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Kim Jin Seok
'ㅅ'
chocomint
읭?ㅋ
Topic Starter
Cute Bunny

Cookiezi wrote:

읭?ㅋ
ㅇㅅㅇ;;;

+ 현장모딩 감사합니다 ㅇㅅㅇ;
Ra-s
전체적으로 이맵...패턴이 너무 적어요.

Ext.Sigma
01:08:751 (1,3) -
이게 훨씬 좋음. 왠만하면 슬라이더랑 일반노트랑 겹치지 않는게 좋고, 슬라이더 시작지점하고 끝지점은 같으니 2번은 그대로.
01:21:980 (4,5) - 대칭은 좋은데...이건 노말이잖슴;...2.42x라니! SV나 디스턴스 따지면 1.5근처 까지는 봐주는데...이건 노말
03:38:043 (1,2,3,4) - 아, 이것도 노말에서는 뉴비들이 실수하기 쉬움.

Hard
전체적으로 맵의 밸런스가 안맞음. 너무 난이도가 왔다갔다 하는거 같음.
00:03:790 (1,2,3,1) - 1,2,3번하고 1번사이의 간격이 문제가 됄꺼같음. 박자는 다 일정한데 저 부분에선 저렇게 점프를 해서도 안됌.

Insane
슬라이더 속도가 엄청 빨랐다가 그저그러다가 그것도 이상한 구간에서 바뀌는지 모르겠음.
00:26:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 오른쪽 한칸, 아래쪽 한칸 (gird lv1) : F5누르면 알겠지만 노트가 여러개 겹치면 히든때문에 노트가 약간 위쪽으로 밀리기 때문에 그럼. 이거 적용하기 전하고 후하고 F5 눌러서 확인.
03:55:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:32:846 - 아무이유 없이 배속돼는게 무척인아 보기 싫음 여긴. 처음부터 이속도였다면 아무말도 안했지만...
02:49:854 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 뉴콤보 맘에 안듬...
04:11:114 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

지금 상황에서 모딩 볼때 기분이 나쁜것도 어쩌면 당연한거일수도있음.
Topic Starter
Cute Bunny
[Hard] << All Repair... :o
Skyblue_old_1
모딩은 아니고 그냥 제 느낌입니다(고로 쿠도스 x)

가사 스토리보드<< 굿!
점수 표시 이미지(100, 300, 스피너 보너스 등등)



그다지 깔끔하게 나오진 않는것 같습니다.
숫자가 깨져보이는건 좋지 않아보여요... 폰트를 바꿔보시는건 어떤가요?
L i a
I'm IRC mod :)
Topic Starter
Cute Bunny

Xellop wrote:

I'm IRC mod :)
Thank you for modding :D
John12346
Ext. Sigma's Normal
00:27:177 (5,1) - Not sure if you did that on purpose, but those notes are way too close, considering the amount of time between them.
02:05:208 (6,7) - Too close?

Hard
01:07:806 (3,4) - I might just be nitpicking on this one, but they seem a bit far apart...
01:15:601 (1,2,3,4) - Combo starts on a really weird beat in the song. Add a note or two before it?
04:00:720 (1,2,3) - The spacing between 1 and 2 is different from 2 and 3.

Insane
Spacing seems to change randomly throughout the song. The are quite a few instances, such as...
01:04:736 (2,3,4) - The spacing shouldn't be even here.
01:16:311 (1,2,3,4,5) - I know you want that star shape, but... the spacing can't stay even like that.
01:18:200 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above.
01:28:358 (4,1) - Big distance jump in comparison to the previous notes.
Stuff like that.

Normal and Hard are pretty much done. I think Insane might need some work.

Good job, in any case.
Starred.
JauiPlaY
:)
Krisom
Genreal-
· You need a score-comma to complete the set.
· You need a hitcircle-Overlay and an ApproachCircle to complete the set.
· "star.png" is not needed, since this is an element used for the menu, not for the map
· Just 64 kbps?! You need an mp3 that's at least 128 kbps.
· I think the scorenumbers, hitsplashes and sliderscorepoints could have a higher quality, the borders feel all pixelated ans stuff.
· You have to add "[KOR]Extream_Sigma" to the tags in all diffs.

Insane-
I strongly advise you against using Grid Divisor 1 for an insane. Use at least 3
All the speedups and slowdowns you used feel incredibly unintuitive and puushing it. Please make them AT LEAST x1.5 and x0.75 intead of x2.0 and x0.5
01:00:956 (7,8,9) - Spcaing between (7)/(8) is the same as (8)/(9), but (8)/(9) are 1/1 away and (7)/(8) are 1/2 away, so either put (7)/(8) closer or (8)/(9) farther away.
02:05:208 (7,8,9) - ^
02:24:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - This combo is too long
02:31:665 (15,1) - They are too close
03:52:216 (7,8) - (7)'s ending is too close to (8)
You have a good sense of structre, that's being buried by grid lvl 1 and spacing.

