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Megaparadox
[Normal]
1:39:063 - add circle

star and gz 8-)
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
[Normal]
1:39:063 - add circle DONE

Thanks :3
lovhin456
Hola ~ >w<

General;
- Puedes conseguir un mp3 de mejor calidad ? >:
- El video no se muestra ni en Normal ni Insane ;w;

Normal;
- Recomiendo que los circulos sean mas grandes, ya que esta es tu diff mas facil y va a ser jugada por principiantes
- 00:30:663 >> Nuevo combo aqui o en el que sigue
- 00:43:863 >> Nuevo combo
- 00:51:263 >> Agrega una nota
- 00:58:263 >> Nuevo combo
- 01:07:863 >> Quitale whistle al principio y pon finish
- 01:31:863 >> Nuevo combo

Krisom's Taiko;
- Suena bien ~ >w<

Insane;
- 00:20:463 >> No rankeable, auto debe hacer 2000 bonus por lo menos, eliminalo o cambia por un slider
- Umm, demasiados jumps ... eso creo >w>

* Star ~
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
General;
- Puedes conseguir un mp3 de mejor calidad ? >: LISTO, LE CAMBIE DE 192kbps A 320kbps, SUENA MEJOR
- El video no se muestra ni en Normal ni Insane ;w; UHMM, ES RARO, SI SE MUESTRA, VUELVELO A DESCARGAR

Normal;
- Recomiendo que los circulos sean mas grandes, ya que esta es tu diff mas facil y va a ser jugada por principiantes YO CREO QUE ESTA BIEN ASI
- 00:30:663 >> Nuevo combo aqui o en el que sigue LISTO
- 00:43:863 >> Nuevo combo LISTO
- 00:51:263 >> Agrega una nota ESTA BIEN ASI, ES LA MAS FACIL NO QUIERO AGREGARLE MAS NOTAS
- 00:58:263 >> Nuevo combo LISTO
- 01:07:863 >> Quitale whistle al principio y pon finish LISTO, SUENA GENIAL 8-)
- 01:31:863 >> Nuevo combo LISTO

Krisom's Taiko;
- Suena bien ~ >w< TE ODIO KRISOM

Insane;
- 00:20:463 >> No rankeable, auto debe hacer 2000 bonus por lo menos, eliminalo o cambia por un slider ELIMINADO
- Umm, demasiados jumps ... eso creo >w> LE QUITE UN JUMP

Gracias por modearme ! :3
lovhin456

Neko_Ray wrote:

General;
- Puedes conseguir un mp3 de mejor calidad ? >: LISTO, LE CAMBIE DE 192kbps A 320kbps, SUENA MEJOR
Ohhh, no hagas eso, no es rankeable si el mp3 es de 320kbps >w>
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray

lovhin456 wrote:

Neko_Ray wrote:

General;
- Puedes conseguir un mp3 de mejor calidad ? >: LISTO, LE CAMBIE DE 192kbps A 320kbps, SUENA MEJOR
Ohhh, no hagas eso, no es rankeable si el mp3 es de 320kbps >w>
OMG! :o despues de que logro conseguir la buena calidad... T_T
bueno, nose encodear pedire ayuda, por mientras lo dejare ahi, gracias

Englsh: Anyone know encode .mp3 file? :|
lovhin456
viewtopic.php?f=60&t=36657 Ahi puedes pedir ayuda en ingles <:
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
Si, lo habia visto antes y no me recorde donde estaba jeje. Gracias otra vez :3
leo_tano
star :) nice map
orioncomet
DaxMasterix
Mapa Genial =w=
Me dieron ganas de ver la serie o.o XD
Lucky Star**~
JauiPlaY
hi~ :)

[General]
nice song~

[Normal]
this is the easiest diff of the mapsets, but i think it's still very hard for new players, so maybe use the larger circle size?
00:37:123(6) - add a note here, but not the slider.
00:37:323(x) - add a slider here with new combo, which ends on 00:37:723
00:51:323(6) - new combo.
00:55:723(3) - the slider does not looks well.
00:59:723(5) - add a repeat, it should ends on 01:00:323.
01:07:723(1,2) - imo the sliders do not looks good, and, what's more, they do not fit the song.
01:11:123(2) - remove this note.
01:18:523(5) - new combo.
01:20:523(1,2) - imo the sliders do not looks good, and, what's more, they do not fit the song.
01:38:923(1) - remove this note.
01:39:523(1) - move it to 01:39:323.

