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Those notes have different spacing int the combo(?)Try to make it same spacing.
00:32:590 (3) - Delete the (3),then move (4) in 00:32:590 and add note in 00:33:390.Sound would be better if you do that.
00:48:590 (2,3) - Spacing,too far.
01:01:590 (7,8,9) - Spacing,too close.

[Insane]

00:58:190 (3) - Move 4 grid up (lv.3)
01:07:590 (5,6,7) - Spacing,too close.
01:11:190 (7) - New combo?

Nice map star

lkp wrote:

Hiii

[Easy]

00:47:190 (6) - New combo? its alright~
Fine.

[LeAfLet's Normal]

00:50:390 (1) - I don't know why you add noew combo here...Maybe remove it?
Fine.

[Hard]

00:28:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Those notes have different spacing int the combo(?)Try to make it same spacing. fixed
00:32:590 (3) - Delete the (3),then move (4) in 00:32:590 and add note in 00:33:390.Sound would be better if you do that. 00:33:390 already got a new combo. you mean 33:190? but i think i am not following this one.
00:48:590 (2,3) - Spacing,too far. fixed
01:01:590 (7,8,9) - Spacing,too close. fixed

[Insane]

00:58:190 (3) - Move 4 grid up (lv.3) fly high no good
01:07:590 (5,6,7) - Spacing,too close. fixed
01:11:190 (7) - New combo? no for this~

Nice map star

thank you star and mod

hey o/
[Easy]
fine!

[LeAflet's Normal]
fine!

[Hard]
fine!

[Insane]
00:51:390 (1) - just stack with 00:50:390 (3) -
nice map star~

我是来看神mapper的./

got request from crimmi queue
so here's the mod

[easy]
00:51:190 (1) - the spinner make it longer until 00:53:590
00:59:990 (5) - new combo
01:00:390 (1) - remove new combo

clap making annoying sounds =.= please reduce it

[leaf's normal]
00:28:390 (1) - too near at the middle =.=
00:32:990 (5) - delete

[hard]
00:11:190 (5) - new combo
00:11:390 (1) - remove new combo
00:11:990 (4) - new combo

[insane]
00:06:190 (9) - new combo
00:07:190 (12) - delete
00:40:790 (1) - spacing

HeatKai wrote:

got request from crimmi queue
so here's the mod

[easy]
00:51:190 (1) - the spinner make it longer until 00:53:590 you are right
00:59:990 (5) - new combo
01:00:390 (1) - remove new combo i think it is still acceptable. not really confusing

clap making annoying sounds =.= please reduce it ok~

[leaf's normal]
00:28:390 (1) - too near at the middle =.=
00:32:990 (5) - delete

[hard]
00:11:190 (5) - new combo
00:11:390 (1) - remove new combo
00:11:990 (4) - new combo OK~

[insane]
00:06:190 (9) - new combo ok
00:07:190 (12) - delete ok
00:40:790 (1) - spacing a little jump..so moved it away more

Thanks modding

[Easy]
00:53:990 (1) - this is too early after the spinner..end the previous spinner here 00:53:367

[LeAfLet's Normal]
nice diff, but it's rhythm killed me *.*

[Insane]
00:04:390 - add a circle here, it will sound great
00:04:590 (5) - move this to next white tick, and then fix the distances
00:10:590 (3,4) - same here ^
00:40:590 (5,1) - this jump killed me, it is kinda unexpected :S

nice map. Star

Tonoicutzu wrote:

[Easy]
00:53:990 (1) - this is too early after the spinner..end the previous spinner here 00:53:367 i think it is still acceptable :S and its not sound so good to end earlier.

[LeAfLet's Normal]
nice diff, but it's rhythm killed me *.*

[Insane]
00:04:390 - add a circle here, it will sound great
00:04:590 (5) - move this to next white tick, and then fix the distances
00:10:590 (3,4) - same here ^
00:40:590 (5,1) - this jump killed me, it is kinda unexpected :S all agree and fixed~

nice map. Star

nice mod

[Insane]
因为你整个都是自己加的clap所以我就按照你的思路走 o.o

00:18:990 (5,9,11) - 这一段听上去挺空 在这几个地方加clap听起来的话会比较不错o.o
00:22:390 (2) - clap
00:38:990 (8) - clap 这样有个渐强的感觉
00:58:190 (3) - 这边这堆也是比较空o.o...感觉有挺多种加法的 我是选择了3和00:58:390 (4) - 的尾巴上加clap这种
01:05:390 (x) - 感觉这里应该加个note+clap
01:15:790 (4,7,3,1) - +clap