Taiko seems great.
About hard and normal, they have some spacing issues due to grid lvl 1, I recomend you to use another grid level and recheck the spacings. Also, you'll need more mods before asking me again. But don't worry, structure-wise this map is nice, the only problem would be the spacing, so you need lots of spacing nazi mods :3
minyeob
오늘에서야 겨우 들어오게 되네요.... 요즘 바빠서 Orz
일단 SB중심으로 봤습니다만

3:32:500
「怖がらずに受けれよう」
入 이 人 이라고 표기되어 있네요 ㅇㅂㅇ.....
원래 폰트가 그런가요 ?_?

맵 좋네요 4성 드리겠습니다 ><
Topic Starter
Cute Bunny

minyeob wrote:

3:32:500
「怖がらずに受けれよう」
入 이 人 이라고 표기되어 있네요 ㅇㅂㅇ.....
원래 폰트가 그런가요 ?_?
악..??!!!
옥에티가 있었다니... :o
찾아주신 민엽님깨 다시한번 감사의 인사를! ( _ _ ) + ^a^
Mapper 31
SB오타.

01:42:767 (370) -
04:08:279 (202) -

ツアワセノカケラ → しあわせのかけら
Topic Starter
Cute Bunny

Krisom wrote:

Genreal-
· Just 64 kbps?! You need an mp3 that's at least 128 kbps.
Sorry... I can not find mp3 files. :(
thx modding ^v^
Noobita
( ・∀・ )
Shiro
General
There are 5 osb files in the folder... get rid of the unused ones.
The pink combo colour blends with the background.

Hard
The very low spacing makes the map confusing and hard to read.
01:04:026 (3,4,5,6,7) - Space the notes in this combo more evenly.
01:09:460 (4,5) - Unexpected and confusing jump. If you want to keep the jump, make (5) a new combo at least.
01:11:349 (4,5) - Same.
01:22:687 (6,7) - Space them the same way you spaced the rest of the combo.
01:54:105 (1,2,3) - Space them evenly.
02:20:561 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue: they are spaced the same way while the time gap is not the same. Make (3) closer to (2).
02:43:949 (4,5) - Unexpected and confusing jump. If you want to keep the jump, make (5) a new combo at least.
02:45:839 (4,5) - Same.

Insane
This follows pretty much the same rhythms as Hard... It jumps has unnecessarily high spacing, jumps and streams. Not to mention the random slow dows and speed ups and the irregular spacing. To be honest... You should just delete it.

Taiko
I like this a lot. The slider speed is well chosen, and the diff is challenging without being retardedly hard.

Ext.Sigma's Normal
The spacing is not consistent. It goes seemingly randomly from around 0.7x to 1.4x or probably more. Recheck the whole diff using distance snapping and AIMod to help you. For now the spacing is extremely irregular. Grid lvl 3 or 4 is probably the best to use.
01:42:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm not sure such a long 1/2 stream is a good idea for the easiest diff of the mapset.
02:30:011 (5,6,7,8) - I firmly believe this kind of pattern is too confusing for a Normal.
03:55:051 (3,4) - This kind of slider is too confusing too, because of the unexpected number of repeats.
04:11:114 (1) - This spinner is too short imo.
youngdow
Good map~

Star :3
Skyblue_old_1
조만간 될것 같은데...mp3 구할수 있으면 구해보겠습니다 'ㅁ'
수정. 192kbps 1:1 챗으로 전달 완료... 백업삼아 http://puu.sh/J8r
Topic Starter
Cute Bunny

skyble wrote:

조만간 될것 같은데...mp3 구할수 있으면 구해보겠습니다 'ㅁ'
수정. 192kbps 1:1 챗으로 전달 완료... 백업삼아 http://puu.sh/J8r
우앜!!! 진짜 감사합니다 ㅇㅅㅇ; 정말루...!! 감동 :cry:
minyeob
[Insane]
02:09:536 (6) - 플레이에는 문제가 없을 것 같습니다만 혹시나 해서 버블하기 전에 이런 노트가 있다는 것을 알려드립니다.
Rukario
Easy:
01:22:292 (4) - Remove the clap on the repeat.
Why not map this to the end like the other diffs?

Normal:
00:47:804 (3,4,5) - Here we have too close spacing. Please make the same spacing throughout the same combo.

Hard:
01:07:410 - Add a note here? Sounds better^^

Taiko:
This Taiko Background seems really unrelated. Can you get a different one?
Other than that looks fine for me.

