beatmapsets/996633 by Shubingsan - gonna give general feedback cuz the map is pretty rough and would probably need a remap, but I'm a Monogatari Series simp so
beatmapsets/1294009 by -JI- - I'm not sure if I can help you, but I will try
Rejected:
beatmapsets/1290689 by IgDoritos - despite the fact that it's clear what you are following you are still missing a lot of rhythms, but at least there's some consistency in it. Try to find someone who can have a 1 on 1 session with you, I think you will benefit way more from that than just me telling you to remap
beatmapsets/689480 by dylansantosh - sry but this requires a remap as a whole, since sometimes you aren't sticking to your ideas and the execution is generally unappealing. Use more sliders on the jump sections and think about spacing emphasis more, cuz the rhythm really feels very flat with that 1-2 spam in the top diff. Also, refer to rc when remaking the easy difficulty, not that you really need it though
beatmapsets/1288865 by 0ppInOsu - Idk how to mod this, it plays pretty pog tho (the top diff)
beatmapsets/1211449#osu/2521847 was hardly reworked using 3mplify mods and looking for pushing it further NM/M4M(not that good in modding high-quality maps so more preferably NM) Thank you
Patsany, ne teryayte rapir (feat. Maemiza) - try a beginner queue, the map doesn't have proper spacing emphasis or consistent execution of it, there's not much meaning to the objects placed as far as I can tell too, either that or I'm retarded
ch3rry (Cut Ver.) - it's not even clear what you are following in the map half the time, Ig just focus on showing through gameplay (mainly rhythm) what part of the music you are following without sacrificing that clarity, a good way to start would be to simplify and then think about how to add more without sacrificing clarity
Kinpu 'Forbidden Game' - not a fan, map more Ig, you are going in the right direction, just have a more noticeable contrast between low/high intensity sections (and other than that pattern design and aes could be less appalling but that's subjective Ig)
- Horrible Kids (Cut Ver.) - I hate minors
The rest accepted (either me or Castagne will mod)