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IOSYS - Hakurei Jinja

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-SiN-
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, February 03, 2009 at 12:56:10 PM

Artist: IOSYS
Title: Hakurei Jinja
Source: Touhou Project
Tags: IOSYS, Hakurei, Jinja, Touhou
BPM: 156
Filesize: 3274kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.55 stars, 189 notes)
  2. Lunatic (4.84 stars, 235 notes)
  3. Normal (3.54 stars, 149 notes)
Download: IOSYS - Hakurei Jinja
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My first full beatmap. Any suggestions are appreciated :)
Lunatic diff = Insane diff. if you played Touhou game then you should know this.

Enjoy.

EDIT:
- [cleared log due to major changes]
- re-arranged Lunatic, bolder combo colors, removed the video..
- added preview my SWR lifebar skin xD
- damn! back to default combo colors
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Mafiamaster
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I'm seeing Hakurei Shrine Neighborhood Association Marching Song as the real name. But it's quite a long title so I guess maybe Hakurei Jinja would work? Your choice. :)

Edit: Mafiamaster's Suggestions~
Easy:
I see a little bit of spacing issues.
00:07:71 (1,2,3).
00:13:86 (1,2,3).
00:16:17 (5,6,7). I lol'd.
00:18:48 (9,10,11).
01:09:25 (1,2,3).
01:12:32 (1,2,3).

Shouldn't it be closer like the other 3 combo-like things? :?

Overall, you did a great job with this map! I didn't see any other noticeable problems.
IOSYS!!
-SiN-
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well, i prefer Japanese name than English XD and really.. too long...

ow, just as i thought.. :|
i was making 'easy' by clicking and not seeing the notes :P
my heart is not really into the easy one, hear and click, slider, finish and save.. that's it :lol:

There is another IOSYS map to go but i didn't know the title. :(


Remember, if the english is too long, then romaji :twisted:

Thanks

EDIT: i know it already :)
jerieljan
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jerieljan
If anyone can romanize 博霊神社町内会音頭 this, then here's your title. lol.

by the way, awesome beatmap. This is probably one of the first few beatmaps that I've played that I loved on the spot. Or it's just me who likes this IOSYS track in particular.
-SiN-
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thanks. 8-)
IOSYS!

Download: Mi - Kimi Dake wo... (KenezzEdward) [ejemplo].osu
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Download: IOSYS - Hakurei Jinja.osz
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster's Suggestions~
Lunatic Difficulty:
I see you redid the map making it harder T_T hahaha.
Resnap to the 1/4 divisor. I saw some beats move around the 00:24:00 area. Mainly those triple stacks were moved to their correct places.
00:55:02 (5,6,7) - could be spaced out the same as the other ones.

If you add the combo burst, you can just do a full submission to add it to the main download folder thing.
-SiN-
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Mafiamaster wrote:

Mafiamaster's Suggestions~
Lunatic Difficulty:
I see you redid the map making it harder T_T hahaha.
Resnap to the 1/4 divisor. I saw some beats move around the 00:24:00 area. Mainly those triple stacks were moved to their correct places.
00:55:02 (5,6,7) - could be spaced out the same as the other ones.

If you add the combo burst, you can just do a full submission to add it to the main download folder thing.

i did a full submission.. :D check the first post.. xD i post the separate comboburst file because it's irritating if we must DL it again right? :D

Lunatic more harder.. yes it is, because it's lunatic :) and many of them are love spaced map btw..
Thanks ^^
-SiN-
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bump
Nharox
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The correct title is Hakurei Shrine Neighborhood Association Marching Song. ;)
-SiN-
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Nharox wrote:

The correct title is Hakurei Shrine Neighborhood Association Marching Song. ;)
geez i know it already but i want romanized kanji.. :?
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-SiN-
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master SPARK!!!!
Card N'FoRcE
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Cool song :)
Offset: 7710?

