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wmfchris
[general]
The audio-lead-in is not unique.

[Insane]
00:13:390 (10) - whistle?
00:16:390 (1,2,3) - 唔知點解唔係幾夾...

[bakaleaf's normal]
make some hitsound loud-soft variation? x_x

no kds

quick mod only here orz so tired
SiU_LeAf
net45291
=w="
vivicat
最后一个难度 拉条速度1.0太慢了吧o.o
歌词做的很劣质的感觉诶o.ob 有空用心做的好看一些吧
每个难度的combo 颜色不一样
大概说一下而已no kds
歌很好听0v0 加油/~
☆ミ
Beren
你好

[General]
最后的转圈结束在01:22:390

[SB]
13.png和14.png一起消失的,其他的歌词都是一句一句消失O.O

[Easy]
00:24:390 (1,2,3) - 节奏不对
00:33:590 (8) - new combo
00:37:590 (3) - ^
00:56:390 (3) - ^
01:18:990 (1) - 开始在01:18:790

[Hard]
00:28:590 (2) - 移至00:28:790
00:28:990 (1) - remove
00:29:190 (2) - new combo

[Insane]
AR-1
有些地方的三连感觉有点微妙
音效是vivicat的建议
00:01:390(1) - remove whistle
(2) - clap
00:04:190(3) - remove whistle
00:05:790(6) - ^
00:10:190(2) - ^
00:16:990(3) - 拉条的折返点^
00:17:790(1) - remove new combo
00:18:390( ) - new combo
00:19:190(1) - remove new combo,remove clap
00:22:990(2) - 开头的finish去掉
00:24:790(4) - new combo
00:39:190(9) - add whistle
00:52:790(1) - add clap
00:53:190(1) - ^
00:53:590(5) - 去掉clap,用普通whistle
00:02:190 (5,6,7) - 换成slider
00:07:190 (x) - add note
00:13:590 (x) - ^
00:16:490 (2) - remove
00:21:590 (6) - 换成slider,结束在00:21:790
00:21:990 (1,2,3) - 换成slider
00:41:790 (1) - remove
00:41:990 (2) - new combo
00:42:390 (1) - remove NC
00:43:390 (1) - remove
然后同上的new combo修改,间距也需要

加油star :)
Topic Starter
chungskale

Beren wrote:

你好

[General]
最后的转圈结束在01:22:390 fixed

[SB]
13.png和14.png一起消失的,其他的歌词都是一句一句消失O.O 那句歌詞太短了, 太快消失好像不太好。

[Easy]
00:24:390 (1,2,3) - 节奏不对 fixed
00:33:590 (8) - new combo fixed
00:37:590 (3) - ^ 不改這個~
00:56:390 (3) - ^ fixed
01:18:990 (1) - 开始在01:18:790 fixed

[Hard]
00:28:590 (2) - 移至00:28:790
00:28:990 (1) - remove 換成slider吧。
00:29:190 (2) - new combo 前面變成slider我想可以不用了

[Insane]
AR-1 fixed
有些地方的三连感觉有点微妙
音效是vivicat的建议
00:01:390(1) - remove whistle
(2) - clap
00:04:190(3) - remove whistle
00:05:790(6) - ^
00:10:190(2) - ^
00:16:990(3) - 拉条的折返点^
00:17:790(1) - remove new combo
00:18:390( ) - new combo
00:19:190(1) - remove new combo,remove clap
00:22:990(2) - 开头的finish去掉 不改~
00:24:790(4) - new combo
00:39:190(9) - add whistle
00:52:790(1) - add clap
00:53:190(1) - ^
00:53:590(5) - 去掉clap,用普通whistle
00:02:190 (5,6,7) - 换成slider
00:07:190 (x) - add note
00:13:590 (x) - ^ 不改~
00:16:490 (2) - remove
00:21:590 (6) - 换成slider,结束在00:21:790
00:21:990 (1,2,3) - 换成slider
00:41:790 (1) - remove
00:41:990 (2) - new combo
00:42:390 (1) - remove NC
00:43:390 (1) - remove
然后同上的new combo修改,间距也需要

加油star :)
感謝你們的modding :D
Topic Starter
chungskale

vivicat wrote:

最后一个难度 拉条速度1.0太慢了吧o.o
歌词做的很劣质的感觉诶o.ob 有空用心做的好看一些吧
每个难度的combo 颜色不一样
大概说一下而已no kds
歌很好听0v0 加油/~
☆ミ
我覺得1.0還可以。
歌詞阿...缺乏專業改圖軟件。非常困難 ._.;
謝謝你喔~
TTTTTTTTTTTT
AudioLeadIn没统一
都改为2000吧

Easy

总体上没什么问题

00 08 790 - whistle?
00 15 190 - ^
00 43 990 - 1st waypoint x y - 72 280 2nd waypoint x y - 192 336 3rd waypoint x y - 304 272
00 56 390 - move 1 gird right (lv3)
00 57 990 - move 1 grid down (lv3)

LeAfLet's Nor.

hitsounds → nice~

00 09 590 - clap
00 14 790 - remove clap if so remove another clap at 00 21 190
00 42 590 - or rather add a whistle
00 53 990 - kiai start at here?
00 55 190 - reduce volume by 20% for this circle
01 09 590 - whistle

Hard

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Insane

感觉上三连加的不合适的地方

00 13 190 -
00 16 490 -
00 21 990 -


starrrr
Topic Starter
chungskale

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

AudioLeadIn没统一
都改为2000吧

Easy

总体上没什么问题

00 08 790 - whistle? yes!
00 15 190 - ^ added
00 43 990 - 1st waypoint x y - 72 280 2nd waypoint x y - 192 336 3rd waypoint x y - 304 272 ok
00 56 390 - move 1 gird right (lv3) fixed
00 57 990 - move 1 grid down (lv3) fixed


Insane

感觉上三连加的不合适的地方

00 13 190 -
00 16 490 -
00 21 990 -
。。這些昨晚改好了~可能忘了update , thanks!

starrrr
thanks modding !_!
gdeath
S t a r~
HakuNoKaemi
Took an image from Gelbooru and Wallpaperized it :D
The Sfx is a simple Smudge+Color :D


should be good :D
Topic Starter
chungskale

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Took an image from Gelbooru and Wallpaperized it :D
The Sfx is a simple Smudge+Color :D


should be good :D
hey! Good job :D!
This bg is good
Thank you~ you help me a lot XD
HakuNoKaemi
[General]
Map the last part if you want :D

[LeAfLet's Nor.]
Rename to "LeAfLet's Normal"
00:48:190 (x) - Add Hit Circle
00:50:190 (x) - Add Hit Circle

[Hard]
why you changed the spacing and used many jumps from 00:44:390 to 00:51:790
01:17:590 (8) - Add 1/1 Slider ( end to 01:17:990 ), if you want try like it seems to continue the earlier sliders ( ↓ )
Topic Starter
chungskale

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Map the last part if you want :D

[LeAfLet's Nor.]
Rename to "LeAfLet's Normal"
00:48:190 (x) - Add Hit Circle
00:50:190 (x) - Add Hit Circle

[Hard]
why you changed the spacing and used many jumps from 00:44:390 to 00:51:790
01:17:590 (8) - Add 1/1 Slider ( end to 01:17:990 ), if you want try like it seems to continue the earlier sliders ( ↓ )
all jumps removed :D
slider added~
thank you for the BG , modding and kudo star >w<!
wcx19911123
chung~ > <

[Easy]
01:02:790 (3) - 这里可以用custom hitsound来修正clap的时间点
01:17:590 (4) - 这里感觉可以repeat一次再接spinner

[LeAfLet's Normal]
Awesome

[Hard]
00:44:390 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 这里我直接fail了...不过我最近变渣很多,而且是hard,倒是没啥
其他没发现啥 0.0

[Insane]
也没发现啥 0.0

图还不错,就是感觉circle太多有点单调了 0.0
Star~
James2250
-Pretty nazi but rename (TV size) to (TV Size) as that is how 99% of maps have it (also make the thread title match the title in game?)
-Not really a fan of the score - numbers, they fade into the background too much (just my opinion)

Easy:
00:33:590 (1,2) - switch new combo
01:14:390 (2,3,4) - continue previous clap pattern on these too?

LeAfLet's Normal:
00:37:990 (4) - add a clap on the end of this?

