Leorda wrote:

NI HAOooooo Baibai

General
1) Why climbb65588 are in tags? But there is no climbb65588's diff inside this map?that TAIKO diff still under making;_;
2) I think the source must have a space like this "Star Driver ~Kagayaki no Takuto~"
3) Change the name from your SB (artist1.png and artist2.png) from "qinche" to daidai" and "wanhyrzh" to "baibai"...why baibai

Phase I
00:26:317 (1) - Remove new combo?do some change~
00:53:969 (5) - Make parallel?k
01:01:535 (4) - Would be nice if this stack with 00:58:925 (1). But sadly, this object would go up because of distance spacing. Try move it to X:184 and Y:276, see upper-right to know what I mean, also, sorry for naziI move both 234 a grid up
02:46:144 (5) - This object are little bit overlapped and little bit not neat, try move lowerin order to fit with 7
02:53:708 (1) - I don't this is too short for easy diff, extend it. If you extend it, the beginner player have a time to spin that spinnerk

Phase II
00:44:709 (4) - Not stack perfectly with 00:44:317 (3), the distance between those two objects are 0,04. The distance should be 0,0 (Look upper-right to know what I mean at "Prev:"). So you must use distance spacing 0,0 and turn off the Grid Snap to stack it perfectly
00:46:143 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - This combo are really messy[/color]daidai is in favor of these combos lol

Phase III
00:03:621 (6) - Suggestion, make a slider like this to let tail slider makes a flower pattern? http://puu.sh/ZINdo some change~
00:18:230 (8) - Move 3 grid up? Naziiiiik
01:22:404 (2,3,4) - I really don't know why It's kinda ugly stacking when I test this map? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/58638stack leniency to 2 to solve it
01:33:360 (6) - Make a perfect wave slider please~k

Phase IV
Fine for me, Good Job

Nice job baibai

aquabluu wrote:

Let's see here now~

[General]
Over 9000 timing points just to change volume by one tick + Grid level 4 = orz XD

[Phase I]
Fine.

[Phase II]
Circle Size +1, AR - 1 or 2I prefer this but darling doesn't want to...so sry ;_;
Lot of spacing and SV changes...god (on the second easiest difficulty too). At least most of them make sense. I must be getting old-fashioned.
Wait, I just realized....where's the Kiai Time?
Otherwise fine

[Phase III]
Circle Size -1sry but no
00.12.491 (5) Suggestion: Remove this noteOK redesigned~

[Phase IV]
Fine.

Very well-mapped. Star!

eveless wrote:

[CJ]
00:40:143 (5,6,7,8) - 这个形状我可以吐槽吗o.o? this looks like not perfect OK.
01:07:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边感觉4连有些多了233 how to move 2 and 6 away?我觉得还好...删了形状有些难搞？

有些可以多用3/4的地方用了1/2啊x_x...不是理想中的3/4 map吧只能这么说x_xE姐来做个3/4MAP吧（正色

[3]
00:05:708 (3,1) - 3/4's repeat slider is better than now :> 换成3/4比较好吧 毕竟是跟歌声的OK.
00:07:795 (5) - ^OK.
00:44:709 (4,5) - it's better to change the parts to a 3/4 slider 现在太挤了啊喂 一个3/4slider比较好啊233不太会用3/4的内牛满面...changed whatever.
02:32:447 (4) - delete it 有点多余的感觉背景音有...sry but no
02:53:187 (6) - i think use 0.5x here is better than 1.25x...at least 1.0x .. 1.25x really not fit them imo0.75
02:58:534 (2) - delete it 233OK.

总的来说这难度有点塞太满stress 其他还好lol这一开始是最高难。

[qinche]我和啊彻说说>_<I'll talk to darling.

qinche wrote:

我……我其实说过理由了啊[stress]
孩子他娘你还在等太鼓吗[stress]

orioncomet wrote:

- dark combo color is hard to see to me ._.; could you make it lighter then this a bit?uping R by 10 and G by 5

[Phase IV]
02:32:491 (2,3) - I have no idea what were those notes following, music? idk. for me if they were following with the music they'd be on 1/4.I thought here is 1/3 or 1/6...but anyway they may be very hard to hit...changed.

