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Syadow-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, January 30, 2020 at 9:49:30 PM

Artist: Morimori Atsushi vs. uma
Title: Sweet* Witch* Girl*
Source: Muse Dash
Tags: happy halloween RTTF Records Triplet Hardcore FAMoss PeroPeroGames video game instrumental
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5360kb
Play Time: 02:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beginner Zombie - 4Key (1.49 stars, 480 notes)
  2. Hyper Pumpkin Head - 4Key (3.01 stars, 1250 notes)
  3. Insane Vampire - 4Key (3.64 stars, 1486 notes)
  4. Normal Skeleton - 4Key (2.2 stars, 762 notes)
  5. Sweet Witch - 4Key (4.28 stars, 1783 notes)
Download: Morimori Atsushi vs. uma - Sweet* Witch* Girl*
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 12th Beatmap Special Halloween
mp3 offset taken from souzirou1000's mapset
Metadata
HS DONE by FAMoss
Icon Log
Nom1 by Mys sama
Nom2 by et rivals
Nom1 by et rivals
Nom2 by Soda
WARNING!!!
SV + JACK
Arzenvald
> Normal Skeleton
much obvious, very sp00k, wow
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Arzenvald wrote:

> Normal Skeleton
much obvious, very sp00k, wow
H3h3h3
[Ping]
Hi from my mod queue
wow tasty diff name XD

1|2|3|4

Beginner Zombie
00:24:670 add a note
00:26:004 ^
00:28:670 ^

Normal Skeleton
00:13:449 mistake? move it down to 00:13:338

00:23:004 move the note on 3 to 2

01:06:337 move the LN on 3 to 4
01:06:670 move the note on 4 to 2

Hyper Pumpkin Head
nothing to say much on the diff

00:23:004 move note on 2 to 1 and note on 4 to 3

Sweet Witch
tbh this diff has so many jacks you should name it Jack O Lantern and then make a harder diff for Sweet Witch ;)

00:23:004 move the LN on 1 to 3 and LN on 2 to 4

00:45:670 suggestion: play the synth sound maybe as LN
00:51:004 ^
00:56:337 ^
01:01:670 ^

01:17:226 add a note on 2

01:41:337 add a note on 2
01:45:337 add a note on 3

01:53:337 - 01:54:670 Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8554384

GL
Topic Starter
Syadow-

TheNewBungping wrote:

Hi from my mod queue
wow tasty diff name XD

1|2|3|4

Beginner Zombie
00:24:670 add a note
00:26:004 ^
00:28:670 ^
i wanna make a flow before 00:29:004 (29004|0) -
00:27:337 (27337|1,28004|2) - this is last sound for roll so i add it

Normal Skeleton
00:13:449 mistake? move it down to 00:13:338 rip :u

00:23:004 move the note on 3 to 2 nice owo)b

01:06:337 move the LN on 3 to 4 nice
01:06:670 move the note on 4 to 2 nice

Hyper Pumpkin Head
nothing to say much on the diff

00:23:004 move note on 2 to 1 and note on 4 to 3 only move LN on 2 -> 3

Sweet Witch
tbh this diff has so many jacks you should name it Jack O Lantern and then make a harder diff for Sweet Witch ;) should i map pp diff xDD tbh i wanna make something like the empress XD MX diff

00:23:004 move the LN on 1 to 3 and LN on 2 to 4 only LN on 2 -> 1

00:45:670 suggestion: play the synth sound maybe as LN
00:51:004 ^
00:56:337 ^
01:01:670 ^
nope i prefer sv :v will consider this
01:17:226 add a note on 2 sure

01:41:337 add a note on 2 woki
01:45:337 add a note on 3woki

01:53:337 - 01:54:670 Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8554384 not intens part so keep

GL
Thanks Bungping >w<)b
UPDATED
[ NumLock ]
itu buat beginnernya njay :3
Topic Starter
Syadow-

[ NumLock ] wrote:

itu buat beginnernya njay :3
barusan dpt pencerahan :"V

Amiichii wrote:

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16:26 Amiichii: jadi?
16:26 Syadow-: jadi dung wkwkw
16:28 Amiichii: apdet dulu
16:28 *Amiichii is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1349931 Morimori Atsushi vs. uma - Sweet* Witch* Girl* [Sweet Witch]]
16:28 Syadow-: uda barusan wkwkww
16:28 Amiichii: aku yg update mksdnya
16:28 Amiichii: wkwk
16:28 Syadow-: :v wkwkww
16:30 Amiichii: weh 1/3
16:31 Syadow-: triplet is gud owo)b
16:31 Amiichii: 00:39:559 (39559|2,39559|1,39670|0,39670|2,39670|3) - swap
16:31 Amiichii: kebalik
16:32 Syadow-: eh maksud :'v ??
16:32 Amiichii: 00:42:448 - ada drum diignore?
16:32 Amiichii: mksdnya ctrl+G
16:32 Amiichii: jumlah note kebalik
16:32 Amiichii: yg simbal 2
16:32 Amiichii: yg hat malah 3
16:32 Amiichii: =w=
16:33 Syadow-: eh itu cymbal :"V
16:33 Syadow-: yg drum ga tau w ada apa kgk ;w;
16:34 Amiichii: ada lel
16:34 Amiichii: drum roll itu
16:34 Amiichii: 00:50:393 (50393|1,50448|2,50504|0,50559|1,50615|2) -ini slah snapnya
16:35 Syadow-: 1/4 yak wkwkw
16:36 Amiichii: ntah
16:36 Amiichii: cocoknya gini si menurutku http://puu.sh/wGT3h/55180ada98.jpg
16:36 Amiichii: =w=
16:36 Amiichii: wkwk
16:37 Amiichii: 1/4s aja kli ya?
16:37 Amiichii: wkwk
16:37 Amiichii: yg jls disitu ada 4 note :'v
16:38 Syadow-: :'v
16:38 Syadow-: iya 1/4 keknya wkwkw
16:38 Amiichii: klo kek SS ane itu snap yg bener
16:38 Amiichii: tp random
16:38 Amiichii: =w=
16:38 Syadow-: itu drum nya dmana :"v ga bisa ke notice sama w
16:38 Amiichii: mungkin offset kurang pass?
16:38 Amiichii: :v
16:39 Amiichii: 00:54:670 (54670|1,54670|0,55004|0,55004|2,55337|0,55337|3) - 1/3s oe end nya
16:39 Syadow-: :V njir wkwkw
16:39 Amiichii: 00:55:226 - ni adapiano
16:40 Amiichii: 00:55:726 (55726|1,55782|2,55837|3,55893|0,55948|1) - ini what for?
16:41 Syadow-: itu diignore yg pianos
16:41 Amiichii: ia piano diignore
16:41 Amiichii: tp cuman buat tanda aja
16:41 Amiichii: endnya di 1/3s
16:41 Amiichii: karna emang mapnya gitu
16:41 Amiichii: wkwk
16:41 Amiichii: end of LNs
16:41 Syadow-: woki siyap wkwkw
16:42 Syadow-: eh awal2 berarti 1/3 dong :V
16:42 Amiichii: 01:01:059 (61059|2,61115|1,61170|0,61226|2,61282|3) - mikir
16:42 Amiichii: iye
16:42 Amiichii: cuman gegara clap di01:01:004 (61004|3,61004|0) -
16:42 Amiichii: jadi dianggap burst
16:42 Amiichii: :thinking:
16:42 Amiichii: kwkw
16:43 Syadow-: wkwkw
16:43 Amiichii: 01:05:337 (65337|0,65337|3,65670|1,65670|3,66004|2,66004|3) -
16:43 Syadow-: itu double / triple ?
16:44 Amiichii: 01:32:115 - ga di add synth?
16:45 Amiichii: 01:35:782 - ga di add drum roll?
16:45 Amiichii: 01:46:448 - drum
16:45 Amiichii: ^01:47:782 -
16:46 Amiichii: 01:52:004 - ga dibuat burst 1/6s?
16:46 Syadow-: anjuu itu synth ngikuti sarannya pirtue buat remove asw
16:46 Amiichii: wkwk
16:46 Amiichii: remove ya gpp
16:46 Syadow-: ga :v aslinya uda ku add
16:47 Amiichii: 01:57:115 - drum
16:47 Amiichii: gpp
16:47 Amiichii: mungkin biar lebih ena
16:47 Amiichii: jadi lebi konsisten
16:47 Amiichii: wkwk
16:48 Syadow-: wkwkw :v anjay
16:48 Syadow-: dmana lagi drumnya wkwkw
16:48 Amiichii: 02:07:948 - add disini lah ya?
16:48 Amiichii: drum
16:48 Amiichii: burst
16:48 Amiichii: wkwk
16:49 Amiichii: biar zuzahan dikit
16:49 Amiichii: wkwk
16:49 Amiichii: klo iya dst ya diapply
16:49 Syadow-: wadoo 1/6 smua ?
16:49 Syadow-: double ?
16:49 Amiichii: 02:19:782 - drum
16:49 Amiichii: serah
16:50 Amiichii: cuman di02:07:948 - 02:09:282 - 02:10:615 -
16:50 Amiichii: wkwk
16:50 Syadow-: ku add 1 note aja yak wkwkw
16:50 Amiichii: ok
16:51 Syadow-: gpp ? :''v
16:51 Amiichii: gpp
16:51 Amiichii: =w=
16:52 Amiichii: biar rada bervariasi jg jacknya
16:52 Amiichii: wkwk
16:52 Amiichii: 00:37:670 - dobel?
16:52 *Amiichii is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1349929 Morimori Atsushi vs. uma - Sweet* Witch* Girl* [Hyper Pumpkin Head]]
16:52 Syadow-: :v wkwkw
16:53 Syadow-: sek sek blm ku apply ini :'''V
16:53 Amiichii: 00:38:337 - jg
16:53 Amiichii: ok
16:54 Amiichii: 00:45:782 (45782|3,45893|0,46115|2,46226|1,46448|2,46559|1,46782|0,46893|3,47115|1,47226|2,47448|1,47559|2) - what is this for?
16:54 Syadow-: okay lanjut
16:55 Syadow-: suara nya :v
16:55 Amiichii: suara apa?
16:55 Syadow-: keknya ga smua ._.
16:55 Amiichii: harder diff aja kopong?
16:55 Amiichii: -w-
16:55 Syadow-: kek ada suara pianos
16:55 Amiichii: piano kah?
16:55 Amiichii: oo
16:55 Syadow-: harder diff kan pakai esve ._.
16:55 Amiichii: 00:45:448 (45448|1) - no sound
16:56 Amiichii: 00:46:115 (46115|2) - no sound
16:56 Amiichii: 00:46:448 (46448|2) -
16:56 Amiichii: 00:46:782 (46782|0,47115|1,47226|2) -
16:56 Amiichii: cmiiw?
16:56 Amiichii: itu bkn yg dimksd?
16:56 Amiichii: awkawk
16:57 Syadow-: iyas
16:57 Syadow-: akwkakwa
16:57 Amiichii: 00:47:448 (47448|1,47559|2) - no osund
16:57 Amiichii: 00:48:115 (48115|0,48226|1,48448|0) -
16:57 Syadow-: suara kek nyamuk itu suara apaan yak mas ?
16:57 Amiichii: 00:48:782 (48782|3,48893|2,49115|3) -
16:58 Amiichii: ga mudeng
16:58 Amiichii: wkwk
16:58 Amiichii: ignore dah
16:58 Syadow-: :V
16:58 Syadow-: siyap wkwkw
16:59 Amiichii: 01:17:004 - 01:17:226 -
16:59 Amiichii: add la
16:59 Amiichii: piano
17:00 Amiichii: 01:23:115 (83115|2) - di harder kopong
17:00 Amiichii: wkwk
17:00 Syadow-: oki
17:00 Amiichii: add di harder
17:00 Amiichii: wwkw
17:00 Amiichii: 01:24:448 (84448|1) -
17:00 Amiichii: or sengaja?
17:00 Amiichii: awkawk
17:01 Amiichii: 01:25:115 - drum and synth ga diadd?
17:01 Amiichii: 01:32:059 - ga di add?
17:02 Amiichii: harder jg
17:02 Amiichii: wkwk
17:02 Syadow-: woki added
17:02 Syadow-: itu harder yg kopong w ngikut apaan yak :'vvv
17:02 Amiichii: no espe padahal
17:02 Amiichii: 01:35:782 - drum roll
17:03 Amiichii: emang ga dimap yauda
17:03 Amiichii: wkwk
17:03 Amiichii: klo w si dimap aja
17:03 Amiichii: buat feeling pergantian part
17:03 Syadow-: :v wkwkw suara apa itu mas
17:03 Amiichii: drum
17:03 Amiichii: -w-
17:03 Amiichii: snare si
17:03 Amiichii: bkn drum
17:03 Amiichii: awkawk
17:04 Amiichii: tehe
17:04 Syadow-: :vv kok w makin bingung yak wkaowkoawa
17:05 Amiichii: -w-
17:05 Amiichii: abaikan
17:05 Amiichii: awkawk
17:05 Amiichii: 01:47:782 - masa ga denger
17:05 Amiichii: 01:47:559 (107559|2,107670|0,107893|2) - segini pnjagnya
17:05 Amiichii: tek tek tek tek dung dung dung
17:06 Syadow-: oh iya :v
17:06 Amiichii: -w-
17:06 Amiichii: wkwk
17:07 Amiichii: 01:57:115 - ini ada :v
17:07 Amiichii: dst
17:07 Amiichii: wkwk
17:07 Syadow-: dst :v wkwkw
17:08 Amiichii: dah :v
17:08 Amiichii: sekian sajha
17:09 Syadow-: loh :V
17:13 Syadow-: wkwkwk thanks yak mas
thanks mas >w< *rip snap ;w;
Amiichii
.
16:26 Amiichii: jadi?
16:26 Syadow-: jadi dung wkwkw
16:28 Amiichii: apdet dulu
16:28 *Amiichii is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1349931 Morimori Atsushi vs. uma - Sweet* Witch* Girl* [Sweet Witch]]
16:28 Syadow-: uda barusan wkwkww
16:28 Amiichii: aku yg update mksdnya
16:28 Amiichii: wkwk
16:28 Syadow-: :v wkwkww
16:30 Amiichii: weh 1/3
16:31 Syadow-: triplet is gud owo)b
16:31 Amiichii: 00:39:559 (39559|2,39559|1,39670|0,39670|2,39670|3) - swap
16:31 Amiichii: kebalik
16:32 Syadow-: eh maksud :'v ??
16:32 Amiichii: 00:42:448 - ada drum diignore?
16:32 Amiichii: mksdnya ctrl+G
16:32 Amiichii: jumlah note kebalik
16:32 Amiichii: yg simbal 2
16:32 Amiichii: yg hat malah 3
16:32 Amiichii: =w=
16:33 Syadow-: eh itu cymbal :"V
16:33 Syadow-: yg drum ga tau w ada apa kgk ;w;
16:34 Amiichii: ada lel
16:34 Amiichii: drum roll itu
16:34 Amiichii: 00:50:393 (50393|1,50448|2,50504|0,50559|1,50615|2) -ini slah snapnya
16:35 Syadow-: 1/4 yak wkwkw
16:36 Amiichii: ntah
16:36 Amiichii: cocoknya gini si menurutku http://puu.sh/wGT3h/55180ada98.jpg
16:36 Amiichii: =w=
16:36 Amiichii: wkwk
16:37 Amiichii: 1/4s aja kli ya?
16:37 Amiichii: wkwk
16:37 Amiichii: yg jls disitu ada 4 note :'v
16:38 Syadow-: :'v
16:38 Syadow-: iya 1/4 keknya wkwkw
16:38 Amiichii: klo kek SS ane itu snap yg bener
16:38 Amiichii: tp random
16:38 Amiichii: =w=
16:38 Syadow-: itu drum nya dmana :"v ga bisa ke notice sama w
16:38 Amiichii: mungkin offset kurang pass?
16:38 Amiichii: :v
16:39 Amiichii: 00:54:670 (54670|1,54670|0,55004|0,55004|2,55337|0,55337|3) - 1/3s oe end nya
16:39 Syadow-: :V njir wkwkw
16:39 Amiichii: 00:55:226 - ni adapiano
16:40 Amiichii: 00:55:726 (55726|1,55782|2,55837|3,55893|0,55948|1) - ini what for?
16:41 Syadow-: itu diignore yg pianos
16:41 Amiichii: ia piano diignore
16:41 Amiichii: tp cuman buat tanda aja
16:41 Amiichii: endnya di 1/3s
16:41 Amiichii: karna emang mapnya gitu
16:41 Amiichii: wkwk
16:41 Amiichii: end of LNs
16:41 Syadow-: woki siyap wkwkw
16:42 Syadow-: eh awal2 berarti 1/3 dong :V
16:42 Amiichii: 01:01:059 (61059|2,61115|1,61170|0,61226|2,61282|3) - mikir
16:42 Amiichii: iye
16:42 Amiichii: cuman gegara clap di01:01:004 (61004|3,61004|0) -
16:42 Amiichii: jadi dianggap burst
16:42 Amiichii: :thinking:
16:42 Amiichii: kwkw
16:43 Syadow-: wkwkw
16:43 Amiichii: 01:05:337 (65337|0,65337|3,65670|1,65670|3,66004|2,66004|3) -
16:43 Syadow-: itu double / triple ?
16:44 Amiichii: 01:32:115 - ga di add synth?
16:45 Amiichii: 01:35:782 - ga di add drum roll?
16:45 Amiichii: 01:46:448 - drum
16:45 Amiichii: ^01:47:782 -
16:46 Amiichii: 01:52:004 - ga dibuat burst 1/6s?
16:46 Syadow-: anjuu itu synth ngikuti sarannya pirtue buat remove asw
16:46 Amiichii: wkwk
16:46 Amiichii: remove ya gpp
16:46 Syadow-: ga :v aslinya uda ku add
16:47 Amiichii: 01:57:115 - drum
16:47 Amiichii: gpp
16:47 Amiichii: mungkin biar lebih ena
16:47 Amiichii: jadi lebi konsisten
16:47 Amiichii: wkwk
16:48 Syadow-: wkwkw :v anjay
16:48 Syadow-: dmana lagi drumnya wkwkw
16:48 Amiichii: 02:07:948 - add disini lah ya?
16:48 Amiichii: drum
16:48 Amiichii: burst
16:48 Amiichii: wkwk
16:49 Amiichii: biar zuzahan dikit
16:49 Amiichii: wkwk
16:49 Amiichii: klo iya dst ya diapply
16:49 Syadow-: wadoo 1/6 smua ?
16:49 Syadow-: double ?
16:49 Amiichii: 02:19:782 - drum
16:49 Amiichii: serah
16:50 Amiichii: cuman di02:07:948 - 02:09:282 - 02:10:615 -
16:50 Amiichii: wkwk
16:50 Syadow-: ku add 1 note aja yak wkwkw
16:50 Amiichii: ok
16:51 Syadow-: gpp ? :''v
16:51 Amiichii: gpp
16:51 Amiichii: =w=
16:52 Amiichii: biar rada bervariasi jg jacknya
16:52 Amiichii: wkwk
16:52 Amiichii: 00:37:670 - dobel?
16:52 *Amiichii is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1349929 Morimori Atsushi vs. uma - Sweet* Witch* Girl* [Hyper Pumpkin Head]]
16:52 Syadow-: :v wkwkw
16:53 Syadow-: sek sek blm ku apply ini :'''V
16:53 Amiichii: 00:38:337 - jg
16:53 Amiichii: ok
16:54 Amiichii: 00:45:782 (45782|3,45893|0,46115|2,46226|1,46448|2,46559|1,46782|0,46893|3,47115|1,47226|2,47448|1,47559|2) - what is this for?
16:54 Syadow-: okay lanjut
16:55 Syadow-: suara nya :v
16:55 Amiichii: suara apa?
16:55 Syadow-: keknya ga smua ._.
16:55 Amiichii: harder diff aja kopong?
16:55 Amiichii: -w-
16:55 Syadow-: kek ada suara pianos
16:55 Amiichii: piano kah?
16:55 Amiichii: oo
16:55 Syadow-: harder diff kan pakai esve ._.
16:55 Amiichii: 00:45:448 (45448|1) - no sound
16:56 Amiichii: 00:46:115 (46115|2) - no sound
16:56 Amiichii: 00:46:448 (46448|2) -
16:56 Amiichii: 00:46:782 (46782|0,47115|1,47226|2) -
16:56 Amiichii: cmiiw?
16:56 Amiichii: itu bkn yg dimksd?
16:56 Amiichii: awkawk
16:57 Syadow-: iyas
16:57 Syadow-: akwkakwa
16:57 Amiichii: 00:47:448 (47448|1,47559|2) - no osund
16:57 Amiichii: 00:48:115 (48115|0,48226|1,48448|0) -
16:57 Syadow-: suara kek nyamuk itu suara apaan yak mas ?
16:57 Amiichii: 00:48:782 (48782|3,48893|2,49115|3) -
16:58 Amiichii: ga mudeng
16:58 Amiichii: wkwk
16:58 Amiichii: ignore dah
16:58 Syadow-: :V
16:58 Syadow-: siyap wkwkw
16:59 Amiichii: 01:17:004 - 01:17:226 -
16:59 Amiichii: add la
16:59 Amiichii: piano
17:00 Amiichii: 01:23:115 (83115|2) - di harder kopong
17:00 Amiichii: wkwk
17:00 Syadow-: oki
17:00 Amiichii: add di harder
17:00 Amiichii: wwkw
17:00 Amiichii: 01:24:448 (84448|1) -
17:00 Amiichii: or sengaja?
17:00 Amiichii: awkawk
17:01 Amiichii: 01:25:115 - drum and synth ga diadd?
17:01 Amiichii: 01:32:059 - ga di add?
17:02 Amiichii: harder jg
17:02 Amiichii: wkwk
17:02 Syadow-: woki added
17:02 Syadow-: itu harder yg kopong w ngikut apaan yak :'vvv
17:02 Amiichii: no espe padahal
17:02 Amiichii: 01:35:782 - drum roll
17:03 Amiichii: emang ga dimap yauda
17:03 Amiichii: wkwk
17:03 Amiichii: klo w si dimap aja
17:03 Amiichii: buat feeling pergantian part
17:03 Syadow-: :v wkwkw suara apa itu mas
17:03 Amiichii: drum
17:03 Amiichii: -w-
17:03 Amiichii: snare si
17:03 Amiichii: bkn drum
17:03 Amiichii: awkawk
17:04 Amiichii: tehe
17:04 Syadow-: :vv kok w makin bingung yak wkaowkoawa
17:05 Amiichii: -w-
17:05 Amiichii: abaikan
17:05 Amiichii: awkawk
17:05 Amiichii: 01:47:782 - masa ga denger
17:05 Amiichii: 01:47:559 (107559|2,107670|0,107893|2) - segini pnjagnya
17:05 Amiichii: tek tek tek tek dung dung dung
17:06 Syadow-: oh iya :v
17:06 Amiichii: -w-
17:06 Amiichii: wkwk
17:07 Amiichii: 01:57:115 - ini ada :v
17:07 Amiichii: dst
17:07 Amiichii: wkwk
17:07 Syadow-: dst :v wkwkw
17:08 Amiichii: dah :v
17:08 Amiichii: sekian sajha
17:09 Syadow-: loh :V
17:13 Syadow-: wkwkwk thanks yak mas
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    00:23:670 - tambah note aja di col 4 serasa hampa gitu kalau di kosongin
    00:33:004 (33004|1,34337|2) - hmm mungkin delete aja terlalu berat buat ez
    01:02:337 (62337|1,62670|2,63004|3) - ctrl + j baru geser ke kiri
    01:03:337 (63337|0) - pindah ke col 4 & 01:03:670 (63670|3) - ke col 3?
    01:05:337 - pindah ke col 1? & 01:05:670 - ke col 4 & 01:06:004 - ke col 3
    01:26:337 (86337|2) - di delete aja kan udah di cover sama ln 1 nya
    02:14:004 (134004|2) - pindah ke col 2 & 02:14:337 (134337|1) - ke col 3?
    02:27:004 (147004|0,147337|3,147670|3) - menurutku suaranya gak cocok jadi jack

