Baby's breath - Habataki no Birthday · forum

Nitrous

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2018-02-08T21:42:39+00:00

Since Evanescent won't reply anymore I might as well take over this difficulty in his stead.

Nevo wrote:
Hi there sorry im late XD

Evanescent's Extra
00:29:033 (1,1,1) - are the held whistle sounds on these sliders intentional
don't see a problem here
01:12:458 (5) - maybe nc since stream changes spacing
done
01:17:431 (1,2,3,4,1) - flowing into this stream feels pretty awkward maybe ctrl j it and move it a little so its like https://puu.sh/zidxy/1664c36505.jpg this way it flows easier and it doesnt feel like a random wide angle you would also have to adjust 01:17:928 (2,3,1,2) - :3c
seems fine to me
01:22:983 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - i think spliting the stream here isnt really necessary and you could just make it a more spaced verison of 01:12:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
nice flipping improvement from that super old gd you sent me owo
done

Evanescent-

285 posts

Joined April 2014

Evanescent- 2018-02-12T16:10:08+00:00

Marmorexx wrote:
Evanescent's Extra

00:13:121 (3) - Ugh... Such a nice beginning and then a slow slider that takes most of the screens vertical space... Why not make it more curved and Snake-y ? ;_; didn't really see a problem here, the slider is just for personal preferences
00:20:248 (2,3,4) - Having a triple perfectly aligned to the vertical axis feels a little stiff. Give it a slight turn fixed

Probably my favourite Diff (apart from Nitrololi). Not much to change Thanks for your feedback and appreciation!

xLolicore- wrote:
Starting off, I'd lower the AR to 9.3 for a 5.31* map, 9.4 allows for lower note density but comes at the players much faster.

00:16:768 (4) - ngl the flow looks ass with the transition from 00:16:270 (3) to 00:16:768 (4) , I'd move it around for more comfortable movement but atm it plays weird imo. I flipped the slider on 00:16:768 (4), flow looks better now imo
00:22:569 (2,3) - Guitar sound being ignored, idk why you chose to simplify the rhythm and ignored the guitar in the background simplified it with triplets, honestly saying i'd keep the notes but the rhythm would look too bland.
00:23:895 (2,3) - Same case as above fixed
00:26:878 (2,3) - What are these even mapped to LOL don't really see a problem here, but changed to 1/1 slider to maintain flow
00:41:464 (1) - imo that slider shape looks ass but that's just me gaia inspired slider lmao, fixed it anyways.
00:49:420 (1,2,3) - Don't think a 1/4 triple covers the drums, I'd change to a 1/6 repeat slider i heard it as a 1/4 so i'd keep it this way.
00:56:215 (3) - Stack this on top of 00:55:055 (4) done.
01:23:066 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why the sudden introduction of split streams at the end? There were no split streams throughout the entire map yet you chose this spot to place them. fixed

bite you death wrote:
this diff is missing a bunch of hs everywhere, i cant be assed to list them all so here's so examples: 00:11:132 (1,2,3) -, 00:18:425 - and 00:19:751 (1) -
00:02:845 (1,2) - considering how you're following vocals, you could change this rhythm to circle + 1/1 slider to follow vocals better, as the dragging "iiii" of "kimi" is expressed through a longer slider, like 00:03:839 (1) - for "uuuu" fixed, it looks better now
00:22:900 (4) - this is so far away from the previous object, and the angle is kinda awkward. i'd recommend moving it to somewhere like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10180611, so that its also consistent with 00:24:226 (4) -
00:28:204 (2) - cant u just stack with one of 00:26:878 (2,4) - -_- i replaced it with triplets, so i'd keep this way except moving 00:24:226 (5) - a bit lower.
01:00:193 (1) - ncing this doesnt really make any sense, you should move it to either 01:00:027 (4) - or 01:00:359 (2) - fixed
also, why is the spacing of 01:00:027 (4,1) - so small and then 01:00:359 (2,3) - is like double that lol i emphasized it due to a bit of increase in intensity, but tried to make it consistent.
01:22:983 (6,1) - this is rly unexpected and weird, you havent used cutstreams anywhere else in the map and introducing it once at the end of the map without any warning is a killer tbh, i'd imagine a lot of ppl would not expect this here and thus miss. consider changing it into a normal connected stream xd fixed it lol

update

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Nitrous

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Nitrous 2018-02-12T20:25:53+00:00

Finally lol, ok used Evan's changes instead.