- Easy:
I think overall parameters are too hard, maybe you should decrease all three by one.
00:10:59 (6,7,8) - move them a square up

- Normal:
A bit hardish overalls, just to let you know, but nothing to suggest.
00:10:02 (7,1) - uhm, this is quite a big jump for a normal imho...
00:35:97 (1) - maybe the new combo is useless
00:45:98 (4) - big spacing mistake, fix it
00:52:90 (2) - move it a bit down (nazi)
00:56:93 (1) - move it one square to the left (nazi again XD)
01:04:82 (2,3) - close to the end of the slider, please (maybe is even better under the slider)

- Hard:
00:32:90 (6) - shorten by 1/8 (distraction?)
00:59:63 (2) - i think you should move it 1/4 before. Right now it's kinda unexpected

- Lunatic:
00:54:44 (4) - it's too far from 3
00:59:63 (2) - same as hard (did you do it on purpose?)
01:43:86 (5) - i think you'll have to storyboard an arrow for this one...
-SiN-
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DONE.. ^
minyeob
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Hi
[Lunartic]
20:116(2) make 1/8 beat slower
21:703(2) make 1/8 beat slower
23:241(2) make 1/8 beat slower
24:780(2) make 1/8 beat slower
25:549(5) make 1/8 beat slower
29:249(1) extend the length (make 1/8 beat longer)

Also you have to arrange your hit marks.
[Ex.]
[Hard]
1:07:745(3) move right a bit

[Lunartic]
17:712(4) move up a bit
33:593(3) move right a bit
1:07:324(5,6,7) move down a bit or make (5) to (1)- New combo
1:38:088(2) move up a bit

You have to find, fix more.

Nice beatmap btw
*Minyeob stars*
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-SiN-
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bump of the day!!! ^
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no more BAT? *bump*
Cyclone
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Combo Colors are extremely difficult to see against the video.
-SiN-
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hmm... ok.. now it's more visible than before ;)
Thanks Cyclone
Cyclone
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Lunatic:

00:26:17 up through 00:38:48. Assuming you are following the vocals here, do this.
00:26:17 (1) - Shorten by 1 repeat.
00:26:17 (1) - Place a note here
00:26:17 (1) - Place a note here
00:28:67 (5,6) - Delete
00:27:71 (4) - Extend this so the repeating point is 1/2 later than it was(making the entire thing 1 whole beat longer)
00:29:24 (1) - Currently ending on a yellow tick. Move to red tick.
00:34:63 (1) - Either make a single circle, or extend this to the blue tick. If you DO make a circle, place a new circle on that blue tick.
00:35:59 (4,5) - Delete
00:35:40 (3) - Make this a slider that ends where the previously 6 was and delete that 6.
00:36:94 (1) - Shorten to the blue tick.
00:37:90 (3) - Move forward to next blue tick (00:38:00)
00:38:09 (4) - Delete

00:50:78 - 01:02:90. It's unclear what the notes follow in this section. This sounds better to me personally.
00:52:71 (3,5) - Delete
00:54:25 (3) - Delete
00:56:93 (5) - Make this repeat 1/2 beat earlier(Making the entire slider 1 whole beat shorter.)
00:58:48 - Add a note here. Delete the last note of this combo.(whatever number it was.)

Now i don't want to completely mess up your style, so i'll stop here for now. Please let me know how it looks and if you like it.
Cyclone
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Needs about -15 ms GWAH! why are all of your offsets different? 7,714 offset.
Resnap all notes (make sure first note snaps correctly after doing that)
All difficulties need this.

Lunatic:
00:37:48 (2) - Snapped to a yellow tick. Needs to be on Red.
00:37:72 (3) - Slider ends on yellow tick. Needs to end on Blue. (don't map with 1/8 on. :P )

Hard: (I'll be less picky about the patterns since this isn't the hardest difficulty.)
00:29:25 (1) - Shorten this slider by 1/2 beat.
00:34:63 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Use Lunatic's new pattern.
01:02:32 (3) - I don't like how this slider extends one part of the song into the other. Shorten by 1 repeat and add a note at 01:03:48

Normal:
00:42:79 - Kinda feels like a break belongs here
01:01:56 (1) - 2 less repeats, 2 more notes. Or whatever else you decide to put there. The slider just lasts too long.
01:11:56 (9) - Any reason this isn't in line with the other notes?