[Krisom's Taiko]
i'm sorry but i could not mod the taiko diff @_@

[Insane]
00:28:323(1,2) - so weird...
00:32:323(7) - new combo.
00:37:323(6) - ^
00:44:123(8) - ^
00:50:323(6) - ^
01:02:723(x) - add a note here.

hmm, i think you need to do a lot from now.
so
star~
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
[Normal]
this is the easiest diff of the mapsets, but i think it's still very hard for new players, so maybe use the larger circle size? NOT CHANGED
00:37:123(6) - add a note here, but not the slider. DONE
00:37:323(x) - add a slider here with new combo, which ends on 00:37:723 DONE
00:51:323(6) - new combo. DONE
00:55:723(3) - the slider does not looks well. CHANGED, FLIPED VERTICALLY
00:59:723(5) - add a repeat, it should ends on 01:00:323. DONE
01:07:723(1,2) - imo the sliders do not looks good, and, what's more, they do not fit the song. NOT CHANGED, I THINK DIFFERENT
01:11:123(2) - remove this note. DONE
01:18:523(5) - new combo. DONE
01:20:523(1,2) - imo the sliders do not looks good, and, what's more, they do not fit the song. NOT CHANGED, I THINK DIFFERENT
01:38:923(1) - remove this note. DONE
01:39:523(1) - move it to 01:39:323. DONE

[Krisom's Taiko]
i'm sorry but i could not mod the taiko diff @_@ NO PROBLEM

[Insane]
00:28:323(1,2) - so weird... NOT CHANGED, IT'S FINE
00:32:323(7) - new combo. DONE
00:37:323(6) - ^ DONE
00:44:123(8) - ^ DONE
00:50:323(6) - ^ DONE
01:02:723(x) - add a note here. DONE

Thank you :3
vivere
Sallad4ever
Hi Neko~

[General]
- disable the countdown, it doesn't fit with the soft intro of the song
- remove ending from the tags
- add 2 in the "ED" cause this is ending 2 and player will most likely type for Bakuma ed2 when searching

[Normal]
00:20:123 (3) - remove the clap? only finish is enough
00:23:323 (3) - ^
00:48:723 (3) - it's better to stack this under 00:48:523 (2) to make it easier
00:55:723 (3) - following the vocal, this slider should have end on 00:56:523
01:07:723 (1) - fix the spacing please

[vivere's Hard]
use slider tick rate 1
00:29:323 (2) - not very good anti-jump :(
01:33:323 (1) - I make it smoother, copy then paste this code to osu file
SPOILER
80,32,93323,22,6,B|16:72|0:184|8:272|48:344|136:408|256:418|376:408|464:344|504:272|512:184|496:72|432:32,1,990,6|4
some blank space (between 00:39:123 (6) & 00:40:523 (1)- ) is kinda awkward, I suggest to fill it but it's your choice

[Insane]

00:28:523 (2) - move this to 00:28:723 ? it'll follow the vocal

That's all I guess
Good Luck~
~star
vivere

Sallad4ever wrote:

[vivere's Hard]
use slider tick rate 1 ok =w=
00:29:323 (2) - not very good anti-jump :( :(
01:33:323 (1) - I make it smoother, copy then paste this code to osu file
SPOILER
80,32,93323,22,6,B|16:72|0:184|8:272|48:344|136:408|256:418|376:408|464:344|504:272|512:184|496:72|432:32,1,990,6|4
Thx :>
some blank space (between 00:39:123 (6) & 00:40:523 (1)- ) is kinda awkward, I suggest to fill it but it's your choice
this is good, IMO

