Dear mapper~
ChochoaLatte- belum di kasih kodosu
kasihan dia sudah susah payah ngemod XD
ChochoaLatte- belum di kasih kodosu
kasihan dia sudah susah payah ngemod XD
Perasaan w uda ku pencet deh kak wkwkww aduh :'vVerniy_Chan wrote:
Dear mapper~
ChochoaLatte- belum di kasih kodosu
kasihan dia sudah susah payah ngemod XD
thanks dusk >w<)///DustMoon wrote:
hi~ ayy
1|2|3|4|Sweet WitchGood luck!00:14:671 (14671|0) - move to 2 and00:14:671 (14671|1) - move to 1,because00:16:671 (16671|0) - this pitch is higher than00:14:671 (14671|0) - okay
00:18:005 (18005|1,18116|2,18227|1) - change LN,maybe same00:18:338 (18338|2,18449|1,18560|2) - but not same pitch ,is B#3 the LN cover with sssssss sound
00:44:954 - snap? consider
01:10:559 (70559|3) - move to 3 gud
01:14:559 (74559|3,74615|2,74670|1) - change pattern to (2,3,4),because01:15:337 (75337|1) - is loest piano sound rearranged
01:17:004 - add to 3 nope different with 01:17:337 -
01:20:004 (80004|2) - move to 4,01:19:893 (79893|2,80004|2) - not same and you can find 01:20:004 (80004|2) - is higher than 01:19:893 (79893|2) - 01:19:893 (79893|2,80004|2) - this same w sound
01:38:337 (98337|1) - 01:59:670 (119670|1) - 02:02:337 (122337|2) - volcal? soft delete, nnope catchy sound, n for sign
02:33:004 (153004|1) - change to single note nice
thanks Crumpet >w<)b naisu modCrumpetFiddler wrote:
As requested in Crumpey's Mod Queue!Hyper Pumpkin Head00:20:004 (20004|0,20115|1,20226|2,20337|3,20337|0,20448|1,20559|2,20670|0,20670|3,20782|1,20893|2,21004|0,21004|3,21115|1,21226|2) - i feel this stream should be descending to match the beat lul applied :v
00:25:670 (25670|3) - i get for consistancy, but theres no beat here no no no, not loud sound but uhh noticeable
00:26:337 (26337|2) - no beat here either teng ting ting ting 00:26:226 (26226|0,26337|2,26559|0,26670|3) -
why dont you map these beats 00:29:559 - 00:29:893 - 00:30:226 - etc make a similar with sweet witch diff
00:32:226 - you should map this beat as it fits the stream better woki
00:39:893 - a loud beat thats being ignored nice owo
00:44:004 (44004|0,44004|2,44337|3,44337|1,44670|0,44670|2) - you could make those lns applied in hardest diff
01:00:226 - you did it to the other 2, but not this one? holy :v naisu
01:04:559 - 01:05:226 - 01:05:559 - 01:05:893 - why no note here? focus on blam blam blam sound, will consider
01:08:670 (68670|1) - make a double for consistancy sure
01:27:893 - i think a note here would flow better naisu
01:28:226 - for consistancy, put a note here covered by LN
01:31:004 (91004|0,91337|0,91670|0,91893|0,92337|0,92782|0,93115|0,93337|0,93670|0) - i would consider avoiding that rearranged
01:41:337 (101337|1,101337|0) - 01:42:670 (102670|3,102670|2) - 01:43:004 (103004|1,103004|0,103337|2,103337|3) - make a single note (looking back maybe not, but something worth considering) cymbal
02:01:337 (121337|0,121337|1,121448|2,121448|3,121559|0,121559|1,121670|3,121670|2,121782|1,121782|0,121893|3,121893|2,122004|0,122004|1) - when testing this map i thought this jumptrill felt out of place, although not objectively wrong perhaps make this a stream of some sort okay :V
02:09:337 (129337|3,129337|2,129448|0,129448|1,129559|3,129559|2,129670|1,129670|0,129782|2,129782|3,129893|1,129893|0,130004|3,130004|2,130115|1,130115|0,130226|2,130226|3,130337|0,130337|1,130448|3,130448|2,130559|1,130559|0,130670|2,130670|3) - same here this time you make it start off really solid then turn into a boring old jumptrill continue the stream imo lmao, okay okay fixed
02:33:337 (153337|3) - i dont get why this stops earlier the sound that i think your following keeps going, id say move it up to where the other one ends bunnnnnnnn sound n ssssssssss sound
Sorry for the wait, hit me up in pms sometime and ill do more diffs, rn i dont have as much time as i'd like <3 good song choice tho, really catchy
Another Lie wrote:
time to gebug creatornya pas turni >w<
ada 1 part macam beethoven w :vBegineru Jombi00:31:670 (31670|3) - better feeling if this is LN
00:32:670 (32670|0,32670|3) - planingnya, ini note masih belum masuk di suara panjang. baru masuk di 00:33:004 - kalopun masuk, mungkin jadi https://puu.sh/wPEcC.jpg (kalo)
00:38:004 - 00:38:670 - finish sound (consistency double notes)
00:39:004 - 00:39:337 - ^ (well, if rejected, perkiraan reason nya "too hard for easy" but you did it at 00:50:337 (50337|2,50670|0,50670|1) - & etc :v)
01:05:337 (65337|3,66004|3) - move ke col 3? reverse / balanced ver of 00:54:670 (54670|3,55004|0,55337|3) -
01:16:004 (76004|3,76004|0,76670|1,76670|2) - somehow ini buat gw triggered, 01:16:337 - kosong & 01:17:004 - can be placed as LN or something like this https://puu.sh/wPExa.jpg (if rejected, why 02:22:004 (142004|0,142337|1) - dijadiin satu?)
01:45:337 - kurang finish sound?
