Roddie wrote:

Hi

General:

1. No kiai time on phase I & II? D: Why didn't you add them in? =( only no lasting KIAIs at II...
2. Phase II has a higher slider velocity then Phase III & IV. I can assume Phase II is a Hard. Phase II plays fine, really. But its just that Hard difficulties are not suppose to have a slider velocity then Insane difficulties do, if I recall. I would probably decrease the slider velocity on Phase II just to have a consistent mapset. Oh you can notice the sudtom SV changing in II is 0.55\0.751 but in III is 0.7511.25 and in IV is 0.7511.8

Phase I:

1. 00:06:752 (4)-How about putting a whistle on the end? I think it would sound better, right? :3k.
2. 00:23:448 (3)-^k.
3. 00:43:796 (3)-^k.
4. 00:44:839 (4)-Remove the whistle from the beginning. It would sound better If you add the whistle on the end. :3yeah you're right~

Phase III:

1. Add some more soft whistles, man. D: Put them as you see fit.ok

Other then that, nice job with the map concept.

Phase IV:

1. Like I said about Phase III, Add some more soft whistle.
2. 00:01:925 to 00:19:013-The beginning is screaming for some hitsounds. D: Add them. Put them as you see fit.
3. 03:09:361 (1)-Nah. A finish won't work. =/ Remove it. Either replace it with a whistle or don't put any hitsound.WHISTLE~

Nicely done as always, wanhyrzh.

Good luck getting this ranked!

Star!

Wiinter wrote:

Hi ^_^

Phase I
00:11:969 (2) - hmm.. I think it sounds better starting at 00:11:709. If you change this, don't forget to add another repeat to the slider so it finishes at the same time it used to.k.
01:27:621 (6) - new combo here instead of 01:28:664 (1) is better imok.
02:24:491 (4) - new combosry but no.

Phase IV
00:03:622 (3) - finish it at 00:04:114? sounds better imosry but no.

That's all :3 Nice map and song, have a star.

Shulin wrote:

Hey =P

Phase I:

00:32:317 (2) - Silence/reduce the volume of that slider tick? It syncs with nothing in the song and sounds weird.-2
00:52:664 (4) - ^ Sounds weird imo.k.
01:14:056 (4) - Whistle the end instead of finish?sry but no
01:42:751 (5,6) - Finishes sound too loud here.-1
02:16:664 (5,6,7) - ^-1
02:49:534 (4,5) - ^-1
02:53:708 (1) - I think the spinner is too short for a Easy/Normal.

Nice map I could only really comment on the hitsounds, but I think there might be too many finish in the chorus.

Phase II:

00:44:056 (1,2,3) - Space this further apart? It looks ugly behind 00:43:273 (5) -
00:46:404 (1) - Remove new combo? It looks silly. =S
00:47:447 (1) - Remove new combo? It looks even more silly and unnecessary xD
00:48:491 (1) - ^
01:11:447 -- You have 2 inheriting sections in the same place.
01:16:664 (4) - Add clap remove whistle?good idea~
01:28:144 -- 2 inheriting sections in the same place, you don't need this for a kiai burst >_>
02:18:233 -- ^
02:34:926 -- ^ etc

Phase III:

02:22:143 (6,1) - Spacing change is unexpected.sry but no spacing chaging here;_;
02:28:012 (4) - ^^
02:28:665 (1) - Slow down doesn't make sense imo it ruins the flow.I think it's OK
02:55:534 (1,2,1) - I think this might be better as a stack to match the rest of this section.k

Map is okay, but I think it's overmapped at some points.

Phase IV:

00:29:186 (3) - Remove slider slide?sry but no
02:56:577 (1,1) - This mini spacing change looks weird, also remove new combo from 02:56:577 (1) - ?^

Nice map ^_^

All suggestions/opinions; nice maps. ★

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

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You HAVE to do this
You should do this
You Could do this

[Phase I]I think finishes are ok for the song, sorry ;_;
01:19:273 (3) - No finish here
01:26:056 (5) - No finish at the start, Soft finish at the end
01:43:273 (6) - No finish here
02:32:317 (4) - ^
02:45:360 (4) - No finish at the end
02:46:405 (6) - ^
02:49:534 (4,5) - No finish here

[Phase III]
01:09:751 (2) - No whistle, it sound strangek.
01:10:273 (4) - ^k.
01:10:795 (6) - ^k.
01:23:317 (4) - Make it start from 01:23:448 (4) - and use Soft Finish ( to continue the hitsound pattern and i feel it's better)sry but no for the vocal.
01:35:447 (1) - Soft Finish at the start of thisno for 01:36:491(1) sounds greater in this way.
Circle Size +1 (smaller), HP + 1hp+1 but no change for for it looks better now imo.