Ty Sallad4ever ^.^
Download: Takahashi Yu - Genjitsu to Iu Na no Kaibutsu to Tatakau Mono Tachi (TV Size) (Neko_Ray) [Vivere's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
[General]
- disable the countdown, it doesn't fit with the soft intro of the song DONE
- remove ending from the tags NO CHANGES
- add 2 in the "ED" cause this is ending 2 and player will most likely type for Bakuma ed2 when searching NO CHANGES

[Normal]
00:20:123 (3) - remove the clap? only finish is enough DONE
00:23:323 (3) - ^ DONE
00:48:723 (3) - it's better to stack this under 00:48:523 (2) to make it easier DONE
00:55:723 (3) - following the vocal, this slider should have end on 00:56:523 NO CHANGES
01:07:723 (1) - fix the spacing please DONE

[Insane]
00:28:523 (2) - move this to 00:28:723 ? it'll follow the vocal DONE

thanks ! :3
Luvdic
vivere's:

00:15:923 (3,4) - 2,62 DS para un hard, y en una parte donde no te pide a gritos que pongas un jump... Recomiendo que hagas lo siguiente: http://puu.sh/105a No te olvides de hacer el mismo flip a 00:14:323 (3) -
00:51:123 (7) - Preferiria que este tuviera el mismo DS con las notas antes y despues de el. (Asegúrate de que cuando hagas click a ese objeto, http://puu.sh/105f tenga casi los mismos valores.)
Y omg, amo tu coro, buen trabajo en él.

Normal:

00:28:723 - El clap no pega bien con los vocales en mi opinión (y con esto, hablo de forma general)
00:33:323 - Considera hacer esto: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/58840 o sino esto: http://puu.sh/106R
00:38:523 (3,4) - Nazi: no está correctamente stacked.
vivere

ErufenRito wrote:

vivere's:

00:15:923 (3,4) - 2,62 DS para un hard, y en una parte donde no te pide a gritos que pongas un jump... Recomiendo que hagas lo siguiente: http://puu.sh/105a No te olvides de hacer el mismo flip a 00:14:323 (3) - Neko, te mato D: ... como llegaste a cambiarme el distance spacing? ~.~, mas de 1 hora tratando de decifrar con Astom lo que decia Erufen <.<. Ok, Erufen, el distance spacing verdadero es de 1,4 xD y a pesar de estar en 1,7 tenia un jump... ya esta arreglado =w=
00:51:123 (7) - Preferiria que este tuviera el mismo DS con las notas antes y despues de el. (Asegúrate de que cuando hagas click a ese objeto, http://puu.sh/105f tenga casi los mismos valores.) Listo xD
Y omg, amo tu coro, buen trabajo en él.
Gracias Erufen :3

Download: Takahashi Yu - Genjitsu to Iu Na no Kaibutsu to Tatakau Mono Tachi (TV Size) (Neko_Ray) [Vivere's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
Normal:

00:28:723 - El clap no pega bien con los vocales en mi opinión (y con esto, hablo de forma general) BUENO, A MI ME SUENA BIEN, NO HAY CAMBIOS
00:33:323 - Considera hacer esto: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/58840 o sino esto: http://puu.sh/106R LISTO
00:38:523 (3,4) - Nazi: no está correctamente stacked. LO SÉ, PERO NO QUIERO CAMBIARLO, ASI ES MAS FACIL LA DIFF

vivere wrote:

Neko, te mato D: ... como llegaste a cambiarme el distance spacing? ~.~, mas de 1 hora tratando de decifrar con Astom lo que decia Erufen <.<. Ok, Erufen, el distance spacing verdadero es de 1,4 xD y a pesar de estar en 1,7 tenia un jump... ya esta arreglado =w=
Y... vivere, no se de que me hablas mi Normal tiene de DS de 0.8 (default) y mi Insane en 1.5, me parecia raro tu spacing asi que abrí, verifiqué y tenias 1.7, creo que eso explicaba todo... :roll:
vivere

Neko_Ray wrote:

Y... vivere, no se de que me hablas mi Normal tiene de DS de 0.8 (default) y mi Insane en 1.5, me parecia raro tu spacing asi que abrí, verifiqué y tenias 1.7, creo que eso explicaba todo... :roll:
*facepalm* no importa ._.