    Normal Skeleton

    02:37:367 - mending ikut ln 1 nya aja finishnya

    Hyper Pumpkin Head

    01:03:893 (63893|2) - gak perlu sih kalau menurutku, delete aja
    01:49:115 (109115|1) - hapus aja menurutku


    01:38:670 - part favorite ku XD musik khas halloween
Penyihir Loleh

sorry late , moga membantu :(
GL luck pak :D
Virtue-
ngeng

rip chat
11:20 Syadow-: sne irc wkwkw
11:20 Syadow-: woe :V
11:20 Virtue-: anjay
11:20 Virtue-: kmrn ngajak irc
11:20 Virtue-: kgk mw
11:20 Virtue-: =w=
11:20 Virtue-: gua lg mw kelarin ini
11:20 *Virtue- is editing Halozy - GO 4 IT [Go For It Boiz]
11:21 Virtue-: trs minta mod dikit, lgsg di bub sm rival
11:21 Syadow-: awkoakowka yaudah :V post dlu aja
11:21 Syadow-: guendeng asw
11:21 Virtue-: :v
11:22 Virtue-: siap" mod map w :v
11:22 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/wHqkV/40bc6acd04.jpg
11:23 Syadow-: ah asw nih '
11:23 Syadow-: kapan itu marathon collab di sub :V
11:23 Virtue-: :v
11:23 Virtue-: idk
11:23 Virtue-: lu dah kelar?
11:23 Syadow-: blom
11:24 Virtue-: same :v
11:24 Syadow-: V: pada males smua asw
11:24 Virtue-: aowkoaw
11:24 Syadow-: akwoakokwa
11:24 Virtue-: abs gua kelar ni map, irc sama kau, kelarin 2 halozy, baru itu
11:24 Virtue-: ini jg bntr lagi lgsg tinggal copas flip
11:24 Virtue-: kiai dah mw kelar :v
11:25 Syadow-: :v wtf copas flih akowkaokowa
11:27 Virtue-: jeh serius :v
11:27 Virtue-: lu kira gua buat marathon gmn? :v
11:27 Virtue-: copas flip tiap ada yg sama
11:28 Virtue-: dan ada yg komen
11:28 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/wHqzn/58e9d5ad7c.png
11:29 Virtue-: pengen gua jawab, WHO CARES ABOUT COPY OVERUSING YOU FUK
11:31 Syadow-: :V akwoakokwa
11:32 Virtue-: ya lu maen g mungkin perhatiin pattern kan :'v
11:32 Syadow-: iya sih wakowkaok
11:32 Virtue-: mau lu copas trs lu flip, mau lu buat baru, mau lu nyolong pny org
11:32 Virtue-: ya who cares gitu :v
11:32 Syadow-: ss lu item doang anjuu
11:33 Virtue-: lah gblg :v
11:33 Virtue-: KWOAK
11:33 Virtue-: ;AJ
11:33 Virtue-: SS GUA KELIATAN GBLG
11:33 Syadow-: akowkaokowa
11:34 Virtue-: pc lu rusak :v
11:34 Virtue-: ganti
11:34 Virtue-: buang
11:34 Virtue-: bakar
11:35 Syadow-: v; ancok akowkoaka
12:01 Virtue-: dah mw kelar :v
12:01 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/wHrGZ/434583d628.jpg
12:03 Syadow-: et cok akowkaokw
12:04 Virtue-: :v
12:17 Virtue-: time to rest =w=
12:17 Virtue-: cape
12:17 Virtue-: 80%
12:17 Virtue-: 20 lagi :'v
12:19 Virtue-: 19%
12:20 Syadow-: 18%
12:20 Virtue-: blm gblg :v
12:20 Syadow-: 17% terus aja ;V
12:26 Virtue-: 17%
12:26 Virtue-: :vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
12:26 Syadow-: V: gilz
12:30 Virtue-: 15%
12:31 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/wHsFJ/8111ee5f1d.jpg
12:31 Virtue-: tinggal putih sama depan dikit
12:36 Virtue-: 14%
12:36 Virtue-: laper
12:36 Virtue-: makan dlu
13:47 Virtue-: 2% ;ago
13:48 Syadow-: coeg
13:48 Virtue-: typo :v
13:50 Virtue-: kelar :v
13:50 Syadow-: dih pas ku males wkwkw
13:51 Virtue-: oakwoakk
13:51 Virtue-: 3.86* but ada pattern wtf :v
13:51 Syadow-: :V
13:53 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/wHv9x/946982a707.osz
14:01 Syadow-: dih V:
14:02 Virtue-: [http://puu.sh/wHvqd/627b0d6681.jpg almost done part 2]
14:04 Syadow-: serah woe :V
14:04 Syadow-: kena garem terus w wwkwkw
14:05 Virtue-: :v
14:05 Virtue-: yg itu g buat ranked
14:05 Virtue-: cmn 4 fun
14:11 Syadow-: wwkwkw
14:15 Virtue-: now
14:15 Virtue-: mod my map
14:16 Syadow-: asw V:
14:16 Syadow-: sne sene wkwkwkw
14:17 *Virtue- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1354962 Halozy - GO 4 IT]
14:17 Virtue-: oo ye
14:17 Virtue-: irc dlu gblg :v
14:18 Virtue-: yg kmrn udh di benerin lom?
14:19 Syadow-: uda
14:19 Syadow-: sek tak update sek
14:19 Virtue-: ywdh :v
14:19 Virtue-: gwsh irc :v
14:20 Syadow-: wanjuu :V
14:20 Virtue-: :v
14:20 Syadow-: yok
14:20 *Virtue- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1349931 Morimori Atsushi vs. uma - Sweet* Witch* Girl* [Sweet Witch]]
14:21 Syadow-: w sampe ashr jam 2:45 an :V mao les wkwkw
14:21 Virtue-: ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
14:21 Virtue-: fuk
14:21 Virtue-: you
14:21 Virtue-: btw
14:21 Virtue-: 00:20:004 (20004|3,20004|0,20115|1,20115|3,20226|2,20226|3,20337|0,20337|1,20448|0,20448|2,20559|3,20559|0,20670|1,20670|2,20782|0,20782|3,20893|1,20893|0,21004|2,21004|1,21115|2,21115|3,21226|3,21226|0) -
14:21 Virtue-: rearrange
14:21 Virtue-: or
14:21 Virtue-: riot
14:21 Virtue-: D:<
14:22 Syadow-: g p p : V
14:22 Virtue-: pls
14:22 Virtue-: tolong
14:22 Virtue-: susah
14:22 Virtue-: 00:20:004 (20004|3,20115|3,20226|3,20337|0,20448|0,20559|0) -
14:22 Virtue-: wtf
14:22 Syadow-: ah lu ccd sih *run
14:23 Syadow-: yg mau kiai 4 kan gini jg ._.
14:24 Syadow-: jacknya ga seserem 1/4
14:24 Virtue-: =w=
14:24 Virtue-: ywdh :v
14:24 Virtue-: serah situ dah y :v
14:24 Virtue-: klo w blg sih ganti dah
14:24 Syadow-: entar aja kalo byk yg protes V:
14:25 Virtue-: gua suruh protes D:<
14:25 Syadow-: >:U
14:26 Virtue-: 1 problem lagi
14:26 Virtue-: 02:06:670 (126670|3,126670|2,126782|3,126782|2,126893|2,126893|3,127004|1,127004|0,127115|1,127115|0,127226|0,127226|1,127337|3,127337|2,127448|2,127448|3,127559|3,127559|2,127670|1,127670|0,127782|0,127782|1,127893|0,127893|1,127948|2,128004|3,128004|0,128115|0,128115|3,128226|3,128226|0,128337|2,128337|1,128448|2,128448|1,128559|1,128559|2,128670|0,128670|3,128782|3,128782|0,128893|3,128893|0,129004|2,129004|1,129115|1,129115|2,129226|2,129226|1,129282|3,129337|0,129337|2,129448|2,129448|0,129559|0,129559|2,129670|1,129670|3,129782|3,129782|1,129893|3,129893|1,130004|0,130004|2,130115|0,130115|2,130226|2,130226|0,130337|3,130337|1,130448|1,130448|3,130559|3,130559|1,130615|2,130670|0,130670|1) -
14:26 Virtue-: wtf
14:26 Virtue-: is this
14:26 Virtue-: fuckin
14:26 Virtue-: jack
14:27 Syadow-: msh bisa :v
14:27 Virtue-: ga
14:27 Syadow-: underrated
14:27 Virtue-: gbs :v
14:27 Virtue-: lebih cancer dr yg kmrn
14:28 Virtue-: dah itu ae
14:30 Syadow-: akwoakowka
14:32 Virtue-: dat spread
14:32 Virtue-: tolong :'v
14:32 Virtue-: masa Hny cmn 2.83 =w=
14:32 *Virtue- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1349929 Morimori Atsushi vs. uma - Sweet* Witch* Girl* [Hyper Pumpkin Head]]
14:33 Syadow-: nah itu pinginnya ngebuff
14:33 Virtue-: 01:07:337 (67337|3,68670|1) - double
14:34 Virtue-: 01:43:670 (103670|2) - double
14:35 Virtue-: 02:06:670 (126670|1,126670|0,126782|2,126893|1,127004|3,127004|0,127115|1,127226|2,127337|0,127337|3,127448|2,127559|1,127670|3,127670|0,127782|1,127893|2,128004|3,128004|0,128115|1,128226|3,128337|2,128337|0,128448|1,128559|3,128670|2,128670|0,128782|1,128893|3,129004|2,129004|0,129115|1,129226|2,129337|0,129337|3,129448|1,129559|2,129670|1,129670|0,129782|3,129893|2,130004|0,130004|1,130115|2,130226|1,130337|3,130337|0,130448|2,130559|1,130670|2,130670|3) -
14:35 Syadow-: woki
14:35 Virtue-: bikin jadi 12 34
14:35 Virtue-: ato gmn la
14:35 Virtue-: 14 23 14 23
14:35 Virtue-: 13 24 13 24
14:36 Virtue-: done
14:36 Virtue-: sisany gud
Topic Starter
Syadow-