[Phase IV]sorry but no change;_;
01:47:056 (2) - No Soft Whistle
01:47:317 (4) - ^
01:47:577 (6) - ^
01:48:099 (2) - ^
01:48:360 (4) - ^
01:48:621 (6) - ^
01:48:751 (7) -Soft Finish:C1 at the middle repeat
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Other things were shameless nazi, and i'm not a nazi

starred

narakucrimson wrote:

Here I am!

[General]

Nice, good work. The skin looks pretty nice.

[Phase II]

1. 13:535~15:100 (2-5) - Humm this spacing feels weird - not consistent, I'd say.fixed.
2. 2:36:752 (6) - New combosorry but no

[Phase III]

1. Just noticed that you use different break times through the difficulties. I don't recommend that, to keep consistency. But I'm not that pro either, maybe you should ask a MAT.
2. 1:46:405 (5) - The spacing is not consistent. The emphasis is already given by the lowering in the volume, you don't need to follow that with the spacing xDk.
3. 2:17:448 (1,2,3) - Like I said before, this is not quiet needed. Though I don't dislike it.sry but I love this;_;.
4. Oh just remembered: Here's a suggestion. When you use timing sections to change hitsounds, try making it like this:
   
   and NOT like this:
   
   It can cause problems sometimes if you do it in the second way.yeah I know this problem before but I heard from Colin Hou(a MAT) that this bug is fixed now.

Dang, I don't have anything else to say.
I'll just have to star this~

ErufenRito wrote:

Yeah, you are right, im not really fond about modding these songs, but at least its not that awful to the point where i cant do a quick check.

General:

I can't see the oni difficulty? If you have deleted it from your mapset, you should delete his name.not made yet;_;

The gap between phase I and phase II is too big imo. I would suggest you to add a difficulty between those two.

Timing:

Can't see why you should use a negative offset when 491 can do it for you.I use 0.75x at 491...and I should not put the red line and green line together.

Phase III:

I recommend you to raise stack lenience by 1 tick, to make these objects 01:01:796 (2,3,4) - to stack properly. Although i haven't really checked if by raising it, it would cause conflicts with unwated stacks though, so careful with that.yeah you're right.

Phase II:

Eh, those stacks are really confusing because some are separated by 1/2 tick and others by 1/4. But oh well, i guess that its okay (sees all the mods it has already got)

Leorda wrote:

NI HAOooooo Baibai

General
1) Why climbb65588 are in tags? But there is no climbb65588's diff inside this map?that TAIKO diff still under making;_;
2) I think the source must have a space like this "Star Driver ~Kagayaki no Takuto~"
3) Change the name from your SB (artist1.png and artist2.png) from "qinche" to daidai" and "wanhyrzh" to "baibai"...why baibai

Phase I
00:26:317 (1) - Remove new combo?do some change~
00:53:969 (5) - Make parallel?k
01:01:535 (4) - Would be nice if this stack with 00:58:925 (1). But sadly, this object would go up because of distance spacing. Try move it to X:184 and Y:276, see upper-right to know what I mean, also, sorry for naziI move both 234 a grid up
02:46:144 (5) - This object are little bit overlapped and little bit not neat, try move lowerin order to fit with 7
02:53:708 (1) - I don't this is too short for easy diff, extend it. If you extend it, the beginner player have a time to spin that spinnerk

Phase II
00:44:709 (4) - Not stack perfectly with 00:44:317 (3), the distance between those two objects are 0,04. The distance should be 0,0 (Look upper-right to know what I mean at "Prev:"). So you must use distance spacing 0,0 and turn off the Grid Snap to stack it perfectly
00:46:143 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - This combo are really messy[/color]daidai is in favor of these combos lol