Nevo

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Nevo 2018-02-12T21:43:27+00:00

normal-hitfinish8.wav is unused

Hard
01:23:397 - there is 2 timing lines here :3

Firis' Extra
00:34:834 (3,4) - are on the same tick xd

after that it should be good to go

Nitrous

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Topic Starter

Nitrous 2018-02-13T01:53:01+00:00

applied

Nevo

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Nevo 2018-02-13T03:14:12+00:00

She's ten years old I checked.
Bubbled!

Shunao

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Shunao 2018-02-13T03:19:31+00:00

aaa im late
the artist should be "Baby's breath" not "Baby's Breath" like the metadata

Nitrous

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Nitrous 2018-02-13T04:13:40+00:00

Will fix once second BN arrives.

Xinnoh

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Xinnoh 2018-03-10T09:21:25+00:00

issues

General
01:10:138 (1) - For this section there's 3/4 drums, so having hitsounds to follow them would make it clearer what's going on
01:26:049 (1) - this part of the music is different to the ranked version wat

Nitrololi
Stop using lolis in diff names the other set for this song had it deleted
00:24:226 (4) - is this slider meant to look like that
00:31:353 (4,1) - Move the second red tick of this slider left, move circle 4 left and the "blankets" look much better

Evanent
There are not enough hitsounds in this diff. There's only a few claps and kicks, no finishes or whistles were used. Please add more. In addition, there's quite a few places with missing hitsounds with your current use of samples.
00:10:138 (5) - Heavy ignoring vocal here but 00:05:000 (4) - heavy ignoring guitar here, please pick one to follow
00:24:723 (6,7,1) - why spacing so big for weak vocals here
00:35:331 (1) - there is literally no sound here why is there a buzz slider
01:09:309 (3,4) - looks like a 3/4 slider, increase spacing between these a bit to avoid.
00:59:530 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Ok so this ignores vocal and follows guitar crescendo, else you could map 01:00:027 (4,1,2,3) - as two pairs of objects instead.
01:16:602 (7) - and then vocal is prioritised here while ignoring a huge guitar downbeat. It's fine to ignore something, but you need to be consistent for it to work.

Firis
00:01:022 (1) - you probably need more hitsounds in this part, compare to top diff
00:14:447 (1) - to 00:22:237 (8) - The 1/2 circle use in this section doesn't follow anything. It's just triangle patterns all with identical spacing, you could paste this part of the map onto any anime song and no one would notice. There's guitar riffs, ups and downs in the music, but all of it is ignored because it's just the same rotating circles.
00:34:171 (4) - Sv change should probably be here for cooler kickslider
00:36:823 (5) - 00:39:475 (6) - this section in general, NCing on the downbeat really does nothing since guitar is off downbeat, follow that instead.
00:56:547 (1) - even though sv change no need to nc since it's not really noticeable
In general for kiai idk what's going on because important sounds and weak sounds are mapped pretty much identical, same as the first point I brought up about not following anything. Following all layers of the music makes it really unclear what is going on.
don't want to repeat stuff more xd

Ts8zs
I honestly thought there was no hitsounds for like 10 minutes because volume is at 100%, please just make changes.
Why is AR 9.4 and OD 7 used together?

Pop reasons

Metadata needs fixing
Evanent is missing hitsounds and is inconsistent on what is being followed
Firis has patterns that don't follow anything and are just circles going in circles
ts8zs hitsounds are basically inaudible relative to the 100% volume hitnormals

Please fix

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2018-03-10T09:33:44+00:00

Remove my diff plz

Nitrous

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Nitrous 2018-03-10T09:50:10+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
issues

General
01:10:138 (1) - For this section there's 3/4 drums, so having hitsounds to follow them would make it clearer what's going on
Fixed
01:26:049 (1) - this part of the music is different to the ranked version wat
I was in the wrong timeline.

Nitrololi
Stop using lolis in diff names the other set for this song had it deleted
No. This was a collab between me and xLolicore-. It would make sense why we chose this name.
00:24:226 (4) - is this slider meant to look like that
Yes.
00:31:353 (4,1) - Move the second red tick of this slider left, move circle 4 left and the "blankets" look much better
Fixed.

Pop reasons
Metadata needs fixing
Fixed

Firis requested that his diff be removed. His version is still downloadable in the OP of this thread.

Underdogs

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Underdogs 2018-03-10T09:59:54+00:00

LMAO firis' diff got roasted

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2018-03-10T10:03:13+00:00

Underdogs wrote:
LMAO firis' diff got roasted

Dude fuck off, you came here just trying to hate me, aren't you?

