looks fine to me. not sure about taiko though, and insane's pretty hectic... not 100% sure fdsaf a star.
lolSprosive wrote:
[Prayed]
1.failed
2.failed
3.300 100 miss 100 50 esc retry
4.300 300 300 esc returntomenu ---last version but not approved
5.300 100 missmissmissfail OHSHITF@CKUCHATTICKER
6.fullcombofullcombofullcomboful-(@&$#%#)ohshi
7.kokoniarewamissmissmissmissfail
8.hitaniwananmissmissmissmissfail
9.yay
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10.99.84% -> 3003003001001005050501001005050100300300300100100100300300300SPIN! 300 50 (plaplapla) 93.19%
11.601combo 100
12.fail
13.95.46%
;_;
Derekku wrote:
[General]
*Uhh, there's a video, but what about a no-video download link? Could you please try a full submission?
Done.
*If you're including ctb elements, then add a fruit-drop to complete the set (even if it's just the default).
Added.
*No Miku comboburst? oxo
No good comboburst found.
*Expected a pause-overlay to go with the pause menu buttons. Not sure if it's absolutely needed, but you should complete the set (especially since you did so on your other Miku maps).
Added.
*Remove "Hatsune", "Miku", and "ZHSteven" from tags. The first are already in the artist, and the last isn't part of the mapset anymore.
Removed.
*Source for Vocaloid songs is usually the creator (so cosMo) with Vocaloid in tags, but I don't even care anymore. x__x
*Another title for this song is "The Singing Passion of Hatsune Miku", so perhaps add "passion" to the tags as well?
Added.
*I'm still not sure about the stack leniency. You have it set to the lowest setting on Hard/Prayed with some manual stacking, but not all notes. I'm pretty sure what you're trying to do is unrankable.
Seriously, you want my map to be like this? (If the stack is 0.3)
*The way you're using soft-slidertick2.wav is still unrankable. First off, it's very quiet in comparison to other hitsounds. Second, you're setting the volume to 0% in the editor (at least mostly on Easy and Normal). Even on Hard/Prayed the volume is too low to be heard and is as good as silent. If the slidertick volume was set to ~80%, it would be audible, but at present state it's not. You tried to do the same thing in Andrea's Euphoric Field map by providing a near-silent slidertick and blatantly rebubbling the map after I popped it, but this time you won't be able to get away with that. Silencing a few ticks is fine (as seen in my mod below), but all of them? Definitely not.
Volume 50 ok?
[Easy]
00:22:188 (1,2) - See, silencing sliderticks on sliders like these are totally fine with me (although I'd expect the tick rate to be lower, especially since the bpm is 200).
01:30:588 (1,2) - The odd time signature makes (2) a bit unexpected. How about making this a slider instead?
Fixed.
01:32:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - Much more difficult than the rest of this diff... I'd expect kick sliders one after another in a Normal, but when the rest of this Easy is mostly 1/1 beats and sliders? Not really..
Not too hard.
01:59:688 (3) - Could you change the first/last ticks on this so that the repeat arrows aren't sideways? Something like this
Fixed.
02:18:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The most difficult part of the song. Again, a bit unexpected for an Easy, so I'd prefer if you made some of these longer.
Fixed.
02:22:488 (7,1) - A bit confusing to have a kick slider and then a spinner come in halfway through. How about moving the spinner to the red tick and shortening it? That would give the same effect but be a bit less confusing.
Fixed.
[Normal]
*How about raising the drain 1-2 ticks?
+1
*I really don't like that the ends of sliders are made silent. That provides no audio feedback for the player and just looks weird. Why not make the slider different if you don't want it to be heard?
Fixed.
00:22:188 (1,2,3,4) - Again, perfectly acceptable to silence these.
01:01:863 (1) - I don't like how this pops up before the last note is even hit. Can you start it on the red tick and shorten instead?
Fixed.
*I suppose the 2x sliders are fine, but I don't like the jumps in-between them. I'd really like to see the spacing from one end of a slider to the start of the next made a bit closer.
I don't see any intense jumps here.
*I like the linear sliders towards the end of the map.
02:23:763 (1) - Again, how about starting on the red tick?
Fixed.
[Hard]
*Again, drain is a bit low.
+2
*Remove "Krisom" from tags.
Non-existed...
01:01:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Expected a decrescendo here.
Decreased volume on (7,8).
01:04:188 - Again, I don't mind the silenced slider ticks (and even slider ends) because the music is so quiet here and it fits nicely.
