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Topic Starter
Shinki

slymaster wrote:

:D nice map~
IRC mod kd
hahahu00
好歌~ 326老师威武~
hez
:) star~
Kami
8-) 不会mod 直接star OK? OK
MisakaMikoto
star :)
Cirno
star σ(゚ー^*)
Nyar
star
Nymph
= =打过觉得很不错呢 STAR~
Axey
[Insane]
00:39:301(1,2,3,4,5)-感觉没对称
02:31:455(1,2,3,4,5,6,7)-如果要弄成正六边形的话把5往右移一格 3,6向上一格 7你自己看着移吧-.-

[jameskong1's hard]
00:11:608(3,4,5)-咱觉得4,5平行的话比较好? 或者4也像3,5一样斜突个角? -..-
00:31:916(1,2,3,4,5)-五边形拉的不好看啦>.<把5往外拉一格
01:14:608(3)-连打放歪了
01:38:378(1)-1和3的silder一样的话会不会更好看点?
01:48:070(3)-要和1对齐的话往右一格 然后4也往右一格 就能和01:49:685(2)叠在一起拉^^
01:51:301(1,3)-使2个silder一样吧._.
02:52:224(1)-这里开始kiai

先写这点吧._.我要赶作业了
Gamu
JauiPlaY
法國妹子不來一發沒問題嗎.
sherrie__fay
w我好像还没给星吧XDDDDDD
macttt
:)
wmfchris
seems nice music.

Though I don't hv time to mod, do you want taiko diff :D
Selee
[General]

soft-hitnormal.wmv ... wtf? Is it should be .wav? Two hitsounds don't fit well imo...

I really prefer BG2.jpg since the quality of BG1.jpg is kind of low..

Consider removing the countdown in Normal and Insane?

[Jameskong1's Easy]

Too many short spinners, especially spinner+note+spinner pattern...They don't fit Easy diff players... ;_;

Also I don't like hitsounds in this diff much..

  • 00:14:378 (4) - I prefer to use 1/2 slider here...
    00:25:916 (1) - Remove clap or 2 4 clap for 00:23:147~00:41:147?
    01:05:147 (3) - 1/1 slider?
    01:38:378 (1,2,3,4) - just don't use hidden sliders in Easy diff...
    01:47:608 (1) - ._.
    02:11:608 (1) - Remove whistle body?
    02:16:224 (1) - ^
    02:20:839 (1) - ^
    ... this part is really boring
    02:46:224 (4) - ...remove claps...
    02:49:455 (3) - ^
    02:55:685 (T) - useless timeline, delete?
    02:55:916 (T) - ...Is this should be 1x BPM???
    03:01:455 (4) - New combo and spacing...
    03:29:147 (1) - End at 03:31:455...
[Jameskong1's Hard]
Since it's a hard diff..2s lead-in is enough imo

[Insane]

00:54:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use 1/3 beat snap divisor here..
02:09:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

略困 没弄完 明天继续..

Edit1: 还是没弄完 ... 如果不喜欢我mod就说声 ... 我就不mod了

[Normal]

没必要刻意追求Pattern, 流畅就好...你又不是不会打图 多自己test看看...有些地方例如02:04:224 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3), 02:07:685 (1,2,1,2,1,2) 换成顺时针转圈都要好很多

New combo...漂亮么? 有用么? ._. ._. ._.

1/4尽量避免...留下最有用的 把可以替代的换掉

高速滑杠配低距离很倒胃

加速无理啊..用1.5x?

AR-1, 有些1/2用这AR看不出来

  • 00:43:916 (8) - Don't follow vocal this way...use a 1/1 beat slider to replace this.
    00:44:608 (1) - Use a note at redline to begin this part of vocal---move 00:46:455 (5) here, and 00:44:608 (1,2,3,4) 1/2 beat forward
    00:47:839 (X) - add a 1/2 beat slider here.
    00:54:070 (1,2) - Confusing pattern here...don't make this in Normal diff...Try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62755
    01:12:532 (1,1) - You don't necessary follow vocal here...just use 1/2 beat reversed slider?
    01:30:532 (4,1,2,3,1) - spacing.
    01:50:147 (1) - Remove new combo
    01:51:993 (1) - ^
    01:51:070 (1) - Delete?
    01:57:070 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing
    02:00:301 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - ^、
    02:09:762 (1,2,3) - ^
    02:35:147 (5) - Move to somewhere else or new combo.
    02:37:224 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing
    02:39:301 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
    02:40:685 (1) - Start at 02:40:224 and add a reverse?
    02:52:224 (1,3,1,3) - Remove clap?
    Spacing during kiai...
Topic Starter
Shinki

Selee wrote:

[General]

soft-hitnormal.wmv ... wtf? Is it should be .wav? Two hitsounds don't fit well imo...

