pieguy1372 wrote:

Shana's Class:

00:06:911 (6) - New combo
00:11:002 (6,7) - I'd recommend spacing these out the same as the rest of the notes in this section. Also, put a new combo on (7).
00:15:638 (5) - New combo
00:17:820 (10) - New combo
00:21:911 (4) - Too far from (3)
00:22:184 (5) - New combo
00:24:093 (9) - Too close to (8)
00:25:456 (3) - Too close to (2)
00:26:547 (6) - New combo
00:59:343 (1) - End it 1/4 earlier
00:31:729 (3) - Too far from (2)
00:33:093 (7) - Too far from (6), and also new combo
00:35:820 (2) - It would be nice if you made this a reversed and x-flipped version of 1
00:36:366 (3) - Too far from (2)
00:37:456 (6) - New combo
00:41:002 (4) - Too far from (3)
00:41:275 (5) - Too close to (4). Also, new combo
00:44:547 (5) - Too far from (4). Also, new combo
00:45:093 (6) - Too far from (5)
00:45:366 (7) - Make this a x-and-y-flipped version of (5)?
00:46:184 (8) - New combo
00:47:002 (11) - Weird slider. I'd recommend changing it into a spinner and ending it 1/4 earlier.
00:49:456 (3) - Too far from (2)
00:50:547 (6) - New combo
00:54:366 (4) - Too close to (3)
00:56:547 (4) - Too close to (3)
00:58:184 (5) - Too far from (4)
00:59:343 (1) - End it 1/4 earlier
01:03:229 (7) - Too far from (6)
01:03:638 (10) - Too far from (9)
01:04:320 (12,13,11) - Illegal. You can't have two hitobjects on the same point on the timeline. I recommend adding notes at 01:04:184 and 01:04:456.
01:05:138 (2) - Too far from (1)
01:08:547 (7) - Too far from (6)
01:08:820 (8) - New combo, and then remove it from 01:09:638 (1)
01:09:638 (1) - Too far from (5)
01:13:320 (1) - Perhaps move this 1 level 3 grid left and then move (2,3,4) one level 3 grid down
01:18:366 (6,7) - Make these the same sliders (4) and (5) are. Also, perhaps move (5,6,7) up one level 3 grid?
01:22:184 (5) - Too close to (4)
01:22:729 (6) - Too far from (5)
01:23:275 (8) - New combo

While the map still needs a bit of work, it's definitely a lot nicer than it was before. Good job and good luck!

Cookiezi wrote:

나 별 왜이렇게 싼거지
그냥 한판하면 줘버리네
' ㅅ'

ykcarrot wrote:

[Shana]
00:14:430 - delete useless timing point
00:19:794 - ^
00:22:044 - ^
00:35:301 - ^
00:48:025 - audio volume 0
00:59:343 (1) - 00:59:275 에서부터 시작
01:18:979 (1) - 01:18:911 에서부터 시작

이전에 오프셋 조정한거 같은데 초록선이 잘 안맞게 있네요. 타임라인에 잘맞게 수정해주세요.
그리고 전체 오디오 볼륨이 너무 작습니다. 최소한 50까지는 올려주세요.
다른 분들 난이도는 괜찮아 보이네요.

Good luck

orioncomet wrote:

[31's Taiko class]
- fix tag 'samilul' to 'samiljul'

[Niber's class]
- Black combo colour is hard to see, change to something lighter or make it like [Shana's class]?
01:03:093 (4) - add new combo?

nothing really poke me but kind of dark combo color are hard to see with this BG.
good mapset

arien666 wrote:

[General]
In video, 'Beatmap By Shana in Osu!' Is it osu! ;_;?
Artist is 'Ayahi Takagaki, Satomi Akesaka and Haruka Tomatsu' but as this is TOO LONG, at least leave these things into tag please :3
tag 'Threeemon' -> 'Threemon'

[Wezzy's class]
Do independent study >.>

[Sallad's class]
01:00:366 (3,4,5) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid right?

[Shana's class]
Do independent study >.>
[자습하세요 >.>]

[31's Taiko class]
00:15:093 (61,62) - [Suggestion] Add clap?
00:47:002 (219) - Is it better with spinner ;_;?
01:29:275 (426) - Add clap

[Niber's class]
00:30:638 (1,2) - Swap new combo
01:27:093 (3,4,5) - >.>



Garr orz

AngelHoney wrote:

only 3 diffs ?! , plz full submit~

Mustaash wrote:

AngelHoney wrote:

only 3 diffs ?! , plz full submit~

plz, redl

Colin Hou wrote:

3 diffs, do a full submit plz

passing by~~ bakabaka

Garven wrote:

[Weezy's class]
00:06:911 (1) - Return arrow is pointing all wonky. Also don't like this slider anyway - it's short and fast with many repeats. It's hard for new players to discern when it's going to end - especially with a note so soon after it stops. Please try something else.
00:11:274 (1) - This entire section was kind of boring rhythmically. It's all just on the beat, and there's a lot more variety of music you could follow otherwise.
00:42:911 (3) - Wonky return arrow again
00:53:820 (2) - ^ Also same issue with that first one. Try something else.
01:06:638 (1) - Return arrow... Also, the way it's positioned may be a little weird for newer players too, with that gap of time before the next slider. Maybe have it parallel to the next slider instead and space it accordingly.

dNextGen wrote:

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