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[General]
Tag: 3rd Eye, and probably the album name (I've forgotten that one)
^ the tag is not unique in the two diffs, rickyboi don't need to be tagged
- inconsistancy in preview time
- Set 2000 or 2500 audio lead-in for BOTH diffs
- Soft custom hitsound is in the file but it's unused.
[Extra]
00:07:138 (2) - you may want to move this left several grids to stack with (4) in the next combo. Move this combo (4) left a bit as well so that (1,2,3,4) forms a parallelogram
00:47:401 (4) - curve around (3) properly:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/32361801:10:927 (2) - looks very misleading with the spacing (1,2,3)
01:13:769 (2) - rotate clockwisely a bit so that it looks like curving around (3).
02:13:296 (1) - whistle here followed by previous logic, though in overall they don't work well...
02:56:559 (3,4) - clap
03:27:663 (2,3,4) - spacing. Place (2,4) at (392,128) and (3) at (468,48)
I can see some sense of mapping, but notes can be placed more catiously with correct spacing like the insymmetrical pattern at 00:24:664 - , many more of these can be done in a much better way.
[Taiko]
-remove letter box during breaks
-HP6 is too high for songs with quite a lot of notes
- I think you dont really need to stream so much in the beginning, and that makes a big contrast for the coming part...
- In the main song part (00:35:401 - ~) you used quite a lot of ddddk / ddk but the song varies beyond that and different kinds of 5-plets like kkddk / kkkkd etc are expected.
01:21:743 - the 4-plet sounds really odd here and you didn't use ay 2/4-plet in similar positions so better remove it
01:26:717 - noticing this section is filled up with 1/3 so the entire mapping may not work well.
01:43:611 - for 1/3 pattern they should sound 3-in a group as the music indicated. You may try kdkkdkkdk....
02:18:822 - k here as it starts with higher tone
02:26:559 - again the dddkkkdddkkk stuffs don't fit the song here
03:14:875 - K
03:49:927 - place one more K here before spinner
04:06:980 - there's no 1/3 in the music and it does not work well here.
04:10:138 - the accents are misplaced, including 04:10:769 - and 04:11:401 -
I didn't mod the 1/4 streams in detail because honestly most of them are unecessarily overmapped. In contrast, there're some section with some odd breaks and 1/2 notes which makes a poor flow and difficulty spreading throughout the song.