1. 00:49:970 (2) - to me, these sound a bit too loud. Lower the volume on all of these notes with that hitsound.
2. 01:27:656 (6) - 0_o you forgot the clap here
3. 01:41:540 (2) - same as before

1. 00:56:912 (4) - add finish at the end of the slider
2. 01:00:383 (1) - remove combo
3. 01:03:854 (2,3) - add finish
4. 01:47:986 (2) - ^
5. 01:55:424 (1,2) - ^
6. 02:09:804 (4) - looks a bit sloppy, make it more circular or not a circle at all
7. 02:11:292 (2,3) - add finish
8. 02:35:218 (4) - 1 grid up
9. 02:35:961 (4) - 1 grid down , 1 right
10. 03:09:804 - do the crescendo here (increase the volume as you go)

1. 00:36:582 (5,3) - i don't like how these sliders touch..
2. 02:07:574 (4,5,6) - hmmm, a 1/4 slider stream out of nowhere, seems a bit random
3. 02:22:698 (1,2) - ^
4. 02:47:491 (6,7) - ^

chamelepeace710 wrote:

By Mod Request:

[Roddie's Normal]

1. 00:49:970 (2) - to me, these sound a bit too loud. Lower the volume on all of these notes with that hitsound. Fixed
2. 01:27:656 (6) - 0_o you forgot the clap here clap here already
3. 01:41:540 (2) - same as before Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:56:912 (4) - add finish at the end of the slider yes.
2. 01:00:383 (1) - remove combo no.
3. 01:03:854 (2,3) - add finish no.
4. 01:47:986 (2) - ^ no.
5. 01:55:424 (1,2) - ^ no
6. 02:09:804 (4) - looks a bit sloppy, make it more circular or not a circle at all Fixed
7. 02:11:292 (2,3) - add finish no.
8. 02:35:218 (4) - 1 grid up yes.
9. 02:35:961 (4) - 1 grid down , 1 right yes.
10. 03:09:804 - do the crescendo here (increase the volume as you go) yes.

Yeah, some of these are suggestions, but you will be ok...

Star!

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Hard] Fixed
01:06:457 - Insert a break in here.
01:13:523 (1,2,3) - Spacing error.
01:40:052 (1,2) - These sliders could look better imo, for example try to avoid overlapping between them.
02:12:284 (4) - The end of this slider looks a bit weird, changing the shape a bit can make it look better http://puu.sh/16Yh it feels too forced to fit a circle right now, guess the same could be said about the start of the slider, using a couple more control points could help you get a better circle.
02:36:581 (6) - New combo.
03:12:036 (1) - This spinner feels like it should start 1/2 earlier, also since you're switching back to instruments in mid spinner i recommend you silence the end of this spinner.

[Roddie's Normal] Fixed
Preview point is different (this may sound nazi but i rather avoid problems in song selection or something)

This map is far from ready, get more mods and start working =) O.O
Also 1 own diff and 4 guest diffs? wth XD i recommend you make 2 diffs yourself next time :< ok.. i will

NoHItter wrote:

Roddie's Normal
Solid Normal.

NoHItter wrote:

00:25:672 (x) - Well since, 00:21:705 has a note, then maybe put a note here too? Okay.
01:45:011 (x) - Add a note here. Previous chorus had a note here after the same lyric. I'll just add another repeat.
01:48:482 (5) - Clap at start? All set.
01:52:945 (x) - Add a note here? I'll just add another repeat here too.

NoHItter wrote:

Sorry for the late reply, anyway here you go:

Kino to decide =)

kino's Easy
Could you map this to the end?
There are some confusing 1/2's there. I would suggest you changing them.
Also the number of repeat sliders and their varying number of repeats is also confusing.

00:53:937 (5) - New combo?
00:55:424 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:01:870 (5) - New combo?
01:03:358 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:25:176 (1) - Could you not anti-jump this? Especially on an Easy.
01:45:507 (6) - New combo.
01:53:441 (5) - New combo?
01:54:928 (1) - Remove new combo?

was fixed from Roddie =)

Roddie's Normal
Solid Normal.

00:25:672 (x) - Well since, 00:21:705 has a note, then maybe put a note here too?
01:45:011 (x) - Add a note here. Previous chorus had a note here after the same lyric.
01:48:482 (5) - Clap at start?
01:52:945 (x) - Add a note here?