ChochoaLatte- wrote:

Hi Pak :3
Req via Chat /=w=)/

Feel free to reject my mods

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  • Beginner

    00:23:670 - tambah note aja di col 4 serasa hampa gitu kalau di kosongin oki tp beda column, kalo sema dikira nyambung sama sebelumnya
    00:33:004 (33004|1,34337|2) - hmm mungkin delete aja terlalu berat buat ez re arranged bisa diliat perbedaannya :v
    01:02:337 (62337|1,62670|2,63004|3) - ctrl + j baru geser ke kiri woki
    01:03:337 (63337|0) - pindah ke col 4 & 01:03:670 (63670|3) - ke col 3? ke 4 terus lainnya rearrange
    01:05:337 - pindah ke col 1? & 01:05:670 - ke col 4 & 01:06:004 - ke col 3 rearranged jg
    01:26:337 (86337|2) - di delete aja kan udah di cover sama ln 1 nya gud
    02:14:004 (134004|2) - pindah ke col 2 & 02:14:337 (134337|1) - ke col 3? nais bole
    02:27:004 (147004|0,147337|3,147670|3) - menurutku suaranya gak cocok jadi jack woki changed

    Normal Skeleton

    02:37:367 - mending ikut ln 1 nya aja finishnya bole

    Hyper Pumpkin Head

    01:03:893 (63893|2) - gak perlu sih kalau menurutku, delete aja ku ngikuti suaranya, keep dlu deh
    01:49:115 (109115|1) - hapus aja menurutku bole + rearranged


    01:38:670 - part favorite ku XD musik khas halloween jiah :V


Penyihir Loleh

sorry late , moga membantu :(
GL luck pak :D
Thanks pak amir >w<)b gud mod

Virtue- wrote:

ngeng

rip chat
11:20 Syadow-: sne irc wkwkw
11:20 Syadow-: woe :V
11:20 Virtue-: anjay
11:20 Virtue-: kmrn ngajak irc
11:20 Virtue-: kgk mw
11:20 Virtue-: =w=
11:20 Virtue-: gua lg mw kelarin ini
11:20 *Virtue- is editing Halozy - GO 4 IT [Go For It Boiz]
11:21 Virtue-: trs minta mod dikit, lgsg di bub sm rival
11:21 Syadow-: awkoakowka yaudah :V post dlu aja
11:21 Syadow-: guendeng asw
11:21 Virtue-: :v
11:22 Virtue-: siap" mod map w :v
11:22 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/wHqkV/40bc6acd04.jpg
11:23 Syadow-: ah asw nih '
11:23 Syadow-: kapan itu marathon collab di sub :V
11:23 Virtue-: :v
11:23 Virtue-: idk
11:23 Virtue-: lu dah kelar?
11:23 Syadow-: blom
11:24 Virtue-: same :v
11:24 Syadow-: V: pada males smua asw
11:24 Virtue-: aowkoaw
11:24 Syadow-: akwoakokwa
11:24 Virtue-: abs gua kelar ni map, irc sama kau, kelarin 2 halozy, baru itu
11:24 Virtue-: ini jg bntr lagi lgsg tinggal copas flip
11:24 Virtue-: kiai dah mw kelar :v
11:25 Syadow-: :v wtf copas flih akowkaokowa
11:27 Virtue-: jeh serius :v
11:27 Virtue-: lu kira gua buat marathon gmn? :v
11:27 Virtue-: copas flip tiap ada yg sama
11:28 Virtue-: dan ada yg komen
11:28 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/wHqzn/58e9d5ad7c.png
11:29 Virtue-: pengen gua jawab, WHO CARES ABOUT COPY OVERUSING YOU FUK
11:31 Syadow-: :V akwoakokwa
11:32 Virtue-: ya lu maen g mungkin perhatiin pattern kan :'v
11:32 Syadow-: iya sih wakowkaok
11:32 Virtue-: mau lu copas trs lu flip, mau lu buat baru, mau lu nyolong pny org
11:32 Virtue-: ya who cares gitu :v
11:32 Syadow-: ss lu item doang anjuu
11:33 Virtue-: lah gblg :v
11:33 Virtue-: KWOAK
11:33 Virtue-: ;AJ
11:33 Virtue-: SS GUA KELIATAN GBLG
11:33 Syadow-: akowkaokowa
11:34 Virtue-: pc lu rusak :v
11:34 Virtue-: ganti
11:34 Virtue-: buang
11:34 Virtue-: bakar
11:35 Syadow-: v; ancok akowkoaka
12:01 Virtue-: dah mw kelar :v
12:01 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/wHrGZ/434583d628.jpg
12:03 Syadow-: et cok akowkaokw
12:04 Virtue-: :v
12:17 Virtue-: time to rest =w=
12:17 Virtue-: cape
12:17 Virtue-: 80%
12:17 Virtue-: 20 lagi :'v
12:19 Virtue-: 19%
12:20 Syadow-: 18%
12:20 Virtue-: blm gblg :v
12:20 Syadow-: 17% terus aja ;V
12:26 Virtue-: 17%
12:26 Virtue-: :vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
12:26 Syadow-: V: gilz
12:30 Virtue-: 15%
12:31 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/wHsFJ/8111ee5f1d.jpg
12:31 Virtue-: tinggal putih sama depan dikit
12:36 Virtue-: 14%
12:36 Virtue-: laper
12:36 Virtue-: makan dlu
13:47 Virtue-: 2% ;ago
13:48 Syadow-: coeg
13:48 Virtue-: typo :v
13:50 Virtue-: kelar :v
13:50 Syadow-: dih pas ku males wkwkw
13:51 Virtue-: oakwoakk
13:51 Virtue-: 3.86* but ada pattern wtf :v
13:51 Syadow-: :V
13:53 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/wHv9x/946982a707.osz
14:01 Syadow-: dih V:
14:02 Virtue-: [http://puu.sh/wHvqd/627b0d6681.jpg almost done part 2]
14:04 Syadow-: serah woe :V
14:04 Syadow-: kena garem terus w wwkwkw
14:05 Virtue-: :v
14:05 Virtue-: yg itu g buat ranked
14:05 Virtue-: cmn 4 fun
14:11 Syadow-: wwkwkw
14:15 Virtue-: now
14:15 Virtue-: mod my map
14:16 Syadow-: asw V:
14:16 Syadow-: sne sene wkwkwkw
14:17 *Virtue- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1354962 Halozy - GO 4 IT]
14:17 Virtue-: oo ye
14:17 Virtue-: irc dlu gblg :v
14:18 Virtue-: yg kmrn udh di benerin lom?
14:19 Syadow-: uda
14:19 Syadow-: sek tak update sek
14:19 Virtue-: ywdh :v
14:19 Virtue-: gwsh irc :v
14:20 Syadow-: wanjuu :V
14:20 Virtue-: :v
14:20 Syadow-: yok
14:20 *Virtue- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1349931 Morimori Atsushi vs. uma - Sweet* Witch* Girl* [Sweet Witch]]
14:21 Syadow-: w sampe ashr jam 2:45 an :V mao les wkwkw
14:21 Virtue-: ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
14:21 Virtue-: fuk
14:21 Virtue-: you
14:21 Virtue-: btw
14:21 Virtue-: 00:20:004 (20004|3,20004|0,20115|1,20115|3,20226|2,20226|3,20337|0,20337|1,20448|0,20448|2,20559|3,20559|0,20670|1,20670|2,20782|0,20782|3,20893|1,20893|0,21004|2,21004|1,21115|2,21115|3,21226|3,21226|0) -
14:21 Virtue-: rearrange
14:21 Virtue-: or
14:21 Virtue-: riot
14:21 Virtue-: D:<
14:22 Syadow-: g p p : V
14:22 Virtue-: pls
14:22 Virtue-: tolong
14:22 Virtue-: susah
14:22 Virtue-: 00:20:004 (20004|3,20115|3,20226|3,20337|0,20448|0,20559|0) -
14:22 Virtue-: wtf
14:22 Syadow-: ah lu ccd sih *run
14:23 Syadow-: yg mau kiai 4 kan gini jg ._.
14:24 Syadow-: jacknya ga seserem 1/4
14:24 Virtue-: =w=
14:24 Virtue-: ywdh :v
14:24 Virtue-: serah situ dah y :v
14:24 Virtue-: klo w blg sih ganti dah
14:24 Syadow-: entar aja kalo byk yg protes V:
14:25 Virtue-: gua suruh protes D:<
14:25 Syadow-: >:U
14:26 Virtue-: 1 problem lagi
14:26 Virtue-: 02:06:670 (126670|3,126670|2,126782|3,126782|2,126893|2,126893|3,127004|1,127004|0,127115|1,127115|0,127226|0,127226|1,127337|3,127337|2,127448|2,127448|3,127559|3,127559|2,127670|1,127670|0,127782|0,127782|1,127893|0,127893|1,127948|2,128004|3,128004|0,128115|0,128115|3,128226|3,128226|0,128337|2,128337|1,128448|2,128448|1,128559|1,128559|2,128670|0,128670|3,128782|3,128782|0,128893|3,128893|0,129004|2,129004|1,129115|1,129115|2,129226|2,129226|1,129282|3,129337|0,129337|2,129448|2,129448|0,129559|0,129559|2,129670|1,129670|3,129782|3,129782|1,129893|3,129893|1,130004|0,130004|2,130115|0,130115|2,130226|2,130226|0,130337|3,130337|1,130448|1,130448|3,130559|3,130559|1,130615|2,130670|0,130670|1) -
14:26 Virtue-: wtf
14:26 Virtue-: is this
14:26 Virtue-: fuckin
14:26 Virtue-: jack
14:27 Syadow-: msh bisa :v
14:27 Virtue-: ga
14:27 Syadow-: underrated
14:27 Virtue-: gbs :v
14:27 Virtue-: lebih cancer dr yg kmrn
14:28 Virtue-: dah itu ae
14:30 Syadow-: akwoakowka
14:32 Virtue-: dat spread
14:32 Virtue-: tolong :'v
14:32 Virtue-: masa Hny cmn 2.83 =w=
14:32 *Virtue- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1349929 Morimori Atsushi vs. uma - Sweet* Witch* Girl* [Hyper Pumpkin Head]]
14:33 Syadow-: nah itu pinginnya ngebuff
14:33 Virtue-: 01:07:337 (67337|3,68670|1) - double
14:34 Virtue-: 01:43:670 (103670|2) - double
14:35 Virtue-: 02:06:670 (126670|1,126670|0,126782|2,126893|1,127004|3,127004|0,127115|1,127226|2,127337|0,127337|3,127448|2,127559|1,127670|3,127670|0,127782|1,127893|2,128004|3,128004|0,128115|1,128226|3,128337|2,128337|0,128448|1,128559|3,128670|2,128670|0,128782|1,128893|3,129004|2,129004|0,129115|1,129226|2,129337|0,129337|3,129448|1,129559|2,129670|1,129670|0,129782|3,129893|2,130004|0,130004|1,130115|2,130226|1,130337|3,130337|0,130448|2,130559|1,130670|2,130670|3) -
14:35 Syadow-: woki
14:35 Virtue-: bikin jadi 12 34
14:35 Virtue-: ato gmn la
14:35 Virtue-: 14 23 14 23
14:35 Virtue-: 13 24 13 24
14:36 Virtue-: done
14:36 Virtue-: sisany gud
thanks yong lex :v)b