Edit: Dale kudosu a Erufen ._.
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray

vivere wrote:

Edit: Dale kudosu a Erufen ._.
lol, siempre me olvido de dar kudosu :lol:
vivere

Neko_Ray wrote:

vivere wrote:

Edit: Dale kudosu a Erufen ._.
lol, siempre me olvido de dar kudosu :lol:
lol xD
CXu
[Normal]
00:28:723 (1) - I know you're probably following the lyrics, but I think it's better starting at 00:28:523 instead, and ending the same place.
00:38:723 (4) - Stack?
01:37:323 - I thought the song was over here :o <-- idk if you can do anything though xD
All in all, pretty solid Normal ;)

[Vivere's Hard]
Slidertick 2.0?

00:17:723 (2,3,4) - Felt weird the first time I played. Worked fine the second time I played it... okay xD
00:28:723 (1,2) - This spacing makes the next spacing harder to read. Suggest newcombo on (2)?
01:02:923 (6) - Why this weirdly shaped slider? x.x

[Insane]
00:11:723 (1) - Finish
00:16:523 (5) - Finish at the beginning. Nothing on the end.
00:19:723 (5) - Finish on beginning and end. Nothing on the repeat.
00:22:923 (5) - ^
00:24:123 (1) - No hitsounds on this slider
00:24:923 (3) - Finish on beginning
00:25:323 (4) - ^
00:28:523 (2) - Finish
00:28:723 (3) - Finish on beginning
00:40:223 - Lonely D:
01:01:723 (3,4) - Spacing?
Nothing relaly do say on anything else here. Everything made sense for me atleast, so could sight-read the whole map, and didn't spot anything in editor either, so yeah :P

Star~~
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
[Normal]
00:28:723 (1) - I know you're probably following the lyrics, but I think it's better starting at 00:28:523 instead, and ending the same place. NO CHANGES, IS BETTER IN SAME PLACE
00:38:723 (4) - Stack? YES :D
01:37:323 - I thought the song was over here :o <-- idk if you can do anything though xD NO CHANGES, IS FINE

[Insane]
00:11:723 (1) - Finish DONE
00:16:523 (5) - Finish at the beginning. Nothing on the end. DONE
00:19:723 (5) - Finish on beginning and end. Nothing on the repeat. DONE
00:22:923 (5) - ^ DONE
00:24:123 (1) - No hitsounds on this slider :O, COOL
00:24:923 (3) - Finish on beginning DONE
00:25:323 (4) - ^ DONE
00:28:523 (2) - Finish DONE
00:28:723 (3) - Finish on beginning DONE
00:40:223 - Lonely D: YES, LONELY
01:01:723 (3,4) - Spacing? DONE

Thanks :3
vivere

CXu wrote:

[Vivere's Hard]
Slidertick 2.0? Sorry, but the sound is a little weird.

00:17:723 (2,3,4) - Felt weird the first time I played. Worked fine the second time I played it... okay xD .-.
00:28:723 (1,2) - This spacing makes the next spacing harder to read. Suggest newcombo on (2)? Mmmm... ok =w=
01:02:923 (6) - Why this weirdly shaped slider? x.x Isn't weird xD watch the video. Is a bit "creative" xDDD
Thanks, CXu :>

Edit: I'm so stupid hahaha xD had cut and pasted the difficulty on the desktop XD dling diff~

Download: Takahashi Yu - Genjitsu to Iu Na no Kaibutsu to Tatakau Mono Tachi (TV Size) (Neko_Ray) [Vivere's Hard].osu
Gomo Psivarh
Hi :)

I feel the timing of the kiai time isn't right, notes are a little earlier compared to music.
Just my feeling, you may ask others to check the timing.