01:18:588 (1) - second repeat is partially hidden (caught me by surprise)
It's fine :<
01:20:988 (5) - ^
It's fine :<
*I felt like most of the crazy kick sliders at the end should have been snapped to 1/3, but 1/4 does sound better, so it's fine.
[Prayed]
00:05:163 (5,6,7,8) - Expected a 5th note (on the white tick)
Added.
00:09:963 (4,5,6,7) - ^
Added.
01:18:588 (1) - 2nd repeat is a bit hidden
It's fine :<
02:18:888 - SO glad this isn't snapped to 1/6th, but nonetheless crazyyyyy.
1/4 is exactly right.
[Kanpakyin's Taiko]
*I usually don't point out unnecessary inherited sections, but 01:42:888 caught my eye since it doesn't seem to be doing anything. o.o
Kiai.
*Expected a break in kiai from 01:36:888 to 01:42:888.
Fixed.
*I'm really not sure how I feel about the use of sixteenth notes (1/4 snap) instead of triplets (1/3 snap). I guess it's fine for Taiko, but would make more sense to follow the 1/3 of the song... EDIT: Actually after hearing the kick sliders on the other diffs, I guess it's not so bad to use 1/4..
1/4 is exactly right.
Overall, you did a very nice job on this map. However, there's still a few issues that should be dealt with (at least the unrankable ones) before another bubble and the eventual rank. I'll be glad to take another look at this after you make some changes.
About stack leniency, 0.1 is unrankable, 0.2 is still unrankable even it's selectable in option, 0.3 is unrankable because stack makes those streams offscreen, so you know about 0.4, 0.5, 0.6, etc.
What else I can do?
*If you're including ctb elements, then add a fruit-drop to complete the set (even if it's just the default).
Derekku wrote:
[General]
*I hate to nazi, but the top of the fruit-drop you added was cut off, so here's a new one: http://puu.sh/BZ6
Replaced.
*Stacking is fine on Hard/Prayed after you elaborated.
=)
*The sliderticks across all difficulties are still inaudible. Like I've said (multiple times), raise the volume to 75-80% for all sliderticks.
50% is not loud enough, and 0% (used all over Easy/Normal) is definitely not loud enough.
The only places that should be appropriate for quiet/silent sliderticks are spots like 00:22:188 (1,2) on Easy.
Fix the sliderticks and I'll give this map the bubble it deserves.
Fixed.
[Easy]
01:59:688 (3) - Second repeat is still sideways, but it's not that big a deal, I guess.
No any problem since you know it's a repeat slider =P
osuplayer111 wrote:
[Easy]
02:28:488 (x) - Remove this unused green line.
Kiai ends.
[Hard]
Stack leniency all to the left is unrankable. Increase it by 1 tick at least like the other difficulties.
Read previous posted before telling this.
[Prayed]
Same as Hard about Stack leniency. Fix that.
Read previous posted before telling this.
01:01:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why you stacked only these notes like that? It's a bit weird.
Manually stacked.
02:09:888 (2,3,4,5) - ^
Manually stacked.
[Kanpakyin's Taiko]
Difficulty settings for a Taiko difficulty are highly suggest to be like this.
Done.
Sorry but I have to pop for now. Oh and since you're here, change "Kanpakyin" to "kanpakyin" into the tags on every difficulty and I'm not sure about another thing...
Done.
Timing at the begin doesn't seems so perfect to me, can you try to ask someone for it please?
-.-
When you're done with the fixes I'll give your bubble back.
osuplayer111 wrote:
About that green line section on Easy, nope... if you see it's unused D:
The other green line make the kiai ends, so please remove that~
You're right, removed.
Oh and you forget to change the tags on every difficulty. Please do it too~
I've already fixed, but just forgot to upload them XD
Btw, after listening and testing many times more timing seems fine... maybe I'm just sleepy x_x
x_x
At the end you should just remove that green line and fix the tags and yeah, you didn't fixed anything of big so I'll rank this.
Upkanpakyin wrote:
Big change in Taiko
Since the true username of kanpakyin is that and not KanpakyinDerekku wrote:
Pff, I was just going to rebubble this, too. Taiko looks fine to me, but I'm still not sure why you (andrea) had djpop uncapitalize one of the tags when case doesn't matter and most of the others are capitalized.
Lunah wrote:
01:52:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WTF ?
Fixed, I think I've already fixed that >_>
Lunah wrote:
01:01:788 (1,2) -
01:02:388 (3,4) -
01:02:988 (5,6) -
01:03:588 (7,8) -
02:09:888 (2,3) -
02:10:338 (4,5) -
if you want show them, let's change the stack leniency, they are so ugly to see.
Don't tell me to do that again, it's impossible.
Why? See my previous posts.