Nitrous

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Nitrous 2018-03-10T10:32:46+00:00

Yeah please don't get this thread locked for my sanity.

Underdogs

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Underdogs 2018-03-10T11:25:06+00:00

sure?

but yea pls dont kill mapper spirit smh

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2018-03-10T17:12:16+00:00

Replying to mods because i still have intention to push this forward even i wanted to remove the diff because i am quite tired of it

I am such a lit piece of shit :p

Sinnoh wrote:
Firis
00:01:022 (1) - you probably need more hitsounds in this part, compare to top diff Maybe?
00:14:447 (1) - to 00:22:237 (8) - The 1/2 circle use in this section doesn't follow anything. It's just triangle patterns all with identical spacing, you could paste this part of the map onto any anime song and no one would notice. There's guitar riffs, ups and downs in the music, but all of it is ignored because it's just the same rotating circles. I doubt it's a major issue at all, other than personal choices, there's some sliders supporting the guitar sounds, if you meant something like 00:17:431 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - or 00:20:083 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - then i can tell you that there's a long chain of guitar that i am going to follow
00:34:171 (4) - Sv change should probably be here for cooler kickslider k
00:36:823 (5) - 00:39:475 (6) - this section in general, NCing on the downbeat really does nothing since guitar is off downbeat, follow that instead. I think it's fine?
00:56:547 (1) - even though sv change no need to nc since it's not really noticeable k
In general for kiai idk what's going on because important sounds and weak sounds are mapped pretty much identical, same as the first point I brought up about not following anything. Following all layers of the music makes it really unclear what is going on. Uhhhh...It's my style? I prefer following both instruments, especially in extra.
don't want to repeat stuff more xd

Please fix

Whether is it okay not, i'll let nitro to desire is he gonna return my diff or keep it as removed state, i don't wanna bother him for trying to pushing this forward.

No offence, i didn't get depressed because of your mod, yet i didn't ask him to remove my diff because of that, it's more like my personal issue

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neonat

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined April 2012

neonat 2018-03-10T18:44:57+00:00

In regards to that highest difficulty unique name, how does that relate to the song? All I can see are the mapper's name in that without something following it. It's unrankable in this current state

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2018-03-11T01:08:01+00:00

neonat wrote:
In regards to that highest difficulty unique name, how does that relate to the song? All I can see are the mapper's name in that without something following it. It's unrankable in this current state

In regards to this, at first it looks like its just a combination of two names. If you read the anime's synopsis:

Tenshi no 3P! wrote:
Kyou Nukui is a first year high school student hikikomori. His hobby is making Vocaloid songs and uploading them online. One day, he receives a message from a fan asking if they could meet up with him. At the meeting place, three elementary school girls were waiting for him. The three of them want to form a band and ask for Kyou's help.

EDIT: Reuploaded Firis' set.

neonat

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neonat 2018-03-11T07:22:14+00:00

Has no relation to 'Nitro', so yes, it is related to the mapper's usernames

Kensuke

1,856 posts

Joined April 2014

Kensuke 2018-03-11T07:27:42+00:00

doesn't really think it is coherent :thinking:

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,962 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2018-03-11T08:01:34+00:00

Use a possessive to avoid confusion because I thought it was some weird name, NitroLoli's Extra is fine

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined April 2012

neonat 2018-03-11T08:07:51+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
NitroLoli's Extra is fine

Yeh

Nitrololi as indication of the mappers in the collab is fine, as long as something follows it, Nitrololi's xxx

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2018-03-11T09:43:57+00:00

Given from the discussion, it seems nobody agrees. I'll append "Symphony" at the end.

Fu Xuan

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined September 2015

Fu Xuan 2018-03-11T10:06:00+00:00

Rekt

domSaur

1,263 posts

Joined December 2013

domSaur 2018-03-11T11:05:28+00:00

Nitroglycerin Lolis

-Atri-

3,049 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2018-03-11T13:32:30+00:00

