Behonkiss wrote:

General:
Maybe consider changing the combo colors to match the 6 pony colors? That's an interesting concept. I'll experiment

Easy:
00:59:607: Consider adding a new combo circle here. I'm not ready to add one there yet. I rather like how it plays currently.
01:00:530: New circle here too.I'm not going to make the rhythm boring.
01:03:299: And here...
01:04:222: ...here... ^
01:32:838: And here. Added
02:04:222 (5): Move 1 square to the right (Nazi). Done
02:20:838 (1): Consider adding a finish here. Yes
02:21:992 (4): Get rid of this circle, it's a bit tricky for Easy. I agree, It's unnecessary.
02:28:222 (1): Consider a finish here, too. Sure
02:30:761 (2): Move to 02:30:992. I don't like it.
02:43:453 (3): Change to new combo. okay
02:43:915 (1): Get rid of new combo.^
02:50:376 (1): Consider adding a finish to the start of this slider. Okay
02:57:761 (1): Consider a finish here as well. okay
03:08:607 (2): Move to 03:08:838.I'd rather not

Normal:
00:27:299 (3): Either move this right below the 2 circle or to the right a bit more. Moved right 1 unit
02:47:146 (2): Either move directly to the left of 1 or up/down a bit more. I'm happy where it is
02:48:530 (5): Put this on the same horizontal line as 4. Nah
03:23:671 & 03:23:902: Put some circles here! All the harder difficulties have them, and Easy has one too. I would if I knew how to place them.


Both Insane diffs seem fine.

Rainmon wrote:

Just a Quick mod on Vinyl's new hard

Wow now this map is a LOT better than the last one :3 Still not perfect, but the map can become perfect, right? ;3
There where some misplaced hitsounds but it did not bother me soo much. Now Tell me why did you always use soft soundstamples? o.o
00:17:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you want to play with finish this much then I recommend a constant rythm~ http://puu.sh/1ryej (highlited notes have finish on, others dont.) Alright
00:18:992 (1) - sliderbegin gets finish because the song starts here. Added
00:22:915 (2,4) - no whistle, whistle is overused on this part so remove them. Removed
00:24:069 (6) - hm naw just one gets whistle, end or begin of slider, you decide. Imo both works well. Kay
00:25:453 (5,6) - No whistle on both ends, sounds to overused. Alright
00:30:299 (2,4,6) - whistle spam~ Remove them. Done
00:33:299 (5,6) - I don't see why finish would make sense here, instead put one on slider begin 00:33:761 (1) Removed it at 5, but I'm not sure if it sounds alright to me imo on the next combo.
00:35:838 add note? the flow suffers because of this. Alright
00:39:069 Important vocal part imo so add note here. Doesn't sound right, so no.
00:40:453 (4) - remove whistle~ Removed
00:42:992 (1) - Naw whistles used in this way don't sound good and rarely fit well. I would only put whistle
on slider begin. No whistle sounds better
01:00:530 (2) - hm, a whistle instead of finish sounds better to me. Follows a flow with a finish, so no.
01:22:453 to keep flow add note here~ Yup
01:24:299 same here Not going to
01:30:992 (1) - why finish? no need for finish here so remove. k
01:34:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Whistle spam, rework this please. (I'm sure you can figure out yourself what has to be done, if not, then ask me in-game) Reworked
01:39:530 (2,4) - remove whistles~ K
01:44:838 huge gap, add note here and here 01:45:069 Nah
01:51:299 (1) - finish on sliderbegin~ Also the Kiai time sounds better if you use Normal soundstamples. IMO it sounds all soft to me :/
01:58:222 (4) - remove finish~ kay
02:05:838 (6) - hm double finish rarely work good so remove it please. Removed
02:23:376 add note to keep the flow~ Added
02:24:069 (7) - finish dose not make sense and sounds awkward :/ instead put finish here 02:24:530 (1) Done
02:35:376 (5) - remove finish and add it on 02:35:607 (1) slider begin~ ^
02:38:146 (7) - Remove whistle, you know why. Alright..
02:44:607 (3) - clap is not needed, remove please. It sounds strange if single clapsounds are used this way. I seriously hear the claps in the background.
02:45:299 (5) - same here. ^
02:49:453 (6,7,8) - remove finish, istead add it here 02:50:376 (1) I don't like it here, theres a flow after that.
02:50:838 (3) - why finish? T___T It sounds better with the flow
02:51:299 (4) - same ^
02:53:607 (9) - ..^ ^
03:04:222 (1,2,3,4) - two sliders would work as well Done

03:09:069 (2) - clap sounds awkward here :/ Removed
03:23:210 (6) - no finish.. kk
03:23:671 (1,2) - normal stamples would sound good >: I'll leave it like that, but if others complain, then I'll add normal samples


