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Short Leg Summer - Honoo no Running Back

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Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 28 de marzo de 2011 at 12:24:38 p.m.

Artist: Short Leg Summer
Title: Honoo no Running Back
Source: Eyeshield 21
Tags: opening OP 5 Kobayakawa Sena Deimon Devil Bats
BPM: 100.07
Filesize: 4018kb
Play Time: 01:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fast (4.44 stars, 176 notes)
  2. Slow (1.75 stars, 76 notes)
  3. Speed of Light (4.97 stars, 255 notes)
Download: Short Leg Summer - Honoo no Running Back
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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  1. Last Changes 28/03: New SB scripting and fixed offset (ZLOdeuka)
  1. Note: Re-Download after 28/03
  1. Special thanks to:
    ZLOdeuka: For help to SB
Last edited by Neko_Ray , edited 29 times in total.
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
2,881 posts
Joined March 2009
Charles445
General
I'm getting an offset of about 1,868
I like the storyboard.
The map is very rectangular - that means there are a lot of ugly boxes and corners and straight lines.
You should make it more curvy! :D
Are you going to map the whole song? If not, you should cut the mp3 to save file space.


Slow
00:02:152 (1,2) - This is bad spacing]
00:09:052 - New combo
00:11:452 - ^^
00:18:652 - ^^
00:21:052 - ^^
00:28:852 - ^^
00:30:652 - ^^
00:38:452 - ^^
00:56:152 - ^^?
01:05:752 - ^^?

Speed of Light
00:37:702 - New combo
00:41:602 - ^^
00:43:852 - Unrankable - Unreadable slider. Make the 1 like this to fix it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/60683
Komeiji Yuki
1,264 posts
Joined March 2010
Komeiji Yuki
Hi cute neko~ :D this is a mod4mod just I like the anime so I mod it :D

So glad to see someone map 21's song

there is no one which ranked

---

Here is some suggestions~

[General]
Pretty SB ~ I love it

Try to add some tags:

Kobayakawa Sena Deimon Devil Bats

[slow]

Good ;)

[Speed of Light]

00:14:168 (1) - Remove New combo

00:23:468 (3) - ^

---
Expect it is ranked~

☆~
Mastodonio
1,120 posts
Joined October 2009
Mastodonio
hi
01:16:268 - unused green line?
my advice to you - put one more KIAI mod here ;) start it here : 00:25:868 and end it here,for example : 00:43:568

Slow:
no problems here

Speed of light:
00:04:268 - new combo?
00:25:268 - add finish
00:25:868 - ^

That is all! Star!
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
-Lennox-
Yo~


[General]

Your mp3 bitrate is unrankable, compress it too 128~192
Map to the end or cut the Mp3.

[Slow]

AR +1?

00:16:268 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Put here some sliders or anything else.. two times the same thing is ugly..
00:38:468 (1) - Remove nc?
00:40:268 (1) - New combo?
00:56:168 (5) - NC
01:05:768 (5) - NC
01:06:668 (1) & 01:09:068 (1) & 01:13:868 (1) - So short ._.


[Speed of Light]

HP +1 ?

00:01:568 (4) - NC
00:01:868 (1) - Remove NC
00:08:618 (5) - New combo
00:09:068 (1) - Remove NC
00:10:718 (4) - Such a stacking is odd.. pls change
00:17:468 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, and remove NC add (1)
00:18:218 (9) - NC
00:18:668 (1) - Remove NC
00:42:518 (1) - Remove NC
00:43:868 (6) - NC
01:11:468 (1) - remove NC

Need's more work, but its good for the first time.

Star~
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
SPOILER

Charles445 wrote:

General
I'm getting an offset of about 1,868 Done
I like the storyboard. Thank you :3
The map is very rectangular - that means there are a lot of ugly boxes and corners and straight lines.
You should make it more curvy! :D
Are you going to map the whole song? If not, you should cut the mp3 to save file space.