Insane:
00:36:465 (3) - This slider is offscreen, You gotta move this in more.
01:05:757 (1) - Try to avoid that you touch the life bar with a slider or beat.
01:06:702 (2) - This slider is offscreen, You gotta move this in more.
01:25:599 (3) - ^
02:44:969 (3) - ^
04:06:229 (3) - ^

Pretty good map for your first one. The only thing that really needs to be fixed are the offscreen sliders. I you fixed everything I'd gladly give you a bubble^^
Topic Starter
Cute Bunny

Rukarioman wrote:

Easy: All fix
01:22:292 (4) - Remove the clap on the repeat.
Why not map this to the end like the other diffs?

Normal: All fix
00:47:804 (3,4,5) - Here we have too close spacing. Please make the same spacing throughout the same combo.

Hard:
01:07:410 - Add a note here? Sounds better^^ Hmm .. I think it is not good. but thx. o_o;

Taiko:
This Taiko Background seems really unrelated. Can you get a different one?
Other than that looks fine for me.I said you're right. But I think the complexity is not good thing. (In Taiko diff)


Insane: All fix
00:36:465 (3) - This slider is offscreen, You gotta move this in more.
01:05:757 (1) - Try to avoid that you touch the life bar with a slider or beat.
01:06:702 (2) - This slider is offscreen, You gotta move this in more.
01:25:599 (3) - ^
02:44:969 (3) - ^
04:06:229 (3) - ^

Pretty good map for your first one. The only thing that really needs to be fixed are the offscreen sliders. I you fixed everything I'd gladly give you a bubble^^
Thank you for Modding. ^_^
Rukario
Alright so minor IRC fixes and I think this map is ready for a bubble.

Bubbled~
Topic Starter
Cute Bunny
Thank you very much. >o<
jericho2442
modding on request by the bubbler.

sorry but for now pop, please make sure you at least fix the red stuff then call me back.

Ext. Sigma's Normal
00:08:119 (1,2,3,4) - only small i kno, but it really does give it a wrong spacing feeling, (1,2) are overlapping while (3,4) dont, both are the same timing and it clear looks like a mistake, (1,2) and (3,4) need to have the same spacing as each other
00:15:678 (1,2,3,4) - same as above with these
01:07:647 (6,1) - for the whole map this timing has had either a tiny overlap or none at all, here the overlap is huge and the timing is still slow, its extremely confusing for a normal level player to notice that, i advise to widen the spacing of these 2 notes
01:22:765 (5,1) - same here
02:44:969 (6,7,8,9) - ok all of these note have the same timing, yet (9) has a completely unexpected jump what even tricked me out, really don't play good and feels like broken spacing due to the rest of the pattern what is before it, you need to give (8,9) the same spacing as (6,7,8)

03:28:434 (1,2,3,4) - everyone one of these note has abit different spacing, would look a lot nicer if you made them all the same

hard
00:04:103 (3,1) - these have a closer spacing than the notes before but same timing, it makes the player want to stream abit faster yet its the same speed, i do advise to space these like the ones before it
00:25:127 (9,10,11) - same as above, these need abit more space

Insane
02:25:363 (6,7,8) - nono this really dont suit, the 2 different stream spacing in the same combo at this part plays really bad, give this the same spacing as 02:24:418 (1,2,3)
02:36:229 (2,3,4) - again nono you need to give (3,4) abit more space so its the same as (2,3)
02:38:119 (2,3,4) - same here

02:49:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this dont suit but its fine i guess, would play better with lower spacing though :/
04:10:954 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - again not keen on this jump in difficulty, it just dont suit, but its fine i guess

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so yea not huge problems, but that broken spacing really does get in the way of these fun maps. remember to gimmie a call soon as you get round to fixing these
jericho2442
most stuff have been fixed and the unrankable stuff have also been fixed

have your bubble back but please in the future reply to your mods in the maps topic too, it helps to keep everything upto date
HeatKai
I'm making 1 diff ? :?
Sure
STAR 8-)
Andrea
[Ext. Sigma's Normal]

00:29:851 (6) - New combo.
00:38:355 (6) - ^
01:30:324 (10) - ^
01:31:741 (1) - Remove new combo.
04:10:009 (1) - ^
04:10:954 (2) - New combo.


[Insane]

03:32:214 (1,1,1,1) - Almost offscreen, place them some grids down.
03:36:465 (1,1,1) - Remove all of these new combo.
03:46:859 (3,1) - Spacing.


Really nice for a first beatmap, but sadly I have to pop for now :(

Also, since you're here... Increase the Stack Leniency on every difficulty by 1 or 2 ticks at least, there is no sense to have it 0.

EDIT: Better now.

Re-Bubbled~
minyeob
포스트 2222 해제 D:
Sure
Congratulations for the first ranked map! :)
wmfchris
congrats, and the taiko diff comes quite naturally, well done :D
mekadon_old
Late congrats D:
Shiro Cyan
awesome song ^^
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