01:46:670 - ^
01:47:337 - ^
02:26:004 - ^
02:32:337 (152337|0,152670|3) - no good, suaranya menurun. jadiin 32Normaru Tengkorak00:21:559 (21559|0,22226|3) - secara suara sekilas, itu kemiripan 69%. tapi didengar secara niat, suaranya beda (consider moving this)
00:22:670 (22670|2,22670|0,23004|0,23004|1,23337|2,23337|0) - gmn kalo 43, 32, 12
01:06:670 - add 1 lagi mungkin? louder bump sound
mungkin sini 01:23:004 - sampai 01:24:670 - sini ga terlalu perlu 2 note (not as loud as finish sound)
01:25:670 - ^
01:26:004 - add note col 4?Hyper Pala Labu00:34:115 (34115|2,34226|1) - knp mereka diduakan, sementara mereka sama 00:34:337 (34337|2,34448|1,34559|2,34670|1) - ? kamu tidak adil pahSweet B*tchSorry kalo kata2nya nusuk, tapi w lagi sakit. Semoga masuk panci oktober00:20:670 (20670|1,20670|2,20782|3,20782|0,20893|1,20893|0,21004|2,21004|1,21115|3,21115|2,21226|0,21226|3) - :thonkang: yg lainnya stack 3, ini stack 2. coba https://puu.sh/wPFrB.jpg
00:33:226 (33226|1) - ini bisa diignore kalo prefer ke gameplay
00:34:004 (34004|1,34004|0,34115|1,34115|0,34226|0,34226|1,34337|3,34337|2,34448|2,34448|1,34559|0,34559|1) - *evil grin* coba ini https://puu.sh/wPFwh.jpg
01:03:893 (63893|1,63893|0,64004|1,64004|3,64004|0,64559|0,64670|3,64670|2) - apa bedanya?
01:26:559 (86559|3) - ini bisa diignore kalo prefer ke gameplay
01:54:559 (114559|0) - ^
02:01:337 (121337|1,121337|0,121448|0,121448|1,121559|1,121559|0,121670|3,121670|2,121782|3,121782|2,121893|2,121893|3,122004|0,122004|1) - mungkin sama kyk ss diatas, https://puu.sh/wPFKP.jpg
[SV]00:22:726 - 00:23:059 - 00:23:393 - no good kalo x0.90, buat dibawah 0.90 coba (0.85 masih termasuk slow dikit, saran 0.70)
00:29:115 - feeling slownya ga terlalu kuat -_- coba x0.80
01:05:337 - sampai 01:06:226 - consider adding SV for consistency
01:59:893 - ini namanya ngajak gelud mz ga ada suara malah dikasih speedup
02:21:782 - 02:21:893 - apa efeknya kalo suaranya udah pudar? consider delete them
maunya sih ikutan nambahin additional dub SV, lagi ga enak
thanks ren o/ n wijen o//Ryzen wrote:
Another Lie wrote:
time to gebug creatornya pas turni >w< watde fak :V
ada 1 part macam beethoven w :vBegineru Jombi00:31:670 (31670|3) - better feeling if this is LN woooo
00:32:670 (32670|0,32670|3) - planingnya, ini note masih belum masuk di suara panjang. baru masuk di 00:33:004 - kalopun masuk, mungkin jadi https://puu.sh/wPEcC.jpg (kalo) rearranged bisa diliat abis apdet
00:38:004 - 00:38:670 - finish sound (consistency double notes)
00:39:004 - 00:39:337 - ^ (well, if rejected, perkiraan reason nya "too hard for easy" but you did it at 00:50:337 (50337|2,50670|0,50670|1) - & etc :v) sudah dijawab sendiri wkwkw v: n yg detik ke 50 itukan 8/4 beat jadi ga terlalu susah sih owo sedangkan yg 38s dll itu jarak nya 1/1 n 2/1
01:05:337 (65337|3,66004|3) - move ke col 3? reverse / balanced ver of 00:54:670 (54670|3,55004|0,55337|3) - bole
01:16:004 (76004|3,76004|0,76670|1,76670|2) - somehow ini buat gw triggered, 01:16:337 - kosong & 01:17:004 - can be placed as LN or something like this https://puu.sh/wPExa.jpg (if rejected, why 02:22:004 (142004|0,142337|1) - dijadiin satu?) rearranged yg terakhir keep :V ena buat pisah owo
01:45:337 - kurang finish sound?
