恩。。話說01:01:800 (2) - 这个音应该往后1/4放。。這個看不太懂。。lol我這個2是在1:01:708上的。。800的四分之一不就是3上面了么?0.0NatsumeRin wrote:
那两个蓝字你最好再确认一下233
另外刚查了下artist应该是:Itou Kanako,改完记得按步骤重传full submit。
这个贴不要kud。
恩。。話說01:01:800 (2) - 这个音应该往后1/4放。。這個看不太懂。。lol我這個2是在1:01:708上的。。800的四分之一不就是3上面了么?0.0NatsumeRin wrote:
那两个蓝字你最好再确认一下233
另外刚查了下artist应该是:Itou Kanako,改完记得按步骤重传full submit。
这个贴不要kud。
ok~藍字done!不過改了artist不知怎麼的傳不上去了。。左邊變成X了。。NatsumeRin wrote:
哦这个我失误,就是拉到蓝线上,如图
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因为这个123和567显然是遵循同样的规则,但是vocal唱的不太老实而已。。。
Updated ~NatsumeRin wrote:
[Alexs' Easy] D: Alexs's - who is it? it's not me ;__;
...since Alexs works as name so it should be Alexs's Easy....? dunno
Aleks719 -> Aleks -> Aleks's Easy -> Aleks' Easy00:36:125 (1) - whistle at the end? you are right, fixedGarven wrote:
Technically, either one is correct, but I try to keep my own writing consistent, so I use them without the double s.
00:54:898 (4) - ^ you are right, fixed
nice done. thanks Orz
nice hitsound mod~all fixed!KSHR wrote:
modding
-Aleks's Easy-
hm... I think it's nothing to mod... DX
just suggestion (but, I think these better)
01:28:027 (1) - remove whistle at turn, and add whistle at end
01:29:499 (2) - ^
-Normal-00:34:653 (3) - add finish at end
- these are 1 set
00:27:659 (1) - add finish at end
00:28:763 (2) - add clap
00:29:131 (3) - remove clap
00:29:315 (4) - add clap
00:37:966 (1) - ^
00:39:438 (2) - ^
01:28:027 (1) - ^
01:29:499 (2) - ^
01:33:916 (1) - remove clap at end, and add finish there
01:35:389 (2) - ^
-Hard-
00:44:591 (1,2) - 1grid right
00:56:370 (1,2) - ^
00:55:818 (8) - add normal-finish
01:19:745 (6) - new combo
01:20:297 (1) - remove new combo
01:40:542 (1) - add finish
-Insane-
I can find this only. srry...(sorry my poor diff orz)
01:42:015 (1) - add finish
star~
Edit : without changes, but thanks)KSHR wrote:
-Aleks's Easy-
hm... I think it's nothing to mod... DX :3
just suggestion (but, I think these better)
01:28:027 (1) - remove whistle at turn, and add whistle at end sorry, disagree
01:29:499 (2) - ^_^
Itou Kanako...E文应该反过来...不过osu这已经乱了 无所谓了 = =NatsumeRin wrote:
那两个蓝字你最好再确认一下233
另外刚查了下artist应该是:Itou Kanako,改完记得按步骤重传full submit。
这个贴不要kud。
对...原来就是反过来的...但是我在all搜索了一下...基本全是在用itou kanako...所以还是改了Selee wrote:
Itou Kanako...E文应该反过来...不过osu这已经乱了 无所谓了 = =NatsumeRin wrote:
那两个蓝字你最好再确认一下233
另外刚查了下artist应该是:Itou Kanako,改完记得按步骤重传full submit。
这个贴不要kud。
thx~Driou wrote:
Hi, here's my mod ^^
☆~Aleks' Easy~☆
01:37:229 (2) - As this is an easy dif. maybe doing something like this
☆~Normal~☆
00:26:186 (7) - New combo (1,2,3,4,5)
00:32:076 (6) - New combo (1,2,3)
☆~Hard~☆
00:00:788 Spinner - End to 00:02:996
00:28:395 (5) - New combo (1,2,3,4,5,6)
00:40:174 (5) - New combo (1,2,3,4,5)
00:49:193 (4) - New combo (1,2,3,4)
☆~Insane~☆
I prefer with CS -1(lol)
01:42:015 Spinner - Begin to 01:41:831
That's all for me.
Very nice beatmap !
☆~Star~☆
thx~fixedSapphireGhost wrote:
Oh hi modding time~ (You posted in a mod4mod queue so please mod one of my maps too when you have time )
[Hard]
00:57:107 (2) - I don't like the overlap with (1) here.
That's mostly it! Have a star for your efforts.
thx for odaril modOdaril wrote:
Please reply to his mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game >.<
General
The maximum size for combobursts is 800x500. You need to resize yours...fixed
Aleks' Easy
Looks fine.
