KillerRind wrote:

00:07:180 (2) - 1 tick länger und nur 1 repeat ~return point auf blauem tick ohne vocals? nope
00:08:008 - note dazu oder (3) und (4) wegmachen und nen slider hin ~nein
00:35:318 (2,3) - ich weiß dass das den bass verfolgen soll aber irgendwie gefallen mir die nicht, vlt wegmachen? ~mir gefällts ^^
00:36:311 (5,6) - 2 ticks weiter vorne starten ~sicher nicht, für normal besser da einfacher zu spielen, außerdem würds den clap rythmus zerstören der dem bass folgen soll. Ich hatte auch schon selbst die idee es so zu machen, aber dem bass zu folgen finde ich im endeffekt besser
00:46:408 - slider hier starten und bei 00:46:904 enden ~kann man machen, muss man aber auch nicht
00:47:566 (6,1) - wegmachen und mit nem spinner austauschen der bei 00:49:552 endet ~sb flashes also keinen spinner
01:13:056 (3) - löschen ~fixed
01:14:876 - circle dazu ~nein
01:15:704 (3) - löschen ~fixed
01:22:987 - circle dazu ~nein
01:44:670 - circle dazu ~nein
01:56:421 (6,1) - wegmachen, bei 01:56:421 nen circle hin und von 01:56:587 bis 01:58:408 nen spinner ~sb flashes also keinen spinner
02:11:980 (4) - löschen ~wenn ich 02:10:656 (2) einen mache mach ich auch hier einen
Deine Slider sind schlecht gemacht nicht soviele punkte benutzen ( http://puu.sh/Gh9 ) ~waypoints sind zweitrangig, solange der Slider gut aussieht imo. Habe sie aber reduziert und die Slider noch etwas verschönert.

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KillerRind wrote:

[Hard]
00:11:484 (6) - löschen
00:12:477 (1) - bei 00:11:814 starten
00:21:415 (3) - löschen und von 00:21:249 bis 00:21:580 nen slider
00:22:408 (5) - bei 00:22:242 starten
00:31:015 (7) - (6) löschen und slider da starten
00:33:002 (5) - slider bei 00:32:835 starten
00:36:476 - note dazu ;D
00:37:305 (5) - nach 00:37:139 verschieben
00:37:636 (1) - bei 00:37:470 starten
00:40:284 (2) - nach 00:40:118 verschieben
00:52:201 - note dazu
01:06:601 - ^
01:15:705 (3) - nach 01:15:870 verschieben
01:16:366 (4) - nach 01:16:532 verschieben
01:27:621 (8) - bei 01:27:456 starten
01:50:464 (8) - bei 01:50:297 starten
bis zum ende mappen bitte :/ das is ne hard
Okay werd ich, kannst es aber erst nächtest WE sehen

[Dangerous]
schonmal i vorraus deine slider sind hässlich xD aber die mach ich n andres mal

Halt die Klappe!! xD

MoonShade wrote:

@ Dark_Ai, bitte achte darauf dass du im Song Setup bei allen Diffs folgendes einstellst:

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deadbeat wrote:

Hard
AR down 1 or 2?
00:30:188 (3) - new combo?
00:34:326 (1) - extend by 1/8 so its on the white tick
00:41:608 (7) - ^ and start it 1/2 earlier
00:47:733 (8) - extend 1/8 again
00:50:876 (x) - note here?
00:52:864 (7) - extend by 1/8 so its on the white tick
00:56:008 (x) - note here?
00:58:160 (2,6) - extend by 1/8 so its on the white tick(i'm just gonna say 1/8 again from now on ><)
01:07:760 (4) - 1/8 again
01:11:071 (2) - extend by 1/2 to the white tick
01:12:726 (2,5,3) - 1/8 again (the 3 is in the next combo)
gonna stop with the slider ending 1/8 early...what u should do is go through the map and look really carefully to make sure the ends of sliders are on either a red or white tick. making the beat snap disvisor 1/2 will help
01:27:456 (8) - extend by 1/2
01:49:139 (x) - note here?