01:46:670 - ^
01:47:337 - ^
02:26:004 - ^ ga :V
02:32:337 (152337|0,152670|3) - no good, suaranya menurun. jadiin 32 lain lain appliedNormaru Tengkorak00:21:559 (21559|0,22226|3) - secara suara sekilas, itu kemiripan 69%. tapi didengar secara niat, suaranya beda (consider moving this) buat emphasis yg terakhir owo kalo w buat double entar susah ;w;
00:22:670 (22670|2,22670|0,23004|0,23004|1,23337|2,23337|0) - gmn kalo 43, 32, 12
01:06:670 - add 1 lagi mungkin? louder bump sound
mungkin sini 01:23:004 - sampai 01:24:670 - sini ga terlalu perlu 2 note (not as loud as finish sound) rearranged
01:25:670 - ^ hmm agak aneh gitu ._. keep dlu dah
01:26:004 - add note col 4? sedikit over ._. keep dluHyper Pala Labu00:34:115 (34115|2,34226|1) - knp mereka diduakan, sementara mereka sama 00:34:337 (34337|2,34448|1,34559|2,34670|1) - ? kamu tidak adil pah ikuti flow :"VSweet B*tchSorry kalo kata2nya nusuk, tapi w lagi sakit gewes. Semoga masuk panci oktober amin wkwkw00:20:670 (20670|1,20670|2,20782|3,20782|0,20893|1,20893|0,21004|2,21004|1,21115|3,21115|2,21226|0,21226|3) - :thonkang: yg lainnya stack 3, ini stack 2. coba https://puu.sh/wPFrB.jpg rearranged
00:33:226 (33226|1) - ini bisa diignore kalo prefer ke gameplay 1/3 jack ez lah wkwkw *slap
00:34:004 (34004|1,34004|0,34115|1,34115|0,34226|0,34226|1,34337|3,34337|2,34448|2,34448|1,34559|0,34559|1) - *evil grin* coba ini https://puu.sh/wPFwh.jpg ga :V entar kek itu 3 stack ^
01:03:893 (63893|1,63893|0,64004|1,64004|3,64004|0,64559|0,64670|3,64670|2) - apa bedanya? wasu lupa awkakwka
01:26:559 (86559|3) - ini bisa diignore kalo prefer ke gameplay ga ^
01:54:559 (114559|0) - ^ ga ^
02:01:337 (121337|1,121337|0,121448|0,121448|1,121559|1,121559|0,121670|3,121670|2,121782|3,121782|2,121893|2,121893|3,122004|0,122004|1) - mungkin sama kyk ss diatas, https://puu.sh/wPFKP.jpg gud fam :v)b
[SV]00:22:726 - 00:23:059 - 00:23:393 - no good kalo x0.90, buat dibawah 0.90 coba (0.85 masih termasuk slow dikit, saran 0.70) pakai 0,8x aja dah wkwkw
00:29:115 - feeling slownya ga terlalu kuat -_- coba x0.80 oki
01:05:337 - sampai 01:06:226 - consider adding SV for consistency kay
01:59:893 - ini namanya ngajak gelud mz ga ada suara malah dikasih speedup hehehe keep bozz :V
02:21:782 - 02:21:893 - apa efeknya kalo suaranya udah pudar? consider delete them ga terlalu kerasa kok :')
maunya sih ikutan nambahin additional dub SV, lagi ga enak yha ;w;
thanks owen >w<)bOwenF04 wrote:
Hello! From my Queue.
Note: these are all suggestions. if i made a mistake or you disagree do not apply it.Beginner00:32:004 to 00:33:337 is a difficulty spike for the diff. i highly recommend something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8657127, or change the layout to suit you okay okay :v -*0,02 wow, rearranged in my own wayNormal02:06:670 to 02:10:670 - the pattern doesn't fit, as the sounds are triplets. maybe this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8657197 , and end like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8657203 little tricky here >:v but cool
02:22:448 (142448|1,142559|2) - CTRL+J these naisu
02:33:337 (153337|0) - end this here 02:37:337 - as the shhhhh sounds stops therena na na, follow the tttuuuuutttt soundHyperno problems i could see
overall, very good mapset. would mistake it for being ranked honestly
sorry that i could only map two/three diffs. good luck!
hey dude plz fix the nm n hd n mx gap :VVVVV WASOOAchsanLovers wrote:
sorry lama ;w;
[General]
- already sure about metadata in here http://rttfrecords.com/works/rttf_0023/ but pls change * in artist be ☆
then title should be Sweet☆ Witch☆ Girl☆ and romanised already correct woki- 02:06:670 - this should be a kiai time too! and make it and at 02:11:670 - ! karena lagunya yg kek gimana gitu kan :^ hmm consider latersomething that i learn from kawawa maps ._.
[jombie murah dijjual dijual]
- 00:14:671 (14671|2) - hmm, harusnya di col 1 ini, buat imbangin left right hand, reverse dari 00:13:005 (13005|2,13338|2,13671|3,14005|1,14338|1) - bole dah
- 00:18:671 (18671|0,19004|3,19337|1,19671|2) - bisa dibuat jack sih, buat ngikutin pitch disana, contoh http://puu.sh/wQLmk/5108b35871.JPG awal2 uda sadis aja owo
- 00:23:670 (23670|2) - delete? dari 00:21:337 - udah fokus ke main sound jadi rasanya gaperlu ngemap vocal, biar ada impactnya juga sama 00:24:004 (24004|3,24004|1) - kan habis part itu, udah ada breaknya di 00:24:004 - noticeable ;w; agak aneh kalo di ignore
- 00:30:670 (30670|0) - should be move to 2, buat ikutin part yg 00:29:670 (29670|2,30004|0,30337|2) - tbh itu ngikuti 00:29:670 (29670|2,30004|0,30337|2,30670|0,31004|3,31337|1,31670|3,32004|1) -
- 00:32:670 (32670|0) - change to normal note ? ga kepikiran wkwkw gud
- 00:54:004 (54004|1) - move to 4 ? buat reversenya dari 00:53:337 (53337|1,53337|0) - (kalau applied yg 00:54:670 (54670|3) - keep aja, biar impact sama 00:56:004 (56004|3,56004|2) - ) woki
- 00:57:337 (57337|2,57670|1,58004|3) - 01:00:004 (60004|2,60337|3,60670|0) - ini bisa dibuat left hand note sih, kan pitch suaranya saling tukar tukar trus, sama kayak yg 01:05:337 (65337|2,65670|1,66004|2) - rearranged
- 01:11:004 (71004|1,71337|2) - should be move to 4 l 1, buat ikutin pertukaran pitch crash dari 01:10:670 (70670|0) - bole
- 01:12:448 (72448|1,72893|2,73115|1,73782|1) - move to 1 l 2 l 4 l 1, buat ikutin pitch piano nya hmm =w=
- 01:16:559 (76559|2) - should be start from 01:16:670 - , biar konsisten dgn rhythmnya yg 01:17:004 (77004|1) - , kan mulai dari tick yg merah itu kan.. iya iya :"V
- 01:27:004 (87004|2,87337|1) - should be move to 4 l 1 for pitch, and 01:27:670 (87670|3) - to 3 for make it consistent with vocal gud owo
- 01:49:337 - make a 1/1 LN for emphasize the sound? gud
- 02:11:004 (131004|2,131337|1) - move to 1 l 4 for pitch agak gmana gitu wkwkw oki