Slow
00:02:152 (1,2) - This is bad spacing] Done
00:09:052 - New combo Done
00:11:452 - ^^ Done
00:18:652 - ^^ Done
00:21:052 - ^^ Done
00:28:852 - ^^ Done
00:30:652 - ^^ Done
00:38:452 - ^^ Done
00:56:152 - ^^? No changes
01:05:752 - ^^? No changes

Speed of Light
00:37:702 - New combo Done
00:41:602 - ^^ Done
00:43:852 - Unrankable - Unreadable slider. Make the 1 like this to fix it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/60683 Done

Thanks~

SPOILER

a0178042 wrote:

Try to add some tags:

Kobayakawa Sena Deimon Devil Bats Done

[slow]

Good ;)

[Speed of Light]

00:14:168 (1) - Remove New combo Done

00:23:468 (3) - ^ Done

---
Expect it is ranked~

☆~

Thanks a lot :3

SPOILER

Giorgos wrote:

hi
01:16:268 - unused green line? No, is used :D
my advice to you - put one more KIAI mod here ;) start it here : 00:25:868 and end it here,for example : 00:43:568 I dont think so

Slow:
no problems here

Speed of light:
00:04:268 - new combo? Done
00:25:268 - add finish Done
00:25:868 - ^ No changes

That is all! Star!

Thnak for you star~
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
SPOILER

-Lennox- wrote:

Yo~


[General]

Your mp3 bitrate is unrankable, compress it too 128~192 I dont think so
Map to the end or cut the Mp3. Waiting...

[Slow]

AR +1? Done

00:16:268 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Put here some sliders or anything else.. two times the same thing is ugly.. No changes
00:38:468 (1) - Remove nc? Done
00:40:268 (1) - New combo? Done
00:56:168 (5) - NC No changes
01:05:768 (5) - NC No changes
01:06:668 (1) & 01:09:068 (1) & 01:13:868 (1) - So short ._. Short but rankable


[Speed of Light]

HP +1 ? No changes

00:01:568 (4) - NC No changes
00:01:868 (1) - Remove NC No changes
00:08:618 (5) - New combo No changes
00:09:068 (1) - Remove NC No changes
00:10:718 (4) - Such a stacking is odd.. pls change No changes
00:17:468 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, and remove NC add (1) No changes
00:18:218 (9) - NC No changes
00:18:668 (1) - Remove NC No changes
00:42:518 (1) - Remove NC Done
00:43:868 (6) - NC No changes
01:11:468 (1) - remove NC No changes

Need's more work, but its good for the first time. :roll:

Star~

Thanks fro your mod anyway~
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
-Lennox-
Your mp3 bitrate is unrankable, compress it too 128~192 [b]I dont think so
You must do this. 320 kb/s is unrankable..
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray

-Lennox- wrote:

Your mp3 bitrate is unrankable, compress it too 128~192 [b]I dont think so
You must do this. 320 kb/s is unrankable..
lol, my mp3 is 162kb/s :3
-Lennox-
640 posts
Joined September 2010
-Lennox-
lol, my mp3 is 162kb/s :3
SPOILER

Ehh...?
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
[General]
i doubt about timing
SB's timing is a bit off
if you dont want to map all , cut the mp3 plz~
delete the op and opening from tags~
all green lines are not in line , move then in line plz~
00:56:764 (3) - keep kiai here~


[Speed of Light]
00:01:564 (4) - weird spacing
00:07:264 (7) - there sounds a bit strange , i think delete it is better than now
00:33:664 (5) - still need some works here
00:53:464 (6,1) - different with before...misunderstanding
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
[General]
set preview point
cut mp3
i think,very linear...
more use curve.
LuPiiTa
371 posts
Joined June 2010
LuPiiTa
☆~
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
SPOILER

eveless wrote:

[General]
i doubt about timing
SB's timing is a bit off Done
if you dont want to map all , cut the mp3 plz~ Done
delete the op and opening from tags~ No changes, people look for "opening" sometimes
all green lines are not in line , move then in line plz~ Done
00:56:764 (3) - keep kiai here~ Done

[Speed of Light]
00:01:564 (4) - weird spacing ??
00:07:264 (7) - there sounds a bit strange , i think delete it is better than now Done
00:33:664 (5) - still need some works here Done
00:53:464 (6,1) - different with before...misunderstanding Done

SPOILER

frost-b-spec wrote:

[General]
set preview point Done
cut mp3 Done
i think,very linear...
more use curve.Done, changed to curves~
Thanks for your modding~

LuPiiTa wrote:

☆~
Thanks for you star ^^
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
Nya. It's for mod4mod (=°ω°=)

[Slow]
Slider tick rate 2 is not slow
That's a pretty good one.

[Speed of Light]
Good too, but there are some sudden jumps, on purpose I think.

