Ayeen wrote:

Hi from Sarawakian:

Lovely song, here some suggestion from me :

Kino's Easy:
[attachment=0:01715]Taylor Swift - Mine (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Hitsound suggestion].osu[/attachment:01715]
This for hitsound, and I did rearrange some slider in here. But this is time before the break.

The rest of difficulty, I will see some of it later.

Raging Bull wrote:

All are suggestions so don't have to follow them.

Easy
00:23:689 (4) - One grid down? yes.
Map the rest? I think it's better to make the beginners be able to play the full song, but it's up to you.

Normal
00:59:639 (6) - Move one grid down no~
00:59:887 (7) - Move two grid left no~
01:51:953 (4) - Move one grid down no~
02:37:821 (1) - Seems kinda offbeat. Maybe like this?

Hard
00:19:474 (6) - One grid left no~
00:33:606 (5) - Maybe add whistle hitsound? yes.
00:37:573 (1) - ^ yes
00:41:540 (6) - ^ yes
01:28:647 (3) - Add whistle or finish hitsound at the end? no~
01:33:110 (1) - Add whistle or finish hitsound at the beginning? no~
02:37:821 (1) - This part again. Seems offbeat. Make it repeat twice? (I think it's just me though >.> )

Dragon's Memories
02:37:822 (1) - Again -.- I think it really is me. O.O
03:12:284 (1) - Remove Kiai? Keep it consistent with the other diffs. yes
03:39:309 (2) - One grid down? yes

Can't find anything major so just nazi spacing. >.< Starred!

arien666 wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24185

[General]
[Suggestion] If possible, why don't you try to get better quality video? i will try to get a better quality video.

[kino's Easy]
01:32:118 (7) - [Suggestion] Move like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/82188 no~

[Roddie's Normal]
00:45:507 (1) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid right? yes~

[Hard]
01:03:854 (2) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid up with lv4? yes.
01:08:193 (2,3,4) - [Suggestion] Little confusing?

[Dragon's Memories]
00:56:417 (2) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid left? yes.
01:46:994 - Err... Intended non-Kiai? Fixed.
03:08:813 (2) - [Nazi Suggestion] Use this code to make slider better sight :3? yes~

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200,104,188813,2,8,B|128:176|144:272|200:312|256:287|312:312|368:272|384:176|312:104,2,500

[Hw's Taiko]
02:04:598 - Kiai should not be end on here ;_; Fixed.



:3

1. AR7, 8 is too fast compared with the small general spacing
2. 00:36:581 (5,1,2) - spacing
3. 00:50:962 (4,5,6) - this repeating sliders are out of music
4. 01:46:995 (3) - new combo
5. 03:21:706 (4) - random whistle on the ending circle?
6. 03:30:136 (4,5,6,7) - out of music

1. 03:44:019 (1,2) - fix the spacing, it should be twice the current one.
2. slider velocity is a bit slow.

Colin Hou wrote:

[Dragon's Memories]:

1. AR7, 8 is too fast compared with the small general spacing
2. 00:36:581 (5,1,2) - spacing no~
3. 00:50:962 (4,5,6) - this repeating sliders are out of music
4. 01:46:995 (3) - new combo
5. 03:21:706 (4) - random whistle on the ending circle?
6. 03:30:136 (4,5,6,7) - out of music

[Hard]:

1. 03:44:019 (1,2) - fix the spacing, it should be twice the current one.
2. slider velocity is a bit slow.

and star~

Krisom wrote:

Modding due to HeatKai's mod request request :>

General-
it seems that everything is ok here

Dragon's-
At first, when the squished sliders were intentional, I was like "Oh, that looks nice", then you started imitating some frequent slidershapes (I dunno if it was intentional or not) and it felt awkward.
HP 8 Doesn't seems to fit that much, I'd say HP -1 or -2
00:48:482 (4,1) - Too far away (and not that intuitive) imo. Try to make them closer D:
01:40:548 (8,1) - ^
02:29:639 (7,8,9) - If you're going to overlap them, mak the overlaps even so it looks organized .(9) is more hidden under (8) than (8) under (7)
03:03:358 (4,1,2) - Flows quite weirdly, I'd make something like [img=http://puu.sh/1Via]this[/img] to keep the flow. Also, spacing between these notes is not even (and it is noticeable while playing)
03:11:292 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make these normal hitnormals to match the drums?

