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ツアワセノカケラ → しあわせのかけら
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ツアワセノカケラ → しあわせのかけら
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Marimomi - Shiawase no Kakera
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Topic Starter
Sorry... I can not find mp3 files.Krisom wrote:
Genreal-
· Just 64 kbps?! You need an mp3 that's at least 128 kbps.
thx modding ^v^
General
There are 5 osb files in the folder... get rid of the unused ones.
The pink combo colour blends with the background.
Hard
The very low spacing makes the map confusing and hard to read.
01:04:026 (3,4,5,6,7) - Space the notes in this combo more evenly.
01:09:460 (4,5) - Unexpected and confusing jump. If you want to keep the jump, make (5) a new combo at least.
01:11:349 (4,5) - Same.
01:22:687 (6,7) - Space them the same way you spaced the rest of the combo.
01:54:105 (1,2,3) - Space them evenly.
02:20:561 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue: they are spaced the same way while the time gap is not the same. Make (3) closer to (2).
02:43:949 (4,5) - Unexpected and confusing jump. If you want to keep the jump, make (5) a new combo at least.
02:45:839 (4,5) - Same.
Insane
This follows pretty much the same rhythms as Hard... It jumps has unnecessarily high spacing, jumps and streams. Not to mention the random slow dows and speed ups and the irregular spacing. To be honest... You should just delete it.
Taiko
I like this a lot. The slider speed is well chosen, and the diff is challenging without being retardedly hard.
Ext.Sigma's Normal
The spacing is not consistent. It goes seemingly randomly from around 0.7x to 1.4x or probably more. Recheck the whole diff using distance snapping and AIMod to help you. For now the spacing is extremely irregular. Grid lvl 3 or 4 is probably the best to use.
01:42:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm not sure such a long 1/2 stream is a good idea for the easiest diff of the mapset.
02:30:011 (5,6,7,8) - I firmly believe this kind of pattern is too confusing for a Normal.
03:55:051 (3,4) - This kind of slider is too confusing too, because of the unexpected number of repeats.
04:11:114 (1) - This spinner is too short imo.
There are 5 osb files in the folder... get rid of the unused ones.
The pink combo colour blends with the background.
Hard
The very low spacing makes the map confusing and hard to read.
01:04:026 (3,4,5,6,7) - Space the notes in this combo more evenly.
01:09:460 (4,5) - Unexpected and confusing jump. If you want to keep the jump, make (5) a new combo at least.
01:11:349 (4,5) - Same.
01:22:687 (6,7) - Space them the same way you spaced the rest of the combo.
01:54:105 (1,2,3) - Space them evenly.
02:20:561 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue: they are spaced the same way while the time gap is not the same. Make (3) closer to (2).
02:43:949 (4,5) - Unexpected and confusing jump. If you want to keep the jump, make (5) a new combo at least.
02:45:839 (4,5) - Same.
Insane
This follows pretty much the same rhythms as Hard... It jumps has unnecessarily high spacing, jumps and streams. Not to mention the random slow dows and speed ups and the irregular spacing. To be honest... You should just delete it.
Taiko
I like this a lot. The slider speed is well chosen, and the diff is challenging without being retardedly hard.
Ext.Sigma's Normal
The spacing is not consistent. It goes seemingly randomly from around 0.7x to 1.4x or probably more. Recheck the whole diff using distance snapping and AIMod to help you. For now the spacing is extremely irregular. Grid lvl 3 or 4 is probably the best to use.
01:42:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm not sure such a long 1/2 stream is a good idea for the easiest diff of the mapset.
02:30:011 (5,6,7,8) - I firmly believe this kind of pattern is too confusing for a Normal.
03:55:051 (3,4) - This kind of slider is too confusing too, because of the unexpected number of repeats.
04:11:114 (1) - This spinner is too short imo.
조만간 될것 같은데...mp3 구할수 있으면 구해보겠습니다 'ㅁ'
수정. 192kbps 1:1 챗으로 전달 완료... 백업삼아 http://puu.sh/J8r
수정. 192kbps 1:1 챗으로 전달 완료... 백업삼아 http://puu.sh/J8r
Topic Starter
우앜!!! 진짜 감사합니다 ㅇㅅㅇ; 정말루...!! 감동skyble wrote:
조만간 될것 같은데...mp3 구할수 있으면 구해보겠습니다 'ㅁ'
수정. 192kbps 1:1 챗으로 전달 완료... 백업삼아 http://puu.sh/J8r
[Insane]
02:09:536 (6) - 플레이에는 문제가 없을 것 같습니다만 혹시나 해서 버블하기 전에 이런 노트가 있다는 것을 알려드립니다.