Hard:
Looks good

Insane:
00:22:790 (1) - remove new combo
00:29:990 (4) - new combo
00:39:190 (9,1) - space out more
00:55:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - not a good idea to do spacing like this, will confuse players too much
00:56:790 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^

Looks pretty good, just some minor things to look over
Topic Starter
chungskale

James2250 wrote:

-Pretty nazi but rename (TV size) to (TV Size) as that is how 99% of maps have it (also make the thread title match the title in game?) fixed~
-Not really a fan of the score - numbers, they fade into the background too much (just my opinion)

Easy:
00:33:590 (1,2) - switch new combo fixed
01:14:390 (2,3,4) - continue previous clap pattern on these too? sure~

LeAfLet's Normal:
00:37:990 (4) - add a clap on the end of this?

Hard:
Looks good

Insane:
00:22:790 (1) - remove new combo fixed
00:29:990 (4) - new combo fixed
00:39:190 (9,1) - space out more fixed
00:55:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - not a good idea to do spacing like this, will confuse players too much
00:56:790 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ok~ i filled the gap

Looks pretty good, just some minor things to look over
thank you for accepting my request >w<!
thanks for the mod~
IceBeam
As James noticed before,thread's title doesn't match with map.

Thread: ShaNa - One lonely(TV Size)
Map: ShaNa - Lonely Person (TV Size)

Why Kiai ends at 01:18:390? Maybe cut at least at 01:19:190?
Also,maybe start Kiai from 00:53:590? Cause it's the first beat in chorus.

[Easy]
00:19:190 (2) - I'd say it doesn't match rhytm perfectly.Maybe finish it at 00:19:990 and add another note to 00:20:790?
00:40:790 (2) - Finish.
01:13:590 - I'd remove this clap.

[Normal]
Fix Kiai,it starts too late.
00:25:790 (2) - Remove this?

[Hard]
00:09:990 - Add these notes? Look at timeline:
00:27:990 (6) - Add finish?
00:40:790 (6) - ^
00:59:990 (2) - ^
01:05:590 (1) - Ninja spinner :| Though it's perfectly rankable.

[Insane]
00:27:990 (6) - Finish?
Otherwise seems nice.

Good luck!
Star.
Topic Starter
chungskale

IceBeam wrote:

As James noticed before,thread's title doesn't match with map.

Thread: ShaNa - One lonely(TV Size)
Map: ShaNa - Lonely Person (TV Size)

Why Kiai ends at 01:18:390? Maybe cut at least at 01:19:190?
Also,maybe start Kiai from 00:53:590? Cause it's the first beat in chorus.

[Easy]
00:19:190 (2) - I'd say it doesn't match rhytm perfectly.Maybe finish it at 00:19:990 and add another note to 00:20:790?
00:40:790 (2) - Finish.
01:13:590 - I'd remove this clap.
all fixed~
[Normal]
Fix Kiai,it starts too late.
00:25:790 (2) - Remove this?

[Hard]
00:09:990 - Add these notes? Look at timeline:
added notes in another way~
00:27:990 (6) - Add finish?
00:40:790 (6) - ^
00:59:990 (2) - ^
01:05:590 (1) - Ninja spinner :| Though it's perfectly rankable.

[Insane]
00:27:990 (6) - Finish? whistle.
Otherwise seems nice.

Good luck!
Star.
thank you~
lkp
Hiii

[Easy]

00:47:190 (6) - New combo?
Fine.

[LeAfLet's Normal]

00:50:390 (1) - I don't know why you add noew combo here...Maybe remove it?
Fine.

[Hard]

00:28:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Those notes have different spacing int the combo(?)Try to make it same spacing.
00:32:590 (3) - Delete the (3),then move (4) in 00:32:590 and add note in 00:33:390.Sound would be better if you do that.
00:48:590 (2,3) - Spacing,too far.
01:01:590 (7,8,9) - Spacing,too close.

[Insane]

00:58:190 (3) - Move 4 grid up (lv.3)
01:07:590 (5,6,7) - Spacing,too close.
01:11:190 (7) - New combo?

Nice map star :D
Topic Starter
chungskale

lkp wrote:

Hiii

[Easy]

00:47:190 (6) - New combo? its alright~
Fine.

[LeAfLet's Normal]

00:50:390 (1) - I don't know why you add noew combo here...Maybe remove it?
Fine.

