Kite wrote:

[Normal]
00:36:741 (1) - Spinner is too short and sudden for easiest difficulty, replace with a slider instead? fixed
00:54:923 (2) - 1 more repeat? (If you do then respace 00:55:832 (1)) fixed
01:01:105 - Add a beat? not fixed (lyrics means "crossing" so I express it.sorry)
01:36:378 (1) - Same as previous spinner fixed
02:32:378 (2) - 1 more repeat? (Respace next beat) fixed
02:41:832 (3) - 2 grids up and 1 grid to the left? Looks better if it doesnt touch the previous slider ; Also ending point of slider 3 grids to the right and 1 down? fixed
02:43:287 (1) - ^ if you did that 1 grid to right fixed

[Nazi]
Preview point on Normal and Insane is 51281 fixed
Preview point on banvi's Hard is 51287

Mapset is nice and fun to play. Timing is good~
The only thing that bothered me was the first break after 15 seconds of playing.. it's kinda silly :< (You should map it imo)
h'm I suppose it is not problem.

eveless wrote:

[Insane]
00:06:559 (2) - looks like crowded , a bit farther than now plz~ fixed
（このように　

SPOILER

00:08:014 (2) - ^ fixed

00:42:559 (x) - add a slider too , the position can be here~ fixed

SPOILER

remeber to newcombo

00:46:923 (5) - add 3 repeat not fixed
01:01:832 (2) - crowed ;.; fixed
01:36:741 (3) - ^ fixed
01:42:196 (5) - same with before fixed
01:47:105 (10) - add a note o.o not fixed
02:49:287 (4,6) - new combo it ba fixed

[Normal]
maybe 0.5 in a easy diff will have some problems :3 fixed
AR-1 fixed

00:01:832 (2) - New combo fixed
00:59:650 (4) - not stacked properly fixed

いい譜面だ！

eveless wrote:

[banvi]
the only thing i want to say is
02:05:468 (1) - maybe change the position is better because is hard to read ~_~
hmm, I don't think so. This is not hard to read imo... no change sorry._.

Leorda wrote:

banvi's Hard
AR +1?ok

00:43:832 (x) - Add note?nah
01:35:287 (1,2) - Make a jump?nah
01:36:923 (4) - Move 2 grid right? (Nazi)changed pattern
01:43:468 (x) - Add note?nah

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwaaaaah konnichiwa-!

General
Can you change the combo color? Those color are pretty odd for me. Try use a red, dark red, light red for combo color fixed
Normal
I feel that you always copy-paste the pattern for this diff, right?
I actually use copy-paste at a few points. but not always. I almost put notes myself. well, that is true thare are many same patterns

00:12:014 (1,2) - This slider are very confusing for normal player fixed
00:36:741 (3,4) - A little bit dislike the overlapped by 00:35:287 (1) fixed
00:55:832 (1,2,3) - Average player will be confuse for this object, since it has no rhythm/vocal. I know you following the echo, but sometimes the average player can't hear put spinner instead of this pattern
01:01:468 (2) - Small spacing is unacceptable, maybe? fixed
01:55:468 (1,2,3) - Same issue as 00:55:832 (1,2,3) ^ fixed
02:33:287 (1,2,3) - ^[/color] ^ fixed

Insane
00:36:741 (2) - New combo, since 00:35:650 (1) are slow fixed
01:36:377 (2) - ^[/color] fixed

Nyan

Snowy Dream wrote:

[banvi's hard]
00:54:196 - Add note (x:320 y:96)
01:00:014 - ^ (x:32 y:112)
01:53:832 - ^ (x:112 y:184)
01:59:650 - ^ (x:144 y:224)
02:31:650 - ^ (x:152 y:160)

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Insane]
00:34:923 (7) - add an arrow. not fixed
00:35:650 (1) - ^ fixed
01:34:377 (4) - ^ not fixed
01:35:287 (1) - ^ fixed
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Fine.
Nice map , nice song.
Star~☆

loli_milk wrote:

Suzully's fan!

Mafiamaster wrote:

Awesome!

1. 00:33:832 (3) - turn the ending point 1 grid down

1. 00:49:832 (1) - mute the end
2. 01:49:468 (1) - ^

Colin Hou wrote:

[Normal]:

1. 00:33:832 (3) - turn the ending point 1 grid down fixed

[Inane]:

1. 00:49:832 (1) - mute the end fixed
2. 01:49:468 (1) - ^ fixed

ok seems like only nazi things :3 let me know when fixed.

Edit: ahhhhhhhh I didn't see the bubble OTL sorry, anyway tell me your opinion.

Colin Hou wrote:

now bubble back

nimba wrote:

:D

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Normal

00:30:741 (2,3) - Move both of these sliders back by 2 ticks.
00:31:468 (3) - Add one more repeat. With the finish hitsound.
01:30:377 (2,3) - Same as the above 2 mods.
01:37:105 (5) - This slider is blocked if you have a combo over 100.

banvi's Hard

No problems found.

Insane

No problems found.

Good job.

Selee wrote:

[attachment=0:fcd51]icon__nekomura_iroha_by_auradeux-d30a8gf.png[/attachment:fcd51] Congratz~