Hard-
Lovely

Roddie's-
00:42:036 - Slidertick fell out of place for me. I mean, during the whole combo, only 6 has a drum hitsound. Why this slidertick too?
01:03:358 (5) - Aren't you lacking a clap at the end?
03:31:623 (5) - Why doesn't this claps sounds like the other ones in the same combo?

kino's-
01:24:185 (4,1) - Spacing? They are too close to each other (1/1 distance when they are 2/1 apart). I'd ctrl+h everything from (1) to 01:28:151 (7) - , that way you'll keep the other patterns
LOVELY DIFF!

Hw's-
<3

Starred

Screenagers wrote:

starrrrr

SapphireGhost wrote:

Don't give up now!

[General]
- Fully map all difficulties! That would be very nice. ya, but personally i don't like easy diff is fully and as kino said :
When I was a new player I wouldn't like long map,so the length for mow is good to me.
- Even though there are guest mappers, I'd end kiai at 02:12:780 on all diffs. yes.
- Stack Leniency should probably be a bit higher. just set at center
- Use Tick Rate 2 for all difficulties, it's good for sliders to have ticks and it fits the song. yes.

[kino's Easy]
00:31:375 (4) - Overlaps with the HP Bar which is technically rankable, but easily avoidable so I'd suggest changing it somehow. Fixed.

[Roddie's Normal] is 'Roddie' not me (Bourdon) xD
00:30:631 (3) - Don't silence the slider, it should at least make some sort of sound. Fixed.
02:52:697 (1) - It feels really awkward for the spinner to end here, end it on a beat? Fixed.
03:42:036 (1) - I'd remove this spinner entirely, but if you keep it end it on one of the large white ticks. Fixed.

[Hard]
- Reduce HP Drain by 1 tick, it's too high at the moment. Fixed.
00:31:375 (7) - Again about silencing stuff. Fixed.
02:12:284 (4) - End this object 1/1 tick earlier. Fixed.
03:42:036 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - It's a bit odd that the decrescendo is mapped, but end it on one of the large white ticks. Fixed.

I can't remember the official name for one the large white ticks. Yay!

1. 00:57:408 (1) - Add finish
2. 01:09:309 (1) - ^
3. 01:16:747 (3) - Forget to add whistle here?
4. 01:23:193 (2) - Add finish
5. 02:12:284 (5) - ^

1. 01:04:846 (5) - Add finish with about 70% wolume sounds nice
2. 01:28:647 (6) - Add clap
3. 01:37:077 (4) - Seems no finish sound better, you could try add whistle to 4,5,6
4. 01:40:548 spinner - Ends with 70% volume finish instead of clap seems better
5. 01:44:515 (9) - Add clap
6. 01:48:482 (5) - Finish instead of clap seems better
7. 01:55:424 (4) - Custom normal clap1 here as previous and add finish to 01:56:416
8. 02:03:482 - Add a timing section set soft custom sound1 here
9. 02:43:523 (4) - Remove clap
10. 03:19:722 (4) - Add finish with about 60%-70% volume

1. 01:33:606 (1) - I guess you forget to add clap here
2. 02:38:193 (1) - Oh no, clap sounds odd here, remove would be better
3. 03:41:788 (2) - Add finish

Breeze wrote:

Hi there

[kino's Easy]

1. 00:57:408 (1) - Add finish
2. 01:09:309 (1) - ^
3. 01:16:747 (3) - Forget to add whistle here?
4. 01:23:193 (2) - Add finish
5. 02:12:284 (5) - ^

[Roddie's Normal]

