thxCouil wrote:
sup, M4M req from my q
sorry for late mod : (0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 Insane00:06:656 (6656|2,6656|5,6845|2,6845|5) - Maybe change these so only one of em is a jack, for better playability? fixed
00:07:605 - 00:09:124 This section becomes a bit left handed, don't know if this is intentional or not, but if not i'd suggest to move a note or two to the other hand. both side are equal, just the left one is focusing on the 1/2 single and right is 1/1 double
00:10:833 (10833|1,10833|0) - Shouldn't this be a triple like previously? gonna keep this double since there is a LN involve
00:23:554 (23554|2,23554|0,23554|1,23554|5) - Why is this a quad? I feel like a triple would suffice here. delete 1
00:27:542 - Note for guitar here? I think it would make for a better flow if you added a note here. (this also applies to the same sounds a but further ahead) will ignore the guitar as intended
00:34:947 (34947|2,35137|4) - ctrl + h here (+ move one step to the left) since it's a different pitch from the other LNs? fixed in another way
00:58:111 (58111|5,58111|2,58301|2,58301|5) - Think only one of these should be a jack since they don't portray the same sound. they are same col to give more impact for the player, not for the pitch
00:59:820 (59820|5,59820|0,60200|5,60200|0) - These pitches are different, maybe move the middle LN to columns 1 and 4 and extend the LNs 1/1s? moved, but the length is clearly not 1/1
01:01:529 (61529|4,61719|4) - Should this be a jack? Seems kinda different from the rest of the patterns. I'd suggest you move it to column 3. it doesnt affect that much, so gonna keep this one
01:03:807 (63807|0,63807|2,63807|1) - Double? Or are you following something extra here? I'm guessing it's intentional so won't comment on the other triples. double LN as one is for the erhu and one for the bass
01:17:478 (77478|3,77858|4) - Swap columns? Since the pitches in the LNs are different from initial LNs. fixed
01:32:573 (92573|5,92573|3,92573|1) - Pretty sure these are supposed to be 1/6 snapped. 01:32:605 (might be wrong doe /shrug) sounds 1/4 to me, will ask more opinion on this from other peopleNormal00:34:377 (34377|3,34757|5) - Maybe remove these, since you mapped this sound without them before. It feels like they comes out of nowhere and i'd assume it would be pretty hard for someone at this lvl of play to adjust to this pattern fast enough. done
00:39:504 (39504|5,39504|2,39883|0,39883|3) - What are these LNs following? It sounds like they're following the bass-guitar first but then I assume they're following the vocals? I'd suggest changing the second set, 00:39:883 (39883|3,39883|0), to normal note, to better distinguish the two sounds. changed to single LN
00:45:959 (45959|0,45959|3) - ^ this one to normal note
01:00:959 (60959|0,61149|0) - Feels a bit weird with this random jack all of a sudden. Maybe make it a trill for better consistency with the rest of the song?
01:14:440 (74440|1) - Different pitch from 01:11:402 (71402|1). Maybe move this one to column 0 to show that?quite sure they are the same, just the volume is lower
The end is maybe a bit repetitive, but it's fine to play so i don't mind it too much.
Nice map! Again, sorry for the late mod : ( School + lack of motivation is dangerous TBH.
GL ranking it!