[Hard]

00:28:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Those notes have different spacing int the combo(?)Try to make it same spacing. fixed
00:32:590 (3) - Delete the (3),then move (4) in 00:32:590 and add note in 00:33:390.Sound would be better if you do that. 00:33:390 already got a new combo. you mean 33:190? but i think i am not following this one.
00:48:590 (2,3) - Spacing,too far. fixed
01:01:590 (7,8,9) - Spacing,too close. fixed

[Insane]

00:58:190 (3) - Move 4 grid up (lv.3) fly high no good :D
01:07:590 (5,6,7) - Spacing,too close. fixed
01:11:190 (7) - New combo? no for this~

Nice map star :D
thank you star and mod :D
val0108
hey o/
[Easy]
fine!

[LeAflet's Normal]
fine!

[Hard]
fine!

[Insane]
00:51:390 (1) - just stack with 00:50:390 (3) -
nice map star~
_Kiva
我是来看神mapper的./
Nymph
正好还剩4个KUDO..扔一个星再说~
HeatKai
got request from crimmi queue
so here's the mod

[easy]
00:51:190 (1) - the spinner make it longer until 00:53:590
00:59:990 (5) - new combo
01:00:390 (1) - remove new combo

clap making annoying sounds =.= please reduce it

[leaf's normal]
00:28:390 (1) - too near at the middle =.=
00:32:990 (5) - delete

[hard]
00:11:190 (5) - new combo
00:11:390 (1) - remove new combo
00:11:990 (4) - new combo

[insane]
00:06:190 (9) - new combo
00:07:190 (12) - delete
00:40:790 (1) - spacing
Topic Starter
chungskale

HeatKai wrote:

got request from crimmi queue
so here's the mod

[easy]
00:51:190 (1) - the spinner make it longer until 00:53:590 you are right
00:59:990 (5) - new combo
01:00:390 (1) - remove new combo i think it is still acceptable. not really confusing

clap making annoying sounds =.= please reduce it ok~

[leaf's normal]
00:28:390 (1) - too near at the middle =.=
00:32:990 (5) - delete

[hard]
00:11:190 (5) - new combo
00:11:390 (1) - remove new combo
00:11:990 (4) - new combo OK~

[insane]
00:06:190 (9) - new combo ok
00:07:190 (12) - delete ok
00:40:790 (1) - spacing a little jump..so moved it away more
Thanks modding :D
Tony
[Easy]
00:53:990 (1) - this is too early after the spinner..end the previous spinner here 00:53:367

[LeAfLet's Normal]
nice diff, but it's rhythm killed me *.*

[Insane]
00:04:390 - add a circle here, it will sound great
00:04:590 (5) - move this to next white tick, and then fix the distances
00:10:590 (3,4) - same here ^
00:40:590 (5,1) - this jump killed me, it is kinda unexpected :S

nice map. Star
Topic Starter
chungskale

Tonoicutzu wrote:

[Easy]
00:53:990 (1) - this is too early after the spinner..end the previous spinner here 00:53:367 i think it is still acceptable :S and its not sound so good to end earlier.

[LeAfLet's Normal]
nice diff, but it's rhythm killed me *.*

[Insane]
00:04:390 - add a circle here, it will sound great
00:04:590 (5) - move this to next white tick, and then fix the distances
00:10:590 (3,4) - same here ^
00:40:590 (5,1) - this jump killed me, it is kinda unexpected :S all agree and fixed~

nice map. Star
nice mod :D
eveless
[Insane]
因为你整个都是自己加的clap所以我就按照你的思路走 o.o

00:18:990 (5,9,11) - 这一段听上去挺空 在这几个地方加clap听起来的话会比较不错o.o
00:22:390 (2) - clap
00:38:990 (8) - clap 这样有个渐强的感觉
00:58:190 (3) - 这边这堆也是比较空o.o...感觉有挺多种加法的 我是选择了3和00:58:390 (4) - 的尾巴上加clap这种
01:05:390 (x) - 感觉这里应该加个note+clap
01:15:790 (4,7,3,1) - +clap

[Hard]
00:38:390 (5) - clap?
00:10:190 (2,4) - +whistle
00:11:190 (1,2,3,4) - 这边的形状说实话不太好看

[Normal]
这个难度的音效太响了 破坏了歌的美感 喧宾夺主、画蛇添足的感觉 集中体现在kiai段

其他没什么吧
Topic Starter
chungskale

goodbye wrote:

[Insane]
因为你整个都是自己加的clap所以我就按照你的思路走 o.o

00:18:990 (5,9,11) - 这一段听上去挺空 在这几个地方加clap听起来的话会比较不错o.o 這個同意~
00:22:390 (2) - clap ok
00:38:990 (8) - clap 这样有个渐强的感觉 ok
00:58:190 (3) - 这边这堆也是比较空o.o...感觉有挺多种加法的 我是选择了3和00:58:390 (4) - 的尾巴上加clap这种 這個我感覺上用clap有點奇怪..試著把00:59:990 (3) - 換成了clap.
01:05:390 (x) - 感觉这里应该加个note+clap 感覺上不加玩起來舒服一點~
01:15:790 (4,7,3,1) - +clap 我想結尾不用那麼強烈的節奏了~

[Hard]
00:38:390 (5) - clap? ok~
00:10:190 (2,4) - +whistle ok~
00:11:190 (1,2,3,4) - 这边的形状说实话不太好看 我排列沒天份OTL..試著排好了~

[Normal]
这个难度的音效太响了 破坏了歌的美感 喧宾夺主、画蛇添足的感觉 集中体现在kiai段

其他没什么吧
感謝你的建議:D
SiU_LeAf
把難度降至3.23星
音量下降

以上 ~"~

Download: ShaNa - Lonely Person (TV Size) (chungskale) [LeAfLet's Normal].osu
Yusu Aoi
Hi, here's my mod as requested in my queue :)

Easy:
Nice^^

LeAfLet's Normal:
Nice :)

Hard:
Nothing.... found... ;/

Insane:
... :D

Hmm, No Kudosu, I've found nothing :P
I love the hitsounds in this beatmap *__*
Leorda
NI HAO

General
* Your spinner-background is over 1023x692. Please resize it, it's unacceptable
* Those spinner-circle are hard to read

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Easy
00:27:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 combos are very high for easy diff, please enable the new combo at 00:31:190 (5). Since it start with heavy white tick
00:53:990 (1) - This is pretty difficult for beginner player. This slider is place after spinner and it's too far from spinner. I suggest you to move it closer to spinner OR remove this slider. Otherwise, the beginner player can't reach this slider during gameplay
00:59:990 (5) - New combo?
01:00:390 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:04:790 (4) - New combo?

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LeAfLet's Normal
00:04:790 (1,2,3) - I prefer to avoiding like this. It's kinda difficult for beginner/average player
00:11:190 (1,2) - Try avoiding the pattern that came out with slider+note or note+slider. It'll be difficult for beginner/average player
00:13:790 (4,1) - ^
00:17:590 (1,2) - ^
00:20:190 (4,5) - ^
00:28:390 (1) - A bit too far from spinner, since this is a normal diff for beginner/average player
00:48:390 (2,3) - Try avoiding the pattern that came out with slider+note or note+slider. It'll be difficult for beginner/average player
01:10:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try making a zigzag pattern. This pattern came out with parallel pattern 01:10:390 (1,2) and zigzag pattern 01:11:190 (3,4,5,6,7). Please try making a pattern consistent to make average player easily to read

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Hard
00:18:590 (5,6) - Move 1 grid down (Nazi)
00:26:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is sound better if this snap in 1st purple tick (use 1/3 beat snap divisor). Since you following the vocal, right?
00:44:390 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - You using 1,8x distance spacing, right? If you using 1,8x or 1,9x please make sure this pattern is spaced correctly, because I found some random spacing in this pattern
01:05:590 (1) - I know that small spinner that appropriate for this diff, but it's kinda bad during gameplay

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Insane
00:26:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is sound better if this snap in 1st purple tick (use 1/3 beat snap divisor). Since you following the vocal, right?