02:09:536 (6) - 플레이에는 문제가 없을 것 같습니다만 혹시나 해서 버블하기 전에 이런 노트가 있다는 것을 알려드립니다.
Easy:
01:22:292 (4) - Remove the clap on the repeat.
Why not map this to the end like the other diffs?
Normal:
00:47:804 (3,4,5) - Here we have too close spacing. Please make the same spacing throughout the same combo.
Hard:
01:07:410 - Add a note here? Sounds better^^
Taiko:
This Taiko Background seems really unrelated. Can you get a different one?
Other than that looks fine for me.
Insane:
00:36:465 (3) - This slider is offscreen, You gotta move this in more.
01:05:757 (1) - Try to avoid that you touch the life bar with a slider or beat.
01:06:702 (2) - This slider is offscreen, You gotta move this in more.
01:25:599 (3) - ^
02:44:969 (3) - ^
04:06:229 (3) - ^
Pretty good map for your first one. The only thing that really needs to be fixed are the offscreen sliders. I you fixed everything I'd gladly give you a bubble^^
01:22:292 (4) - Remove the clap on the repeat.
Why not map this to the end like the other diffs?
Normal:
00:47:804 (3,4,5) - Here we have too close spacing. Please make the same spacing throughout the same combo.
Hard:
01:07:410 - Add a note here? Sounds better^^
Taiko:
This Taiko Background seems really unrelated. Can you get a different one?
Other than that looks fine for me.
Insane:
00:36:465 (3) - This slider is offscreen, You gotta move this in more.
01:05:757 (1) - Try to avoid that you touch the life bar with a slider or beat.
01:06:702 (2) - This slider is offscreen, You gotta move this in more.
01:25:599 (3) - ^
02:44:969 (3) - ^
04:06:229 (3) - ^
Pretty good map for your first one. The only thing that really needs to be fixed are the offscreen sliders. I you fixed everything I'd gladly give you a bubble^^
Topic Starter
Thank you for Modding. ^_^Rukarioman wrote:
Easy: All fix
01:22:292 (4) - Remove the clap on the repeat.
Why not map this to the end like the other diffs?
Normal: All fix
00:47:804 (3,4,5) - Here we have too close spacing. Please make the same spacing throughout the same combo.
Hard:
01:07:410 - Add a note here? Sounds better^^ Hmm .. I think it is not good. but thx. o_o;
Taiko:
This Taiko Background seems really unrelated. Can you get a different one?
Other than that looks fine for me.I said you're right. But I think the complexity is not good thing. (In Taiko diff)
Insane: All fix
00:36:465 (3) - This slider is offscreen, You gotta move this in more.
01:05:757 (1) - Try to avoid that you touch the life bar with a slider or beat.
01:06:702 (2) - This slider is offscreen, You gotta move this in more.
01:25:599 (3) - ^
02:44:969 (3) - ^
04:06:229 (3) - ^
Pretty good map for your first one. The only thing that really needs to be fixed are the offscreen sliders. I you fixed everything I'd gladly give you a bubble^^
Alright so minor IRC fixes and I think this map is ready for a bubble.
Bubbled~
Bubbled~
Topic Starter
Thank you very much. >o<
modding on request by the bubbler.
sorry but for now pop, please make sure you at least fix the red stuff then call me back.
Ext. Sigma's Normal
00:08:119 (1,2,3,4) - only small i kno, but it really does give it a wrong spacing feeling, (1,2) are overlapping while (3,4) dont, both are the same timing and it clear looks like a mistake, (1,2) and (3,4) need to have the same spacing as each other
00:15:678 (1,2,3,4) - same as above with these
01:07:647 (6,1) - for the whole map this timing has had either a tiny overlap or none at all, here the overlap is huge and the timing is still slow, its extremely confusing for a normal level player to notice that, i advise to widen the spacing of these 2 notes
01:22:765 (5,1) - same here
02:44:969 (6,7,8,9) - ok all of these note have the same timing, yet (9) has a completely unexpected jump what even tricked me out, really don't play good and feels like broken spacing due to the rest of the pattern what is before it, you need to give (8,9) the same spacing as (6,7,8)
03:28:434 (1,2,3,4) - everyone one of these note has abit different spacing, would look a lot nicer if you made them all the same
hard
00:04:103 (3,1) - these have a closer spacing than the notes before but same timing, it makes the player want to stream abit faster yet its the same speed, i do advise to space these like the ones before it
00:25:127 (9,10,11) - same as above, these need abit more space
Insane
02:25:363 (6,7,8) - nono this really dont suit, the 2 different stream spacing in the same combo at this part plays really bad, give this the same spacing as 02:24:418 (1,2,3)
02:36:229 (2,3,4) - again nono you need to give (3,4) abit more space so its the same as (2,3)
02:38:119 (2,3,4) - same here
02:49:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this dont suit but its fine i guess, would play better with lower spacing though :/
04:10:954 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - again not keen on this jump in difficulty, it just dont suit, but its fine i guess
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so yea not huge problems, but that broken spacing really does get in the way of these fun maps. remember to gimmie a call soon as you get round to fixing these
sorry but for now pop, please make sure you at least fix the red stuff then call me back.