If you have questions just ask~

Here

Rainmon wrote:

A little Mod~ :3

[Easy]

00:20:376 (3,4) - Eh, this could be too hard too play on Easy, A slider instead would fit as well and is easier to play. This pattern would
Look good~ http://puu.sh/1rcqX It lines perfectly up with (1) I'm not sure i like another straight slider. I just moved the note to the white tick and fixed spacing.
00:21:300 (1,2) - Ugly Overlap, place (2) somewhere else plz I'd rather not.
00:47:607 (2,3) - Hm I think a slider would fit better but that's just my personal preference so you may ignore this. Made into one long slider instead.
00:56:838 (2) - I would place it like this so It lines up with (1)~ http://puu.sh/1rcwL Also the player will know in which direction he has to go next ;3 I'm content with this part. Don't really want to change.
00:59:607 Ah add a circle here or make a slider so the "winter wrapup" is not so lonely~
01:00:530 ^
01:03:299 ^
01:04:222 ^ No. I'd wish people would stop suggesting it. I don't want to crowd this part with notes and clicking.
01:09:300 (3,1) - Overlap, I would place sliderpath diffrently I wouldn't. I spent long enough trying to find a symmetry pattern with that timeline. I'm happy with this.
01:32:838 To keep the flow, add a circle or slider i'm not sure how to fix. If I add a note and fix spacing, it pushes my patterns too far to the right, and they feel too close to the right wall. I don't know how to fix this. If you have any ideas be sure to post with screenshots.

01:34:223 (1) - move one grid up, this looks better and more uniform with 01:33:300 (2,3,2) Doesn't to me. Following distance snap makes it feel too close for some reason.
01:36:992 - 01:40:222 Use claps constantly so It fits with the rest of the Double rainbow song Vocals here are different than the rest of the rainbow song. I'm happy with how it sounds regardless of consistency anyways. Not changing.
01:46:684 (4) - hm A whistle or ust nothing sound better imo I will keep for now.
01:52:223 (1,2) - Spacing? theres a big Jump, reduce it so new players don't get confused. I don't want the spinner hitburst to overlap. >.<
02:05:607 (6,7) - A slider instead is easier to hit correct than 2 single circles after a small pause. I prefer circles- not changing
02:21:761 (3,4,5) - This is a bit Hard to hit, A slider with one repeat instead? Fixed in previous mod
02:25:453 (3) - extend to 02:26:376 so It sounds better. Lowered volume
02:27:300 (2) - remove clap No. I'll keep
02:31:915 (1,2) - this sounds awekward to me, Id change this pattern. I would delete (2) and make (1) a reverse slider instead. This works better
than the current pattern and is easier to play. Ew. I don't want a large repeat slider that isn't centered. It's fine.
02:43:453 (3) - There was no clap in the previous section, add claps from 02:36:530 to 02:42:992 . This would add to the hitsound "flow". Already fixed
02:52:223 (3) - add whistle to keep the rythm. Done
02:57:761 (1) - add finish? added, but i really don't like it and may remove it in the near future.
03:07:915 (1,2,3) - This pattern is really hard to hit, I even combobroke on it. move 03:08:607 (2) to 03:08:838 . It sounds better where it is, and I probably will not change it. I don't need this song ranked that bad.
03:16:223 (1,2,3) - a slider with repeat on (2) is easiert to hit, but this is my personal preference so ignore this if you want. Easier but sounds terrible.
03:21:761 (1,2) - hm, I would make this symmetrical http://puu.sh/1rcZw looks better to me. Maybe. i'll consider it, but really that doesn't match the rest of the styling of the map

[Normal]

hm Some of the spacing is really weird. There are 1/2 beats that are spaced pretty far apart and later there are 1/2 beats that are mor compressed.