- 02:20:226 (140226|2,140893|1) - wut? o.O why? seharusnya biarkan aja tetap 1/1 agar tetap konsisten dgn lagunya, tapi kenapa? hal itu jauh berbeda dari yg kayak, 02:30:670 (150670|3,150893|2,151337|0,151559|1) - ataupun 00:21:337 (21337|0,21559|1,22004|3,22226|2) - efek copas :"V fixed
[tengkorak sedang]
- 00:16:671 (16671|1) - move to 4 ? for pitch woki
- 00:19:337 (19337|1) - move to 4 too? col 4 seems kinda empty in here okee
- 00:32:670 (32670|0,32782|1,32893|2,33004|3,33115|2,33226|1,33337|3,33337|0) - oo fuk, gabisa dibuat dgn cara lain kah? :v kayak gini http://puu.sh/wQM4t/f99be86edd.JPG kek, di emphasize aja :v tidaaakk :VV
- 00:39:670 (39670|1,39670|0) - should be in 00:39:893 - and in 1 note wooo
- 00:44:337 (44337|2,44337|1,44670|1,44670|0) - should be 12 l 34 for pitch gud
- 00:55:004 (55004|1,55004|2,55337|3,55337|2) - same ^ gud
- 01:22:226 (82226|3,82337|2) - oo pls, ctrl + j pls sure
- 01:38:670 - ~ 01:48:670 - , ini mending ikutin kick + snare aja, kalau diikutin sama vocal sama konsistent dgn rhythm yg skrg buat agak susah :V fixed
- 02:01:337 - same thing just like i suggest in 00:32:670 - kay
- 02:06:670 - oke, jujur yg satu ini terlalu cancer buat diff NM , kan bisa aja dibuat LN invert kayak http://puu.sh/wQMl6/d79561b795.jpg ini LN kliatan cancer jg di SS wkaokowka
- 02:11:004 (131004|3,131004|2,131337|1,131337|2) - 12 l 34 kay
- 02:16:670 - ye u know wat to do woooo
- 02:20:004 - pretty weird pattern in here fixed owo
[hyper kepala labu]
- 00:23:337 (23337|3,23337|1) - ctrl + H for pitch
- 00:32:782 - actually the snare start from here, so ye give 2 note too or single note will be work for 00:33:004 kay single owo(33004|3,33004|2,33115|1,33115|0,33226|3,33226|2,33337|0,33337|1) - too
- 00:44:948 (44948|3) - should be start in red tick consider
- 00:45:337 - & 00:48:004 - k, so why both of they;re have a different pattern? different owo
- 00:53:893 - add a note just like you did in 00:53:226 (53226|1) -
- 01:04:559 - ^
- 01:36:782 (96782|0,96893|1,97004|3,97004|2,97115|1,97226|0,97337|1,97337|3) - kinda unbalance for me
[jacknya luar binasa]kek nyuri jack bethovennya bg lie :v aduhh ini jg bilang :V
- 00:18:005 (18005|1,18116|2,18227|0) - should be 1/3 LN just like you do in 00:18:338 (18338|3,18449|1,18560|2) -
- 00:34:448 (34448|1,34448|2,34559|0,34559|1) - should be 3 4 to and for follow 00:34:337 (34337|3,34337|2) - and 00:34:670 (34670|2) - move to 2
- 00:50:615 (50615|1) - ghost note? wrong snap, fixed
- 00:55:948 (55948|2) - ^
- 01:01:282 (61282|3) - ^
- 01:21:559 (81559|2,81670|1,81893|3) - should be jack too for this one
- 01:37:559 - add note for vocal? bikin jelek flownya
- 01:52:004 - somehow i hear a 1/8 sound in here ga :V
- 01:53:337 (113337|2,113337|3,113448|0,113448|1,113559|3,113559|2,113670|0,113670|1,113782|3,113782|2,113893|0,113893|1,114004|2,114004|3,114115|0,114115|1,114226|3,114226|2,114337|1,114337|0,114448|2,114448|3,114559|0,114559|1) - i want this be jack too tbh, like this maybe http://puu.sh/wQMNy/8ce3dbf2dd.JPG
awas ga di applied ini :vbagian kalem asw yodah :V- 01:58:893 - add note for vocal? ga
- 02:06:670 - ye, actually this is the best part i like, delete 02:06:670 - ye i really know there's was a little sound, but actually you can ignore them, cuz you just focus to loud sound, kay
- 02:21:337 (141337|1) - move to col 1 ? for hand balance from 02:21:004 (141004|1,141004|0,141115|2,141115|3,141226|1,141226|0) - already rearranged
- 02:33:004 (153004|1) - this should be LN too
well, gap both of hyper and sweetbitchwitch kinda so far, so maybe you can nerf hyper to 3*tbh i can make a X for this
dan jujur, 1 thn career mapping, da baru skali ini ngemod sepanjang ini, ga sadar wkwokwo :v
Good luck ~ take my stars, i love that jack <3
Sankyuuu really unpredictable >w<)bUnpredictable wrote:
ooh this song is pretty nice for upcoming halloween, i like it :]
1|2|3|4Beginner Zombie- 01:26:004 you could do with a note on column 3 here imo. the sound here is impacted a lot and I don't think an LN is sufficient enough to emphasized like that cool
- 01:51:670 (111670|2) - I think this should be a LN imo. All of the notes in this short section (ex. 01:49:670 (109670|3,110004|2,110337|1,110670|0,111004|3,111337|1) - are all for the bass, but this note is more of a sudden shift before going into more bass. I think it would give the player an idea that this isn't another note representing bass. wokiNormal Skeleton- 00:39:893 (39893|1) - how about moving this to column 4 and 00:40:004 (40004|3) - this to column 2? I think it would a nice touch to go with 00:40:337 (40337|3,40337|0) - oki
- 00:45:337 to 01:03:337 for a lot of the bass, you have doubles on every 1/3 on columns 1 & 2 and then columns 3 & 4. It follows the song as intended, but I feel you can switch it up a little. Playing this for a good 15 seconds tbh is boring and repetitive. Even something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8667924 this would be nice. rearranged with new variation
- 02:28:337 (148337|3) - maybe you can this to column 2 and 02:28:670 (148670|1) - this to column 4? I feel like your using column 4 a little bit too much so something like this can make it not so repetitive. gudHyper Pumpkin Head- 00:37:782 (37782|2,37893|3,38004|2,38004|0) - instead of this, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8667958 ? imo this feels a lot better when playing rearranged
- 00:51:559 (51559|2) - how about moving this to column 4? hmm seems weird ._. keep, gonna focus on 3/2 here
- 02:15:226 (135226|1) - maybe move this to column 1? ^Sweet WitchCouldn't find much to really complain about. Looks good. yay
Enjoy
thanks bad >w< no reply = applied[B A D] wrote:
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Warning: Most of these are my opinion (which is suck) so... also bad grammarEZ Brain00:26:670 (26670|3,27337|1,28004|2) - Change to 3,2,1 to fit the pitch?
