1. Normal'nyy - 5Key (1,72 stars, 392 notes)
2. Sluchaynyy - 5Key (3,11 stars, 792 notes)
3. Trudnyy - 5Key (2,41 stars, 601 notes)

RedBall wrote:

HELLO~

Here's NM you requested via discord!

+These are just my suggestions! Accepting these or not is totally depended on you.

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General

- BG I remember, don't worry
- Trun off Widescreen Support in Normalnyy and Trudnyy diff
- Turn off Enable countdown in all diffs
- Seeing N:C1, you will put custom hitsound later, won't you? (I think this map needs hitsounding) it will be hitsounded
- Normalnyy's OD and HP is 8 for each. Isn't it too high? How about 7.5 for each? forgot to change that wew

Normalnyy

00:18:946 (18946|4) - move to column 3 //following the vocal's pitch I tried to do some easy patterns and do not follow the pitch, but might consider
00:19:906 (19906|0) - move to column 5 ^
00:20:386 (20386|2) - move to column 1 if you applied the previous suggestion for hand balance
00:51:106 (51106|4,51346|3,51466|2,51586|1,51826|0,52066|4,52186|3,52306|2,52546|1) - When I first played this part, it was a bit awkward for me. Also, to differentiate from 00:53:026 (53026|0,53026|4,53266|1,53386|2,53506|3,53746|0,53986|4,54226|1,54346|2,54466|3,54466|0) - this part, I suggest you changing it. My suggestion -> https://puu.sh/y08tn/41fd6054f6.png (But it is just my opinion tho) fixed it other way I guess

Trudnyy

01:25:426 - Is it intentional? //cuz all of the other diffs have note on that sound. my bad wew

Sluchay

01:20:146 (80146|3,80146|0,80266|4,80266|2,80386|0,80386|3,80386|1) - from this part, you suddenly started to put two doubles and one triple in a raw. I think it is better to make 01:18:226 (78226|2) - this double because the mood changes from 01:17:986 well, synths started to be more noticeable here so I mapped them and also this is how difficulty progressess in every diff, but might consider changing it, because there are also more important sounds I guess, I have to think about this
01:23:986 (83986|3) - double this one if you are gonna use double-double-triple that I mentioned in the previous suggestion.
01:24:826 (84826|1,84826|3) - single thism, Or, if you are gonna double this, make sure emphasize it by hitsound. //the drum sound is quite small compared to 01:24:946 (84946|4,84946|2,85066|1,85066|3) - these ones. there's synth I mapped

thanks for the mod OwO
It is my first time modding 5K mapset. Fortunately, the mapset is easy. (I'm really suck at 5K since I usually don't play 5K, lol)

Anyway, I hope this mod helped you a bit. Good Luck on your Map!

Kamikaze wrote:

!sram na cb mordo

add a background pls???? soon
man I like the woman tag, respecc woman!!! same fam

diff settings look good

add hitsounds soon tm

turn off countdown

also not too sure about those diffnames, I understand them but I don't think everyone will, you might need to add prefixes or sth, people do this kind of stuff
like for example the breeze ranked has that I talked with QATs about that, it is okay if you only add explanation in the description of the map

[Sluchayy]
explain why the diffnames are like that btw lol, one is with an apostrophe, two have double y's
why
check out this for full experience https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/BGN/PCGN_ ... of_Russian
tl;dr
нормальный = Normal'nyy = Normal (the apostrophe is used for mollification of the л)
трудный = Trudnyy = Hard
also gonna change Sluchay to: случайный = Sluchaynyy = Random (custom diffname)

layering in this diff is good, notes are about what I would expect speaking about the amount of them
I have issues with patterning though, I'll be speaking more about the concepts as a whole because that's what's the problem here, not specific spots exactly

you basically have some weird patterning spikes - intended or not, doesn't really matter to me - while most of the map is very stair oriented

oh yeah 00:31:426 - this could actually be a quad I think I want to leave that bracket thing, so nope

but basically on the broken rhythm part (pre-chorus) you have some rougher patterns like for example a bracket at 00:31:186 - and the chorus is mostly easy patterns which I can understand to an extent, but you should make the chorus less stair oriented, break up the patterns a bit, make it rougher, it's gonna be kinda hard but it's gonna be more interesting to play. sure