Easy:
00:17:90 - Feels empty here, even if it is easy. Add a note.
01:49:82 (4) - End on a yellow tick. Needs to end on the white tick.
-SiN-
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oops, my bad... dunno why the offset of normal and the others are different >.<
I'll fix it when i get to home
-SiN-
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sry, Cyclone.. i got sick yesterday.. fixed ;p
Jeffro
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I already like the beatmap how it is. The map really feels natural in playing to me. Should be ranked imo. :)
-SiN-
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wow. thanks Jeffro ^^
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Your welcome. It´s a very nice map anyways :) Still playing it each day :D
Cyclone
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Song just came up on my playlist... Was named Hakurei Shrine Neighborhood Association Marching Song.... Anyways, I'll finish modding this soon i promise...

EDIT:

Mafiamaster wrote:

I'm seeing Hakurei Shrine Neighborhood Association Marching Song as the real name. But it's quite a long title so I guess maybe Hakurei Jinja would work? Your choice. :)
Accuracy is important around here, but let me ask peppy, because we hate long names as well.
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Cyclone wrote:

Needs about -15 ms GWAH! why are all of your offsets different? 7,714 offset.
Resnap all notes (make sure first note snaps correctly after doing that)
All difficulties need this.
I'm not going to mod any more until you complete my previous instructions.
Cyclone
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Catch me on IRC when you get this fixed. Also, peppy's solution for the song title. Keep it as is, and when you go back to work on it, stick the full title in the tags of the song info(which makes it searchable by that name) I'll then also make it so that title appears at the start of the song(the scrolling title thingy)
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updated
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Resnap all notes. I'm sure sure what, but something is moving. Besides, it can't hurt.

Lunatic:

00:59:63 (2) - Move back to the blue tick.
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done..
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Why did you snap in 1/8... *sigh*

Hard:
01:17:76 (3) - Snap
01:43:86 (5) - Was this always here? Change it, unless you are completely adament about keeping it.

Normal:
01:35:35 (1) - Snap
m980
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Cyclone wanted me to go check through this and post all nazi prettying up things here.

Normal
01:23:86 (2) - Come on.. this isn't even spaced properly..
01:36:56 (4,5,6) - Should be spaced the same as 01:35:35 (1,2,3)

Optional Stuff
Up 1 level 3 grid
00:07:71 (1) -
01:35:40 (1,2,3) -

Down 1 level 3 grid
00:09:25 (5) -
00:17:71 (3) -
00:31:94 (2) -
00:54:63 (4) -
01:09:25 (1,2,3,4) -
01:45:79 (2) -

Left 1 level 3 grid
01:21:17 (4) -
01:27:32 (4,5) -
01:28:48 (7) -
01:28:86 (8) - (x2)

Right 1 level 3 grid
00:54:63 (4) -
00:55:02 (5) - (x2)
00:55:40 (6) - (x3)
00:55:79 (7,8,9) - (x3)
01:20:02 (1) -

Other
01:49:44 (2,3) - Disable Grid, Move left until it looks horizontally symmetrical

Hard
01:43:86 (5) - NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOO
Get rid of it

Optional Stuff
00:59:82 (3,4,5) - Fix This (Tiny Really Minor Spacing Stuff)

Up 1 level 3 grid
00:14:82 (6) -
00:17:71 (5) -
00:17:52 (4) -

Down 1 level 3 grid
01:07:32 (6,7) -
01:10:21 (6,7,8) -

Left 1 level 3 grid
00:14:82 (6) -
00:17:71 (5) -
00:17:90 (6) -

Right 1 level 3 grid
00:08:29 (4,5) -
00:47:52 (1) -
01:07:32 (6,7) -
01:13:09 (3,4) -
01:36:94 (8) -

Other
01:49:44 (2,3) - Disable Grid, Move left until it looks horizontally symmetrical

Lunatic
Nothing! GG
Optional Stuff

Up 1 level 3 grid
00:22:13 (5,6,7,8) -
01:00:02 (4,5) -
01:05:59 (2,3) -
01:22:71 (15) -
01:28:09 (3,4,6) -
01:46:17 (3,4) -

Down 1 level 3 grid
00:31:56 (1,2) -
00:50:21 (9) -

Left 1 level 3 grid
00:14:25 (3,5,6) -
00:20:02 (1,2) -
00:30:40 (2) -
00:56:17 (1) -
01:00:02 (4,5) -
01:35:79 (3) -
01:38:48 (4) -

Right 1 level 3 grid
00:17:52 (4,5) -
00:17:90 (6) - (x2)
01:21:94 (12) -
01:28:48 (5) -
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