Lolis soaked in nitrogen

Evanescent-

285 posts

Joined April 2014

Evanescent- 2018-03-12T12:34:39+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
Evanent
There are not enough hitsounds in this diff. There's only a few claps and kicks, no finishes or whistles were used. Please add more. In addition, there's quite a few places with missing hitsounds with your current use of samples. I decided to add my own hitsounds, the result is more emphasized rather than the previous use of hs
00:10:138 (5) - Heavy ignoring vocal here but 00:05:000 (4) - heavy ignoring guitar here, please pick one to follow 00:05:000 (4) - is more emphasized on the vocals, so i changed the 00:10:138 (5) -
00:24:723 (6,7,1) - why spacing so big for weak vocals here fixed.
00:35:331 (1) - there is literally no sound here why is there a buzz slider I wanted to emphasize on the 'iiii' part, removed.
01:09:309 (3,4) - looks like a 3/4 slider, increase spacing between these a bit to avoid. fixed.
00:59:530 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Ok so this ignores vocal and follows guitar crescendo, else you could map 01:00:027 (4,1,2,3) - as two pairs of objects instead. throughout the vocal part it pretty much has the same intensity, but I decided to shorten the distance between one circle to another.
01:16:602 (7) - and then vocal is prioritised here while ignoring a huge guitar downbeat. It's fine to ignore something, but you need to be consistent for it to work. generally i'd priotize on the vocals to prevent overmapping (idk about this i dont really know much about modding), but since there's
a majority of triplet use, i'd replace it with a triplet and a 1/4 slider.

Thanks for the mod!

New HS: https://puu.sh/zFXPz/7a7a32b5e7.zip

Update

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61270
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Habataki no Birthday
TitleUnicode:羽ばたきのバースデイ
Artist:Baby's breath
ArtistUnicode:Baby’s breath
Creator:Nitrous
Version:Evanescent's Extra
Source:天使の3P！
Tags:Tenshi no 3P! Angel's 3Piece! 五島 潤 Jun Gotou 紅葉谷希美 Nozomi Momijidani 金城そら Sora Kaneshiro tv size opening Kibbleru Kisses xLolicore- Underforest Firis Mistlud ts8zs Akitoshi kurantemelodii Evanescent-
BeatmapID:1419681
BeatmapSetID:670800

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CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9.3
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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Video,600,"tenshi.mp4"
//Break Periods
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Nitrous

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Nitrous 2018-03-12T20:02:06+00:00

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Evanescent-
ts8sz
his had missing hitsounds that I managed to find in his previous update.

Let's push this!

Nevo

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General
normal-hitfinish8.wav is unused

Easy
01:27:375 (1) - this spinner is really too short for an easy imo.
00:19:751 (1,2) - this pattern kinda is a bit mislead, generally in an easy im not too much a fan of patterns where the slider tail is similarly spaced as the sldier head, it can certainly cause confusion in players occasionally. The current flow leads towards what is the tail here though, so at the very least, i'd heavily suggest ctrl-g here of 00:20:083 (2) -
00:20:083 (2,1) - also stack these, and change the angle here http://puu.sh/zWEPg/2c6379bb50.jpg for neatness, and this ofc too 00:23:729 (2) -

00:14:447 - This section needs louder hitsound volume, try 70%.
00:35:165 - I don't see why certain objects like this are given quiter volume than other objects, should probably just make them all consistent.

Akitoshi's Normal
01:02:513 - Can you buff kiai volume to 80%

Hard
00:12:127 (1,2,3) - Can you adjust this pattern a bit to be something like http://puu.sh/zWEZJ/e25b414dc8.jpg
00:22:403 (4) - this should be nc'd for the new section begins here.
00:27:375 (3,1) - This jump here is unnecessary and inconsistent with the rest of the section, prolly should just nerf it and make it a more similar distance
00:35:165 (4) - this reverse is unneccsary, it sounds quite awful without being back by percussion, and the vocal isn't important enough, especially since it's not really given emphasis anywhere else in the map
01:11:132 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer a sharper angle here, this relatively wide and inconsistently spaced circle looks ugly and doesn't play as well either.
01:20:414 (5,1,2) - Changing this pattern to be more like http://puu.sh/zWF77/face22da65.jpg looks cuter and is more natural flow

Forest's Insane
01:12:127 (5) - nc for consistency with the following stream

Ts8zs' Insane

00:35:663 - Starting from this section, there's essentially a non-sensible increase in SV from 1.0 to 1.5, a really jarring increase, that's not really supported by the song or anything, this section has the same SV as the chorus which should be the highest intensity section of the song.
00:51:575 (1,2,3) - 00:48:923 (1,2,3) - Accompanied by high spacing linear jumps that don't really work consistently with the spacing or the angles used in this section, I feel like this section needs more work.

I'd suggest a reduction in SV, and spacing and angles that are more natural and consistent with the difficulty itself.