UPDATED
Verniy_Chan
Dear mapper~
ChochoaLatte- belum di kasih kodosu
kasihan dia sudah susah payah ngemod XD
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Dear mapper~
ChochoaLatte- belum di kasih kodosu
kasihan dia sudah susah payah ngemod XD
Perasaan w uda ku pencet deh kak wkwkww aduh :'v
@choco : Maap kan saia pak amir ;-;
Himari Kino
Waduh wkwk orapopo , kirain blum di update wwww ngeng~
DustMoon
hi~
1|2|3|4|
Sweet Witch
00:14:671 (14671|0) - move to 2 and00:14:671 (14671|1) - move to 1,because00:16:671 (16671|0) - this pitch is higher than00:14:671 (14671|0) -
00:18:005 (18005|1,18116|2,18227|1) - change LN,maybe same00:18:338 (18338|2,18449|1,18560|2) - but not same pitch ,is B#3
00:44:954 - snap?
01:10:559 (70559|3) - move to 3
01:14:559 (74559|3,74615|2,74670|1) - change pattern to (2,3,4),because01:15:337 (75337|1) - is loest piano sound
01:17:004 - add to 3
01:20:004 (80004|2) - move to 4,01:19:893 (79893|2,80004|2) - not same and you can find 01:20:004 (80004|2) - is higher than 01:19:893 (79893|2) -
01:38:337 (98337|1) - 01:59:670 (119670|1) - 02:02:337 (122337|2) - volcal? soft delete,
02:33:004 (153004|1) - change to single note
Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Syadow-

DustMoon wrote:

hi~ ayy
1|2|3|4|
Sweet Witch
00:14:671 (14671|0) - move to 2 and00:14:671 (14671|1) - move to 1,because00:16:671 (16671|0) - this pitch is higher than00:14:671 (14671|0) - okay
00:18:005 (18005|1,18116|2,18227|1) - change LN,maybe same00:18:338 (18338|2,18449|1,18560|2) - but not same pitch ,is B#3 the LN cover with sssssss sound
00:44:954 - snap? consider
01:10:559 (70559|3) - move to 3 gud
01:14:559 (74559|3,74615|2,74670|1) - change pattern to (2,3,4),because01:15:337 (75337|1) - is loest piano sound rearranged
01:17:004 - add to 3 nope different with 01:17:337 -
01:20:004 (80004|2) - move to 4,01:19:893 (79893|2,80004|2) - not same and you can find 01:20:004 (80004|2) - is higher than 01:19:893 (79893|2) - 01:19:893 (79893|2,80004|2) - this same w sound
01:38:337 (98337|1) - 01:59:670 (119670|1) - 02:02:337 (122337|2) - volcal? soft delete, nnope catchy sound, n for sign
02:33:004 (153004|1) - change to single note nice
Good luck! :)
thanks dusk >w<)///
Crumpey
As requested in Crumpey's Mod Queue!


Hyper Pumpkin Head
00:20:004 (20004|0,20115|1,20226|2,20337|3,20337|0,20448|1,20559|2,20670|0,20670|3,20782|1,20893|2,21004|0,21004|3,21115|1,21226|2) - i feel this stream should be descending to match the beat

00:25:670 (25670|3) - i get for consistancy, but theres no beat here

00:26:337 (26337|2) - no beat here either

why dont you map these beats 00:29:559 - 00:29:893 - 00:30:226 - etc

00:32:226 - you should map this beat as it fits the stream better

00:39:893 - a loud beat thats being ignored

00:44:004 (44004|0,44004|2,44337|3,44337|1,44670|0,44670|2) - you could make those lns

01:00:226 - you did it to the other 2, but not this one?

01:04:559 - 01:05:226 - 01:05:559 - 01:05:893 - why no note here?

01:08:670 (68670|1) - make a double for consistancy

01:27:893 - i think a note here would flow better

01:28:226 - for consistancy, put a note here

01:31:004 (91004|0,91337|0,91670|0,91893|0,92337|0,92782|0,93115|0,93337|0,93670|0) - i would consider avoiding that

01:41:337 (101337|1,101337|0) - 01:42:670 (102670|3,102670|2) - 01:43:004 (103004|1,103004|0,103337|2,103337|3) - make a single note (looking back maybe not, but something worth considering)

02:01:337 (121337|0,121337|1,121448|2,121448|3,121559|0,121559|1,121670|3,121670|2,121782|1,121782|0,121893|3,121893|2,122004|0,122004|1) - when testing this map i thought this jumptrill felt out of place, although not objectively wrong perhaps make this a stream of some sort

02:09:337 (129337|3,129337|2,129448|0,129448|1,129559|3,129559|2,129670|1,129670|0,129782|2,129782|3,129893|1,129893|0,130004|3,130004|2,130115|1,130115|0,130226|2,130226|3,130337|0,130337|1,130448|3,130448|2,130559|1,130559|0,130670|2,130670|3) - same here this time you make it start off really solid then turn into a boring old jumptrill continue the stream imo

02:33:337 (153337|3) - i dont get why this stops earlier the sound that i think your following keeps going, id say move it up to where the other one ends

Sorry for the wait, hit me up in pms sometime and ill do more diffs, rn i dont have as much time as i'd like <3 good song choice tho, really catchy
Topic Starter
Syadow-

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

As requested in Crumpey's Mod Queue!


Hyper Pumpkin Head
00:20:004 (20004|0,20115|1,20226|2,20337|3,20337|0,20448|1,20559|2,20670|0,20670|3,20782|1,20893|2,21004|0,21004|3,21115|1,21226|2) - i feel this stream should be descending to match the beat lul applied :v

00:25:670 (25670|3) - i get for consistancy, but theres no beat here no no no, not loud sound but uhh noticeable

00:26:337 (26337|2) - no beat here either teng ting ting ting 00:26:226 (26226|0,26337|2,26559|0,26670|3) -

why dont you map these beats 00:29:559 - 00:29:893 - 00:30:226 - etc make a similar with sweet witch diff

00:32:226 - you should map this beat as it fits the stream better woki

00:39:893 - a loud beat thats being ignored nice owo

00:44:004 (44004|0,44004|2,44337|3,44337|1,44670|0,44670|2) - you could make those lns applied in hardest diff

01:00:226 - you did it to the other 2, but not this one? holy :v naisu

01:04:559 - 01:05:226 - 01:05:559 - 01:05:893 - why no note here? focus on blam blam blam sound, will consider

01:08:670 (68670|1) - make a double for consistancy sure

01:27:893 - i think a note here would flow better naisu

01:28:226 - for consistancy, put a note here covered by LN

01:31:004 (91004|0,91337|0,91670|0,91893|0,92337|0,92782|0,93115|0,93337|0,93670|0) - i would consider avoiding that rearranged

01:41:337 (101337|1,101337|0) - 01:42:670 (102670|3,102670|2) - 01:43:004 (103004|1,103004|0,103337|2,103337|3) - make a single note (looking back maybe not, but something worth considering) cymbal

02:01:337 (121337|0,121337|1,121448|2,121448|3,121559|0,121559|1,121670|3,121670|2,121782|1,121782|0,121893|3,121893|2,122004|0,122004|1) - when testing this map i thought this jumptrill felt out of place, although not objectively wrong perhaps make this a stream of some sort okay :V

02:09:337 (129337|3,129337|2,129448|0,129448|1,129559|3,129559|2,129670|1,129670|0,129782|2,129782|3,129893|1,129893|0,130004|3,130004|2,130115|1,130115|0,130226|2,130226|3,130337|0,130337|1,130448|3,130448|2,130559|1,130559|0,130670|2,130670|3) - same here this time you make it start off really solid then turn into a boring old jumptrill continue the stream imo lmao, okay okay fixed

02:33:337 (153337|3) - i dont get why this stops earlier the sound that i think your following keeps going, id say move it up to where the other one ends bunnnnnnnn sound n ssssssssss sound


Sorry for the wait, hit me up in pms sometime and ill do more diffs, rn i dont have as much time as i'd like <3 good song choice tho, really catchy
thanks Crumpet >w<)b naisu mod
UDPATO
Ryzen_old_1