[Hard]
00:38:390 (5) - clap?
00:10:190 (2,4) - +whistle
00:11:190 (1,2,3,4) - 这边的形状说实话不太好看

[Normal]
这个难度的音效太响了 破坏了歌的美感 喧宾夺主、画蛇添足的感觉 集中体现在kiai段

其他没什么吧

goodbye wrote:

[Insane]
因为你整个都是自己加的clap所以我就按照你的思路走 o.o

00:18:990 (5,9,11) - 这一段听上去挺空 在这几个地方加clap听起来的话会比较不错o.o 這個同意~
00:22:390 (2) - clap ok
00:38:990 (8) - clap 这样有个渐强的感觉 ok
00:58:190 (3) - 这边这堆也是比较空o.o...感觉有挺多种加法的 我是选择了3和00:58:390 (4) - 的尾巴上加clap这种 這個我感覺上用clap有點奇怪..試著把00:59:990 (3) - 換成了clap.
01:05:390 (x) - 感觉这里应该加个note+clap 感覺上不加玩起來舒服一點~
01:15:790 (4,7,3,1) - +clap 我想結尾不用那麼強烈的節奏了~

[Hard]
00:38:390 (5) - clap? ok~
00:10:190 (2,4) - +whistle ok~
00:11:190 (1,2,3,4) - 这边的形状说实话不太好看 我排列沒天份OTL..試著排好了~

[Normal]
这个难度的音效太响了 破坏了歌的美感 喧宾夺主、画蛇添足的感觉 集中体现在kiai段

其他没什么吧

感謝你的建議:D

把難度降至3.23星
音量下降

以上 ~"~

Download: ShaNa - Lonely Person (TV Size) (chungskale) [LeAfLet's Normal].osu

Hi, here's my mod as requested in my queue

Easy:
Nice^^

LeAfLet's Normal:
Nice

Hard:
Nothing.... found... ;/

Insane:
...

Hmm, No Kudosu, I've found nothing
I love the hitsounds in this beatmap *__*

NI HAO

General
* Your spinner-background is over 1023x692. Please resize it, it's unacceptable
* Those spinner-circle are hard to read

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Easy
00:27:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 combos are very high for easy diff, please enable the new combo at 00:31:190 (5). Since it start with heavy white tick
00:53:990 (1) - This is pretty difficult for beginner player. This slider is place after spinner and it's too far from spinner. I suggest you to move it closer to spinner OR remove this slider. Otherwise, the beginner player can't reach this slider during gameplay
00:59:990 (5) - New combo?
01:00:390 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:04:790 (4) - New combo?

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LeAfLet's Normal
00:04:790 (1,2,3) - I prefer to avoiding like this. It's kinda difficult for beginner/average player
00:11:190 (1,2) - Try avoiding the pattern that came out with slider+note or note+slider. It'll be difficult for beginner/average player
00:13:790 (4,1) - ^
00:17:590 (1,2) - ^
00:20:190 (4,5) - ^
00:28:390 (1) - A bit too far from spinner, since this is a normal diff for beginner/average player
00:48:390 (2,3) - Try avoiding the pattern that came out with slider+note or note+slider. It'll be difficult for beginner/average player
01:10:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try making a zigzag pattern. This pattern came out with parallel pattern 01:10:390 (1,2) and zigzag pattern 01:11:190 (3,4,5,6,7). Please try making a pattern consistent to make average player easily to read

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Hard
00:18:590 (5,6) - Move 1 grid down (Nazi)
00:26:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is sound better if this snap in 1st purple tick (use 1/3 beat snap divisor). Since you following the vocal, right?
00:44:390 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - You using 1,8x distance spacing, right? If you using 1,8x or 1,9x please make sure this pattern is spaced correctly, because I found some random spacing in this pattern
01:05:590 (1) - I know that small spinner that appropriate for this diff, but it's kinda bad during gameplay

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Insane
00:26:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is sound better if this snap in 1st purple tick (use 1/3 beat snap divisor). Since you following the vocal, right?