[Taiko] (Not obliged to follow it but to have a more challenging map to Taiko players like me ;) )
I'll try to make it challenging, I found it easy :<
-Delete the SB, I'll do a special BG later.
k = clap
d = without clap
big = finish

If one letter is mentioned for 2 or more notes, it means that they are same. Otherwise, pattern.
Huge amount of don/kat mod :D
00:00:968 (2,4) - k
00:02:168 (2,4) - k
00:03:218 (6) - d
00:04:268 (10) - d
00:05:768 (17) - d
00:06:068 (18,19,20,21,22) - normal kkdkk
00:06:968 (2,3) - k
00:07:718 (6) - d
00:08:318 (10) - k
00:08:768 (12,13) - d
00:09:368 (2) - k
00:10:268 (7) - k
00:11:468 (1) - normal k
00:11:618 (2,3,4,5) - d
00:14:468 (2,4) - k
00:15:218 (5,6) - d
00:16:418 (2,3) - k
00:17:918 (11) - k
00:19:718 (7) - d
00:20:018 (9,10) - k
00:21:068 (1) - normal k
00:21:218 (2,3,4,5) - d
00:24:068 (2,4) - k
00:24:818 (5,6) - d
00:26:918 (6) - k
00:27:818 (10) - k
00:29:168 (5) - k
00:30:218 (10) - k
00:31:868 (2,3) - k
00:32:618 - add 2 notes; to have 00:31:868 (2,3,4,5) - kkd dkk
00:32:468 (5) - d
00:33:218 (7) - k
00:34:118 (10,11) - k
00:36:068 (3,4,5,6) - ddkk
00:36:818 (7) - big k
00:37:418 (10) - k
00:38:918 (6) - k
00:39:818 (10) - k
00:40:268 (1) - normal k
00:40:718 (4,5,6) - d
00:45:068 (1) - big k
00:47:468 (1) - normal k
00:47:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - kkddkkd
00:48:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ddkkddk
00:49:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - dkdkddk
00:51:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - kdkdkkd
00:53:468 (1,2,3,4) - normal kkdd
00:54:668 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:56:618 (5) - d
00:57:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - kkddkkd ddkkddk dkdkddk kdkdkkd
01:01:868 (1) - normal d
01:03:068 (1) - ^
01:04:268 (1) - normal k
01:04:268 (1,2,3,4) - kdkd
01:05:468 (1) - big k
01:05:768 (2,3,4,5,6) - good choice.
01:08:168 (2,3,4,5) - dk d d
01:10:568 (2,3,4,5,6) - k d kkd
01:12:068 (2,3) - k
01:12:668 (4,5) - normal d
01:14:768 (7) - k
01:15:968 (9,10) - k
01:16:268 - spinner to 01:17:468.

Star, and future BG incoming ~
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a
I like this song
Fight~ :oops:
Kamure
735 posts
Joined August 2009
Kamure
Hmm, ok....

By Mod Request:

General
  1. Hmm, seems a bit untimed... BPM: 100.07 Offset: 709
  2. Snap timing sections, preview point, storyboard, etc. if you are changing it.
[Speed of Light]
  1. 00:11:318 (7,1) - huge jump
  2. 00:18:668 (8) - make sure the slider curves into the opposite side of the next note
  3. 00:19:418 (11) - ^ but with (9)
  4. 00:20:918 (7,1) - huge jump
Ehh, good enough
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
[Speed of Light]
00:01:608 (4) - Hmmm, maybe new combo?
00:18:696 (8) - New combo
00:53:472 (6,1) - Quite uncomfortable jump.
01:03:964 (5,6,1,2) - ^, first fery tiny spacing between notes, then it suddenly grows x2 and then goes back to normal~ ;u;'

[Slow]
00:56:170 (5) - New combo?
01:05:763 (5) - ^

Star~ :3
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray

Lanttu wrote:

[Speed of Light]
00:01:608 (4) - Hmmm, maybe new combo? No
00:18:696 (8) - New combo Done
00:53:472 (6,1) - Quite uncomfortable jump. Changed
01:03:964 (5,6,1,2) - ^, first fery tiny spacing between notes, then it suddenly grows x2 and then goes back to normal~ ;u;' Hehe, changed

[Slow]
00:56:170 (5) - New combo? Done
01:05:763 (5) - ^ Done

Star~ :3
Thank~
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
I'm done with my Taiko map you wanted me to do...
This is very very hard, 550 notes for 75 seconds o/
[attachment=0:af3a2]Short Leg Summer - Honoo no Running Back (Neko_Ray) [Gezoda's Taiko Speed].osu[/attachment:af3a2]

The Background of the song : http://puu.sh/1cjo (yay)
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hola ~~ >w<