Another Lie wrote:

time to gebug creatornya pas turni >w<
ada 1 part macam beethoven w :v
Begineru Jombi
00:31:670 (31670|3) - better feeling if this is LN
00:32:670 (32670|0,32670|3) - planingnya, ini note masih belum masuk di suara panjang. baru masuk di 00:33:004 - kalopun masuk, mungkin jadi https://puu.sh/wPEcC.jpg (kalo)
00:38:004 - 00:38:670 - finish sound (consistency double notes)
00:39:004 - 00:39:337 - ^ (well, if rejected, perkiraan reason nya "too hard for easy" but you did it at 00:50:337 (50337|2,50670|0,50670|1) - & etc :v)
01:05:337 (65337|3,66004|3) - move ke col 3? reverse / balanced ver of 00:54:670 (54670|3,55004|0,55337|3) -
01:16:004 (76004|3,76004|0,76670|1,76670|2) - somehow ini buat gw triggered, 01:16:337 - kosong & 01:17:004 - can be placed as LN or something like this https://puu.sh/wPExa.jpg (if rejected, why 02:22:004 (142004|0,142337|1) - dijadiin satu?)
01:45:337 - kurang finish sound?
01:46:670 - ^
01:47:337 - ^
02:26:004 - ^
02:32:337 (152337|0,152670|3) - no good, suaranya menurun. jadiin 32
Normaru Tengkorak
00:21:559 (21559|0,22226|3) - secara suara sekilas, itu kemiripan 69%. tapi didengar secara niat, suaranya beda (consider moving this)
00:22:670 (22670|2,22670|0,23004|0,23004|1,23337|2,23337|0) - gmn kalo 43, 32, 12
01:06:670 - add 1 lagi mungkin? louder bump sound
mungkin sini 01:23:004 - sampai 01:24:670 - sini ga terlalu perlu 2 note (not as loud as finish sound)
01:25:670 - ^
01:26:004 - add note col 4?
Hyper Pala Labu
00:34:115 (34115|2,34226|1) - knp mereka diduakan, sementara mereka sama 00:34:337 (34337|2,34448|1,34559|2,34670|1) - ? kamu tidak adil pah :cry:
Sweet B*tch
00:20:670 (20670|1,20670|2,20782|3,20782|0,20893|1,20893|0,21004|2,21004|1,21115|3,21115|2,21226|0,21226|3) - :thonkang: yg lainnya stack 3, ini stack 2. coba https://puu.sh/wPFrB.jpg
00:33:226 (33226|1) - ini bisa diignore kalo prefer ke gameplay
00:34:004 (34004|1,34004|0,34115|1,34115|0,34226|0,34226|1,34337|3,34337|2,34448|2,34448|1,34559|0,34559|1) - *evil grin* coba ini https://puu.sh/wPFwh.jpg
01:03:893 (63893|1,63893|0,64004|1,64004|3,64004|0,64559|0,64670|3,64670|2) - apa bedanya?
01:26:559 (86559|3) - ini bisa diignore kalo prefer ke gameplay
01:54:559 (114559|0) - ^
02:01:337 (121337|1,121337|0,121448|0,121448|1,121559|1,121559|0,121670|3,121670|2,121782|3,121782|2,121893|2,121893|3,122004|0,122004|1) - mungkin sama kyk ss diatas, https://puu.sh/wPFKP.jpg
[SV]00:22:726 - 00:23:059 - 00:23:393 - no good kalo x0.90, buat dibawah 0.90 coba (0.85 masih termasuk slow dikit, saran 0.70)
00:29:115 - feeling slownya ga terlalu kuat -_- coba x0.80
01:05:337 - sampai 01:06:226 - consider adding SV for consistency
01:59:893 - ini namanya ngajak gelud mz >:( ga ada suara malah dikasih speedup
02:21:782 - 02:21:893 - apa efeknya kalo suaranya udah pudar? consider delete them
maunya sih ikutan nambahin additional dub SV, lagi ga enak
Sorry kalo kata2nya nusuk, tapi w lagi sakit. Semoga masuk panci oktober
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Ryzen wrote:

Another Lie wrote:

time to gebug creatornya pas turni >w< watde fak :V
ada 1 part macam beethoven w :v
Begineru Jombi
00:31:670 (31670|3) - better feeling if this is LN woooo
00:32:670 (32670|0,32670|3) - planingnya, ini note masih belum masuk di suara panjang. baru masuk di 00:33:004 - kalopun masuk, mungkin jadi https://puu.sh/wPEcC.jpg (kalo) rearranged bisa diliat abis apdet
00:38:004 - 00:38:670 - finish sound (consistency double notes)
00:39:004 - 00:39:337 - ^ (well, if rejected, perkiraan reason nya "too hard for easy" but you did it at 00:50:337 (50337|2,50670|0,50670|1) - & etc :v) sudah dijawab sendiri wkwkw v: n yg detik ke 50 itukan 8/4 beat jadi ga terlalu susah sih owo sedangkan yg 38s dll itu jarak nya 1/1 n 2/1
01:05:337 (65337|3,66004|3) - move ke col 3? reverse / balanced ver of 00:54:670 (54670|3,55004|0,55337|3) - bole
01:16:004 (76004|3,76004|0,76670|1,76670|2) - somehow ini buat gw triggered, 01:16:337 - kosong & 01:17:004 - can be placed as LN or something like this https://puu.sh/wPExa.jpg (if rejected, why 02:22:004 (142004|0,142337|1) - dijadiin satu?) rearranged yg terakhir keep :V ena buat pisah owo
01:45:337 - kurang finish sound?
01:46:670 - ^
01:47:337 - ^
02:26:004 - ^ ga :V
02:32:337 (152337|0,152670|3) - no good, suaranya menurun. jadiin 32 lain lain applied
Normaru Tengkorak
00:21:559 (21559|0,22226|3) - secara suara sekilas, itu kemiripan 69%. tapi didengar secara niat, suaranya beda (consider moving this) buat emphasis yg terakhir owo kalo w buat double entar susah ;w;
00:22:670 (22670|2,22670|0,23004|0,23004|1,23337|2,23337|0) - gmn kalo 43, 32, 12
01:06:670 - add 1 lagi mungkin? louder bump sound
mungkin sini 01:23:004 - sampai 01:24:670 - sini ga terlalu perlu 2 note (not as loud as finish sound) rearranged
01:25:670 - ^ hmm agak aneh gitu ._. keep dlu dah
01:26:004 - add note col 4? sedikit over ._. keep dlu
Hyper Pala Labu
00:34:115 (34115|2,34226|1) - knp mereka diduakan, sementara mereka sama 00:34:337 (34337|2,34448|1,34559|2,34670|1) - ? kamu tidak adil pah :cry: ikuti flow :"V
Sweet B*tch
00:20:670 (20670|1,20670|2,20782|3,20782|0,20893|1,20893|0,21004|2,21004|1,21115|3,21115|2,21226|0,21226|3) - :thonkang: yg lainnya stack 3, ini stack 2. coba https://puu.sh/wPFrB.jpg rearranged
00:33:226 (33226|1) - ini bisa diignore kalo prefer ke gameplay 1/3 jack ez lah wkwkw *slap
00:34:004 (34004|1,34004|0,34115|1,34115|0,34226|0,34226|1,34337|3,34337|2,34448|2,34448|1,34559|0,34559|1) - *evil grin* coba ini https://puu.sh/wPFwh.jpg ga :V entar kek itu 3 stack ^
01:03:893 (63893|1,63893|0,64004|1,64004|3,64004|0,64559|0,64670|3,64670|2) - apa bedanya? wasu lupa awkakwka
01:26:559 (86559|3) - ini bisa diignore kalo prefer ke gameplay ga ^
01:54:559 (114559|0) - ^ ga ^
02:01:337 (121337|1,121337|0,121448|0,121448|1,121559|1,121559|0,121670|3,121670|2,121782|3,121782|2,121893|2,121893|3,122004|0,122004|1) - mungkin sama kyk ss diatas, https://puu.sh/wPFKP.jpg gud fam :v)b
[SV]00:22:726 - 00:23:059 - 00:23:393 - no good kalo x0.90, buat dibawah 0.90 coba (0.85 masih termasuk slow dikit, saran 0.70) pakai 0,8x aja dah wkwkw
00:29:115 - feeling slownya ga terlalu kuat -_- coba x0.80 oki
01:05:337 - sampai 01:06:226 - consider adding SV for consistency kay
01:59:893 - ini namanya ngajak gelud mz >:( ga ada suara malah dikasih speedup hehehe keep bozz :V
02:21:782 - 02:21:893 - apa efeknya kalo suaranya udah pudar? consider delete them ga terlalu kerasa kok :')
maunya sih ikutan nambahin additional dub SV, lagi ga enak yha ;w;
Sorry kalo kata2nya nusuk, tapi w lagi sakit gewes. Semoga masuk panci oktober amin wkwkw
thanks ren o/ n wijen o//
UPDATED
error_exe777
Hello! From my Queue.

Note: these are all suggestions. if i made a mistake or you disagree do not apply it.

Beginner
00:32:004 to 00:33:337 is a difficulty spike for the diff. i highly recommend something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8657127, or change the layout to suit you

Normal
02:06:670 to 02:10:670 - the pattern doesn't fit, as the sounds are triplets. maybe this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8657197 , and end like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8657203

02:22:448 (142448|1,142559|2) - CTRL+J these

02:33:337 (153337|0) - end this here 02:37:337 - as the shhhhh sounds stops there

Hyper
no problems i could see

overall, very good mapset. would mistake it for being ranked honestly

sorry that i could only map two/three diffs. good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Syadow-

OwenF04 wrote:

Hello! From my Queue.

Note: these are all suggestions. if i made a mistake or you disagree do not apply it.

Beginner
00:32:004 to 00:33:337 is a difficulty spike for the diff. i highly recommend something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8657127, or change the layout to suit you okay okay :v -*0,02 wow, rearranged in my own way

Normal
02:06:670 to 02:10:670 - the pattern doesn't fit, as the sounds are triplets. maybe this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8657197 , and end like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8657203 little tricky here >:v but cool

02:22:448 (142448|1,142559|2) - CTRL+J these naisu

02:33:337 (153337|0) - end this here 02:37:337 - as the shhhhh sounds stops therena na na, follow the tttuuuuutttt sound

Hyper
no problems i could see

overall, very good mapset. would mistake it for being ranked honestly

sorry that i could only map two/three diffs. good luck! :)
thanks owen >w<)b
UPDATED
AchsanLovers
sorry lama ;w;

[General]
  1. already sure about metadata in here http://rttfrecords.com/works/rttf_0023/ but pls change * in artist be
    then title should be Sweet☆ Witch☆ Girl☆ and romanised already correct
  2. 02:06:670 - this should be a kiai time too! and make it and at 02:11:670 - ! karena lagunya yg kek gimana gitu kan :^ something that i learn from kawawa maps ._.