[Normal]
00:38:723 (4) not stacked well with (3), snap it to the grid
00:55:723 (3) move the middle point of the slider 1 grid down (grid level 3) to make the slider more symmetrical

[Hard]
AR+2 so it's easier to read the notes
00:16:133 (4) 1 grid up (grid level 3)
00:28:923 you may add a circle stack with(1), since the following(1) are easily early beat and missed
00:47:323 (1,2,3,1) the distance snap is weird... move (3) to the center of red(2) and green(1)
00:51:923 (2) 1 grid up and 1 grid right
01:16:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) open the file with notepad and change the 7 notes to:
256,360,76923,5,8
312,304,77123,1,0
256,248,77323,1,8
200,192,77523,1,0
256,136,77723,1,8
312,80,77923,1,0
256,24,78123,1,8
01:27:323 (4) 1 grid up and 1 grid left

[Insane]
You may consider to add some notes between 00:39:123 and 00:41:523 , 00:52:123 and 00:53:923

GOOD MAP! :D
vivere

Gomo Psivarh wrote:

[Hard]
AR+2 so it's easier to read the notes Nope
00:16:133 Correct time: 00:16:323 (4) 1 grid up (grid level 3) Ok
00:28:923 you may add a circle stack with(1), since the following(1) are easily early beat and missed Is an empty space, it would be "stupid" put a note there... imo. Sorry, no
00:47:323 (1,2,3,1) the distance snap is weird... move (3) to the center of red(2) and green(1) No
00:51:923 (2) 1 grid up and 1 grid right Oops! The distance snap will not let me move, since the time of a beat toward other is not the same (1-2)
01:16:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) open the file with notepad and change the 7 notes to:
256,360,76923,5,8
312,304,77123,1,0
256,248,77323,1,8
200,192,77523,1,0
256,136,77723,1,8
312,80,77923,1,0
256,24,78123,1,8
Ok, Thanks ^^
01:27:323 (4) 1 grid up and 1 grid left Ok
Ty

Download: Takahashi Yu - Genjitsu to Iu Na no Kaibutsu to Tatakau Mono Tachi (TV Size) (Neko_Ray) [Vivere's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
I feel the timing of the kiai time isn't right, notes are a little earlier compared to music.
Just my feeling, you may ask others to check the timing. Is your feeling :D

[Normal]
00:38:723 (4) not stacked well with (3), snap it to the grid Is nazi, is impossible snap with 1/2
00:55:723 (3) move the middle point of the slider 1 grid down (grid level 3) to make the slider more symmetrical Done

[Insane]
You may consider to add some notes between 00:39:123 and 00:41:523 , 00:52:123 and 00:53:923 Done

Thanks :3
Gomo Psivarh

vivere wrote:

00:51:923 (2) 1 grid up and 1 grid right Oops! The distance snap will not let me move, since the time of a beat toward other is not the same (1-2)
You can see on the picture (6) to (1), (1) to (2) have the same time difference, so they should have same distance.
The reason why you cannot place (2) to the place of (6) with distance snap is the error of rounding with grid snap.

For example, there are 4 notes 0:00:000(1) 0:00:100(2) 0:00:200(3) 0:00:400(4) placed in line.

