Sorry for late
General- Would suggest a different combo colour to your white, since although white is present in the background, it seems out of place compared to yellow and orange which are more vibrant colours.
- I'd consider removing the kiai time from 00:44:054 and 01:49:883 since otherwise around 66% of your map is kiai time which makes it not very special.
- You can remove '&' from tags since it's in the artist already.
- Would do -5 to offset. I think it's slightly late right now.
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Metadata seems to be in check. Seems like the already ranked version is the one that's inaccurate¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Easy- 00:35:826 (5) - Your NCing seems to have messed up a little past this point. Since you were going for an NC every 2 measures, but this combo is 3 measures which messes up your next few combos.
- 01:21:083 (3) - Seems to be missing hitsounds.
- 01:41:654 (5) - NC thing again.
- 02:09:426 (2) - Would look cool if this was the same shape as 02:08:054 (4) instead, similar to what you did at 01:55:711 (2,4).
- 02:14:569 (1) - Minor thing, would rotate this clockwise a little so the visual flow into 02:15:597 (2) is a little smoother.
- 02:23:140 (2) - Touches the healthbar, if you care about that sort of thing.
- 02:26:911 (3) - Hitsounds again.
- 02:35:826 (4) - Not sure if you were supposed to have a whistle go over the entire slider or not here, but it seems out of place.
- 02:44:569 (1) - 02:45:940 (1) - Feels underwhelming in terms of hitsounding for some reason.
- It also seems a little weird to me that 00:22:111 - 00:44:054 this section is a higher density comapred to 00:44:054 - 01:04:626 even though the latter is a more intense part of the song. I would try to replace 00:24:854 (1,2) these rhythms with 00:35:826 (5) these sorts of 3/2 sliders.
Normal- 00:23:483 (1) - 00:31:711 (1) - 00:37:197 (1) - Would remove these NCs if you want to go with the "NC every 2 measures" pattern.
- I would actually look through your NCing again in general actually, since it seems you switch between 1 measure and 2 measure patterning every so often within sections.
- 02:35:826 (1) - Slider whistle thing again.
- 02:47:312 (3) - Fairly significant healthbar overlap, if you care about that.
Hard- 01:00:854 (2) - This slider shape seems a little out of place since you don't seem to use something like this anywhere else.
Hyper and Insane- are good.
Time Freeze- 01:02:654 (3,4) - Stack seems to have messed up a bit.
Upper diffs are actually pretty clean. Nice job.