[jombie murah dijjual dijual]
  1. 00:14:671 (14671|2) - hmm, harusnya di col 1 ini, buat imbangin left right hand, reverse dari 00:13:005 (13005|2,13338|2,13671|3,14005|1,14338|1) -
  2. 00:18:671 (18671|0,19004|3,19337|1,19671|2) - bisa dibuat jack sih, buat ngikutin pitch disana, contoh http://puu.sh/wQLmk/5108b35871.JPG
  3. 00:23:670 (23670|2) - delete? dari 00:21:337 - udah fokus ke main sound jadi rasanya gaperlu ngemap vocal, biar ada impactnya juga sama 00:24:004 (24004|3,24004|1) - kan habis part itu, udah ada breaknya di 00:24:004 -
  4. 00:30:670 (30670|0) - should be move to 2, buat ikutin part yg 00:29:670 (29670|2,30004|0,30337|2) -
  5. 00:32:670 (32670|0) - change to normal note ?
  6. 00:54:004 (54004|1) - move to 4 ? buat reversenya dari 00:53:337 (53337|1,53337|0) - (kalau applied yg 00:54:670 (54670|3) - keep aja, biar impact sama 00:56:004 (56004|3,56004|2) - )
  7. 00:57:337 (57337|2,57670|1,58004|3) - 01:00:004 (60004|2,60337|3,60670|0) - ini bisa dibuat left hand note sih, kan pitch suaranya saling tukar tukar trus, sama kayak yg 01:05:337 (65337|2,65670|1,66004|2) -
  8. 01:11:004 (71004|1,71337|2) - should be move to 4 l 1, buat ikutin pertukaran pitch crash dari 01:10:670 (70670|0) -
  9. 01:12:448 (72448|1,72893|2,73115|1,73782|1) - move to 1 l 2 l 4 l 1, buat ikutin pitch piano nya
  10. 01:16:559 (76559|2) - should be start from 01:16:670 - , biar konsisten dgn rhythmnya yg 01:17:004 (77004|1) - , kan mulai dari tick yg merah itu kan..
  11. 01:27:004 (87004|2,87337|1) - should be move to 4 l 1 for pitch, and 01:27:670 (87670|3) - to 3 for make it consistent with vocal
  12. 01:49:337 - make a 1/1 LN for emphasize the sound?
  13. 02:11:004 (131004|2,131337|1) - move to 1 l 4 for pitch
  14. 02:20:226 (140226|2,140893|1) - wut? o.O why? seharusnya biarkan aja tetap 1/1 agar tetap konsisten dgn lagunya, tapi kenapa? hal itu jauh berbeda dari yg kayak, 02:30:670 (150670|3,150893|2,151337|0,151559|1) - ataupun 00:21:337 (21337|0,21559|1,22004|3,22226|2) -

[tengkorak sedang]
  1. 00:16:671 (16671|1) - move to 4 ? for pitch
  2. 00:19:337 (19337|1) - move to 4 too? col 4 seems kinda empty in here
  3. 00:32:670 (32670|0,32782|1,32893|2,33004|3,33115|2,33226|1,33337|3,33337|0) - oo fuk, gabisa dibuat dgn cara lain kah? :v kayak gini http://puu.sh/wQM4t/f99be86edd.JPG kek, di emphasize aja :v
  4. 00:39:670 (39670|1,39670|0) - should be in 00:39:893 - and in 1 note
  5. 00:44:337 (44337|2,44337|1,44670|1,44670|0) - should be 12 l 34 for pitch
  6. 00:55:004 (55004|1,55004|2,55337|3,55337|2) - same ^
  7. 01:22:226 (82226|3,82337|2) - oo pls, ctrl + j pls
  8. 01:38:670 - ~ 01:48:670 - , ini mending ikutin kick + snare aja, kalau diikutin sama vocal sama konsistent dgn rhythm yg skrg
  9. 02:01:337 - same thing just like i suggest in 00:32:670 -
  10. 02:06:670 - oke, jujur yg satu ini terlalu cancer buat diff NM , kan bisa aja dibuat LN invert kayak http://puu.sh/wQMl6/d79561b795.jpg
  11. 02:11:004 (131004|3,131004|2,131337|1,131337|2) - 12 l 34
  12. 02:16:670 - ye u know wat to do
  13. 02:20:004 - pretty weird pattern in here

[hyper kepala labu]
  1. 00:23:337 (23337|3,23337|1) - ctrl + H for pitch
  2. 00:32:782 - actually the snare start from here, so ye give 2 note too or single note will be work for 00:33:004 (33004|3,33004|2,33115|1,33115|0,33226|3,33226|2,33337|0,33337|1) - too
  3. 00:44:948 (44948|3) - should be start in red tick
  4. 00:45:337 - & 00:48:004 - k, so why both of they;re have a different pattern?
  5. 00:53:893 - add a note just like you did in 00:53:226 (53226|1) -
  6. 01:04:559 - ^
  7. 01:36:782 (96782|0,96893|1,97004|3,97004|2,97115|1,97226|0,97337|1,97337|3) - kinda unbalance for me

[jacknya luar binasa]
kek nyuri jack bethovennya bg lie :v
  1. 00:18:005 (18005|1,18116|2,18227|0) - should be 1/3 LN just like you do in 00:18:338 (18338|3,18449|1,18560|2) -
  2. 00:34:448 (34448|1,34448|2,34559|0,34559|1) - should be 3 4 to and for follow 00:34:337 (34337|3,34337|2) - and 00:34:670 (34670|2) - move to 2
  3. 00:50:615 (50615|1) - ghost note?
  4. 00:55:948 (55948|2) - ^
  5. 01:01:282 (61282|3) - ^
  6. 01:21:559 (81559|2,81670|1,81893|3) - should be jack too for this one
  7. 01:37:559 - add note for vocal?
  8. 01:52:004 - somehow i hear a 1/8 sound in here
  9. 01:53:337 (113337|2,113337|3,113448|0,113448|1,113559|3,113559|2,113670|0,113670|1,113782|3,113782|2,113893|0,113893|1,114004|2,114004|3,114115|0,114115|1,114226|3,114226|2,114337|1,114337|0,114448|2,114448|3,114559|0,114559|1) - i want this be jack too tbh, like this maybe http://puu.sh/wQMNy/8ce3dbf2dd.JPG awas ga di applied ini :v
  10. 01:58:893 - add note for vocal?
  11. 02:06:670 - ye, actually this is the best part i like, delete 02:07:948 (127948|2,129282|3,130615|2) - ? - ye i really know there's was a little sound, but actually you can ignore them, cuz you just focus to loud sound,
  12. 02:21:337 (141337|1) - move to col 1 ? for hand balance from 02:21:004 (141004|1,141004|0,141115|2,141115|3,141226|1,141226|0) -
  13. 02:33:004 (153004|1) - this should be LN too

well, gap both of hyper and sweet bitch witch kinda so far, so maybe you can nerf hyper to 3*
tbh i can make a X for this

dan jujur, 1 thn career mapping, da baru skali ini ngemod sepanjang ini, ga sadar wkwokwo :v

Good luck ~ take my stars, i love that jack <3
Topic Starter
Syadow-

AchsanLovers wrote:

sorry lama ;w;

[General]
  1. already sure about metadata in here http://rttfrecords.com/works/rttf_0023/ but pls change * in artist be
    then title should be Sweet☆ Witch☆ Girl☆ and romanised already correct woki
  2. 02:06:670 - this should be a kiai time too! and make it and at 02:11:670 - ! karena lagunya yg kek gimana gitu kan :^ hmm consider latersomething that i learn from kawawa maps ._.

[jombie murah dijjual dijual]
  1. 00:14:671 (14671|2) - hmm, harusnya di col 1 ini, buat imbangin left right hand, reverse dari 00:13:005 (13005|2,13338|2,13671|3,14005|1,14338|1) - bole dah
  2. 00:18:671 (18671|0,19004|3,19337|1,19671|2) - bisa dibuat jack sih, buat ngikutin pitch disana, contoh http://puu.sh/wQLmk/5108b35871.JPG awal2 uda sadis aja owo
  3. 00:23:670 (23670|2) - delete? dari 00:21:337 - udah fokus ke main sound jadi rasanya gaperlu ngemap vocal, biar ada impactnya juga sama 00:24:004 (24004|3,24004|1) - kan habis part itu, udah ada breaknya di 00:24:004 - noticeable ;w; agak aneh kalo di ignore
  4. 00:30:670 (30670|0) - should be move to 2, buat ikutin part yg 00:29:670 (29670|2,30004|0,30337|2) - tbh itu ngikuti 00:29:670 (29670|2,30004|0,30337|2,30670|0,31004|3,31337|1,31670|3,32004|1) -
  5. 00:32:670 (32670|0) - change to normal note ? ga kepikiran wkwkw gud
  6. 00:54:004 (54004|1) - move to 4 ? buat reversenya dari 00:53:337 (53337|1,53337|0) - (kalau applied yg 00:54:670 (54670|3) - keep aja, biar impact sama 00:56:004 (56004|3,56004|2) - ) woki
  7. 00:57:337 (57337|2,57670|1,58004|3) - 01:00:004 (60004|2,60337|3,60670|0) - ini bisa dibuat left hand note sih, kan pitch suaranya saling tukar tukar trus, sama kayak yg 01:05:337 (65337|2,65670|1,66004|2) - rearranged
  8. 01:11:004 (71004|1,71337|2) - should be move to 4 l 1, buat ikutin pertukaran pitch crash dari 01:10:670 (70670|0) - bole
  9. 01:12:448 (72448|1,72893|2,73115|1,73782|1) - move to 1 l 2 l 4 l 1, buat ikutin pitch piano nya hmm =w=
  10. 01:16:559 (76559|2) - should be start from 01:16:670 - , biar konsisten dgn rhythmnya yg 01:17:004 (77004|1) - , kan mulai dari tick yg merah itu kan.. iya iya :"V
  11. 01:27:004 (87004|2,87337|1) - should be move to 4 l 1 for pitch, and 01:27:670 (87670|3) - to 3 for make it consistent with vocal gud owo
  12. 01:49:337 - make a 1/1 LN for emphasize the sound? gud
  13. 02:11:004 (131004|2,131337|1) - move to 1 l 4 for pitch agak gmana gitu wkwkw oki
  14. 02:20:226 (140226|2,140893|1) - wut? o.O why? seharusnya biarkan aja tetap 1/1 agar tetap konsisten dgn lagunya, tapi kenapa? hal itu jauh berbeda dari yg kayak, 02:30:670 (150670|3,150893|2,151337|0,151559|1) - ataupun 00:21:337 (21337|0,21559|1,22004|3,22226|2) - efek copas :"V fixed