00:18:069 (3,4,5) - Hmm, add a circle on 00:18:761 . This would sound way better or you could do 2 sliders http://puu.sh/1rdsJ That would follow less of the beat and wouldn't sound better.
00:19:915 (3) - not sure if multiple reverse is a good idea for normal. you could simply remove one reverse and extend it so it's a 1/1 beat slider. then remove 00:20:838 (4) obviously Complaining about double repeat sliders in a Normal? Seriously.
00:24:992 (5) - same here. ^
00:25:915 (6,4) - maybe move sliderpath so its fully stacked on (6). otherwise it's a overlap and dosn't look very good. There is no overlap.
00:35:146 (2,3,2,4) - this stack is not quiet good, I combobroke playing this part and the hitbursts hide the next circle. so please move them on diffrent posisions. It's not that hard to read. It's not like I switch beats. It's the same beat. Pay attention.
00:42:992 (3,1) - overlap, move (1) down so it dose not touch the slider. Done for now
01:06:069 (4,2) - ugly overlap, stack the end of (2) with (4). this looks better. I'm sure an entire measure is more than enough time to clear that slider and it is. There is no reason to change anything here.
01:35:838 (1) - hm, spinner should start at 01:35:146 .. Done
02:35:607 (1) - Stack slider end with 02:34:453 (2) , so theres no overlap anymore orz i'd rather not break distance snap.
02:36:761 (2,3) - the nakedness between them is confusing D: move 02:38:146 (3) to 02:37:915 No. My patterns are balanced where this slider currently is.
02:39:761 (1,2,3,4,5) - Well I'm not sure if this pattern is too hard for a normal.. Even if it was I'm not changing for that reason alone.
02:41:607 (5,7) - ugly overlap Fixed
03:04:223 (3,4,5) - HUGE jump compared to the rest of the map. Maybe reduce them? Well generally on the last part you got really inconsistant with the spacing. My goal was to make a fun and interesting map. I'm not lessening a proper transition for the sake of ranking guidelines.It's more enjoyable the way I have it. And it's not inconsistent, because I'm mapping to how I felt the song should play.

[Vinyl's Hard]

Generally, I would recommend to remap this diff. The rythm you mapped sounds awkward and not fiting. You use circles
where slider are obviously better and the spacing is inconsistant. Try to have at least some kind of consistancy
in the hitsounding. Some whistles where extremly out of place especially on the last part.. The slider Velo is too slow,
Velo 1.4 or 1.5 would be good.

[Insane]

Awesome Jumps but you already know that xDD

00:20:607 (1,4) - Ugly overlap :/ make (1) a curve slider~ http://puu.sh/1reIq Doesn't bother me, don't want to change.
00:25:453 (3,4,5) - The stack stops the flow imo. Maybe simply space the stream? No. I've gotten used to the stack there and don't want to ugly it up with a stream. There's a reason why I don't have very many streams in this map.
00:48:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - You could just make a spinner instead but yeah, both works fine. Umm why would i do that?
01:06:761 (6,2) - stack the end of slider with (6) properly, otherwise it looks like a mess Fixed
01:07:915 (3,7) - stack properly I'd rather not. I don't see a point.
01:10:223 (1) - stack or place diffrently, looks bad imo Looks bad, flows nicely; fits my needs. It's a tradeoff.
01:12:530 (4,5,6) - hm I see no reason why a tripple should be here. A slider fits better. Personal preference?
01:13:453 (8,9) - same here Because each sound is distinct and clicking is more fun than sliding.
01:42:069 (5) - remove finish? I'll keep.
01:54:069 (3,4,5,8) - hm place (3,4,5) properly on sliderpath, this would look better. Done
03:05:146 (1) - Add finish~ Meh



:3

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi M4M

General
You have two Insane, delete one I'm allowed to have Two insanes

Easy

00:21:300 (1) - Remove NC Each combo is compartmentalized within it's own measure.
00:24:646 (1) - ^ ^
00:28:223 (1) - ^ Why?
00:39:300 (1) - ^ No sense doing so...
00:53:607 (2,3) - Spacing mistake, move them closer to each other Doesn't look that way to me...
01:26:838 (1) - Remove NC I reduced the previous combo's size to match the rest.
01:30:530 (1) - ^ No. I have a combo theme here. My combo starts on vocal starts.
01:32:376 (1) - ^ ^
01:32:838 - Add circle and add new combo here I'll add a note, but a new combo does not belong there
01:34:223 (1) - Remove NC Meh
02:30:069 (1) - ^ Doesn't fit my combos. Trying to fit each combo within it's own measure.
02:33:069 (2) - Id say remove this slider and make a reserve one with the preview one
03:08:607 (2) - Dont make this in an Easy diff, also you didnt use it so far, remove it I agree. Made into one slider.
03:16:915 (2) - This is confusing for beginners, make two circles instead between 1 and 3 on the white ticks[/color] I'm pretty sure I gave enough red tick transitions with the sliders to clue the beginners into hitting a 3/4th time transition.

