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Nice map! Again, sorry for the late mod : ( School + lack of motivation is dangerous TBH.
GL ranking it!
sorry for late mod : (
Insane
00:06:656 (6656|2,6656|5,6845|2,6845|5) - Maybe change these so only one of em is a jack, for better playability?
00:07:605 - 00:09:124 This section becomes a bit left handed, don't know if this is intentional or not, but if not i'd suggest to move a note or two to the other hand.
00:10:833 (10833|1,10833|0) - Shouldn't this be a triple like previously?
00:23:554 (23554|2,23554|0,23554|1,23554|5) - Why is this a quad? I feel like a triple would suffice here.
00:27:542 - Note for guitar here? I think it would make for a better flow if you added a note here. (this also applies to the same sounds a but further ahead)
00:34:947 (34947|2,35137|4) - ctrl + h here (+ move one step to the left) since it's a different pitch from the other LNs?
00:58:111 (58111|5,58111|2,58301|2,58301|5) - Think only one of these should be a jack since they don't portray the same sound.
00:59:820 (59820|5,59820|0,60200|5,60200|0) - These pitches are different, maybe move the middle LN to columns 1 and 4 and extend the LNs 1/1s?
01:01:529 (61529|4,61719|4) - Should this be a jack? Seems kinda different from the rest of the patterns. I'd suggest you move it to column 3.
01:03:807 (63807|0,63807|2,63807|1) - Double? Or are you following something extra here? I'm guessing it's intentional so won't comment on the other triples.
01:17:478 (77478|3,77858|4) - Swap columns? Since the pitches in the LNs are different from initial LNs.
01:32:573 (92573|5,92573|3,92573|1) - Pretty sure these are supposed to be 1/6 snapped. 01:32:605 (might be wrong doe /shrug)
00:07:605 - 00:09:124 This section becomes a bit left handed, don't know if this is intentional or not, but if not i'd suggest to move a note or two to the other hand.
00:10:833 (10833|1,10833|0) - Shouldn't this be a triple like previously?
00:23:554 (23554|2,23554|0,23554|1,23554|5) - Why is this a quad? I feel like a triple would suffice here.
00:27:542 - Note for guitar here? I think it would make for a better flow if you added a note here. (this also applies to the same sounds a but further ahead)
00:34:947 (34947|2,35137|4) - ctrl + h here (+ move one step to the left) since it's a different pitch from the other LNs?
00:58:111 (58111|5,58111|2,58301|2,58301|5) - Think only one of these should be a jack since they don't portray the same sound.
00:59:820 (59820|5,59820|0,60200|5,60200|0) - These pitches are different, maybe move the middle LN to columns 1 and 4 and extend the LNs 1/1s?
01:01:529 (61529|4,61719|4) - Should this be a jack? Seems kinda different from the rest of the patterns. I'd suggest you move it to column 3.
01:03:807 (63807|0,63807|2,63807|1) - Double? Or are you following something extra here? I'm guessing it's intentional so won't comment on the other triples.
01:17:478 (77478|3,77858|4) - Swap columns? Since the pitches in the LNs are different from initial LNs.
01:32:573 (92573|5,92573|3,92573|1) - Pretty sure these are supposed to be 1/6 snapped. 01:32:605 (might be wrong doe /shrug)
Bie's Hard
00:26:402 (26402|0,26592|0,26782|0) - Don't think this is should be a 3-note jack, since the other once have been 2-note mini-jacks. I'd suggest moving 00:26:402 (26402|0) - to column 2.
00:32:668 (32668|0,32668|1,32668|3) - Why is this a triple? Sounds the same as the previous ones. I'd suggest changing it to a double for consistency.
00:39:504 - Should prolly be a double/triple here for the intense clap sound.
00:41:023 - ^
00:43:301 (43301|0) - Moved to column 1 to avoid jack? Think this would be more consistent.
00:55:263 (55263|2) - Shouldn't this note be a double instead of 00:55:073 (55073|1,55073|5) since the clap/snare noise is on this note?
00:59:630 - Double? (snare)
01:25:073 - Triple here.
01:33:428 - 01:37:985 I think this whole section doesn't fit. I get that you're simplifying the violin(?) but imo it's way too repetitive and way too under-mapped. Maybe place some mini-jacks or something for the violin. Mini LNs would work as well. Also, you should make the piano chords standout more since it work almost as a metronome whilst playing, maybe triples, or two hand doubles? These are just suggestions, i guess your current pattern is rankable but i'd highly suggest you mix it up a bit so it's not as boring as it currently is.
01:40:168 (100168|3,101687|4,101877|5,101972|3,103206|4) - Think these are supposed to be 1/8th of a note later. image
00:32:668 (32668|0,32668|1,32668|3) - Why is this a triple? Sounds the same as the previous ones. I'd suggest changing it to a double for consistency.
00:39:504 - Should prolly be a double/triple here for the intense clap sound.
00:41:023 - ^
00:43:301 (43301|0) - Moved to column 1 to avoid jack? Think this would be more consistent.
00:55:263 (55263|2) - Shouldn't this note be a double instead of 00:55:073 (55073|1,55073|5) since the clap/snare noise is on this note?
00:59:630 - Double? (snare)
01:25:073 - Triple here.
01:33:428 - 01:37:985 I think this whole section doesn't fit. I get that you're simplifying the violin(?) but imo it's way too repetitive and way too under-mapped. Maybe place some mini-jacks or something for the violin. Mini LNs would work as well. Also, you should make the piano chords standout more since it work almost as a metronome whilst playing, maybe triples, or two hand doubles? These are just suggestions, i guess your current pattern is rankable but i'd highly suggest you mix it up a bit so it's not as boring as it currently is.
01:40:168 (100168|3,101687|4,101877|5,101972|3,103206|4) - Think these are supposed to be 1/8th of a note later. image
Normal
00:34:377 (34377|3,34757|5) - Maybe remove these, since you mapped this sound without them before. It feels like they comes out of nowhere and i'd assume it would be pretty hard for someone at this lvl of play to adjust to this pattern fast enough.
00:39:504 (39504|5,39504|2,39883|0,39883|3) - What are these LNs following? It sounds like they're following the bass-guitar first but then I assume they're following the vocals? I'd suggest changing the second set, 00:39:883 (39883|3,39883|0), to normal note, to better distinguish the two sounds.
00:45:959 (45959|0,45959|3) - ^
01:00:959 (60959|0,61149|0) - Feels a bit weird with this random jack all of a sudden. Maybe make it a trill for better consistency with the rest of the song?
01:14:440 (74440|1) - Different pitch from 01:11:402 (71402|1). Maybe move this one to column 0 to show that?
The end is maybe a bit repetitive, but it's fine to play so i don't mind it too much.
00:39:504 (39504|5,39504|2,39883|0,39883|3) - What are these LNs following? It sounds like they're following the bass-guitar first but then I assume they're following the vocals? I'd suggest changing the second set, 00:39:883 (39883|3,39883|0), to normal note, to better distinguish the two sounds.
00:45:959 (45959|0,45959|3) - ^
01:00:959 (60959|0,61149|0) - Feels a bit weird with this random jack all of a sudden. Maybe make it a trill for better consistency with the rest of the song?
01:14:440 (74440|1) - Different pitch from 01:11:402 (71402|1). Maybe move this one to column 0 to show that?
The end is maybe a bit repetitive, but it's fine to play so i don't mind it too much.
Nice map! Again, sorry for the late mod : ( School + lack of motivation is dangerous TBH.
GL ranking it!