I really prefer BG2.jpg since the quality of BG1.jpg is kind of low..

Consider removing the countdown in Normal and Insane?

[Jameskong1's Easy]

Too many short spinners, especially spinner+note+spinner pattern...They don't fit Easy diff players... ;_;

Also I don't like hitsounds in this diff much..

00:14:378 (4) - I prefer to use 1/2 slider here...
00:25:916 (1) - Remove clap or 2 4 clap for 00:23:147~00:41:147?
01:05:147 (3) - 1/1 slider?
01:38:378 (1,2,3,4) - just don't use hidden sliders in Easy diff...
01:47:608 (1) - ._.
02:11:608 (1) - Remove whistle body?
02:16:224 (1) - ^
02:20:839 (1) - ^
... this part is really boring
02:46:224 (4) - ...remove claps...
02:49:455 (3) - ^
02:55:685 (T) - useless timeline, delete?
02:55:916 (T) - ...Is this should be 1x BPM???
03:01:455 (4) - New combo and spacing...
03:29:147 (1) - End at 03:31:455...

[Jameskong1's Hard]
Since it's a hard diff..2s lead-in is enough imo

[Insane]

00:54:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use 1/3 beat snap divisor here..
02:09:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

略困 没弄完 明天继续..
thanks for your modding :)
Topic Starter
Shinki

wmfchris wrote:

seems nice music.

Though I don't hv time to mod, do you want taiko diff :D
of course you may:D
grasscarp_old
好图啊 8-)
sico91212
IRC moded

and no kds

star!
wmfchris
Unrankable stuffs:

JK1's Hard, last note overlapped with the spinner.

also, only JK 1 done to the last part, better unique the ending time, maybe cut jk1's hard shorter.

Here's the taiko diff.

And I'm now addicted with the song

Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN (samuel326) [Wmf's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
Shinki

wmfchris wrote:

Unrankable stuffs:

JK1's Hard, last note overlapped with the spinner.

also, only JK 1 done to the last part, better unique the ending time, maybe cut jk1's hard shorter.

Here's the taiko diff.

And I'm now addicted with the song
Thanks a lot:3
JauiPlaY
法國妹子求交往!>///<
..咳咳, okay let's begin.

[general]
歌不錯呢

[Jameskong1's Easy]
這個easy絕對難了,希望能降低難度
難度主要體現而不僅限于以下幾點:
00:10:224(5,6,7) - 3個1/2加slider,而且在easy里面出現7這麼長的combo也...
00:20:839(1,2,3,4,5) - 5個1/2...OTL
00:39:532(1) - spinner跟后面那個note的距離太近了,起碼是對新人來說
02:40:224(4,5,6) - 請不要指望新人能判斷出來這個要怎麼打...
總的來說作為一個easy需要注意以下幾點:
1, 幾個1/2combo不是不能出現,但希望不要用得太頻繁,而且一次5個也有點太多了
2, spinner后面空出一段時間,再上note
3, combo數盡量控制在5以內(對這首歌來說)
4, 推薦使用最大圈
...要是覺得太麻煩把難度名改成normal就好了

[RF's Hard+]
00:15:301(4) - new combo
00:17:262(4) - 移到00:17:493
00:22:224(6) - 何必呢...
01:18:993(3) - ^
01:30:993(4) - new combo
01:32:955(4) - 移到01:33:185
02:52:570(2,3) - 沒重疊好

[Jameskong1's Hard]
為什麼沒有休息時間...
00:49:455(6) - 換成2個1/2note會比較好
01:23:262(x) - 加個note
01:25:455(3,4) - 同時選中這兩個然后edit>reverse selection...當然別忘了擺放問題
01:42:070(2) - 換成個circle
01:42:301(x), 01:42:406(x) - add a note
03:30:301(1) - 減少一次repeat,這個必須被修復

剩下兩個你說不用mod的:3

nice map
so
star~
啊已經給過星了
Topic Starter
Shinki

JauiPlaY wrote:

法國妹子求交往!>///<
..咳咳, okay let's begin.