Phase III
00:03:621 (6) - Suggestion, make a slider like this to let tail slider makes a flower pattern? http://puu.sh/ZINdo some change~
00:18:230 (8) - Move 3 grid up? Naziiiiik
01:22:404 (2,3,4) - I really don't know why It's kinda ugly stacking when I test this map? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/58638stack leniency to 2 to solve it
01:33:360 (6) - Make a perfect wave slider please~k

Phase IV
Fine for me, Good Job

Nice job baibai

aquabluu wrote:

Let's see here now~

[General]
Over 9000 timing points just to change volume by one tick + Grid level 4 = orz XD

[Phase I]
Fine.

[Phase II]
Circle Size +1, AR - 1 or 2I prefer this but darling doesn't want to...so sry ;_;
Lot of spacing and SV changes...god (on the second easiest difficulty too). At least most of them make sense. I must be getting old-fashioned.
Wait, I just realized....where's the Kiai Time?
Otherwise fine

[Phase III]
Circle Size -1sry but no
00.12.491 (5) Suggestion: Remove this noteOK redesigned~

[Phase IV]
Fine.

Very well-mapped. Star!

eveless wrote:

[CJ]
00:40:143 (5,6,7,8) - 这个形状我可以吐槽吗o.o? this looks like not perfect OK.
01:07:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边感觉4连有些多了233 how to move 2 and 6 away?我觉得还好...删了形状有些难搞？

有些可以多用3/4的地方用了1/2啊x_x...不是理想中的3/4 map吧只能这么说x_xE姐来做个3/4MAP吧（正色

[3]
00:05:708 (3,1) - 3/4's repeat slider is better than now :> 换成3/4比较好吧 毕竟是跟歌声的OK.
00:07:795 (5) - ^OK.
00:44:709 (4,5) - it's better to change the parts to a 3/4 slider 现在太挤了啊喂 一个3/4slider比较好啊233不太会用3/4的内牛满面...changed whatever.
02:32:447 (4) - delete it 有点多余的感觉背景音有...sry but no
02:53:187 (6) - i think use 0.5x here is better than 1.25x...at least 1.0x .. 1.25x really not fit them imo0.75
02:58:534 (2) - delete it 233OK.

总的来说这难度有点塞太满stress 其他还好lol这一开始是最高难。

[qinche]我和啊彻说说>_<I'll talk to darling.

qinche wrote:

我……我其实说过理由了啊[stress]
孩子他娘你还在等太鼓吗[stress]

orioncomet wrote:

- dark combo color is hard to see to me ._.; could you make it lighter then this a bit?uping R by 10 and G by 5

[Phase IV]
02:32:491 (2,3) - I have no idea what were those notes following, music? idk. for me if they were following with the music they'd be on 1/4.I thought here is 1/3 or 1/6...but anyway they may be very hard to hit...changed.

[Phase III]
- lovelyyyy hitsounddd

[Phase II]
- look good

[Phase I]
- good

nothing really poke me, star'ed

loveFantasy wrote:

hi~

你的map已經到了即將bubble的完成度, 所以我改為只試玩所有diff,以下是回饋

[Phase I]
<00:33:621> (3) 覺得倒過來再repeat一次較好 ok.
<01:19:795> (1,2) (nazi) spacing和2,3一致 ok.
<01:39:621> (5,1) ^ok.
其實會發現只是剛好你用1x, 所以1.01~1.03x的圈圈沒重疊 0.98x的卻很明顯XD..可以不要理我

[Phase III]
<00:08:578> (7 endpoint) 這個whistle好奇怪?为了和前面配合……降音了
<00:26:318> (4,5,6) 不太懂這邊timing section的音量調整, 不過也覺得有點奇怪lol
<01:33:491> (T) 為什麼換了音效組, 本來以為01:35:447 (1)會是一樣的finish配合背景...

[Phase IV]
<01:27:099> (1~) 好輕的stream..打起來不太有實感lol

star

Lybydose wrote:

2:32:318 sounds better with 1/3 snap like this:
ok.
2:42:231 sounds better how you already have it