01:24:004 (84004|2,84004|0) - Why double here?
01:32:670 (92670|3,92670|0) - ^
02:02:004 (122004|0,122004|1) - Maybe turn this into a single?
02:21:337 (141337|2) - Delete thisNM Brook00:19:004 (19004|0,19337|3,19671|2) - Turn these into doubles consider, double for emphasis 00:20:004 - okay rearranged some note n taraaa fixed
01:24:893 (84893|1) - Maybe add a note here?
Nothing much in this diff but I'd suggest to make these part like this 00:45:670 (45670|1,45670|0,46004|3,46004|2,46337|1,46337|0,46670|3,46670|2,47004|1,47004|0,47337|3,47337|2) more... diverse? rearranged in 2nd partHD Obesity00:15:671 (15671|3,16671|2) - Ctrl + G to fit with the pitch
01:39:559 (99559|1,99893|1) - Move to 0
01:49:559 (109559|1) - Add a note here?
Welp I'm terrible at modding harder diff + 1/3 so I can't say muchStuffAll the notes are placed in 1/3 (wut?) so maybe change the bpm to 135? hmm i think the current bpm already correct n the snap too, cuz using triplet
Really gud map and song (^w^)b GL for ranking ay >w<)b
uhh okay, so i modif the first part's SV n than 2nd part with other sound + little sv insideKcHecKa wrote:
haha waltz song
Sweet Witch:
ok wow.
the whole fucking section rfrom 00:45:337 - and 01:06:445 -
could not have think of anything else? wow
too fucking late now bravo . xd
your putting way too much emphases on these sv, making a map that sure is ok and nice and all to look at but the playing aspect completely no.
the sv not even the problem, its just the lackluster mapping (seeing how this is supposed to be the HARDEST difficulty and all) a MERE 4 star at that
i get that the song is not all that exciting to some aspect, but seriously things couldve been done differently. literally about half the map is the same thing. but oh. throw some sv in there and you got yourself a masterpiece -.-
but hey, man its your map. completely up to you. good luck
gochal96 wrote:
Waaa nice map sya-
mungkin ngasih masukan yang diff Sweet Witch
setelah note ini 01:01:670 (61670|1) - mungkin daripada "23" dibuat jack aja like 11 nah di note selanjutnya bisa 44 lebih enak dikit menurutku
next, dibagian ini 01:06:670 (66670|2) - dibuat LN aja (kayanya lebih pas sama beat nya)
terus ini juga 01:07:337 (67337|1) - dan seterus nya (sama sih beat nya :v)
pola di sini 01:17:559 (77559|3) - terlalu monoton kayanya 43 43 43
di buat acak lebih enak nih somethings like 43 34 12 21
lebih worth it lah dengan diff 4*
semoga bermanfaat uda di chat :V post chatnya aja wkkww
genkicho wrote:
NM+ From My Mod Que
thxforcutepicthxforcutepicthxforcutepicthxforcutepict<3<3<3 >w<
col 1 2 3 4Sweet WitchPattern
00:21:337 (21337|0,21337|3,22004|2,22004|3) - I suggest change them to 1/3 short LN to create more space between LN and the note i wanna make some challenging pattern
00:34:004 how about dis , cuz you just did doubletrill before woooo nice
00:47:670 (47670|1,47670|0) - i suggest dont use inconsistent LN while theres SV there. how about dis, but add SV at 00:47:837 with 1.2x Value to make distance between double and quad, and change 00:47:670 SV value to 0.8x
00:50:893 (50893|2) - i suggest delete, cuz imo note between speedup and slowdown is confusing
00:51:004 (51004|1,51004|3,51004|0) - change them to LN, end at 00:50:893 (?)
00:45:670 (45670|0,45670|3,45670|1) - this too
00:53:004 (53004|0,53004|3,53004|1) - this too like sec 47, slowdown at start then speedup at middle before LN ends
00:58:337 (58337|1,58337|3,58337|2) - sec 47
01:07:337 (67337|1,68004|1,68670|1,69337|1) - are they intended (?) :0
01:10:004 (70004|1,70226|3) - theyre same sound , i suggest swap them 01:10:226 (70226|3,70337|1) -
01:10:559 (70559|2) - how about dis
01:12:004 how about add some [url===https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8734579]Mini LN[/url]
01:17:226 How about dis
01:19:893 (79893|0,80004|0) - move to col 2
01:27:948 (87948|2) - no beat (?)