Without grid snap, assuming the distance of (1)to(2),(2)to(3) are 4.3 grid, so the distance of (3)to(4) is 8.6 grid.
If you enabled grid snap, the distance will be rounded, so the distance of (1)to(2) and (2)to(3) will be 4 grid, that means (1)to(3) is 4+4=8 grid.
However the distance of (3)to(4) is 8.6 grid,it will be rounded to 9 grid. So that makes you cannot place (1)and(4) to the same place.
vivere

Gomo Psivarh wrote:

vivere wrote:

00:51:923 (2) 1 grid up and 1 grid right Oops! The distance snap will not let me move, since the time of a beat toward other is not the same (1-2)
You can see on the picture (6) to (1), (1) to (2) have the same time difference, so they should have same distance.
The reason why you cannot place (2) to the place of (6) with distance snap is the error of rounding with grid snap.

For example, there are 4 notes 0:00:000(1) 0:00:100(2) 0:00:200(3) 0:00:400(4) placed in line.

Without grid snap, assuming the distance of (1)to(2),(2)to(3) are 4.3 grid, so the distance of (3)to(4) is 8.6 grid.
If you enabled grid snap, the distance will be rounded, so the distance of (1)to(2) and (2)to(3) will be 4 grid, that means (1)to(3) is 4+4=8 grid.
However the distance of (3)to(4) is 8.6 grid,it will be rounded to 9 grid. So with grid snap enabled you cannot place (1)and(4) to the same place. Yes, I understand you, but (7) narrow the distance between (6) and (1). Logically (6), (1) and (1), (2) must have the same distance.
So, changed =w=
Edit: ... you have edited your post? o.O
you answered your own question...


PS: Neko, change this for me ._.
rEdo
[Normal]
0:51:323 (1,2,3,4) - move'em a grid lower

[Viveve's Hard]
1:10:723 (1,2) - swap new combos?
1:26:723 (1,2) - ^
1:44:523 (3) - maybe move this circle to the center, should be better imo

[Insane]
0:59:323 (4) - a grid higher
1:18:523 (4,5,6,7,8) - move this complex by two grids higher, so it's centered?
1:31:323 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^

cool mapset right there~
vivere

rEdo wrote:

[b][Viveve's Hard]
1:10:723 (1,2) - swap new combos? Yep :>
1:26:723 (1,2) - ^ ^
1:44:523 (3) - maybe move this circle to the center, should be better imo No :<
Anyway, Thanks ^^
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray
No changes, thanks for you star :3
Kenezz
Kenezz's Bakamod o/
PM Request~
Perdona por la demora orz Solo Sugerencias

Normal
-00:11:723 (1) - Finish?
-00:38:723 (4) - Muevelo un poco al izquierda para que el stack se vea bien
-00:59:723 (5) - Finish al inicio?
-01:02:523 (7) - Finish en la repeticion?
-01:04:523 (3) - Finish?
-01:26:923 (1) - ^ (al inicio)
-01:33:323 (5) - ^
-01:39:323 (1) - Finish?

Vivere's Hard
-00:42:123 (1) - Finish al inicio?
-00:44:723 (2) - Agrega una repeticion?
-00:48:523 (2) - Finish al inicio?
-01:26:923 (2) - ^

Insane
-00:42:123 (4) - Finish al inicio?
-00:43:523 (7) - ^ (en la repeticion)
-00:45:323 (5) - ^ (al inicio)
-01:04:523 (3) - ^
-01:17:323 (2) - ^ (al inicio)
-01:26:923 (1) - ^
-01:42:923 (1) - ^

Genial map, bien hecho :)
Star~
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray

KenezzEdward wrote:

Kenezz's Bakamod o/
PM Request~
Perdona por la demora orz Solo Sugerencias

Normal
-00:11:723 (1) - Finish? Listo
-00:38:723 (4) - Muevelo un poco al izquierda para que el stack se vea bien Listo
-00:59:723 (5) - Finish al inicio? Listo
-01:02:523 (7) - Finish en la repeticion? Listo
-01:04:523 (3) - Finish? Listo
-01:26:923 (1) - ^ (al inicio) Nah
-01:33:323 (5) - ^ Nah
-01:39:323 (1) - Finish? Listo

Insane
-00:42:123 (4) - Finish al inicio? Listo
-00:43:523 (7) - ^ (en la repeticion) Nah
-00:45:323 (5) - ^ (al inicio) Nah
-01:04:523 (3) - ^ Nah
-01:17:323 (2) - ^ (al inicio) Nah
-01:26:923 (1) - ^ Nah
-01:42:923 (1) - ^ Listo
Gracias :3
Krisom
._.

