wmfchris wrote:

eveless wrote:

OTL 这歌更适合太鼓音效感觉 不过还是死着做完了 渣音效

impossiblexu wrote:

做完啦~
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[attachment=0:4dcb2]Kozato Snow - Izayoi Sakura (Mystica) [Easy].osu[/attachment:4dcb2]

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不过我看到Stack Leniency都被拖到最左边了… 是不是稍微往右一点呢


~STAR~

LKs wrote:

不写tag么 直接给忘了233 补上了


Insane

[00:30:569] 没必要nc 唔 把NC推后了一个看起来就舒服了

EDIT: 我略微同意LXsoulfear的话 我觉得还好XD

soulfear wrote:

個人認為= =...只是個人認為而已...
音效用得有點過了...音樂已經聽不到原味了 或者說已經聽不見了._.
STAR

Yumeko Yuki wrote:

:)
Insane
00:25:083 (1) - 右移一格 fix
00:25:769 (1) - 这个circle是不是跳的太厉害了lol 建议重新考虑下位置 感觉现在这个位置比较好XD
00:37:940 (1) - 右移两格 fix
00:43:597 (1,2,3,4,1) - orz这里也太远了 建议用0.6*distance 0.6太小了. 先放着看
01:23:197 (4,1) - 这俩个之间跳跃太突然了orz 唔 看情况修改
01:38:283 (4) - 左移一格 修正了图形

这insane......太鬼畜了orz 我觉得一般鬼畜XD
hard就好很多了....
歌曲不错star....

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[wmf's taiko]

Plays well. It's good.

But the slider speed is supposed to be 1.40, and the difficulty should all be centered. Though, I guess it's up to the mapper.

aabc271 wrote:

[Wmf's Taiko]

The green line at 02:22:598 ( 142598 ) has a very low volume but not completely mute. However, I cannot hear the drum sounds at all because the volume is too low. Maybe increase the volume a bit ? If you did that intentionally, just ignore this ~

Suggested patterns

These are all suggestions only. Change them if you want to~

^ fixed

00:32:626 ( 116 ~ 124 ) Change kdkdkkddk ? - changed

01:03:483 ( 340 ) Change to k ( Blue note ) ? - changed

01:22:683 ( 448 ) Change to d ( Red note ) ? - changed

02:00:055 ( 726 ~ 728 ) Change to kdk ? - changed to (stream)dd kkk

03:05:540 ( 1097 ~ 1102 ) Change to kkk kdk ? - remain unchanged

No errors found, nice job ~

Like this song ~

Star and good luck ~

LKs wrote:

不写tag么

eveless' Hard[/b]

[01:18:569] 用默认osuskin看不到reserve arrow 拉出来了点
对于默认S-Whistle的运用感到有些违和 <_>我弱 wh其实本来不打算加的...最后也不知道那根筋搭错了
我死都不敢拿太鼓音效来下啊:< 可以给我默认音效吗LOL
[b]

wanhyrzh wrote:

Yo 老许E姐泪包新年好w
图很不错，没什么能MOD的>_>
只是一些个人想法：

SPOILER

General:
没SOURCE? 应该是没有唔
Skin:
既然都改了hit50~300，为什么不把颜色也换换呢？
我感觉换成粉色的话会比较好看。不介意的话可以试试这个：
[attachment=0:a2f77]hits.rar[/attachment:a2f77] 已使用XD
Normal:
1.其实我想说这N太鬼畜了……至少N+ 好吧normal+了
特别这一串：01:25:426~01:28:683，我觉得就第一次打的感觉来看是HARD了（好吧我弱;_;） 唔 就那一串难度？反正都normal+了（瘫
建议把01:26:112(1,2,3,4)或者01:26:798(1,2,3,4)换成折返SLIDER 同上
01:52:169(1,2,3,4,5) 把1~4换成SLIDER，5换成NOTE？ 同上
02:47:026(5,6,7,8,1) 建议同上同上

Insane:
闪死我了:o
别的没什么<_< 我闪KIAI我自豪（死
02:18:398(X) 加一个NOTE？显得没那么单调。 唔 感觉不错 好吧XD
02:21:140(X) ^