Ext. Sigma's Normal
00:08:119 (1,2,3,4) - only small i kno, but it really does give it a wrong spacing feeling, (1,2) are overlapping while (3,4) dont, both are the same timing and it clear looks like a mistake, (1,2) and (3,4) need to have the same spacing as each other
00:15:678 (1,2,3,4) - same as above with these
01:07:647 (6,1) - for the whole map this timing has had either a tiny overlap or none at all, here the overlap is huge and the timing is still slow, its extremely confusing for a normal level player to notice that, i advise to widen the spacing of these 2 notes
01:22:765 (5,1) - same here
02:44:969 (6,7,8,9) - ok all of these note have the same timing, yet (9) has a completely unexpected jump what even tricked me out, really don't play good and feels like broken spacing due to the rest of the pattern what is before it, you need to give (8,9) the same spacing as (6,7,8)
03:28:434 (1,2,3,4) - everyone one of these note has abit different spacing, would look a lot nicer if you made them all the same
hard
00:04:103 (3,1) - these have a closer spacing than the notes before but same timing, it makes the player want to stream abit faster yet its the same speed, i do advise to space these like the ones before it
00:25:127 (9,10,11) - same as above, these need abit more space
Insane
02:25:363 (6,7,8) - nono this really dont suit, the 2 different stream spacing in the same combo at this part plays really bad, give this the same spacing as 02:24:418 (1,2,3)
02:36:229 (2,3,4) - again nono you need to give (3,4) abit more space so its the same as (2,3)
02:38:119 (2,3,4) - same here
02:49:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this dont suit but its fine i guess, would play better with lower spacing though :/
04:10:954 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - again not keen on this jump in difficulty, it just dont suit, but its fine i guess
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so yea not huge problems, but that broken spacing really does get in the way of these fun maps. remember to gimmie a call soon as you get round to fixing these
most stuff have been fixed and the unrankable stuff have also been fixed
have your bubble back but please in the future reply to your mods in the maps topic too, it helps to keep everything upto date
have your bubble back but please in the future reply to your mods in the maps topic too, it helps to keep everything upto date
I'm making 1 diff ? 
STAR 
[Ext. Sigma's Normal]
00:29:851 (6) - New combo.
00:38:355 (6) - ^
01:30:324 (10) - ^
01:31:741 (1) - Remove new combo.
04:10:009 (1) - ^
04:10:954 (2) - New combo.
[Insane]
03:32:214 (1,1,1,1) - Almost offscreen, place them some grids down.
03:36:465 (1,1,1) - Remove all of these new combo.
03:46:859 (3,1) - Spacing.
Really nice for a first beatmap, but sadly I have to pop for now
Also, since you're here... Increase the Stack Leniency on every difficulty by 1 or 2 ticks at least, there is no sense to have it 0.
EDIT: Better now.
Re-Bubbled~
00:29:851 (6) - New combo.
00:38:355 (6) - ^
01:30:324 (10) - ^
01:31:741 (1) - Remove new combo.
04:10:009 (1) - ^
04:10:954 (2) - New combo.
[Insane]
03:32:214 (1,1,1,1) - Almost offscreen, place them some grids down.
03:36:465 (1,1,1) - Remove all of these new combo.
03:46:859 (3,1) - Spacing.
Really nice for a first beatmap, but sadly I have to pop for now
Also, since you're here... Increase the Stack Leniency on every difficulty by 1 or 2 ticks at least, there is no sense to have it 0.
EDIT: Better now.
Re-Bubbled~
포스트 2222 해제 D:
Congratulations for the first ranked map! 
congrats, and the taiko diff comes quite naturally, well done 
awesome song ^^