[general]
歌不錯呢

[Jameskong1's Easy]
這個easy絕對難了,希望能降低難度
難度主要體現而不僅限于以下幾點:
00:10:224(5,6,7) - 3個1/2加slider,而且在easy里面出現7這麼長的combo也...
00:20:839(1,2,3,4,5) - 5個1/2...OTL
00:39:532(1) - spinner跟后面那個note的距離太近了,起碼是對新人來說
02:40:224(4,5,6) - 請不要指望新人能判斷出來這個要怎麼打...
總的來說作為一個easy需要注意以下幾點:
1, 幾個1/2combo不是不能出現,但希望不要用得太頻繁,而且一次5個也有點太多了
2, spinner后面空出一段時間,再上note
3, combo數盡量控制在5以內(對這首歌來說)
4, 推薦使用最大圈
...要是覺得太麻煩把難度名改成normal就好了

[RF's Hard+]
00:15:301(4) - new combo
00:17:262(4) - 移到00:17:493
00:22:224(6) - 何必呢...
01:18:993(3) - ^
01:30:993(4) - new combo
01:32:955(4) - 移到01:33:185
02:52:570(2,3) - 沒重疊好

[Jameskong1's Hard]
為什麼沒有休息時間...
00:49:455(6) - 換成2個1/2note會比較好
01:23:262(x) - 加個note
01:25:455(3,4) - 同時選中這兩個然后edit>reverse selection...當然別忘了擺放問題
01:42:070(2) - 換成個circle
01:42:301(x), 01:42:406(x) - add a note
03:30:301(1) - 減少一次repeat,這個必須被修復

剩下兩個你說不用mod的:3

nice map
so
star~
啊已經給過星了
加进一些奇怪的话了 喂..
谢谢你的mod了ww
thx your mod:3
KanaRin
request by bakachris
here some suggestion for bakachris

[BAKACHRIS'S Taiko]
00:19:916 (52,53,54,55) - NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
00:54:070 (76) - 這裡真的好難map囧 不過 Edit : 玩1/3好蛋痛
My suggestion: 全部1/4 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/63585
patterns: ddkkdkkdd
00:55:224 (85) - big don
01:20:839 (236) - big don
01:21:762 (241) - ^ yooooooooooo big don
01:22:224 (244) - kat
02:09:762 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO same with之前 patterns可改 yeah
02:41:147 (223) - kat好似好聽d ^o^
02:57:762 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94) - 不要啊啊啊啊啊
03:12:532 (179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188) - ^

Hitsound好聽ww 只是有點難度不平均(1/6蛋痛死)
主觀評分: 1.5 out of 2

(<ゝω・)☆ kira~
Kotone
follow bakarin (<ゝω・)☆ kira~
wmfchris
fixed all bakarin's mod and fixed some pattern by myself.

for those who want the eggpain ver. (not that hard, man) you can download the [Waltz] version.
(no need to upload [Waltz], samuel)

Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN (samuel326) [Wmf's Taiko].osu

Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN (samuel326) [Wmf's Waltz].osu
matthewhln
Mod on taiko:
[Wmf's Taiko]
[General]
You really want to stop mapping at 03:14:378? You have 1000 combo now
Other are ok, since most of 1/6 are removed at pervious update

So, the belows are all suggestion:

At 00:29:147 Three ways:
1.
SPOILER
00:29:378 (x) - add note
00:29:839 (107) - delete
or
2.
SPOILER
00:29:724 (x) add note (k is recommend)
or
3.
SPOILER
00:29:378 (x) - add note
00:29:724 (x) add note (k is recommend)


01:45:416 (x) add note (k?)

02:20:839 (110,111,112,113,114,115...) - r rrb r b b b

03:09:532 (154,155,156,157) and 03:10:455 (161,162,163,164) - you sure you want to keep these?