Cambia el nombre de mi diff a "TaiKrisom"
Astom
Nice ~
Pero pienso q el spacing esta un poco exagerado.

Star~ :>
Topic Starter
Neko_Ray

Krisom wrote:

._.

Cambia el nombre de mi diff a "TaiKrisom"
Lol, ok lo haré
Esperaba un mod tuyo... :roll:

Astom wrote:

Nice ~
Pero pienso q el spacing esta un poco exagerado.

Star~ :>
Esta bien, asi lo hace algo mas dificil :3 *originalidad* :lol:
ohh y gracias por la estrella ^^
Gonzvlo
General
  1. Definitivamente el volumen está muy bajo, Si le das +2 suena perfecto para mi. (Al menos +1 pero +2 es lo que recomiendo)
  2. Para tus futuros mapas (y este si es que faltan hitsounds en algunas partes): Las Claps la mayoría del tiempo suenan mejor en el 2do y 4to beat.
  3. Tags: "ED" es muy corto, borralo.
Easy
  1. 00:57:523 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Agrega algunos claps/whistles, se siente la ausencia de ellos~
  2. 01:07:723 (1,2) - Estos sliders no están siguiendo el ritmo correctamente, se sienten algo adelantados. Así suenan mejor y son más fáciles de jugar.
  3. 01:20:523 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:18:523 (1,2,3,4,5) - Agrega algunos hitsounds (Especialmente claps)
  5. 01:31:723 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  6. 01:39:123 (1,1) - Esto suena mejor si agregas una nota más antes del slider, así.
Vivere's Hard
  1. 00:20:923 (2,3,4,5,6) - Estos patterns son creativos y están muy bien pero el AR no ayuda por eso se ven algo desordenados, sugiero usar una alternativa.
  2. 00:24:123 (2,3,4,5,6) - Lo mismo acá.
  3. 00:30:523 (1,2,3) - Hmm esto pasó desapercibido la primera vez que lo vi. No encaja bien con las vocales (2) no es necesario, suena "extra", eliminalo y remueve el New Combo de (1) y pasalo a (3).
  4. 00:42:923 (2,3,4,5,6) - El repentino cambio de spacing es algo raro y no "encaja" bien, sería mejor que uses el mismo spacing entre las notas, especialemente entre (3)(4) y (5)(6)
  5. 01:02:923 (6) - Oh vivere~ este slider puede ser mejor, intenta algo así.
  6. 01:39:123 (1,1) - Esto suena mejor si agregas una nota más antes del slider, así.
  7. Interesantes patterns, muy creativos~ (Estaba esperando verte jugar con Argentina ;_;)
Insane
  1. 00:20:323 (X) - Agrega una nota acá para completar el ritmo, de otro modo siento que algo falta.
  2. 00:23:523 (X) - Denuevo, debería haber una nota aquí :3
  3. 00:39:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Algunos hitsounds por aquí no estarían mal. (principalmente claps)
  4. 01:06:523 (1,2,3) - Estos "Finishes" pueden ser reemplazados por Whistles con volumen bajo para dejar el "Finish" para el comienzo del Kiai.
  5. 01:20:523 (1,2) - Woops este spacing si está algo "exagerado" además estás usando un spacing suficientemente amplio no hay mucha necesidad de jumps. Usa "Reverse Selection" en (2) para disminuir un poco el "jump".
  6. Bien, el spacing es mucho más de lo normal pero los patterns son fáciles de leer y supongo que para Insane es aceptable, muy bien.
TaiKrisom
  1. Kill the fountain :3
Kgo
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