Nao Tomori wrote:
hello! i have some concerns with this map!
00:46:165 - from here to 01:14:205 - there are no 3/2 or longer break on muzu diff! even with much lower density starting at 00:55:865 - that still makes 8 measures without any break, the guideline is 4... and there are finishers and extended 1/2 mixed in too so it isn't like really low density to alleviate it. i suggest adding break moments in some places that don't feel awkward! for example, 00:50:656 - can be deleted very easily, and then for the second half 01:09:518 - being removed would be nice to break it up too!
also, OD on oni and inner seems unnecessarily high for this bpm and difficulty really. the longest patterns in inner are like 9-plets and overall density in oni is also quite low. why not just use normal od5 for both?
also you need tv size in title cuz its the ending song lol
also for the love of god change the top diff name to "Riko to Phyloukz no Yume" if ur gonna go with japanese dont stick an ampersand (&) in there - _ -
as for the muzukashii stuff, i believe the plethora of 1/1 breaks and rhythmic simplicity of the mentioned section does allow some leniency regarding the guideline
also the od as i see them now, don't know if they've been changed, they should be fine, though i do recommend changing the muzu's od to 5
good luck n stuff