General;
- El preview time no es igual en todas las diffs
- Necesitas una diff que este entre Slow y Speed of Light ;w;
- Usa estos colores mejor
Combo1 : 202,162,79
Combo2 : 117,196,11
Combo3 : 29,72,99
Combo4 : 214,31,31

Skin;
- Usa este comboburst, mas grande ~
SPOILER

Slow;
- 00:02:207 >> Umm, borra esta nota y haz un slider desde 00:01:908 hasta el prox tick blanco
- 00:02:807 >> Muevelo al sig tick blanco y remueve un repeat
- 00:04:606 >> Mueve al anterior tick blanco y remueve un repeat
- 00:04:906 >> Haz un slider que termine en el sig tick blanco
- 00:48:675 >> Mueve al tick rojo que sigue y saca un repeat, haz lo mismo con (3,4)

Speed of Light;
- No me gusta el comienzo de la diff para nada >w> No se porque ~
- 00:07:454 >> Remueve el finish
- 00:09:852 >> ^
- 00:14:049 >> Agrega notas aqui y en el sig tick azul
- 00:15:248 >> ^

* Tus formaciones son lineares y un poco monotonas trata de hacer algo mas divertido ~

* Star ~
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
uh... ok lo hare en español...

Storyboard mod~

- Vas a tener que acabar re-haciendo el storyboard, la mitad de las acciones no tienen sincronizacion alguna con el ritmo y la otra mitad tienen muchos keyframes que no hacen nada (y deberian?)

00:11:351 - viento debería empezar en 00:11:501.
00:20:944 - viento debería empezar en 00:21:094.
00:52:272 - Arregla el fade desde aquí al final de esta acción (00:55:720)
01:01:866 - Arregla el fade desde aquí al final de esta acción (01:05:463)

No hay mucho mas que decir ._.
Necesitas, al menos, una Hard, el spread es horrible ;_; Ah, y añade Gezoda a los Tags.

[Speed of Light] es... uh. No se, odio los 1/4 jumps (00:20:944 (7,1)) y los streams tan espaciados =( (00:59:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - )

Buena suerte~
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
Gracias lovhin456, me ayudaste bastante
SPOILER

Beuchi-chan wrote:

uh... ok lo hare en español...

Storyboard mod~

- Vas a tener que acabar re-haciendo el storyboard, la mitad de las acciones no tienen sincronizacion alguna con el ritmo y la otra mitad tienen muchos keyframes que no hacen nada (y deberian?)

00:11:351 - viento debería empezar en 00:11:501.
00:20:944 - viento debería empezar en 00:21:094.
00:52:272 - Arregla el fade desde aquí al final de esta acción (00:55:720)
01:01:866 - Arregla el fade desde aquí al final de esta acción (01:05:463)

No hay mucho mas que decir ._.
Necesitas, al menos, una Hard, el spread es horrible ;_; Ah, y añade Gezoda a los Tags.

[Speed of Light] es... uh. No se, odio los 1/4 jumps (00:20:944 (7,1)) y los streams tan espaciados =( (00:59:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - )

Buena suerte~
Gracias Beuchi, por ayudarme a resumir :3
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
2nd modding.

mapset is gooood!!

[Fast]
resnap all note

and forgot shoot star
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray

frost-b-spec wrote:

2nd modding.

mapset is gooood!!

[Fast]
resnap all note

and forgot shoot star
I don't understand you is perfectly snapped, but thank for you star :3
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
[Slow]
AR+1
00:40:281 (1) - add an arrow ?
01:13:857 (1) - end at 01:16:256.

[Fast]
00:53:621 (1) - move to 00:53:771, reduce an arrow and delete

newcombo.
01:03:215 (1) - move to 01:03:365, and ^
01:13:857 (1) - end at 01:16:256.

[Speed of Light]
AR-1 (It isn't a very hard diff,you'd better not use AR>=9)
01:14:457 (1) - add a spinner , end at 01:16:256.
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Star~☆
haha5957
1,433 posts
Joined July 2010
haha5957
suggestions about spliting sliders into slider+slider or slider+circle is up to you.
those are not major problems.