[tengkorak sedang]
  1. 00:16:671 (16671|1) - move to 4 ? for pitch woki
  2. 00:19:337 (19337|1) - move to 4 too? col 4 seems kinda empty in here okee
  3. 00:32:670 (32670|0,32782|1,32893|2,33004|3,33115|2,33226|1,33337|3,33337|0) - oo fuk, gabisa dibuat dgn cara lain kah? :v kayak gini http://puu.sh/wQM4t/f99be86edd.JPG kek, di emphasize aja :v tidaaakk :VV
  4. 00:39:670 (39670|1,39670|0) - should be in 00:39:893 - and in 1 note wooo
  5. 00:44:337 (44337|2,44337|1,44670|1,44670|0) - should be 12 l 34 for pitch gud
  6. 00:55:004 (55004|1,55004|2,55337|3,55337|2) - same ^ gud
  7. 01:22:226 (82226|3,82337|2) - oo pls, ctrl + j pls sure
  8. 01:38:670 - ~ 01:48:670 - , ini mending ikutin kick + snare aja, kalau diikutin sama vocal sama konsistent dgn rhythm yg skrg buat agak susah :V fixed
  9. 02:01:337 - same thing just like i suggest in 00:32:670 - kay
  10. 02:06:670 - oke, jujur yg satu ini terlalu cancer buat diff NM , kan bisa aja dibuat LN invert kayak http://puu.sh/wQMl6/d79561b795.jpg ini LN kliatan cancer jg di SS wkaokowka
  11. 02:11:004 (131004|3,131004|2,131337|1,131337|2) - 12 l 34 kay
  12. 02:16:670 - ye u know wat to do woooo
  13. 02:20:004 - pretty weird pattern in here fixed owo

[hyper kepala labu]
  1. 00:23:337 (23337|3,23337|1) - ctrl + H for pitch
  2. 00:32:782 - actually the snare start from here, so ye give 2 note too or single note will be work for 00:33:004 kay single owo(33004|3,33004|2,33115|1,33115|0,33226|3,33226|2,33337|0,33337|1) - too
  3. 00:44:948 (44948|3) - should be start in red tick consider
  4. 00:45:337 - & 00:48:004 - k, so why both of they;re have a different pattern? different owo
  5. 00:53:893 - add a note just like you did in 00:53:226 (53226|1) -
  6. 01:04:559 - ^
  7. 01:36:782 (96782|0,96893|1,97004|3,97004|2,97115|1,97226|0,97337|1,97337|3) - kinda unbalance for me

[jacknya luar binasa]
kek nyuri jack bethovennya bg lie :v aduhh ini jg bilang :V
  1. 00:18:005 (18005|1,18116|2,18227|0) - should be 1/3 LN just like you do in 00:18:338 (18338|3,18449|1,18560|2) -
  2. 00:34:448 (34448|1,34448|2,34559|0,34559|1) - should be 3 4 to and for follow 00:34:337 (34337|3,34337|2) - and 00:34:670 (34670|2) - move to 2
  3. 00:50:615 (50615|1) - ghost note? wrong snap, fixed
  4. 00:55:948 (55948|2) - ^
  5. 01:01:282 (61282|3) - ^
  6. 01:21:559 (81559|2,81670|1,81893|3) - should be jack too for this one
  7. 01:37:559 - add note for vocal? bikin jelek flownya
  8. 01:52:004 - somehow i hear a 1/8 sound in here ga :V
  9. 01:53:337 (113337|2,113337|3,113448|0,113448|1,113559|3,113559|2,113670|0,113670|1,113782|3,113782|2,113893|0,113893|1,114004|2,114004|3,114115|0,114115|1,114226|3,114226|2,114337|1,114337|0,114448|2,114448|3,114559|0,114559|1) - i want this be jack too tbh, like this maybe http://puu.sh/wQMNy/8ce3dbf2dd.JPG awas ga di applied ini :v bagian kalem asw yodah :V
  10. 01:58:893 - add note for vocal? ga
  11. 02:06:670 - ye, actually this is the best part i like, delete 02:06:670 - ye i really know there's was a little sound, but actually you can ignore them, cuz you just focus to loud sound, kay
  12. 02:21:337 (141337|1) - move to col 1 ? for hand balance from 02:21:004 (141004|1,141004|0,141115|2,141115|3,141226|1,141226|0) - already rearranged
  13. 02:33:004 (153004|1) - this should be LN too

well, gap both of hyper and sweet bitch witch kinda so far, so maybe you can nerf hyper to 3*
tbh i can make a X for this

dan jujur, 1 thn career mapping, da baru skali ini ngemod sepanjang ini, ga sadar wkwokwo :v

Good luck ~ take my stars, i love that jack <3
hey dude plz fix the nm n hd n mx gap :VVVVV WASOO
thanks yak san >w<)b
Unpredictable
ooh this song is pretty nice for upcoming halloween, i like it :]

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Beginner Zombie
- 01:26:004 you could do with a note on column 3 here imo. the sound here is impacted a lot and I don't think an LN is sufficient enough to emphasized like that
- 01:51:670 (111670|2) - I think this should be a LN imo. All of the notes in this short section (ex. 01:49:670 (109670|3,110004|2,110337|1,110670|0,111004|3,111337|1) - are all for the bass, but this note is more of a sudden shift before going into more bass. I think it would give the player an idea that this isn't another note representing bass.

Normal Skeleton
- 00:39:893 (39893|1) - how about moving this to column 4 and 00:40:004 (40004|3) - this to column 2? I think it would a nice touch to go with 00:40:337 (40337|3,40337|0) -
- 00:45:337 to 01:03:337 for a lot of the bass, you have doubles on every 1/3 on columns 1 & 2 and then columns 3 & 4. It follows the song as intended, but I feel you can switch it up a little. Playing this for a good 15 seconds tbh is boring and repetitive. Even something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8667924 this would be nice.
- 02:28:337 (148337|3) - maybe you can this to column 2 and 02:28:670 (148670|1) - this to column 4? I feel like your using column 4 a little bit too much so something like this can make it not so repetitive.

Hyper Pumpkin Head
- 00:37:782 (37782|2,37893|3,38004|2,38004|0) - instead of this, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8667958 ? imo this feels a lot better when playing
- 00:51:559 (51559|2) - how about moving this to column 4?
- 02:15:226 (135226|1) - maybe move this to column 1?

Sweet Witch
Couldn't find much to really complain about. Looks good. :)

Enjoy :D
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Unpredictable wrote:

ooh this song is pretty nice for upcoming halloween, i like it :]

1|2|3|4

Beginner Zombie
- 01:26:004 you could do with a note on column 3 here imo. the sound here is impacted a lot and I don't think an LN is sufficient enough to emphasized like that cool
- 01:51:670 (111670|2) - I think this should be a LN imo. All of the notes in this short section (ex. 01:49:670 (109670|3,110004|2,110337|1,110670|0,111004|3,111337|1) - are all for the bass, but this note is more of a sudden shift before going into more bass. I think it would give the player an idea that this isn't another note representing bass. woki

Normal Skeleton
- 00:39:893 (39893|1) - how about moving this to column 4 and 00:40:004 (40004|3) - this to column 2? I think it would a nice touch to go with 00:40:337 (40337|3,40337|0) - oki
- 00:45:337 to 01:03:337 for a lot of the bass, you have doubles on every 1/3 on columns 1 & 2 and then columns 3 & 4. It follows the song as intended, but I feel you can switch it up a little. Playing this for a good 15 seconds tbh is boring and repetitive. Even something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8667924 this would be nice. rearranged with new variation
- 02:28:337 (148337|3) - maybe you can this to column 2 and 02:28:670 (148670|1) - this to column 4? I feel like your using column 4 a little bit too much so something like this can make it not so repetitive. gud

Hyper Pumpkin Head
- 00:37:782 (37782|2,37893|3,38004|2,38004|0) - instead of this, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8667958 ? imo this feels a lot better when playing rearranged
- 00:51:559 (51559|2) - how about moving this to column 4? hmm seems weird ._. keep, gonna focus on 3/2 here
- 02:15:226 (135226|1) - maybe move this to column 1? ^

Sweet Witch
Couldn't find much to really complain about. Looks good. :) yay

Enjoy :D
Sankyuuu really unpredictable >w<)b
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Hi..........................................................................................................................
0|1|2|3
Warning: Most of these are my opinion (which is suck) so... also bad grammar
EZ Brain
00:26:670 (26670|3,27337|1,28004|2) - Change to 3,2,1 to fit the pitch?
01:24:004 (84004|2,84004|0) - Why double here?
01:32:670 (92670|3,92670|0) - ^
02:02:004 (122004|0,122004|1) - Maybe turn this into a single?
02:21:337 (141337|2) - Delete this
NM Brook
00:19:004 (19004|0,19337|3,19671|2) - Turn these into doubles
01:24:893 (84893|1) - Maybe add a note here?
Nothing much in this diff but I'd suggest to make these part like this 00:45:670 (45670|1,45670|0,46004|3,46004|2,46337|1,46337|0,46670|3,46670|2,47004|1,47004|0,47337|3,47337|2) more... diverse?
HD Obesity
00:15:671 (15671|3,16671|2) - Ctrl + G to fit with the pitch
01:39:559 (99559|1,99893|1) - Move to 0
01:49:559 (109559|1) - Add a note here?
Welp I'm terrible at modding harder diff + 1/3 so I can't say much
Stuff
All the notes are placed in 1/3 (wut?) so maybe change the bpm to 135?

Really gud map and song (^w^)b GL for ranking :)
Topic Starter
Syadow-

[B A D] wrote:

Hi..........................................................................................................................
0|1|2|3
Warning: Most of these are my opinion (which is suck) so... also bad grammar
EZ Brain
00:26:670 (26670|3,27337|1,28004|2) - Change to 3,2,1 to fit the pitch?
01:24:004 (84004|2,84004|0) - Why double here?
01:32:670 (92670|3,92670|0) - ^
02:02:004 (122004|0,122004|1) - Maybe turn this into a single?
02:21:337 (141337|2) - Delete this
NM Brook
00:19:004 (19004|0,19337|3,19671|2) - Turn these into doubles consider, double for emphasis 00:20:004 - okay rearranged some note n taraaa fixed
01:24:893 (84893|1) - Maybe add a note here?
Nothing much in this diff but I'd suggest to make these part like this 00:45:670 (45670|1,45670|0,46004|3,46004|2,46337|1,46337|0,46670|3,46670|2,47004|1,47004|0,47337|3,47337|2) more... diverse? rearranged in 2nd part
HD Obesity
00:15:671 (15671|3,16671|2) - Ctrl + G to fit with the pitch
01:39:559 (99559|1,99893|1) - Move to 0
01:49:559 (109559|1) - Add a note here?
Welp I'm terrible at modding harder diff + 1/3 so I can't say much
Stuff
All the notes are placed in 1/3 (wut?) so maybe change the bpm to 135? hmm i think the current bpm already correct n the snap too, cuz using triplet

Really gud map and song (^w^)b GL for ranking :) ay >w<)b
thanks bad >w< no reply = applied
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