01:28:282 (88282|2) - no beat (?)
01:37:337 (97337|3,97448|3,97670|0,97782|0,98004|3,98115|3) - i think minijack pattern at this part doesnt fit the song, how about just simple triple longnotes
01:43:226 (103226|1) - add note at 1
01:55:948 (115948|1) - no beat (?)
01:49:393 (109393|2,109448|1,109559|0,109559|3,109615|1) - how bout dis
01:50:615 (110615|1) - no beat (?)
01:55:948 (115948|1) - no beat (?) i think those no beat notes were intended to make difference with other patterns there, and maybe thats ok
01:57:115 (117115|2) - add note at 4
01:58:670 (118670|3,118782|3,119004|0,119115|0,119337|3,119448|3) - like before (?)
02:02:670 dis part maybe add some triples, but the difficulty spike ... >.>
02:17:004 (137004|2) - move to 4 cuz vocal
02:10:559 maybe like dis
02:07:893 how bout dis
02:09:226 dis too give some note
SV
My SV style is different from yours, so im sorry i couldnt help much with your SV
*my SV mod depend on your pattern style
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00:22:670 (22670|0,22670|1,22670|3,23004|2,23004|0,23004|1,23337|2,23337|3,23337|1) - delete all SVs in this part, change them like this : (below)
00:22:559 add 1.3x
00:22:670 add 0.7x
00:22:837 add 1.3x
00:23:004 add 0.7x
00:23:170 add 1.3x
00:23:337 add 0.7x
00:23:504 add 1.3x
^if the SV too is too extreme try change 1.2 paired with 0.8
00:23:670 add 0.88
00:23:837 add 0.94
00:24:004 back to 1.0x
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00:44:004 (44004|2,44004|3,44004|0,44337|0,44337|2,44337|1,44670|2,44670|1,44670|3) - delete SV at this part, change them to : (below)
00:43:893 add 1.3x
00:44:004 add 0.7x
00:44:226 add 1.3x
00:44:337 add 0.7x
00:44:559 add 1.3x
00:44:670 add 0.7x
you can change to 1.2 0.8 ^
00:44:837 add 1.2x
00:44:948 add 0.8x
00:45:226 add 1.3x
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00:53:504 and 00:54:170 i suggest change value to 0.8x cuz it looks so fast
01:04:115 and 01:04:837 same like above^
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01:06:226 change value to 1.2x
01:06:337 use 0.8x here
01:06:559 use 1.2x here
01:06:670 back to 1.0x or maybe 0.9x if you want. if you use 0.9x
01:10:559 add 1.5x here. if you apply 0.9x mod above, speedup gradually until you reach 1.5
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01:38:337 change value to 0.7x
01:38:559 change value to 1.2x
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01:38:670 dis part you might want to add SV like nano death =D
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01:59:670 until 02:00:004 i think no need SV, maybe if you want just make 01:59:670 there 0.9x and 02:00:004 there 1.0x
02:02:337 until 02:02:670 same like above
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02:10:670 until 02:12:004 delete SV, change like : (below)
02:10:559 add 1.2x
02:10:670 add 0.7x
02:10:837 add 1.3x
02:11:004 add 0.7x
02:11:170 add 1.3x
02:11:337 add 0.7x
02:11:559 add 1.2x
02:11:670 add 0.8x
02:11:893 add 1.2x
02:12:004 back to 1
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02:21:226 add 1.1x
02:21:337 change value to 0.5x
02:21:893 add 0.8x
02:22:004 add 1.3x and start teleporting them 02:22:004 (142004|2,142004|3,142115|2,142115|3,142226|3,142226|2,142337|1,142337|0,142448|1,142448|0,142559|0,142559|1) - with 1.3x and 0.6x
02:22:559 add 1.3x here
02:22:615 add 0.6x here
02:22:643 add 1.2x here
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02:33:004 delete SVs at last section, change to : (below)
02:32:337 add 1.10x
02:32:448 add 1.17x
02:32:559 add 1.25x
02:32:670 add 0.8x
02:32:893 add 1.2x
02:33:004 add 0.8x
02:33:226 add 1.2x
02:33:337 back to 1.0x
i think thats all =D goodluck! andthxforpict
aaaaaaa most of the pattern mod applied, n thanks for SV, it gave me inspiration >w< but not all SV mod applied
Thanks bang gochal, gen, peli(x) >w<)///FelixSpade wrote:
incoming mods :VV
bahasa indo aja ya? =w=Jombi pemula00:23:670 - mau ditambah single? kay
00:24:670 - 00:26:004 - 00:28:670 - isi single aja biar masih terasa beatnya hmm ga deh, fokus ke 4/1 terus 2/1 itu cover roll, terus akhirnya fokus ke kick
01:17:337 - notenya kurangin 1 aja, beatnya agak lemah gudtengkorak biasa00:44:948 - snapnya bung, 00:45:004 - sini aja ;'v (sama kyk diff lain disitu snapnya :v) khusus ez nm oki deh
01:00:670 - kyknya lbh enak lagi tambahin 1 LN smpe sini : 01:01:004 - nananana beda
01:23:004 (83004|0,84337|3) - kyknya gw gk denger apa2 disini '-' roll, tp gapapa wes changed
01:39:004 - 01:39:670 - 01:40:337 - 01:41:004 - 01:41:670 - 01:42:337 - 01:44:337 - 01:45:004 - 01:45:670 - 01:46:337 - 01:47:004 - 01:47:670 - 01:48:337 - 01:48:670 - : jadiin double aja gimana? biar sama spt bagian 01:28:004 - 01:38:670 - fokus ke cymbal mangkanya ku single inkepala labu hipertensi00:23:670 (23670|2) - diganti LN 1/3 aja biar cantik (saran) bole
00:31:559 - 00:42:448 - tambah 1 note? gud
00:46:448 (46448|1,46782|1,47115|1,47226|2) - ini mau tanya, ini ngikutin apa y? gw liat dan denger kesannya kyk ngedump gitu '-' ada suara sssssss nya owo keep
00:51:115 (51115|1,51782|2,52115|2,52448|3,52559|0) - ini juga '-' ^
segini aja dlu, lagi bingung kalo modding yg paling sulit
gudlak dah
mod lah wkwkw:V[ NumLock ] wrote:
mintaaa kudos mabahhhhhhhhhh :'v
Sankyuu >w<)bAcnos wrote:
From my queue General :Hyper Pumpkim Head :
- I love your beatmap and the song <3 aaaaa <3
Sweet Witch :
- 01:38:559 (98559|1) - add note bcs here there is a sound :3 consider,still focus on LN n Cymbal for emphasis
- I think that all is ok
Don't give me kudosus u.u
Good Luck!