Dangerous
also has sliders ending 1/8 early
00:35:980 (x) - note here?
00:36:147 (2,3,4,5) - down a grid(level with the 1)
00:41:438 (5) - ^
00:43:760 (6) - extend 1/2?
00:45:416 (4) - left 1 grid
00:50:533 (3,5) - move so under the 1
01:06:601 (x) - note here?
01:23:981 (3) - new combo?
01:26:629 (3) - ^
02:16:450 (6) - ^
02:18:601 (1) - remove new combo
02:19:264 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - make it one combo


not bad for a first map good luck

Done & Thank you

MoonShade wrote:

Also ich kanns problemlos downloaden o.O

lennox989 wrote:

[Generall]

Die bitrate deiner audiodatei ist 256 verkleinere sie auf 128~192
Alle diff's sollten an der gleichen stelle enden..

Dark_Ai wrote:

lennox: Mach ich nich x'D

deadbeat: Thank you very much :3

und danke Athy
boah wenn ich das höre wie du singst . . . xDD

Xafnia wrote:

I don't know if it matters or not but the epilepsy warning hides the first note on [Dangerous].
Nice map

lennox989 wrote:

[Jagang's Safety]

00:09:828 (3) - Mach doch ein stilles ende des sliders... hört sich meiner meinung nach besser an geschmackssache,habs mal übernommen
00:24:394 (1) - Keinen neuen combo hier... combo spam is nich erlaubt <.< korrigier mich wenn ich falsch liege aber das ist noch kein spam O_o
00:38:297 (1) - ^ nein
00:40:945 (1,1,1,1) - Vier mal hintereinander der gleiche slider... beim spielen bissl langweilig.. finde ich nicht,vorallem da es easy ist
00:42:270 (1) - Neuer combo weg nein
00:44:918 (1) - ^ nein
00:48:559 (6) - Neuer combo? nein
00:50:214 (1) - Neuer combo weg nein
01:00:476 (1) - Combo spam >.< Ich weiß es passt...aber kann man ja nix machen wenn es passt ist combospam erlaubt
01:30:601 (3,4,5) - Die überlappung is öde.. könntest ja gleich machen wie bei 01:32:587 (2,3,4,5) - ? bleibt so
01:37:221 (7) - Add Finish? fixed
01:37:552 - Schon vorbei? ._. ja

Gute arbeit~
zu den combos möchte ich erst noch andere rückmeldungen bekommen

Dark_Ai wrote:

deadbeat: Thank you very much :3

Dark_Ai wrote:

Tags: Techno MoonShade

KillerRind wrote:

[MoonShade's Normal]
00:07:180 (2) - ders komisch ~nein o.o
00:08:173 (3,4) - Slider von (3) zu (4) machen? ~ich finds gut so wies ist
01:22:987 - Circle dazu ~ok

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

There are 4 files .osb into the folder. Please remove the 3 unused files and do a full submission.

Mp3 bitrate is unrankable. Please re-encode the mp3 to 192kbps or less.

[Hard]

00:20:753 (3) - Reduce this slider by 1/4.
00:41:608 (7) - This slider should end at 00:41:939.
00:46:408 (5) - This slider just sounds wrong, extend it correctly with using 1/4. Also, add a new combo on it.
00:48:560 (1) - End this spinner 1/1 back, much better.
01:06:601 (6,1) - Even if there is a new combo, this is really unexpected...
01:09:746 (1) - Extend it a bit more and let it end at 01:10:739.
01:35:898 (1,2,3) - I don't like how they sounds, they doesn't seems to follow anything T_T Replace them with something else, please.
01:48:476 (x) - You should totally add a note here.
01:53:111 (6,7) - Stack them correctly under (5).
01:55:264 (4) - New combo.
01:58:076 (5) - There are some extra repeats that aren't needed at all, let this slider end at 01:58:408.
02:01:056 (x) - Add a note here for the same reason as 01:48:476.
02:04:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sudden spacing change is not so good D:
02:05:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing of this pattern is really confusing and unintuitive, also stack the notes on a better way please.
02:11:649 (5) - Better to remove this slider and just add a circle at 02:11:649.
02:14:794 (x) - Add a note here for the same reason as 01:48:476.
02:16:449 (x) - ^
02:17:608 (1) - Same as 00:48:560.

