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GazettE - Guren

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uzushika
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 28 September, 2008 at 8:58:53 AM

Artist: GazettE
Title: Guren
BPM: 170
Filesize: 7639kb
Play Time: 02:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Normal (3.01 stars, 184 notes)
  2. Hard (4.46 stars, 262 notes)
  3. Insane (4.93 stars, 317 notes)
Download: GazettE - Guren
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OK! everything seems to be in order right now.... please give back feedback if you find some mistakes
Behon
Very enjoyable!

I've only played Normal so far, and if I have any gripes, it's that you have very few circles that semi-overlap, so you might just want to stack those on top of each other proper.
Topic Starter
uzushika
lol i feel like an idiot for not noticing that =.= i must be going blind XD thx alot ^^
vytalibus
Let me remind you: this is the first time I've ever modded a map formally. I might be very picky, but that's because I don't have that kind of experience yet. :D

Try changing the offset to 14,560.

Normal:
00:18:73 (3) - You might want to cut this slider by a beat.
00:20:14 (1,2,3) - There is always the risk in Normal maps that most targetted players will not get this kind of spacing. It's a bit more of personal preference, but shortening the gap would be nice.
00:26:49 (2) - Too far.
00:29:32 (2) - Ditto.
01:10:26 (1,2,3,4) - A bit tricky for a Normal map, whatcha say?
01:37:44 (4,5) - Ditto.
01:47:32 (2,3) - Ditto.
01:48:73 (2,3) - Wild Ditto appears!
02:09:55 (1) - Same problem with 00:26:49 (2).
02:10:97 (1) - Ditto.
02:12:38 (4) - You might want to place this a bit further.
02:28:26 (2,3) - Same problem with 01:10:26 (1,2,3,4).
02:30:91 (5) - More of a personal preference, but I think the start marker should be 1/4 late.

Hard:
02:27:91 (1) - Too close.

Insane:

I don't know if an HP drain rate of 10 is really fair. The HP drain really drains, and I mean that negatively. Maybe an 8 will suffice (it's still pretty hard on an HP drain of 8, mind you).

00:55:26 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - You might want to rearrange the placements of these beats, though I can let it pass since it's an Insane map.
01:20:67 (5, 6) - Ditto.
01:53:32 (4) - It's too close. Place it way further.
02:07:61 (9) - I don't know if placing the start of the slider diagonally away would work. You might want to change that.
02:24:91 (3) - Same problem with 01:53:32 (4).
02:30:91 (8) - Doesn't sound right. Maybe changing the long slider into a short repeating one will work.



Don't be discouraged by what I've pointed out. Your map looks great already. :)
Topic Starter
uzushika
I knew there were lots of problem with this map in the first place anyways XD I did this when i didn't know distance snapping existsted=.= Thx alot for your help *edits* once again thx alot for your help ^^ picky is good XD changed everything "almost" accordingly to yours... offset was made to be 14537 XD
mtmcl
The fragile mtmcl bubble floats overhead.

I'm not much of a timing expert, but I tried a few different methods to test your offset and didn't find anything wrong with it. Other than that, I can't see any possible arguments. This is a really solid map.
EiJi
Insane: slider @ 01:25:21 (1) - mistimed?
Topic Starter
uzushika
*hits self* thx so much for that XD
Echo
Brilliant maps :D

I'm ranking this~
Topic Starter
uzushika
THX so much XD my fren has been waiting for this to get ranked XD ty
UFO Donut
lol who's the artist?
i liked this song
Toscar_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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