[Phase III]
- lovelyyyy hitsounddd

[Phase II]
- look good

[Phase I]
- good

nothing really poke me, star'ed

loveFantasy wrote:

hi~

你的map已經到了即將bubble的完成度, 所以我改為只試玩所有diff,以下是回饋

[Phase I]
<00:33:621> (3) 覺得倒過來再repeat一次較好 ok.
<01:19:795> (1,2) (nazi) spacing和2,3一致 ok.
<01:39:621> (5,1) ^ok.
其實會發現只是剛好你用1x, 所以1.01~1.03x的圈圈沒重疊 0.98x的卻很明顯XD..可以不要理我

[Phase III]
<00:08:578> (7 endpoint) 這個whistle好奇怪?为了和前面配合……降音了
<00:26:318> (4,5,6) 不太懂這邊timing section的音量調整, 不過也覺得有點奇怪lol
<01:33:491> (T) 為什麼換了音效組, 本來以為01:35:447 (1)會是一樣的finish配合背景...

[Phase IV]
<01:27:099> (1~) 好輕的stream..打起來不太有實感lol

star

Lybydose wrote:

2:32:318 sounds better with 1/3 snap like this:
ok.
2:42:231 sounds better how you already have it

wanhyrzh wrote:

Oh you can notice the sudtom SV changing in II is 0.55,0.75,1 but in III is 0.75,1,1.25 and in IV is 0.75,1,1.8

NoHItter wrote:

General
Great use of hitsounds and volume. thank you
Combo colors are similar to each other. (1 and 2 looks very similar with the skin)sry but I think it's fine~
A Normal would be nice.OK I think I would have one later ;_;

Phase I
02:51:622 (1) - It would really be great if you could just make the slider longer instead of having it repeat.OK~

Phase IIqinche has checked all and done the fixxing
00:13:013 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not too sure about the 0.5x spacing here.
00:23:337 (x) - Why is there a break here when in the easier diff there isn't? IMO map this part.
00:46:144 (1,1) - IMO just stack them. Looks confusing. Also remove new combo the second note.
00:48:231 (1,1) - ^
00:49:274 (1,1) - ^
01:40:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO slowdowns like this are tough to read as they start of with notes. Starting off with sliders IMO would be better. Like 01:23:970 (1,2,3)

Phase III
00:31:796 (x) - IMO map this part. In [Phase I] this part was mapped.OK.
02:28:665 (1) - Sudden slowdown IMO.fot the vocal "gin---ga".

Phase IV
00:14:578 (4,5,1) - IMO just spread them outsry but no changed, for the smaller spacing will make palyers notice the following slower slider imo
00:22:405 (3) - What's with the sudden speed-up >.>for the great drum at 00:22:405
02:32:491 (2) - IDK about this note. It's stacked on the slider implying that it's spaced the same way in the timeline.OK stacked with the following slider.
02:42:231 (1,2,3,4) - I would suggest spreading it out, but I guess it's readable enough.OK spacing a little larger.

JauiPlaY wrote:

只mod前兩個難度?嗯……一些建議:

[Phase IV]
00:09:883(3) - 弄成00:11:969(3,4)那樣不是很好嗎…… 这里有一个考虑，就是这里的音是negai-i，最后一个i音和前面一个i音分界不明显，所以带过了。而00:11:969的音是iru-ne，ru和ne的分界很明显，而且ne的音也有所强调，所以就特别强调了。

[Phase V]
00:07:795(5) - 這個slider的末尾考慮降音量?OK
00:17:186(1) - 中間的slidertick考慮消音?因为消了sliderslide，所以不能消slidertick
00:30:751(6) - 考慮到下一個clap在9秒以后,去掉這個clap?或者在00:34:664(3)的末尾加上clap...我覺得后者好一些保持原样？
01:13:534(7) - new comboOK
加油!
so
star~
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