Hard
The difficulty could use some tidying up
Also I don't like those kiai refountains at the end... There are too much IMO.

01:29:639 (4) - Well if you follow the combo scheme ahead, then this must be New Combo'd
02:28:399 (4) - New combo?
02:29:391 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:30:135 (5) - New combo?
02:30:879 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:38:069 (2) - IDK about this part. Shouldn't this part be in 1/4 as the vocal is at 02:38:193?
02:55:176 (1) - IMO it would be better if you end the spinner at 02:55:920 instead.

^ All Fixed

Dragon to decide =)

Dragon's Insane
I don't like the extreme number of spacing changes
Occasion spacing changes like 00:24:680 (1,2,3) are fine, but perhaps you can make them in defined sections of the song.
Spacing changes like 00:27:656 (1,2,3,4,5,6), 00:40:052 (1,2,3,4,5), 01:19:226 (1,2,3,4), 02:35:590(1,2,3,4) etc. don't make sense...

00:31:623 (7) - Don't use a slow slider IMO.
00:33:110 (3) - Spacing.
01:01:623 (1,2,3,4) - Very confusing IMO. You already used Central Anti-jumps in the previous combo. Not to mention the (4) throws people off track.
01:03:358 (1,2,3) - Sudden slowdown. Confusing. (Not to mention the previous slider looks exactly the same.)
01:12:780 (1,2) - This jump doesn't make sense.
01:15:507 (4,5,6) - ^
01:16:251 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:17:242 (3) - New combo
01:23:193 (3) - Sudden slowdown again.
01:26:168 (1) - Remove new combo
01:28:399 (4) - Sudden jump...
01:55:176 (1,2,3,4) - Sudden slowdown.
01:59:639 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really sudden spacing change...
02:10:796 (1,2,3) - Sudden slowdown.
02:36:457 (1) - Move this 1/4 forward while making it end at the same time.
02:39:556 (1,2,3,4) - Really sudden spacing change.
03:26:168 (1,2) - Sudden slowdown again...

Sakura Hana wrote:

[kino's Easy]
Map until the end?
00:31:375 (4) - Starting this slider on the red tick is really awkward and is reflected on the sliderticks too
00:33:606 (1,2) - 1.5 beat spacing can be confusing for newbies.
00:41:540 (1,2) - ^
00:45:507 (1,2,3,4) - Pretty much combine both things in here from the previous issues ^^;;
01:25:176 (1) - Add a finish. Fixed~
01:29:143 (1) - ^
01:32:118 (7) - ^ At slider end.
01:38:813 (2,3) - 1.5 beat spaing again ehhhh...
02:09:309 (6) - New combo Fixed~

NoHItter wrote:

Skino's Easy
Could you map this to the end?
There are some confusing 1/2's there. I would suggest you changing them.
Also the number of repeat sliders and their varying number of repeats is also confusing.

00:53:937 (5) - New combo?
00:55:424 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:01:870 (5) - New combo?
01:03:358 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:25:176 (1) - Could you not anti-jump this? Especially on an Easy. Was I?
01:45:507 (6) - New combo. Fixed~
01:53:441 (5) - New combo?
01:54:928 (1) - Remove new combo?

HeatKai wrote:

Hey bourdon
In tags > heatwave95 change to HeatKai , I just change my name =3

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
Roddie diff's preview time different from others. Fixed
combo colour 1,2 is very close, so consider to switch the order or change the colour... Fixed

Taiko mod here >_<

Heatkai will Fix it

- HP, AR, OA-1
00:29:639 - no need to use k to stress the 6th note? kkkkkkd
00:59:391 - kdddk
01:06:209 ~ 01:07:077 - 2-plets seems weird to me...
01:52:201 - kkddddd

Rating (-1~1)
Pattern : 0.5
Density : 1

star~ >_<

Ayeen wrote:

Hi from Sarawakian:

Lovely song, here some suggestion from me :

Kino's Easy:
[attachment=0:01715]Taylor Swift - Mine (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Hitsound suggestion].osu[/attachment:01715]
This for hitsound, and I did rearrange some slider in here. But this is time before the break.

The rest of difficulty, I will see some of it later.