Normal

00:24:992 (5) - , 01:05:146 (3) - This might be unrankable on Normal, not sure, try fixiing it though!
00:46:223 (3,4) - Spacing again, too far away, make them closer Fixed
00:48:530 (1) - You need to give 1 tick space at the end to make them beginners let prepare to continue on the next elements[/color] IMO they have enough time to react. I can get a bonus without even spinner at the start. The BPM is low enough to allow this.
01:17:607 (1) - Remove NC add on next element Added new combo here 01:19:473 - instead.
01:23:146 (3,4,5,1,) - , 01:25:915 (3,4,5,6) - , 01:28:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Too big antijumps, you shouldnt do this on Normal diffs, fix it by putting them closer to each other I'd rather not since its readable.
01:55:453 (6) - NC Added on 5 instead
02:25:915 (4) - Distance and overlapp, fix it by maybe Ctrl + J the preview slider and move it where it was
02:30:992 (2,3,4) - Too big antijumps, you shouldnt do this on Normal diffs, fix it by putting them closer to each other I shouldn't, but I'm mapping it the way I want it to be played.
02:36:530 (1,2,3,4) - Breaks the flow of the song and map, try something differnt, also too big jump Fixed
02:50:838 (2) - Spacing, move it closer to preview one Don't want to change. It's fits the song.
02:52:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
02:56:376 (7) - Move it deffinately closer to preview circle The reason I'm not changing these, is the flow allows me to do this.
02:58:223 (2,3,4) - Spacing again, move them closer to each other ^
03:00:992 (6) - Make this circle more visible by moving it further up i'll consider it.
03:01:453 (1) - Spacing is too big, reduce it Nah
03:02:838 (1) - ^ ^
03:04:684 (4,5) - ^ Seriously, this should be in a Normal Nah
03:06:530 (2,3,4) - Closer to each other Remapped this part. It's better.
03:12:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ I'll consider it
03:22:915 (4,5) - I suggest to not overlapp them, move them away[/color] Changed how it ends a bit. It looks better.

Insane

General
Take care of spacing, avoid unnecessary anti jumps. Until 00:52:222 - you wasnt so jumpy, but then you change the style, which you should do. Fix the spacing please overall! I did change my style. I got bolder with my mapping there. However consider my intro as a warmup for the harder stuff later on.

Overall
00:18:530 (5,6) - Spacing, move them how the spacing wants it please
00:18:992 (1) - Remove NC add here 00:19:223 (2) - I see no point in doing so.
00:22:684 (1) - This doesnt fit with the song, make the preview slider longer, till it reaches the white tick i'm not making the slider longer. This is intentional.
00:25:453 (3,4,5) - Big jump, make it different I thought you said my style wasn't the same until later on. Would this be suggesting I make it further different?
00:33:992 (1,3) - Put them closer to the centre Done
00:35:376 (1,2,3,4) - Wrong spacing overall, move the 2nd circle bit more to the last slider I don't think so. i'll wait for more opinions.
00:36:761 (5) - Wrong spacing, move it closer to preview circle[/color] This slider's been split up.
00:50:607 (7) - NC Oh fine....
01:23:607 (9) - ^ Done
01:26:838 (7) - ^ ^
02:22:915 (8) - ^ I think done
02:26:376 (7) - ^ ^
02:27:069 (1) - Remove NC ^
03:16:453 (1) - Huge spacing mistake, move them closer please I might. Once you know they are there its not terribly hard to hit them.


Thats it, good luck!

cirno- wrote:

Hard
02:57:781 (1) - I liked the finish you had around 02:50:396 through 02:53:166 - maybe do the same thing at this point? I don't think so necessary.
03:23:671 (1,2) - Consider whistle or finish Drum hitsounds sound better.
I like the soft hitsounds on this Thanks, it sounds like a soft song, so it would be soft hitsounds. Normal could be fine.



I got no problems with insane. That's all I got. GL! ~star

VinylDash14 wrote:

[Rainmon's Insane]

This map is FULL of 3/4 sliders and stuff like that. A few don't fit here, but the rest are okay.
There is an EXTRA kiai time after the break, and the others don't. Remove it.
This also has another set of colors. All diffs should have the same color set (unless it's for a specific use)[/color] Thats because I
find them much mor fitting and beautiful that way >:

01:11:050 (2) - Not a good placement in the timeline. And it doesn't fit well.True.
01:23:396 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make better pentagon Its a star but sure.
03:04:242 (1,2) - Doesn't look right with the way it is. Try 1/1 jump. changed
03:18:089 (1) - A spinner doesn't fit here for an insane. should i put an endless slider instead?

ztrot wrote:

[Disclaimer]
If you take these suggestions good, if not alright I'm spending my time to help make your map be the best it can be! Feel free to use the spaces between each mod for feed back

[VD's Hard]

holy shit is is really well made! holy shit i i know right!

01:27:781 (5) - move this to here

I really like it the way it is at the moment.

01:48:550 (4) - kill that overlap if you would please.

I fixed it, and found a better pattern.

SPOILER

01:51:319 (1,2,3) - This can be worked on a bit more refer to my screen shot in the easy for ideas.

Fixed, but may have made it worse after that. Oh well, least it's fixed~

I've already spent too much time on this mod crap there isn't anything really game breaking in the insane for course so good luck and all

Yay, good luck to you in the future

TheVileOne wrote:

I'm bringing this back out of the grave to try to get it ranked.