nais modOscarRickyH02 wrote:
halu
NM req from queuesweet bwitch00:02:671 - idk aku ngerasanya suaranya lebih lemah daripada 00:03:005 mungkin dibalik yg rendahnya 1 tingginya jadi 2 syeeeett nice :"VVVV
00:37:559 (37559|2,37559|1) - ghost sih kayaknya, klo gak 1 note aja
00:38:226 (38226|1,38226|2) - ^
00:38:893 (38893|0,38893|1) - 1 aja
00:39:670 (39670|2,39670|0) - ^ hmm tbh itu suaranya keras owo
00:42:448 (42448|2) - klo ini mau 2 sebenernya juga bisa gud
00:50:337 - 1/3 deh kayanya suaranya ada 4 :"v
00:55:670 - ^
00:57:448 (57448|3,57782|2) - kayaknya ghost okay
01:02:782 (62782|0,63115|1) - ^
01:25:337 - koreksi dikit minijack, yg suaranya sama justru 01:25:448 (85448|0,85559|1) - sama 01:25:782 (85782|3,85893|2) - nais
01:32:004 - 1/6? kay
01:33:004 - double? woki
01:36:115 - sama kayak yg koreksi minijack kay
01:43:782 - 1 aja kayanya buat double bagian sini wkwkw
01:52:004 - um, 1/6nya baru mulai disini pak fixed
01:57:448 - koreksi minijack kay :V)b
02:07:337 (127337|3,127448|3,127559|3,127670|3,127782|3,127893|3) - kurang nyaranin ginian sih, mending tetep jack kiri-kanan aja divariasiin sama 1/12 dikit di 02:07:893 - 02:09:226 - 02:10:559 - tapi gatau sih jadi gimana(?) aslinya uda ada note cuma ga playable kalo 1/12
outro mirip intro modnya
karena gw gak bisa ngemap dibawah 4* mending yg lain gw biarin aja
GL
No Reply mean AppliedTofu1222 wrote:
Hi Mods through PM =w=
Sorry for the delay
[Hyper Pumpkin Head][Sweet Witch]
- 00:31:559 (31559|1,31670|3,31670|0,31782|2,31893|1,32004|2,32004|3) - this pattern is for the claps, but 00:32:226 (32226|1,32337|3,32337|0,32337|0,32448|2,32559|1,32670|0,32670|3,32670|2) - this pattern is for melody. Two different kinds of samples but u use same patterns, which will really make me feel confused at first glance. I suggest u vary the second pattern to something else
- 00:34:337 (34337|2,34337|3,34448|0,34448|1,34559|3,34559|2) - is there any obvious difference between these sounds and 00:34:115 (34115|2,34226|1) - ? for me actually not, but u still use single for first two and second for the others. I understand u wanna keep a good difficulty about this but actually this will threaten the consistency of this part. I would still suggest u to use single notes, or at least change 00:34:448 (34448|0,34448|1,34559|3,34559|2) - to single notes cuz 00:34:337 - it is ok to put double here with the addition of a melodic sound
- 00:48:893 (48893|3) - ghost note?
- better catch this sound, and u can vary pattern like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8775690
- 00:52:559 (52559|0) - ghost note? consider
- 00:57:893 (57893|2) - ^ consider
- 01:05:559 - miss one? no no just 1st n 3rd sound have 1/3 sound
- 01:32:448 (92448|2,92782|0,93115|0) - for simplification these sounds can be ignored. They are also too faint compared to other soiunds that u put notes on
That's all. Good luck! Crazy song and crazy map XD
- 00:22:670 - for PR i would suggest this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8775713
- 00:23:670 (23670|0) - if accept the previous one can move this to col3
- 00:31:559 (31559|3,31670|0,31670|2,31782|1,31893|2) - better make all of them to double because this part is similar to 00:32:670 (32670|0,32670|3,32782|2,32782|1,32893|3,32893|0,33004|1,33004|2,33115|0,33115|3,33226|2,33226|1) -
- 00:34:004 - for PR here is a nice way: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8775721 i think the second part is more louder so keep
- 00:45:670 - from here i bet this is much easier than your hyper diff. I would suggest u to actually catch more details about those melodic sounds like what u did in hyper diff
- 01:00:670 - something u can do to represent that eh h sound: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8775735
- 01:05:337 - u can try this way to add the piano sound inside your pattern to make it more fun =w=: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8775743 okay but 01:05:559 - not for it
- 01:36:670 - triple for crash
- 01:58:004 - ^
- 02:06:670 - crazy pattern lol but i like it =w= what i wanna suggest is better making the pattern to be in a group of half a bar or one whole bar, but not 3/4 of them. For instance, from 02:06:670 - to 02:07:559 - u grouped them, but this is 3/4 of a bar, and u can make one more such 3-jacks into patterns like this, or reduce the final 3-jack of this group to make it into the second part. I hope u can grasp my idea lol this is 1/3 remember topu :v it already fit with 3 jack
thanks shana >w<)b all applied except in red[Shana Lesus] wrote:
Hello Syadow
m4m
1 2 3 4Beginner Zombie00:14:671 (14671|0) - move to 1 or 00:15:671 (15671|0) - move to 3
01:42:670 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8799820
02:03:337 (123337|1,123670|0) - ctrl + g
02:04:670 (124670|1,125004|0) - ^
02:06:004 (126004|1,126337|0) - ^Normal Skeleton01:39:670 (99670|1,100004|1,100337|2,100670|2) - ctrl + g