Raging Bull wrote:

All are suggestions so don't have to follow them.

Easy
00:23:689 (4) - One grid down? yes.
Map the rest? I think it's better to make the beginners be able to play the full song, but it's up to you.

Normal
00:59:639 (6) - Move one grid down no~
00:59:887 (7) - Move two grid left no~
01:51:953 (4) - Move one grid down no~
02:37:821 (1) - Seems kinda offbeat. Maybe like this?

Hard
00:19:474 (6) - One grid left no~
00:33:606 (5) - Maybe add whistle hitsound? yes.
00:37:573 (1) - ^ yes
00:41:540 (6) - ^ yes
01:28:647 (3) - Add whistle or finish hitsound at the end? no~
01:33:110 (1) - Add whistle or finish hitsound at the beginning? no~
02:37:821 (1) - This part again. Seems offbeat. Make it repeat twice? (I think it's just me though >.> )

Dragon's Memories
02:37:822 (1) - Again -.- I think it really is me. O.O
03:12:284 (1) - Remove Kiai? Keep it consistent with the other diffs. yes
03:39:309 (2) - One grid down? yes

Can't find anything major so just nazi spacing. >.< Starred!

arien666 wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24185

[General]
[Suggestion] If possible, why don't you try to get better quality video? i will try to get a better quality video.

[kino's Easy]
01:32:118 (7) - [Suggestion] Move like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/82188 no~

[Roddie's Normal]
00:45:507 (1) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid right? yes~

[Hard]
01:03:854 (2) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid up with lv4? yes.
01:08:193 (2,3,4) - [Suggestion] Little confusing?

[Dragon's Memories]
00:56:417 (2) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid left? yes.
01:46:994 - Err... Intended non-Kiai? Fixed.
03:08:813 (2) - [Nazi Suggestion] Use this code to make slider better sight :3? yes~

1

200,104,188813,2,8,B|128:176|144:272|200:312|256:287|312:312|368:272|384:176|312:104,2,500

[Hw's Taiko]
02:04:598 - Kiai should not be end on here ;_; Fixed.



:3

1. AR7, 8 is too fast compared with the small general spacing
2. 00:36:581 (5,1,2) - spacing
3. 00:50:962 (4,5,6) - this repeating sliders are out of music
4. 01:46:995 (3) - new combo
5. 03:21:706 (4) - random whistle on the ending circle?
6. 03:30:136 (4,5,6,7) - out of music

1. 03:44:019 (1,2) - fix the spacing, it should be twice the current one.
2. slider velocity is a bit slow.

Colin Hou wrote:

[Dragon's Memories]:

1. AR7, 8 is too fast compared with the small general spacing
2. 00:36:581 (5,1,2) - spacing no~
3. 00:50:962 (4,5,6) - this repeating sliders are out of music
4. 01:46:995 (3) - new combo
5. 03:21:706 (4) - random whistle on the ending circle?
6. 03:30:136 (4,5,6,7) - out of music

[Hard]:

1. 03:44:019 (1,2) - fix the spacing, it should be twice the current one.
2. slider velocity is a bit slow.

and star~

Krisom wrote:

Modding due to HeatKai's mod request request :>

General-
it seems that everything is ok here

Dragon's-
At first, when the squished sliders were intentional, I was like "Oh, that looks nice", then you started imitating some frequent slidershapes (I dunno if it was intentional or not) and it felt awkward.
HP 8 Doesn't seems to fit that much, I'd say HP -1 or -2
00:48:482 (4,1) - Too far away (and not that intuitive) imo. Try to make them closer D:
01:40:548 (8,1) - ^
02:29:639 (7,8,9) - If you're going to overlap them, mak the overlaps even so it looks organized .(9) is more hidden under (8) than (8) under (7)
03:03:358 (4,1,2) - Flows quite weirdly, I'd make something like [img=http://puu.sh/1Via]this[/img] to keep the flow. Also, spacing between these notes is not even (and it is noticeable while playing)
03:11:292 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make these normal hitnormals to match the drums?