The kiai also features some confusing methods of emphasis. Places like 01:04:669 (1,2) - use large spacing to represent and to emphasize important sounds, but the map also uses small distances such as 01:07:155 (6,1,2,3) - 01:10:139 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - etc that do the opposite. I'd recommend consistently choosing one, either large or small spacings for emphasis.

01:10:139 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm not a fan of how the drums are missed in this pattern at 01:10:386 - 01:10:884 - , especially since you've chosen to map the active 1/6th earlier at 00:49:255 (3,4,5,6) - showing that you do care about the drum rolls.

Kibbeb's Insane
00:35:165 (2) - Consider a nc here to show the 1/1 rhythm?
00:46:436 (2,3,4) - broken stack
00:49:088 (2,3,4) -
01:00:027 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like larger spacing here would be more inline with the other spacings, you've chosen to use larger spacings in parts that i feel aren't as intense

Evanescent's Extra

00:10:304 (6,7) - This sudden low spacing is pretty uncalled for here, it'd be more fitting for a 3/4 gap, but as it is, it seems like a sudden reduction for no real reason.

00:13:950 - I think 00:13:121 (3) - should end here, with an additonal note being added to 00:14:116 - for better drum rhythm.
00:17:596 (2,3) - Should be 1 slider for better rhythm here, and gives additional emphasis to the jumps after.
00:34:502 (7) - Better emphasis could be achieved here if this is shortened to 1/2 to allow 00:34:834 (8) - to have large spacing similar to the previous jump from 00:34:337 (6,7) -
01:05:994 (5,6,7) - spacing could be increased on 6, both to and from

01:22:734 (3) - nc here for consistency
The stream entry is also really awkward here, compare it to 01:11:961 (3,1) -
moving 01:22:403 (2) - to the right hand side would work better http://puu.sh/zWFBJ/76dfd8754a.jpg

Firis' Extra
00:29:033 (1,2,1) - this sort of back and forth overlap doesn't really make sense with the music, some sort of continued counterclockwise flow would work better.
00:45:110 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This should have higher spacing to contrast the sections before and after, it is a build up, and greater spacing would make it more intense.
00:59:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here too
00:52:734 (1,2,3) - This thing is pretty hard to read, i'd seperate out 3 so the stack doesn't change from 1/2 to 1/1

01:09:309 (4,5) - 01:15:442 (1,2) - these sudden 1/1 gaps don't really make sense, would work a lot better to map them passively, right now they're an awkward break in both movement and rhythm that isn't supported by the song much.

01:22:734 (4) - and 01:23:066 (8) - nc these for consistency

Nitrololi's Symphony
01:12:127 (3) - 01:12:458 (5) - nc for consistency
01:18:425 (1) - remove nc
01:22:569 (4) - missing whistle
01:01:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - reduce the spacing here, it's too similar to some other jumps for a vocal only, i'd also prefer it wasn't stacked, and just a star or something the current antijumps don't rlly make sense

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Nevo 2018-04-05T11:51:40+00:00

How does hitnormalfinish8 keep coming back :C

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-Atri- 2018-04-05T14:49:27+00:00

ailv wrote:
Firis' Extra
00:29:033 (1,2,1) - this sort of back and forth overlap doesn't really make sense with the music, some sort of continued counterclockwise flow would work better. I prefer keep
00:45:110 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This should have higher spacing to contrast the sections before and after, it is a build up, and greater spacing would make it more intense. same
00:59:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here too done
00:52:734 (1,2,3) - This thing is pretty hard to read, i'd seperate out 3 so the stack doesn't change from 1/2 to 1/1 ok

01:09:309 (4,5) - 01:15:442 (1,2) - these sudden 1/1 gaps don't really make sense, would work a lot better to map them passively, right now they're an awkward break in both movement and rhythm that isn't supported by the song much. I think it's fine...

01:22:734 (4) - and 01:23:066 (8) - nc these for consistency Both done

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Nitrous

1,206 posts

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Topic Starter

Nitrous 2018-04-06T07:09:03+00:00

Nevo wrote:
How does hitnormalfinish8 keep coming back :C

That is my fear. It always comes back :3c

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2018-04-06T08:02:32+00:00

you may fix nc for me

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2018-04-06T08:48:45+00:00

ailv wrote:
General
normal-hitfinish8.wav is unused Fixed

Easy
Fixed

Akitoshi's Normal
Fixed

Hard
Fixed

Forest's Insane
Fixed

Kibbeb's Insane
00:35:165 (2) - Consider a nc here to show the 1/1 rhythm?
00:46:436 (2,3,4) - broken stack Fixed
00:49:088 (2,3,4) - Fixed
01:00:027 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like larger spacing here would be more inline with the other spacings, you've chosen to use larger spacings in parts that i feel aren't as intense

Nitrololi's Symphony
Fixed

Will keep updating until all diffs have been resolved.