Star~~
等RANK

PS:
看到上面有人提起音效问题，我也凑凑热闹吧（殴
我觉得音效下得挺华丽的，至于会不会过了的问题，我认为见仁见智吧。
就像有人喜欢听美声，有人喜欢听原生态唱法一样。
没有问题。

soulfear wrote:

你不介意的話我可以做個難度(毆

NatsumeRin wrote:

S2 clap=S1 clap
S2 whistle=N1 whistle

试试这样？（我个人比较倾向默认whistle，红线音应该走的比较轻）

其他大概扫了眼大概没问题。避免精尽人亡先只放这个吧……

• - 沒Source麼Q_Q
  - Tags不需要Kozato Snow
  - Stack拉到最左的意義是..?
  - soft C1 clap不違和麼=A=..

• 沒什麼可mod的 XD
  
  
  
  N+ Hard
  [list:e3c3b]- HPD敢高點嗎

• 01:25:084 (4) - sliderwhistle故意的?
  
  送你妹分 太瘋狂了
  
  
  
  Insane
  [list:e3c3b]

pieguy1372 wrote:

Normal+:

00:27:826 (1,2,3,4) - Uneven
00:36:055 (1) - Move down one level 3 grid and right one level 3 grid?
00:44:283 (1) - Too far from (2)
00:45:655 (3) - Not symmetrical
01:06:226 (1,1,1,1) - Not symmetrical
01:34:340 (5) - Too far from (4)
01:55:598 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing for a Normal+

eveless' Hard:

00:43:855 (4) - I'm not so sure about this slider, perhaps start it 1/4 later?
02:00:312 (3,4,5) - These notes are somewhat off. Perhaps move them all 1/4 later?
02:35:712 (3) - I'm not sure if sliders like these are rankable
02:36:398 (5) - ^
02:37:770 (3) - ^, and this is also out
02:39:484 (1,2,3) - Again with the sliders. I suppose you can keep them now, but I'm still not sure.
02:43:255 (3) - Too close to (2)
02:55:940 (1) - Make it equidistant between (3) and (2)?

Insane:

00:30:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing
02:42:226 (3) - New Combo?

Nice map. *stars*

Pokie wrote:

General

• - 沒Source麼Q_Q 至少我没找到
  - Tags不需要Kozato Snow 不需要嘛XD
  - Stack拉到最左的意義是..? 原本的话你看INSANE会觉得超级难看XD
  - soft C1 clap不違和麼=A=..

唔还好！？



N+ Hard

• - HPD敢高點嗎

不敢了XD
00:53:883 (1) - 加1折返? 中間空了1/4拍有點怪 唔 修正了
01:12:398 (2), 01:13:769 (2) - 這倆太吵..音量降至45左右 修正
01:14:455 (1,1) - ^

看圖的前1/3, 我有衝動想加一句減AR
但看到1/2..我覺得你應該加AR 所以最后我应该怎么做XD





Insane
[list:d4aac]我弱 note都還沒看清 敢自重么。



確實有些聽不見曲子的感覺.. 唔。这个嘛。。

soulfear wrote:

Insane有些地方擋住了...或者說有些很不符合規律的移動...
我玩了好幾遍
要我幫你MOD么._.

soulfear wrote:

那我就MOD了...都是我個人觀點 用不用你自己看著辦好了 紅字是我覺得比較重要的
總體而言 stack length用默認 不要拉到最左邊 疊起來很難看清的 也沒有必要拉到左邊 好吧那我修正到中间
00:32:969 (1,2,3) - 這裡跳短點... k.
00:37:769 (4,1,1) - 這跳不合適
00:37:940 (1) - 這跳不合適
00:38:626 (6,1) - 這個跳更加不合適... 图形需要XD 感觉还好
00:40:169 加NOTE...
00:40:169 加NOTE...[/color]
00:42:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 我建議這裡跳縮短的...不要那麼鬼畜...很違和的D: 缩短了XD
00:44:969 (5) - 爲什麽不放2那裡= =放這裡也不是不行...就是打起來很違和(個人感覺? 要的就是违和感XD
00:45:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同上.要么把6放到3下面,7放6右上 要么就5和2重疊 6和3重疊 7在原來的6位置 同上
00:51:997 (5,6,7) - 5和3重疊 6在原來5的位置 7和2重疊
00:55:255 (1) - 感覺這個不要疊的好... 修正一部分XD
01:23:197 (4,1) - 近點... 还是原位吧XD
01:28:169 (1,2) - 這個...音樂突然靜下來你還玩那麼大的跳實在不怎麼合適
01:28:340 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得你有必要調整一下這裡的SPACE 好吧降了下distance
01:42:398 (4) - 4放2那 5放1那
01:44:455 (4,1) - 這個跳 實在是 ORZ 那就OTL去吧.
01:47:540 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得你可以擺個像花❀一樣的單點 這樣實在難看清 一堆全部縮在一起了 这是故意的
02:17:540 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 這裡弄停頓玩法實在不怎麼好 修正了已经
02:36:569 (8,1) - 這個跳又來了 ORZ 这是跳的感觉XD
EDIT:建議HP降低點 有些地方血嘩啦啦的掉 雷神那血不是早就掉完了XD

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Skin]
Hit 100 and hit 300 look very similar on color, try to make them a bit more different? this is of style.Perhaps looks well.I will consider if other appoint it out.
normal-hitnormal, soft-hitnormal, are completely mute, it's unrankable to use muted hitsounds, i can see what you're trying to do, but maybe then you should use that drum rim hitsound for hitnormal instead, since you use it very often. that's part need hitsound effect.Muted Normal just make it heard clear.In fact,I even had not use these muted effect only.

[General]
You have mapped less than 90% of the mp3, consider cutting it? Errrr.Just 12.5% left.Perhaps No problem?

[Insane]
00:26:798 (4) - New combo because it's unreadable as a jump like this. fixed it
00:43:597 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps are a bit too much tone them down. yeah.Fixed it
The map is technically ok, but im not a fan of Insane maps that fall under the Expert category, so i can't promise you a bubble.
That's right.

[Normal+]
Rename it to Normal. According to the diffculty.I prefer call it "Normal+" XD

Sakura Hana wrote:

[eveless' Hard]
02:35:712 (3,5) - Pretty interesting and pretty, however i'd doubt about the rankability of these since they are like burai sliders, AND matching start and end points I think it's rankable and readable , and i can find some others ranked maps to approve it if you want
02:37:770 (3) - ^
02:39:484 (1,2,3) - ^

Pokie wrote:

General


eveless
[list:66760]01:25:084 (4) - sliderwhistle故意的?啊...没看到LOL

送你妹分 太瘋狂了

Mystica wrote:

EDIT:建議HP降低點 有些地方血嘩啦啦的掉 雷神那血不是早就掉完了XD[/color]

LKs wrote:

Mystica wrote:

EDIT:建議HP降低點 有些地方血嘩啦啦的掉 雷神那血不是早就掉完了XD[/color]

虽然我玩了一遍倒没觉得血条很紧张
但是我想提示一下雷神并不是一个正面教材..更不应该拿来引用说理
从单一难度 音效 难度分配-map丰富程度 节奏 摆放 来看 雷神都欠缺很多

学习雷神学习因为这是一个警示而不是一个成功的案例

LKs wrote:

Mystica wrote:

EDIT:建議HP降低點 有些地方血嘩啦啦的掉 雷神那血不是早就掉完了XD[/color]

虽然我玩了一遍倒没觉得血条很紧张
但是我想提示一下雷神并不是一个正面教材..更不应该拿来引用说理
从单一难度 音效 难度分配-map丰富程度 节奏 摆放 来看 雷神都欠缺很多

学习雷神学习因为这是一个警示而不是一个成功的案例

[wmf's Taiko]
00:11:369 (1,9,17,27) - Big don instead? good idea
01:51:140 (657) - Big katsu? ^
01:53:883 (674) - Big don? => K
02:14:798 (766,777,792) - Big don? => K
02:20:112 (791) - remove?
02:51:483 (1000) - Big Don? ok
03:05:369 (1096) - Regular Don? It's the accent before ending? anyway changed

Mystica wrote:

XD 我只是用AHO的变态程度来反驳下TAT
自己前面打的时候感觉血条都是没问题 掉的不是很快XD