[Dangerous]

89 unsnapped notes, make sure to resnap them all with going on "Timing -> Resnap All Notes".

00:08:835 (1,2) - Wrong spacing.
00:15:792 (7,8) - ^
00:49:057 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:374 (2,3) - Wrong spacing here too, they are too close.
01:24:643 (6,7) - ^
01:27:291 (6,7) - ^
01:35:898 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as Hard.
01:41:526 (5,6) - Wrong spacing, I guess you know why now.
01:57:995 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:58:325 (x) - Add a note here.
01:58:408 (x) - ^
01:58:574 (1,2) - Remove both.
01:59:733 (3) - New combo.
02:04:036 (5) - New combo due to spacing change.
02:04:533 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:08:340 (5,6) - Wrong spacing.
02:13:140 (4) - Remove this note.
02:19:595 (1) - Remove new combo.

Done!

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Hol die map ausser Mülltonne raus, polier sie n bissl auf und kriegse ranked... man, was ne Verschwendung die im graveyard verroten zu lassen.

Dark_Ai wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 5. April 2011 at 20:09:48

Artist: Cascada
Title: Dangerous (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: Techno MoonShade
BPM: 181,25
Filesize: 3159kb
Play Time: 02:18
Difficulties Available:

1. BounceBabe's Normal+ (4,13 stars, 254 notes)
2. Dangerous (4,97 stars, 404 notes)
3. Firce777's Taiko (4,83 stars, 1053 notes)
4. Hard (4,51 stars, 303 notes)
5. Jagang's Safety (2,64 stars, 112 notes)
6. MoonShade's Normal (3,49 stars, 202 notes)

Download: Cascada - Dangerous (Nightcore Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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So my first Beatmap :3 I hope you like it

Easy by Jagang
Normal by MoonShade
Normal + by BounceBabe
Taiko by Firce777
Hard &
Insane by Me

Thank you MoonShade for making the storyboard. <33
And Thank you all for the guest Diff's

Neko_Lover wrote:

hope this gets ranked

00:07:180 (2,3) - make 2 a 1/2 slider, put a 1/1 slider at 00:07:676 ending at 00:08:008 e.g http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/106630 ~ don't think this has to be done
00:09:828 (2,3) - thinking might be nicer as a slider, 00:10:821 (5) - unsure about tis one ~ no
00:43:428 (4) - move forward 1/2 end at same place? ~ I'm following the vocals here, so no ^^
00:48:559 (1) - personally i tend to avoid 1/4 anything in normals, maybe make it 1/2 repeat instead? ~ I think this way, it's more fun to play, also I think this 1/4 is as easy to catch as possible here, with a long slider before and a gap after it, so it shouldn't be a problem
01:06:104 (2) - love this slider, diff needs more like it ~ sorry? This is a normal half-round slider, there are plenty of them in my diff, but thx I guess

deadbeat wrote:

easy

00:12:145 (1,1,2) - not sure sure this is a good idea, newer players might have trouble hitting them. not sure about it,left for the moment
00:50:214 (1,1) - i'd consider making into one long slider changed
00:50:214 (1,1) - ^ same time as befor? think you mean befor the break but in my opinion its ok there
01:21:166 (1,1) - same as 00:12:145 (1,1,2) same as befor
01:35:897 (3,4,5,6,7) - imo, i'd turn into a slider changed