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Fairy Tail <3

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

General
* Your spinner-background is over 1023x692. Please resize it, it's unacceptable oh! i thought it can be 1024x768 :S fixed
* Those spinner-circle are hard to read

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Easy
00:27:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 combos are very high for easy diff, please enable the new combo at 00:31:190 (5). Since it start with heavy white tick oh~yes
00:53:990 (1) - This is pretty difficult for beginner player. This slider is place after spinner and it's too far from spinner. I suggest you to move it closer to spinner OR remove this slider. Otherwise, the beginner player can't reach this slider during gameplay moved near to the middle~ i think beginners prefer spinning with very big "circle" because i do that before too XD
00:59:990 (5) - New combo?
01:00:390 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:04:790 (4) - New combo? someone mention these before o.o maybe i should really change this

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Hard
00:18:590 (5,6) - Move 1 grid down (Nazi) LOL~good XD
00:26:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is sound better if this snap in 1st purple tick (use 1/3 beat snap divisor). Since you following the vocal, right? yes~fixed
00:44:390 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - You using 1,8x distance spacing, right? If you using 1,8x or 1,9x please make sure this pattern is spaced correctly, because I found some random spacing in this pattern fixed><
01:05:590 (1) - I know that small spinner that appropriate for this diff, but it's kinda bad during gameplay ok

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Insane
00:26:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is sound better if this snap in 1st purple tick (use 1/3 beat snap divisor). Since you following the vocal, right? yes fixed

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Fairy Tail <3

Thank you

ah

[Easy]
0:01:590 (1) - this note might be a little bit hard for some osu! rookies to get a 300 on it, since it's starting the map in not a really accenting place, maybe delete it and let the map start at that (2) slider?
0:03:990 (1) - delete new combo
0:31:990 (2,3,4) - a bit inconsistent spacing. move those notes by a grid to the left
0:39:990 (1,2) - swap new combos
0:56:390 (1,2) - ^
1:04:790 (1) - delete new combo
1:06:390 (3,1) - swap new combos

[LeAfLet's Normal]
0:13:990 (1,2) - swap new combos
0:39:190 (1,2) - ^
0:50:390 (1) - i'm not a fan of using new combos like that, what's the point of using it right before the spinner? if i were you, i'd delete it :)

[Hard]
sweet one. <3
0:11:990 (1) - delete new combo
0:22:790 (1) - delete new combo
0:27:990 (6) - weird jump, huh. ._.


[Insane]
i kinda disapprove of some jumps on that, but they're fine i suppose.
0:21:590 (6,1) - swap new combos
0:25:590 (1) - not really necessary new combo imo
0:58:190 (3) - move it a few grids higher?


[General]
0:53:990 (x) - do NOT start kiai according to the vocals, just don't. always do it according to the music, vocal isn't the most important thing in the song! if i were you, i'd start it at 0:53:590 :3
also, is it just me being out-of-dated, or BG image is still 1023x768?


sweet map, great job! :D
good luck with it <3

rEdo wrote:

[Easy]
0:01:590 (1) - this note might be a little bit hard for some osu! rookies to get a 300 on it, since it's starting the map in not a really accenting place, maybe delete it and let the map start at that (2) slider? i feel something missing if this one was deleted o_o; and this got a very slow AR so maybe just keep it first~
0:03:990 (1) - delete new combo fixed
0:31:990 (2,3,4) - a bit inconsistent spacing. move those notes by a grid to the left fixed
0:39:990 (1,2) - swap new combos fixed
0:56:390 (1,2) - ^ fixed
1:04:790 (1) - delete new combo fixed
1:06:390 (3,1) - swap new combos fixed


[Hard]
sweet one. <3
0:11:990 (1) - delete new combo fixed
0:22:790 (1) - delete new combo fixed
0:27:990 (6) - weird jump, huh. ._. it is not a jump it just follow the distance snap XD


[Insane]
i kinda disapprove of some jumps on that, but they're fine i suppose.
0:21:590 (6,1) - swap new combos fixed
0:25:590 (1) - not really necessary new combo imo fixed
0:58:190 (3) - move it a few grids higher? Yes~


[General]
0:53:990 (x) - do NOT start kiai according to the vocals, just don't. always do it according to the music, vocal isn't the most important thing in the song! if i were you, i'd start it at 0:53:590 :3 fine~fixed and learned
also, is it just me being out-of-dated, or BG image is still 1023x768? o.o! fixed


sweet map, great job!
good luck with it <3

Thank you

Fairy Tail! star for you