[General]
BPM 100.00
Offset 687 (or something around here, yours is too off)


[Slow]
00:00:709 (1) - I think this kind of repeat confuses beginner. (there are many like this)
(Also it doesn't play good) try to repeat only 1 time. (try slider+slider)
00:11:501 (1) - ^ (try slider(1repeat)+slider)
00:21:094 (1) - ^.
00:30:688 (1) - ^
00:47:476 (1) - this repeats 2 time but later sliders only 1 time, this can really confuse beginners

[Fast]
00:10:275 (3) - Slider+Slider
00:55:582 (4,1) - previous 1,2,3,4 and next 1,2,3,4 is ok but this two looks kinda not good to me o.o

[Speed of light]
Ok


Nice map

star
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
SPOILER

haha5957 wrote:

suggestions about spliting sliders into slider+slider or slider+circle is up to you.
those are not major problems.


[General]
BPM 100.00
Offset 687 (or something around here, yours is too off)


[Slow]
00:00:709 (1) - I think this kind of repeat confuses beginner. (there are many like this)
(Also it doesn't play good) try to repeat only 1 time. (try slider+slider)
00:11:501 (1) - ^ (try slider(1repeat)+slider)
00:21:094 (1) - ^.
00:30:688 (1) - ^
00:47:476 (1) - this repeats 2 time but later sliders only 1 time, this can really confuse beginners

[Fast]
00:10:275 (3) - Slider+Slider
00:55:582 (4,1) - previous 1,2,3,4 and next 1,2,3,4 is ok but this two looks kinda not good to me o.o

[Speed of light]
Ok


Nice map

star
I think different, but thank for you star~
Beren
961 posts
Joined September 2009
Beren
★
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
IRC modded.


Star.
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
Looks good for me.
Star~
Kurowolfe
459 posts
Joined June 2010
Kurowolfe
Hi there~
About your maps....
kurohacker's mod (^^)
[Slow]
0:13:599 [3] - Add a clap here, to follow the drums in the song.
0:13:899 [4] - Add a finish here?
0:18:696 [1] - Remove the finish here, and...
0:19:895 [3] - Add it here instead?
0:23:193 [3] - Add a clap here.
0:23:493 [4] - Add a finish here?
0:40:281 [1] - Maybe add another reverse here.

[Fast]
0:12:101 [3-5] - Move one grid right (grid level 3).
0:32:486 & 0:33:236 - Add a circle here, to go together with the singer.
0:47:476 [1] - This note is early by 1/8 beats, but I don't know if its a good idea to move it, since most of the notes so far only uses 1/4 beats. Up to you to decide.
0:53:771 [2] - How about adding one more reverse and moving it so that it starts at 0:53:621 instead? This is to follow the singer's "Akire-something-".
1:03:365 [2] - Same case here.

[Speed of Light]
No major issues here. The jumps here did made my heart jump, literally, since they were so fast.
0:42:529 [5] - Maybe new combo here, with the red colour instead? Since this is Sena's number...

I love the SB here, so one star for you~
All the best! :)
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray

kurohacker wrote:

[Slow]
0:13:599 [3] - Add a clap here, to follow the drums in the song. Done
0:13:899 [4] - Add a finish here? Yeah
0:18:696 [1] - Remove the finish here, and... Done
0:19:895 [3] - Add it here instead? Done
0:23:193 [3] - Add a clap here. Done
0:23:493 [4] - Add a finish here? Yeah
0:40:281 [1] - Maybe add another reverse here. No

[Fast]
0:12:101 [3-5] - Move one grid right (grid level 3). Done
0:32:486 & 0:33:236 - Add a circle here, to go together with the singer. Done
0:47:476 [1] - This note is early by 1/8 beats, but I don't know if its a good idea to move it, since most of the notes so far only uses 1/4 beats. Up to you to decide. Is fine
0:53:771 [2] - How about adding one more reverse and moving it so that it starts at 0:53:621 instead? This is to follow the singer's "Akire-something-". No
1:03:365 [2] - Same case here. No

[Speed of Light]
No major issues here. The jumps here did made my heart jump, literally, since they were so fast.
0:42:529 [5] - Maybe new combo here, with the red colour instead? Since this is Sena's number... Uhmmm yeah, why no
Thank for your modding and star~
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
x3 modlog

Speed of light

00:01:608 (4) - place this with distance snap
00:06:704 (5) - new combo
00:25:291 (7) - ^^

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Neko_Ray
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Joined July 2010
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Neko_Ray

XepherX3 wrote:

x3 modlog

Speed of light

00:01:608 (4) - place this with distance snap I think is fine
00:06:704 (5) - new combo Done
00:25:291 (7) - ^^ No

star from me
Thank for you modding and star~
Axey
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Joined October 2009
Axey
wow nice map~
I can't find any problems :3

/me shoot star~
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