Normal
The rhythms used are simpler than in Easy...o(╯□╰)o
Hard
00:03:364 (1) - Surprisingly far from the center of the screen so soon after the spinner.
01:28:763 (2,3,4) - Space them in a better way ? The pattern will look at lot better.(Some minor adjustments)
Insane
I fail to mod this. This diff is just 1/2 all the way through that doesn't even fit the song for the sake of making an Insane diff. Not to mention the high spacing hardly fits....
00:43:119 (1,1,1,1) - The new combo here make the pattern absolutely unreadable. You should reduce the jumps as well...
00:54:898 (1,1,1,1) - Remove the new combo as well, for the same reasons...fixed
(oh my poor diff 。。but I dont understand how to change orz,just changed to CS+1.。T.T)
The first three diffs were okay, but I really didn't like the Insane. It's here only for the sake of having an Insane diff...
-kevincela- wrote:
[Aleks' Easy]
00:59:315 (4) - Maybe flip this orizontally? nope, thanks
Edit : without changeswinber1 wrote:
--I don't like the whistle sound, doesn't fit in this song imo We have different opinions :3
That's it for this difficulty. Looks fine other than that ty
Mystica wrote:
Hi.
Here comes my mod.[Normal]
fine.But I feel it's similar to the Easy.It's just my feeling?
[Hard]
00:28:395 New combo?
[Insane]
00:07:045 new combo?
00:12:935 this jump may not fits this part?
00:45:696 New Combo?
00:48:640 ^
00:57:475 ^
other parts seems fine.
Well done.I think you have spent effort on this map.
Own this star.-kevincela- wrote:
Ok,here's my mod[Normal]
00:39:070 - Add a note?
00:41:646 (4) - New combo?
00:42:935 (6) - Remove combo?
[Hard]
Fine~
[Insane]
Nothing to say apart that this difficulty is all 1/2 D:
Star~winber1 wrote:
Sorry for slow mod :/Insane
01:10:358(1,2,3,4) - perhaps use soft hitsounds instead of normal. Then use whistle instead of clap on combo 1 and 3. Start the normal hitsounds on combo 5.
01:11:094(5,7) - place claps on these
01:41:646(5) - completely silence it? I don't think it needs a very soft finish here.
01:46:432(spinner) - sould end a little louder imo, like how it does in hard.
Hard
00:21:217(1) - remove finish (keep the first finish tho).
01:01:800(2) - I think you should space this note, not just stack it. It also makes it easier to read.
01:10:358(1,2,3,4) - same as in insane
Normal
00:08:518(2) - add clap
00:10:726(2,4) - claps on these two combos sound weird. They should be on combo 1 and 3
00:12:199(4) - replace clap with finish
00:21:033(1) - finish
00:27:659(1) - spacing is a little off :/. You may consider adding a note to make the spacing work. I guess it's readable though.
00:57:475(2) - start this slider at 00:57:659 and end it in the same place. Then fix spacing
01:10:358(1,2) - same as in insane. Use soft hitsounds?
Nice map! :3
Star~~Dark_Ai wrote:
Mod Queues:
thx fior mod~~
jericho2442 wrote:
i would say -2 onto your offsetnomal and insane:all fixedNormal
00:26:186 (7,1) - ok first off you need to put the newcombo in the (7) to follow pattern and remove it from the (1), then you need to give these 2 more space between them, they are too close for the timing of them, thus they feels odd to play
00:41:646 (4) - need a new combo here
00:42:935 (1,2) - remove the new combo from this (1) and put it on the (2)
01:18:272 (4) - new combo
01:24:162 (4) - new combo
Hard
(suggestion) 00:14:407 (6) - maybe a new combo here to help with the rhythm change
seemed nice
Insane
00:20:849 (7,1) - this having smaller spacing compared to all the notes before it felt really odd, i advise to give this larger spacing like the notes before it, that way it helps flow the player into the spacing change
00:27:843 (3,4) - ok this really needs more space, in the middle of a jump pattern you have this anti jump note, it feels out of place and also dont suit the pattern your doing, please give it the same spacing as the rest of the pattern
00:47:168 (12) - reverse this slider so it flows with the jump you use at (5,6) like this
00:50:113 (1,2,3) - i advise a placement like the picture below, this way it flows better due to each note has a 1grid increase between the notes rather than it looking like just one note out of place
01:11:094 (5) - new combo to help the player to change to the larger spacing and to also split the chorus starting abit
01:14:039 (1,2) - have too much space, it plays odd and feels odd, i advise to give every note in this combo the same spacing
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well that will keep you busy for abit, i like the set, just insane needs some fixing up
hard:Thanks for your advice
Thanks for modding! :3jericho2442 wrote:
Aleks' Easy
just a few tiny combo things Phuuuuh
00:12:199 (4) - kinda needs a new combo to follow your pattern fixed
00:26:187 (4) - new combo to show the change in lyric feel and pattern fixed
(suggestion) 00:43:119 (4) - maybe new combo here to help give the drums more power like the song does nope
NoHItter wrote:
Aleks' Easy
You should update Aleks' diff with the one he posted on the thread.