02:03:337 (123337|0) - 02:04:670 (124670|3) - 02:06:004 (126004|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8799840 make this two lns and in hard diffHyper Pumpkin Head00:20:004 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8799848
00:33:004 (33004|2) - move to 4
01:39:337 (99337|1) - move to 3
01:40:670 (100670|1) - move to 1
01:41:004 (101004|2) - move to 2
01:41:893 (101893|2) - move to 2
01:42:337 (102337|1) - move to 3
01:44:559 (104559|1) - move to 1Sweet Witch00:19:448 (19448|2,19559|1,19782|2,19893|1) - ctrl + g
00:47:670 (47670|1) - change on normal note yha ;w; oki
00:53:004 (53004|1) - 00:58:337 (58337|2) - same ^
01:00:670 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8799876
01:03:670 (63670|2) - change on normal note
01:12:226 (72226|2,72448|1,72893|1,73115|0,73559|1,73782|2,74226|2,74448|3) - ^
01:53:337 - no no no, change on this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8799891 wooo nice
02:06:559 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8799898 and 02:09:337 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8799901 much nicer to play this patterns tbh i prefer jackhammer than jumptrill ;w; will consider it lets use this pattern uwu
Good luck, interesting map !
sankyuu inspire >w<Insp1r3 wrote:
Sweet Witch
00:25:337 (25337|1,25337|3) - Should be a single okay
00:26:670 (26670|1,26670|0) - ^ no, emphasis pianos
00:35:115 (35115|1) - Ghost i think this synth sound, will consider
00:35:782 (35782|3) - ^
00:47:226 (47226|0) - ^ kay
00:48:448 (48448|1) - ^ kay
I think you get the point. Go through your map and make sure that the notes you've placed actually have an audible sound that goes along with them.
01:17:893 (77893|2) - Move to [2]
01:18:004 (78004|3) - Move to [3]
01:18:226 (78226|0) - Move to [4]
Okay this part ^ really needs changing. If the pitch of the next note is lower then the first pitch, try to make the notes mimic that movement. Right to left for descending pitch, left to right for ascending pitch. okay rearranged
02:33:337 (153337|0) - This LN should end at 02:38:337 noo dat zzzzzzzz sound
The idea for the map is good, but it's way too overmapped. Get rid of the ghosts as they don't have any sounds to go along with the note playing which is completely unjustifiable and is very boring and confusing to play. will ask some player owo thank for point out
Hope all this info helps!Good luck!
sankyyuuu DD xDDDMythical wrote:
hey nerd
sweet witch
01:14:004 (74004|3,74004|0,74004|1) - This sound is a piano flourish, you should make the notes represent this by turning this chord into grace notes (offsetting one of the notes by 1/16th and another by 1/8th) nope i wanna focus on the sv so keep
02:06:559 (126559|1) - I strongly dislike your buildup here. (It's not very fun and doesn't utilise the players wrists appropriately)
I would repattern it so that this entire segment (02:06:559 (126559|1) - 02:10:670 (130670|2) ) was [12][12][34] https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10863374 which might seem stupid initially, but this alternates the players wrists in a decently easy manner, but also emphasises the song through decently invasive patterning - likewise, the buildup is emphasised by draining the players stamina on both hands (irregularly) my oldd oneeeeee :VVV i love this but some player suggest the other pattern lul, fix i'll use jackand then you would finish at 02:10:670 (130670|3,130670|2,130670|0,130670|1) - with a [1234] to close the emphasis strongly. (This plays significantly better than it looks, and I think is a great way of emphasising the song.) gud
02:11:004 (131004|1,131004|3,131337|0,131337|2) - Similarly, make these two notes [1234] too, to emphasise the recurring strong sounds and then create a difference to emphasise the use of a jump-LN at 02:11:670 (131670|2,131670|3). yesss
02:32:337 (152337|3) - you don't use streams for almost the entire chart, it's quite absurd to only introduce them here at the very end even if the song calls for it - I'd change these simply because the OHTrill motion is quite difficult in comparison to the jacks, but it isn't a bad use of a stream. remove stream n use 1/3 jack
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the top diff for this is quite well made - my favourite pattern is 1/3 jacks so maybe i'm slightly biased, but this was fun to play nevertheless. ayeee
thanks for mod >w<)bRiP46 wrote:
Henlo
From My Queue
Feel Free To Trash This Mod Away If U Don't Like It
1|2|3|4Easy
- 00:24:670 - add note since its too empty
- 00:26:004 - ^
- 00:28:670 - ^ buat jeda, kalo w map entar malah ga pas di 00:29:004 - suara kick , 00:27:337 - remove w baru sadar itu sama kek sblmnya :v
Normal
- 00:18:005 (18005|3,18227|2,18449|1) - IMO kurang pas, cocoknya tiap line merah dari 1/3 00:18:005 - 00:18:338 - & 00:18:338 - 00:18:671 - bole bole
Insane
- 00:20:004 - add note col 2
- 00:20:337 - ^ col 3
- 00:20:670 - ^ col 4
- 00:21:004 - ^ col 2
- 00:21:337 - ^ col 3
- 00:22:004 - ^ col 1 a bit hard for me but why not applied
- 01:28:059 - bisa dikasih note imo, kalo apply, ini juga 01:49:393 - oki
I love the song :3