1. 01:04:846 (5) - Add finish with about 70% wolume sounds nice
2. 01:28:647 (6) - Add clap
3. 01:37:077 (4) - Seems no finish sound better, you could try add whistle to 4,5,6 hmm... no, but i added finish sound at (4) and (5)
4. 01:40:548 spinner - Ends with 70% volume finish instead of clap seems better
5. 01:44:515 (9) - Add clap
6. 01:48:482 (5) - Finish instead of clap seems better
7. 01:55:424 (4) - Custom normal clap1 here as previous and add finish to 01:56:416
8. 02:03:482 - Add a timing section set soft custom sound1 here
9. 02:43:523 (4) - Remove clap
10. 03:19:722 (4) - Add finish with about 60%-70% volume

[Hard]

1. 01:33:606 (1) - I guess you forget to add clap here
2. 02:38:193 (1) - Oh no, clap sounds odd here, remove would be better
3. 03:41:788 (2) - Add finish

nice map
star

Breeze wrote:

Hi there

[kino's Easy]

1. 00:57:408 (1) - Add finish
2. 01:09:309 (1) - ^
3. 01:16:747 (3) - Forget to add whistle here?
4. 01:23:193 (2) - Add finish
5. 02:12:284 (5) - ^

[Roddie's Normal]

1. 01:04:846 (5) - Add finish with about 70% wolume sounds nice
2. 01:28:647 (6) - Add clap
3. 01:37:077 (4) - Seems no finish sound better, you could try add whistle to 4,5,6
4. 01:40:548 spinner - Ends with 70% volume finish instead of clap seems better
5. 01:44:515 (9) - Add clap
6. 01:48:482 (5) - Finish instead of clap seems better
7. 01:55:424 (4) - Custom normal clap1 here as previous and add finish to 01:56:416
8. 02:03:482 - Add a timing section set soft custom sound1 here
9. 02:43:523 (4) - Remove clap
10. 03:19:722 (4) - Add finish with about 60%-70% volume

[Hard]

1. 01:33:606 (1) - I guess you forget to add clap here
2. 02:38:193 (1) - Oh no, clap sounds odd here, remove would be better
3. 03:41:788 (2) - Add finish

nice map
star

Breeze wrote:

Yea, it's good enough
just make sure one thing
[Hard] : Are you sure use HP drain rate 7? It seems a bit high, one could easily failed while missing 2 notes. It depends on you
When you've made the decision, let me know (Forum or in-game PM both fine)

Breeze wrote:

Do not bump map via in-game submittion :/
Just post something could bump it, BTW it seems bubbled map will not get graveyard
Anyway Bubble fixed

Sakura Hana wrote:

HeatKai, please dont double/triple post and use the edit button next time, i had the merge a lot of your double and triple posts in this thread.

Anyways time to mod this map:
[HW's Taiko]
Any reason why you're using an HP Drain of 7? that's a lot on Taiko for a 2 minute map.

[Roddie's Normal]
00:33:606 (1,2,4) - I'm hearing sliderslide here while they are normally silenced on the map, recheck your hitsounds? or is it intentional?
02:37:821 (1) - This slider is mostly covered by a hitburst and u dont get to see the full slider with the repeat until you're almost about to hit the slider, so i suggest moving it

[kino's Easy]
Since it's already bubbled im not gonna suggest to map it until the end, however i'd highly suggest changing the kick sliders (Like 00:20:713 (5) ) into something else, because short repeat sliders that repeat more than once can be confusing to play for new players

Popping over barely visible slider on Normal, and kick sliders on Easy, rest are suggestions/concerns, take in mind the kick sliders are a big change so i wont be able to rank after the fixes are done

Oh btw, you are free to ask me for rebubble on this map, dont mind my siggy

Sakura Hana wrote:

HeatKai, please dont double/triple post and use the edit button next time, i had the merge a lot of your double and triple posts in this thread.

Alace wrote:

I suggest +7 ms to your offset
if you agree with that, you need to move all of your green lines in all diffs.
Also you need to check all kiai/speed green lines if they are snapped well

<Easy>
00:31:375 (4) - maybe you can mute those sliderticks by green line
00:47:242 (4) - ^

by the way, there are some overlapped green lines in easy/normal/hard, you can use F6 to check those stuffs and remove useless lines

Breeze wrote:

Another Taylor Swift song map got RANKed
good job and congratulations

IkkiMinami wrote:

Alright then Rebubbled~

Good luck! o/