Overall good,star
wmfchris
aabc271
Hi ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Wmf's Taiko]

Basically there is nothing wrong in this map. The only thing that i noticed is that the last kiai part of the map has a few long, complicated streams, which make the diff spread become big. They can be simplified a bit imo, but it's up to you.


Suggested patterns
These are all suggestions only. Change them if you want to~

00:32:378 - ( 121 ) Blue note ?

01:25:685 - ( 254 ~ 256 ) ooo ?

03:09:301 - ( 153 ) Blue note ?

No errors found. Nice job :)

The Taiko diff is really nice imo ~

Also like the song ~

Star and good luck ~ ;)

No need to give kds for this post ~
wmfchris
I Love One Piece
无懈可击 打着超级带感 & nice song 太棒了 star!
ziin
oh long map, lots of diffs...

[general]
I don't know the rules on silencing sliderticks, but I think it's a very poor decision. The only thing I'll ever silence is spinnerspin and sliderslide on soft songs.
offset -10, careful with speed changes and triplet sliders.
softhitnormal should probably be an mp3 or a wav, not a wmv.
Make sure the [metadata] is identical for each difficulty, apart from difficulty name.

[storyboard]
lyrics look bad on cover.png when you can see the next or previous line and there's nothing happening. Make the text box 19 or 21 pixels tall with 3-5 pixels of feathering rather than 23 with 9 pixels of feathering. It would also be a lot easier to do if your lyrics were made on font size 23 or 24 with no extra spacing between paragraphs. Right now it won't fit on a grid properly because the blank lines are larger than the normal text.
both backgrounds have an outline for the text box, which I think looks bad, especially when there's no lyrics there.

[easy]
01:16:224 (1,1,1,1) - delete some of these, 5 measures of spinning is the same as one really long spinner, and you need a break here.
01:48:993 (2,3) - spacing
02:32:839 (7) - finish, although I usually like putting finishes where there's a cymbal crash in the actual music (you didn't bother with this at all).
03:27:301 (5) - new combo or spacing error, and it's best to keep jumps out of easy.
no credits?

[normal]
I know they're called "finishes" but it sounds bad when you put them on the end of every combo. They're better at the beginning usually.
00:52:477 (2,3) - offbeat sliders emphasize the wrong mora. Move them on the beat.
01:13:707 (3) - change to repeating slider
02:35:630 (3,4) - double check your sliders
credits hard to read because they fade out so fast, and there's a white-on-white problem.

[hard+]
needs audio lead in at least 1000 ms
00:17:493 (5,6) - this is a very big jump considering the distance, and pretty confusing.
00:40:044 - I think breaks which the arrows last longer than the actual break are pointless.
00:37:455 (8) - 1 left.
00:54:070 (1,2) - 1/3 fits better.

[jameskong hard]
this is insane, and it is certainly harder than the other hard+.
check AImod for errors, you've got 2 notes 0 ms apart.
The "credits" show up while you're still playing.

[insane]
45,092 - what's this timing section for?
00:54:092 (1) - resnap
You could have made this with a little more care so you don't have 141 spacing errors.

Very nice, if a bit sloppy mapset.
Zhanger_old
starrrrrrr~
OnosakiHito
Taikooo~Taikooo~☆
ise77777
good song and good map :D
star :)
Yuki_Sou
猥人说,你要是敢坑这张他就不去挖比利包青天~
Shirakawa Kotori
TAT 326妹妹加油啊 别坑的太久哟
Ballance
[insane]

00:25:246 (2,3,4) - 中心對稱
00:36:554 (4) - 這個放的也太奇葩了……可以放在1的下面
00:43:246 (7) - 這個後面少了個節奏,加一個8
00:50:630 (7) - 同
00:52:015 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 整體位置往右邊移動一點,讓00:54:400 (2) - 這個在中心線上
01:49:246 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 感覺怪怪的,不是正三角形……上下兩排不整齊
01:58:938 (7) - 同+8
02:06:323 (7) - 同
02:34:477 (5,6,7,8) - 7應該在中心線上,其他note為弧線
02:49:592 (2) - 似乎可以把這個2刪掉,34做一個2連……
02:52:477 (2) - 完全可以做一個3連……
02:55:707 (1) - 往下挪
03:07:246 (2) -同3連
Topic Starter
Shinki
fix(thanks Ballance:D
xierbaliti
-Easy-
offset:554
02:43:916 (3) - easy同种颜色里最好别有距离变化 真要变化的话我建议这样:
02:55:685 - 没用的2x绿线 若只是做效果的话只需改到1x
03:27:301 (5) - 别放跳啊D:
音效: clap的位置放错了吧._. 例如00:41:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这一段 clap全放1,3上了 D:

-Normal-
00:34:477 (3) - 这个位置不好 建议是做成这样
00:35:169 (1) - 取消newcombo吧 这明显是前面那段节奏里的
00:35:630 (2) - new combo
00:45:092 (1,1) - 都没有必要用newcombo
00:45:784 (2) - new combo
00:48:092 (4) - 取消newcombo
00:50:861 (2) - 因为有vocal在前面蓝线上 所以这里突然减小间距有可能被误读 还是和前面保持一样间距为好
00:54:092 (1) - 我觉得还是保持和前面一样的距离比较好理解
01:16:246 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这几个排的不齐啊 而且01:16:246 (1)的位置还比较坑 建议做成这样:
SPOILER

不过换成我的话应该是会把01:15:092 (2)再加上个repeat
01:34:246 (1) - 取消newcombo
01:34:707 (2) - new combo
01:40:246 (5) - 往上放一点
01:42:092 (7) - 建议newcombo
01:43:015 (1) - 建议取消newcombo
01:49:246 (1) - 非要在normal里做陷阱吗? 哪怕做个小跳也比这里强啊
01:51:323 (5) - ^
01:55:477 (1) - 建议去掉 想保留的话最好在01:56:400加一个note
02:00:323 (1,1) - 没有必要用newcombo
02:01:938 (3) - 和00:50:861 (2)一样因为有vocal在前面蓝线上 所以这里减小间距有可能被误读
02:07:015 (3) - 无意义的小跳
02:09:784 (1) - ^
02:11:169 (4) - 混乱的间距
02:35:630 (3,4,5) - ^
02:39:323 (1) - 间距
02:46:477 (1,2,3,4) - 个人认为不太适合在这里调大距离
02:50:169 (1) - 似乎要离02:49:707 (5) 再近一些
03:02:400 (5) - 建议new combo
03:02:861 (2) - 建议取消newcombo
03:06:554 - 为啥不放note D: 做成和前面03:01:477 (2,3,4,5,1)一样的样式比较好

-RF's Hard+-
Leadin:我感觉2000比较合适
offset:554
00:01:685 (7) - 间距
00:07:224 (6) - ^
00:26:839 (6) - ^
00:35:378 (1) - 建议去掉newcombo
00:36:301 (3) - 建议newcombo
00:37:570 (1) - 在00:37:455开始比较好
00:42:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 总感觉很违和 或许这样这样比较好?
SPOILER

其实这样我也不太喜欢orz 感觉这种排列在这有些牵强
00:45:762 (7,8,9) - 听/打着有点违和
00:47:608 (5) - 位置不好
00:54:070 (8,9) - off了 试试这种节奏?
01:37:916 (6) - 想吐槽这个位置 前面铺垫做得这么好这里为什么不跳..

后面基本是Copy没啥诚意所以略过吧 主要就是几个问题说一下
1.间距 不要有没有必要的距离变化 跳就是跳 大间距part也好 小间距part也好 放的要舒服 比如这个02:21:992 (7) 就是错误的间距
2.排版 还是要注意下版面 为啥会有种很乱的感觉._.
3.音效 !@#$%^&*

-Hard-
Leadin:保持和Hard+一样
00:22:361 (4) - spacing
00:31:477 (2,3) - 应该再移远一些比较好 而且如果想用这种摆法的话最行的通的方法是把00:31:015 (4) new combo 而且这么做之后更随意的招式就是把后面的5circle做成更大的间距
00:36:327 - 总感觉这种跳很违和 可能是与我的习惯不一样所以有这种感觉.. 如果是我的话一定会把00:34:707 (6,1,2) - 这3个做成跳>_>
03:31:246 (1) - 和前面的note重合了自重
03:31:246 (spinner) - 过长而且音量太大 建议渐弱至0音量

-Insane-
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