Pattern00:21:337 (21337|0,21337|3,22004|2,22004|3) - I suggest change them to 1/3 short LN to create more space between LN and the note
i wanna make some challenging pattern00:34:004 how about
dis , cuz you just did doubletrill before
woooo nice00:47:670 (47670|1,47670|0) - i suggest dont use inconsistent LN while theres SV there. how about
dis, but add SV at 00:47:837 with 1.2x Value to make distance between double and quad, and change 00:47:670 SV value to 0.8x
00:50:893 (50893|2) - i suggest delete, cuz imo note between speedup and slowdown is confusing
00:51:004 (51004|1,51004|3,51004|0) - change them to LN, end at 00:50:893 (?)
00:45:670 (45670|0,45670|3,45670|1) - this too
00:53:004 (53004|0,53004|3,53004|1) - this too like sec 47, slowdown at start then speedup at middle before LN ends
00:58:337 (58337|1,58337|3,58337|2) - sec 47
01:07:337 (67337|1,68004|1,68670|1,69337|1) - are they intended (?) :0
01:10:004 (70004|1,70226|3) - theyre same sound , i suggest swap them 01:10:226 (70226|3,70337|1) -
01:10:559 (70559|2) - how about
dis01:12:004 how about add some [url===https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8734579]Mini LN[/url]
01:17:226 How about
dis01:19:893 (79893|0,80004|0) - move to col 2
01:27:948 (87948|2) - no beat (?)
01:28:282 (88282|2) - no beat (?)
01:37:337 (97337|3,97448|3,97670|0,97782|0,98004|3,98115|3) - i think minijack pattern at this part doesnt fit the song, how about just simple triple longnotes
01:43:226 (103226|1) - add note at 1
01:55:948 (115948|1) - no beat (?)
01:49:393 (109393|2,109448|1,109559|0,109559|3,109615|1) - how bout
dis01:50:615 (110615|1) - no beat (?)
01:55:948 (115948|1) - no beat (?) i think those no beat notes were intended to make difference with other patterns there, and
maybe thats ok
01:57:115 (117115|2) - add note at 4
01:58:670 (118670|3,118782|3,119004|0,119115|0,119337|3,119448|3) - like before (?)
02:02:670 dis part maybe add some
triples, but the difficulty spike ... >.>
02:17:004 (137004|2) - move to 4 cuz vocal
02:10:559 maybe like
dis02:07:893 how bout
dis02:09:226 dis too give some note
SVMy SV style is different from yours, so im sorry i couldnt help much with your SV*my SV mod depend on your pattern style--
00:22:670 (22670|0,22670|1,22670|3,23004|2,23004|0,23004|1,23337|2,23337|3,23337|1) - delete all SVs in this part, change them like this : (below)
00:22:559 add 1.3x
00:22:670 add 0.7x
00:22:837 add 1.3x
00:23:004 add 0.7x
00:23:170 add 1.3x
00:23:337 add 0.7x
00:23:504 add 1.3x
^if the SV too is too extreme try change 1.2 paired with 0.8
00:23:670 add 0.88
00:23:837 add 0.94
00:24:004 back to 1.0x
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00:44:004 (44004|2,44004|3,44004|0,44337|0,44337|2,44337|1,44670|2,44670|1,44670|3) - delete SV at this part, change them to : (below)
00:43:893 add 1.3x
00:44:004 add 0.7x
00:44:226 add 1.3x
00:44:337 add 0.7x
00:44:559 add 1.3x
00:44:670 add 0.7x
you can change to 1.2 0.8 ^
00:44:837 add 1.2x
00:44:948 add 0.8x
00:45:226 add 1.3x
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00:53:504 and 00:54:170 i suggest change value to 0.8x cuz it looks so fast
01:04:115 and 01:04:837 same like above^
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01:06:226 change value to 1.2x
01:06:337 use 0.8x here
01:06:559 use 1.2x here
01:06:670 back to 1.0x or maybe 0.9x if you want. if you use 0.9x
01:10:559 add 1.5x here. if you apply 0.9x mod above, speedup gradually until you reach 1.5
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01:38:337 change value to 0.7x
01:38:559 change value to 1.2x
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01:38:670 dis part you might want to add SV like nano death =D
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01:59:670 until 02:00:004 i think no need SV, maybe if you want just make 01:59:670 there 0.9x and 02:00:004 there 1.0x
02:02:337 until 02:02:670 same like above
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02:10:670 until 02:12:004 delete SV, change like : (below)
02:10:559 add 1.2x
02:10:670 add 0.7x
02:10:837 add 1.3x
02:11:004 add 0.7x
02:11:170 add 1.3x
02:11:337 add 0.7x
02:11:559 add 1.
2x
02:11:670 add 0.8x
02:11:893 add 1.2x
02:12:004 back to 1
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02:21:226 add 1.1x
02:21:337 change value to 0.5x
02:21:893 add 0.8x
02:22:004 add 1.3x and start teleporting them 02:22:004 (142004|2,142004|3,142115|2,142115|3,142226|3,142226|2,142337|1,142337|0,142448|1,142448|0,142559|0,142559|1) - with 1.3x and 0.6x
02:22:559 add 1.3x here
02:22:615 add 0.6x here
02:22:643 add 1.2x here
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02:33:004 delete SVs at last section, change to : (below)
02:32:337 add 1.10x
02:32:448 add 1.17x
02:32:559 add 1.25x
02:32:670 add 0.8x
02:32:893 add 1.2x
02:33:004 add 0.8x
02:33:226 add 1.2x
02:33:337 back to 1.0x