Hard-
Lovely

Roddie's-
00:42:036 - Slidertick fell out of place for me. I mean, during the whole combo, only 6 has a drum hitsound. Why this slidertick too?
01:03:358 (5) - Aren't you lacking a clap at the end?
03:31:623 (5) - Why doesn't this claps sounds like the other ones in the same combo?

kino's-
01:24:185 (4,1) - Spacing? They are too close to each other (1/1 distance when they are 2/1 apart). I'd ctrl+h everything from (1) to 01:28:151 (7) - , that way you'll keep the other patterns
LOVELY DIFF!

Hw's-
<3

Starred

Screenagers wrote:

starrrrr

SapphireGhost wrote:

Don't give up now!

[General]
- Fully map all difficulties! That would be very nice. ya, but personally i don't like easy diff is fully and as kino said :
When I was a new player I wouldn't like long map,so the length for mow is good to me.
- Even though there are guest mappers, I'd end kiai at 02:12:780 on all diffs. yes.
- Stack Leniency should probably be a bit higher. just set at center
- Use Tick Rate 2 for all difficulties, it's good for sliders to have ticks and it fits the song. yes.

[kino's Easy]
00:31:375 (4) - Overlaps with the HP Bar which is technically rankable, but easily avoidable so I'd suggest changing it somehow. Fixed.

[Roddie's Normal] is 'Roddie' not me (Bourdon) xD
00:30:631 (3) - Don't silence the slider, it should at least make some sort of sound. Fixed.
02:52:697 (1) - It feels really awkward for the spinner to end here, end it on a beat? Fixed.
03:42:036 (1) - I'd remove this spinner entirely, but if you keep it end it on one of the large white ticks. Fixed.

[Hard]
- Reduce HP Drain by 1 tick, it's too high at the moment. Fixed.
00:31:375 (7) - Again about silencing stuff. Fixed.
02:12:284 (4) - End this object 1/1 tick earlier. Fixed.
03:42:036 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - It's a bit odd that the decrescendo is mapped, but end it on one of the large white ticks. Fixed.

I can't remember the official name for one the large white ticks. Yay!

1. 00:57:408 (1) - Add finish
2. 01:09:309 (1) - ^
3. 01:16:747 (3) - Forget to add whistle here?
4. 01:23:193 (2) - Add finish
5. 02:12:284 (5) - ^

1. 01:04:846 (5) - Add finish with about 70% wolume sounds nice
2. 01:28:647 (6) - Add clap
3. 01:37:077 (4) - Seems no finish sound better, you could try add whistle to 4,5,6
4. 01:40:548 spinner - Ends with 70% volume finish instead of clap seems better
5. 01:44:515 (9) - Add clap
6. 01:48:482 (5) - Finish instead of clap seems better
7. 01:55:424 (4) - Custom normal clap1 here as previous and add finish to 01:56:416
8. 02:03:482 - Add a timing section set soft custom sound1 here
9. 02:43:523 (4) - Remove clap
10. 03:19:722 (4) - Add finish with about 60%-70% volume

1. 01:33:606 (1) - I guess you forget to add clap here
2. 02:38:193 (1) - Oh no, clap sounds odd here, remove would be better
3. 03:41:788 (2) - Add finish

Breeze wrote:

Hi there

[kino's Easy]

1. 00:57:408 (1) - Add finish
2. 01:09:309 (1) - ^
3. 01:16:747 (3) - Forget to add whistle here?
4. 01:23:193 (2) - Add finish
5. 02:12:284 (5) - ^

[Roddie's Normal]

1. 01:04:846 (5) - Add finish with about 70% wolume sounds nice
2. 01:28:647 (6) - Add clap
3. 01:37:077 (4) - Seems no finish sound better, you could try add whistle to 4,5,6 hmm... no, but i added finish sound at (4) and (5)
4. 01:40:548 spinner - Ends with 70% volume finish instead of clap seems better
5. 01:44:515 (9) - Add clap
6. 01:48:482 (5) - Finish instead of clap seems better
7. 01:55:424 (4) - Custom normal clap1 here as previous and add finish to 01:56:416
8. 02:03:482 - Add a timing section set soft custom sound1 here
9. 02:43:523 (4) - Remove clap
10. 03:19:722 (4) - Add finish with about 60%-70% volume

[Hard]

1. 01:33:606 (1) - I guess you forget to add clap here
2. 02:38:193 (1) - Oh no, clap sounds odd here, remove would be better
3. 03:41:788 (2) - Add finish

nice map
star