1. banvi's Hard (4.75 stars, 335 notes)
2. Insane (4.99 stars, 403 notes)
3. Normal (2.85 stars, 159 notes)

Selee wrote:

Source>>samfree
Tag>>Vocaloid2 fixed

I prefer offset +5~7ms. fixed

A little resize

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thanks!

You need a preview point o.o lol I forgot

00:14:553 (1) - How about change this to a slider? (soft-finish begin, normal finish end?) fixed
00:42:917 (5,6,7) - try soft whistle instead of normal-clap? fixed
01:40:553 (8) - New combo here fixed
01:41:099 (1) - remove new combo fixed
01:42:553 (4,5,6) - ^ fixed

Nice song choice~ Star =w=

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
preview time not set in [Hard] fixed

[Insane]
00:14:196 (s) - clap? not fixed
01:30:196 (4,1) - stack properly fixed
02:40:014 (3) - clap? not fixed

[Normal]
nice

nice map overall, star!

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

enjoyable~

banvi's Hard has a different previewtime fixed

Normal

00:08:378(4) - remove finish at the beginning not fixed
02:40:014(4) - add a circle with finish x:360 y:272 fixed

Insane

fine

00:38:196(1) - add finish at the beginning fixed
00:42:923(5) - maybe add NC? not fixed
01:42:559(5) - ^ not fixed
02:35:105(3) - it would be better to move 3 gird up (lv3) fixed

starrr

1. 00:30:923 (2,3,1) - 1grid 下
2. 00:43:923 (T) - 緑線不要？

• offsetを変えたときにズレたと思われる緑線がいくつかありました

1. 00:51:287 (1,2) - 1grid 左
2. 01:02:378 (1) - 1grid 下、右
3. 01:31:650 (2) - 1grid 左？
4. 02:28:741 (1,2) - 1grid 上、左

1. 02:38:832 (T) - 緑線不要？

KSHR wrote:

modding

[Normal]

1. 00:30:923 (2,3,1) - 1grid 下 fixed
2. 00:43:923 (T) - 緑線不要？ fixed

[Insane]

1. 02:38:832 (T) - 緑線不要？ fixed

この譜面、くっきーさん現れそう...！

Kite wrote:

[Normal]
00:36:741 (1) - Spinner is too short and sudden for easiest difficulty, replace with a slider instead? fixed
00:54:923 (2) - 1 more repeat? (If you do then respace 00:55:832 (1)) fixed
01:01:105 - Add a beat? not fixed (lyrics means "crossing" so I express it.sorry)
01:36:378 (1) - Same as previous spinner fixed
02:32:378 (2) - 1 more repeat? (Respace next beat) fixed
02:41:832 (3) - 2 grids up and 1 grid to the left? Looks better if it doesnt touch the previous slider ; Also ending point of slider 3 grids to the right and 1 down? fixed
02:43:287 (1) - ^ if you did that 1 grid to right fixed

[Nazi]
Preview point on Normal and Insane is 51281 fixed
Preview point on banvi's Hard is 51287

Mapset is nice and fun to play. Timing is good~
The only thing that bothered me was the first break after 15 seconds of playing.. it's kinda silly :< (You should map it imo)
h'm I suppose it is not problem.

eveless wrote:

[Insane]
00:06:559 (2) - looks like crowded , a bit farther than now plz~ fixed
（このように　

SPOILER

00:08:014 (2) - ^ fixed

00:42:559 (x) - add a slider too , the position can be here~ fixed

SPOILER

remeber to newcombo

00:46:923 (5) - add 3 repeat not fixed
01:01:832 (2) - crowed ;.; fixed
01:36:741 (3) - ^ fixed
01:42:196 (5) - same with before fixed
01:47:105 (10) - add a note o.o not fixed
02:49:287 (4,6) - new combo it ba fixed

[Normal]
maybe 0.5 in a easy diff will have some problems :3 fixed
AR-1 fixed

00:01:832 (2) - New combo fixed
00:59:650 (4) - not stacked properly fixed

いい譜面だ！

eveless wrote:

[banvi]
the only thing i want to say is
02:05:468 (1) - maybe change the position is better because is hard to read ~_~
hmm, I don't think so. This is not hard to read imo... no change sorry._.

Leorda wrote:

banvi's Hard
AR +1?ok

00:43:832 (x) - Add note?nah
01:35:287 (1,2) - Make a jump?nah
01:36:923 (4) - Move 2 grid right? (Nazi)changed pattern
01:43:468 (x) - Add note?nah

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwaaaaah konnichiwa-!

General
Can you change the combo color? Those color are pretty odd for me. Try use a red, dark red, light red for combo color fixed
Normal
I feel that you always copy-paste the pattern for this diff, right?
I actually use copy-paste at a few points. but not always. I almost put notes myself. well, that is true thare are many same patterns

00:12:014 (1,2) - This slider are very confusing for normal player fixed
00:36:741 (3,4) - A little bit dislike the overlapped by 00:35:287 (1) fixed
00:55:832 (1,2,3) - Average player will be confuse for this object, since it has no rhythm/vocal. I know you following the echo, but sometimes the average player can't hear put spinner instead of this pattern
01:01:468 (2) - Small spacing is unacceptable, maybe? fixed
01:55:468 (1,2,3) - Same issue as 00:55:832 (1,2,3) ^ fixed
02:33:287 (1,2,3) - ^[/color] ^ fixed

Insane
00:36:741 (2) - New combo, since 00:35:650 (1) are slow fixed
01:36:377 (2) - ^[/color] fixed

Nyan