This mod is for the updated version he posted.
01:39:990 (2,1) - Perhaps add one repeat here then move the spinner 1/2 forward to form a Post-Spinner Note instead? Sounds better IMO.
Normal
00:04:100 -> 00:15:143 - Combo suggestion:SPOILER00:24:346 (6) - New combo? - IMO it would follow the vocals better.00:06:309 (4) - New combo
00:07:781 (1) - Remove new combo
00:09:254 (3) - New combo
00:09:990 (1) - Remove new combo
00:26:186 (1) - Remove new combo?
Other than that, all good.
Hard
Nice job on this.
Insane
00:11:831 (5) - [Suggestion] Perhaps you can not make this a jump and make it something like this instead?
00:27:475 (1) - Kind of odd that the spacing shifts here suddenly.
00:42:751 (5) - IMO it's kind of surprising on it's own, maybe reduce the speed to 1.2x?
00:55:818 (1) - ^
01:35:389 (1) - Same comment as 00:27:475 (1).
01:40:542 (5) - Perhaps make this more symmetric like this maybe? I have the code for the slider if you want.
Thank you, updated~NoHItter wrote:
Aleks' Easy
01:39:990 (2,1) - Perhaps add one repeat here then move the spinner 1/2 forward <= fixed
to form a Post-Spinner Note instead? <= nope
thx for mod~fixed somethingIceBeam wrote:
Per Aleks' request.
[Aleks's Easy]
00:59:315 (4) - Вот как-то мне не очень нравится,может развернешь его как-нибудь так:
Няшка!
[Normal]
Custom claps fit better I suppose.Why not to use them from first section?
00:00:788 (1) - Finish?
00:06:309 (1) - ^
00:44:591 (1) - ^
00:50:481 (2) - ^
00:56:370 (1) - ^
00:59:315 (1) - ^
01:11:094 (3) - ^
01:16:984 (3) - ^
I don't see any problems with gameplay,good job!
[Hard]
Soft claps sound disgusting
Fine to me,though some sliders could look better.
[Insane]
Soft claps again..don't use them please :<
00:35:757 (4) - Cymbals are clearly heard in the song,add finish?
00:44:591 (1) - ^
00:47:536 (1) - ^
00:50:481 (2) - ^
00:52:045 (7) - Remove this note,it's off!
01:01:524 (1,2,3) - Spacing doesn't help to read blue tick on (2)-nd note.I think you need to place (1) much closer to 01:01:156 (8).
01:22:873 (3) - New combo? Finish,btw.
01:28:763 (4) - Finish.
01:34:653 (4) - ^
01:41:646 - Use lower volume/soft section for this note.
Nice,star~
i love kirby~~~>.<Starrodkirby86 wrote:
[Aleks' Easy]:
Heeey! Nice clean, sleek work you got here. Hitsound usage is nice. My only gripe though is how inaudible those timing sections at 30%. They're really difficult to hear; though fortunately it's only a minor area and I understand where you were going with that.
[Normal]:
Maaan. That's nice to see, a Normal that acts like a Normal. Kudos to you. The beginning's soft-hitnormal sound is a little bit gentle for my tastes, but really, overall it's a nice package. Keep up the good work there.
[Hard]:
Really smooth, clean. No complaints here.
[Insane]:
Niiice. It reminds me a little of MoonFragrance's maps in how I can fly through the song without fighting it. Interestingly, this pattern at first caught me in a tangle -- 01:39:438 (1,2,3,4,5) - The (1) and (2) felt too close to each other. But after another try, I was able to get it quickly. I suppose my cursor was just flying around too much -- and my sightread sort of failed me.
With that, I'm bubbling this. If you'd like to make a change, please, please, please don't hesitate! It's not like this bubble is some sacred relic that you will never get again. If you make a change, just forum PM me or something and let me know. Otherwise, let's have fun.
Night_Side wrote:
Thank youStarrodkirby86 wrote:
[Aleks' Easy]:
Heeey! Nice clean, sleek work you got here. Hitsound usage is nice. My only gripe though is how inaudible those timing sections at 30%. They're really difficult to hear; though fortunately it's only a minor area and I understand where you were going with that.
i love kirby~~~>.< Me too :3