01:24:706 - this is not looking so good though, you could go for something less spiky (my only miss on sightread) for example:


haha get it it's almost a jumptrill
I really like it as it is, but yeah, it's a spike, so changed it to a jumptrill :^))
layering is fine like I said so just get hitsounds, get a background and get going bro

Lenfried- wrote:

hey hey hey

wtf is that woman tag because why not (deleted)

add to tags ( // means separated not to be added to tags):
svetlana // from full name svetlana loboda
H2lo // from album

just realized that this audio is like super cut I realised that it is cut after mapping it

hitsounds

00:31:906 - easy has double w/f while other diffs only have one there is no easy diff dude :^)
01:05:986 - easy has double w/c while ^
01:10:306 - easy has triple w/c while ^ i love apps for copying hitsounds

slut nya nya

00:01:426 - the extra sounds like 00:03:826 (3826|1,4186|1,4546|1) - are fairly audible and should be charted. If you're against that idea, you could move the ln to col 2 just so that everything is not on the right hand of right thumbs. I don't get what do you mean, they are mapped :V
00:16:786 - to 00:30:466 - the 1/4 sweeps are primarily connected. So this one right here 00:20:626 (20626|3,20746|1,20866|0) - is out of place good catch
00:30:706 - not particularly fond of how the trill is set up when the sections after it are symmetrical. consider: https://puu.sh/AFK85/cb1d8c70df.png sure
00:46:066 - i believe this should be a double. Following your layering thing of 1/2 doubles // 1/2 singles ex. 00:43:906 - vs 00:44:866 - respectively. u r right fam
01:20:146 (80146|0,80146|3,82066|1,82066|4) - i believe these doubles actually break away from the flow of the doubles usage. Idk how these doubles got there It's also not a nice point to introduce more difficulty. If there's a good spot to add some doubles for a slight burst of difficulty, it should start around 01:23:746 - or even 01:21:826 - . The point where you decided to ramp up the difficulty is rhythmically in an awkward spot. About 3 measures away from the ending.I don't feel like making in even harder is necessary, it's already hard enough

turdme

00:01:186 - same thing with intro layering in the top diff same answer in the top diff
00:05:026 - i believe this can be a double following the trends of 00:08:866 - and 00:12:706 -
00:31:186 - minor minor suggestion just because i love impact chords with the spacebar included https://puu.sh/AFKEv/213f035059.png sure

section nitpick:
00:31:906 - to 00:38:866 - 1
00:39:826 - to 00:46:546 - 2
just to eliminate the sense of randomness in the chart, the first timestamp, marked as 1, could solely use connected sweeps. Then for timestamps 2, use disconnected sweeps the song is titled "random", why getting rid of that randomness? :^)

00:55:186 - to 01:08:866 - i guess the same idea can be used here I tried

normal

00:01:186 - could say the same for this intro too with regards to the 1/4ths same
00:09:226 (9226|1,9346|3) - mistimed usage. Refer to Hard. Move down by 1/2 mapping 2 stronk
00:11:146 (11146|2,11266|4) - ^ + move the note at 3 to 2 to reduce the amount of control needed for right thumbs fixed
00:14:986 (14986|4,15106|2) - ^ fixd
00:15:706 - that 123 motion can be a little hard to acc so consider this: https://puu.sh/AFKS5/db03657b19.png did something similiar
00:51:106 (51106|4,51346|3,51466|2,51586|1,51826|0) - this can be very awkward to acc. would ctrl h 00:51:346 (51346|3,51466|2,51586|1) - for that nice interchange between hands I want to leave that right>left motion due to that decreasing sound
00:54:226 - woiuld do this just for some difference in motion between the two sweeps in this section https://puu.sh/AFKVx/596977826b.png because the sounds are increasing in volume I want to leave that motion, also that bracket is horrible, beginners would die
01:10:306 - to 01:25:186 - you know that suggestion i did in hard with regards to sweeping? You can do that here too! did something I guess