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Fairy Tail <3
Topic Starter
chungskale

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

General
* Your spinner-background is over 1023x692. Please resize it, it's unacceptable oh! i thought it can be 1024x768 :S fixed
* Those spinner-circle are hard to read

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Easy
00:27:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 8 combos are very high for easy diff, please enable the new combo at 00:31:190 (5). Since it start with heavy white tick oh~yes
00:53:990 (1) - This is pretty difficult for beginner player. This slider is place after spinner and it's too far from spinner. I suggest you to move it closer to spinner OR remove this slider. Otherwise, the beginner player can't reach this slider during gameplay moved near to the middle~ i think beginners prefer spinning with very big "circle" because i do that before too XD
00:59:990 (5) - New combo?
01:00:390 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:04:790 (4) - New combo? someone mention these before o.o maybe i should really change this

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Hard
00:18:590 (5,6) - Move 1 grid down (Nazi) LOL~good XD
00:26:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is sound better if this snap in 1st purple tick (use 1/3 beat snap divisor). Since you following the vocal, right? yes~fixed
00:44:390 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - You using 1,8x distance spacing, right? If you using 1,8x or 1,9x please make sure this pattern is spaced correctly, because I found some random spacing in this pattern fixed><
01:05:590 (1) - I know that small spinner that appropriate for this diff, but it's kinda bad during gameplay ok

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Insane
00:26:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is sound better if this snap in 1st purple tick (use 1/3 beat snap divisor). Since you following the vocal, right? yes fixed

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HakuNoKaemi
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rEdo
[Easy]
0:01:590 (1) - this note might be a little bit hard for some osu! rookies to get a 300 on it, since it's starting the map in not a really accenting place, maybe delete it and let the map start at that (2) slider?
0:03:990 (1) - delete new combo
0:31:990 (2,3,4) - a bit inconsistent spacing. move those notes by a grid to the left
0:39:990 (1,2) - swap new combos
0:56:390 (1,2) - ^
1:04:790 (1) - delete new combo
1:06:390 (3,1) - swap new combos

[LeAfLet's Normal]
0:13:990 (1,2) - swap new combos
0:39:190 (1,2) - ^
0:50:390 (1) - i'm not a fan of using new combos like that, what's the point of using it right before the spinner? if i were you, i'd delete it :)

[Hard]
sweet one. <3
0:11:990 (1) - delete new combo
0:22:790 (1) - delete new combo
0:27:990 (6) - weird jump, huh. ._.


[Insane]
i kinda disapprove of some jumps on that, but they're fine i suppose.
0:21:590 (6,1) - swap new combos
0:25:590 (1) - not really necessary new combo imo
0:58:190 (3) - move it a few grids higher?


[General]
0:53:990 (x) - do NOT start kiai according to the vocals, just don't. always do it according to the music, vocal isn't the most important thing in the song! if i were you, i'd start it at 0:53:590 :3
also, is it just me being out-of-dated, or BG image is still 1023x768?


sweet map, great job! :D
good luck with it <3
Topic Starter
chungskale

rEdo wrote:

[Easy]
0:01:590 (1) - this note might be a little bit hard for some osu! rookies to get a 300 on it, since it's starting the map in not a really accenting place, maybe delete it and let the map start at that (2) slider? i feel something missing if this one was deleted o_o; and this got a very slow AR so maybe just keep it first~
0:03:990 (1) - delete new combo fixed
0:31:990 (2,3,4) - a bit inconsistent spacing. move those notes by a grid to the left fixed
0:39:990 (1,2) - swap new combos fixed
0:56:390 (1,2) - ^ fixed
1:04:790 (1) - delete new combo fixed
1:06:390 (3,1) - swap new combos fixed


[Hard]
sweet one. <3
0:11:990 (1) - delete new combo fixed
0:22:790 (1) - delete new combo fixed
0:27:990 (6) - weird jump, huh. ._. it is not a jump :D it just follow the distance snap XD


[Insane]
i kinda disapprove of some jumps on that, but they're fine i suppose.
0:21:590 (6,1) - swap new combos fixed
0:25:590 (1) - not really necessary new combo imo fixed
0:58:190 (3) - move it a few grids higher? Yes~


[General]
0:53:990 (x) - do NOT start kiai according to the vocals, just don't. always do it according to the music, vocal isn't the most important thing in the song! if i were you, i'd start it at 0:53:590 :3 fine~fixed and learned :D
also, is it just me being out-of-dated, or BG image is still 1023x768? o.o! fixed


sweet map, great job! :D
good luck with it <3
Thank you :D
Neko_Lover
Fairy Tail! :) star for you
CNM501
There's not enough good well made Fairy Tail beatmaps like this. STAR GIVE! :D
Kiyomura
Fairy tail ! =D Star.
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