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2018-04-06T09:20:02+00:00

ailv wrote:
General
normal-hitfinish8.wav is unused oh really? 真的吗
Ts8zs' Insane

00:35:663 - Starting from this section, there's essentially a non-sensible increase in SV from 1.0 to 1.5, a really jarring increase, that's not really supported by the song or anything, this section has the same SV as the chorus which should be the highest intensity section of the song. 00:25:055 - to 00:35:663 - is the slow part of this song 我认为00:25:055 - 到00:35:663 - 是歌曲比较慢的部分
00:51:575 (1,2,3) - 00:48:923 (1,2,3) - Accompanied by high spacing linear jumps that don't really work consistently with the spacing or the angles used in this section, I feel like this section needs more work. just fix this by move 00:48:923 (1) - to 144,240 00:52:072 (2) - to center(256,192) @Nitrous把 00:48:923 (1) - 移动到 144,240 把 00:52:072 (2) -移动到正中心256,192)

I'd suggest a reduction in SV, and spacing and angles that are more natural and consistent with the difficulty itself.

The kiai also features some confusing methods of emphasis. Places like 01:04:669 (1,2) - use large spacing to represent and to emphasize important sounds, but the map also uses small distances such as 01:07:155 (6,1,2,3) - 01:10:139 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - etc that do the opposite. I'd recommend consistently choosing one, either large or small spacings for emphasis. not for important sounds,only for finish in kiai 不是放在重要的音上仅仅放在kiai的finish上

01:10:139 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm not a fan of how the drums are missed in this pattern at 01:10:386 - 01:10:884 - , especially since you've chosen to map the active 1/6th earlier at 00:49:255 (3,4,5,6) - showing that you do care about the drum rolls. I'm the fan of this repeat partten 我比较喜欢这种重复梗

and add whistle at 01:27:044 - 01:27:210 -

ts8zs

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Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2018-04-10T02:48:07+00:00

00:35:663 - Starting from this section, there's essentially a non-sensible increase in SV from 1.0 to 1.5, a really jarring increase, that's not really supported by the song or anything, this section has the same SV as the chorus which should be the highest intensity section of the song. 00:25:055 - to 00:35:663 - is the slow part of this song 我认为00:25:055 - 到00:35:663 - 是歌曲比较慢的部分这里以电吉他为主,厚度相对其它部分较为薄弱之后换成bass增加了乐曲的厚重感和打击感

I'd suggest a reduction in SV, and spacing and angles that are more natural and consistent with the difficulty itself.
同上

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2018-04-10T04:11:39+00:00

i think i forgot to say but fix stuff for me pls

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2018-04-10T08:37:08+00:00

Kisses wrote:
i think i forgot to say but fix stuff for me pls

should be applied

ailv

403 posts

Joined August 2015

ailv 2018-04-10T20:25:17+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
00:35:663 - Starting from this section, there's essentially a non-sensible increase in SV from 1.0 to 1.5, a really jarring increase, that's not really supported by the song or anything, this section has the same SV as the chorus which should be the highest intensity section of the song. 00:25:055 - to 00:35:663 - is the slow part of this song 我认为00:25:055 - 到00:35:663 - 是歌曲比较慢的部分这里以电吉他为主,厚度相对其它部分较为薄弱之后换成bass增加了乐曲的厚重感和打击感

I'd suggest a reduction in SV, and spacing and angles that are more natural and consistent with the difficulty itself.
同上

00:35:664 - to 01:01:022 - SV改成1.2-1.3可以嗎? 我還是覺得现在的SV是臺高了，因為你的SV在kiai的時候也是1.5

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2018-04-11T03:21:48+00:00

ailv wrote:
ts8zs wrote:
00:35:663 - Starting from this section, there's essentially a non-sensible increase in SV from 1.0 to 1.5, a really jarring increase, that's not really supported by the song or anything, this section has the same SV as the chorus which should be the highest intensity section of the song. 00:25:055 - to 00:35:663 - is the slow part of this song 我认为00:25:055 - 到00:35:663 - 是歌曲比较慢的部分这里以电吉他为主,厚度相对其它部分较为薄弱之后换成bass增加了乐曲的厚重感和打击感

I'd suggest a reduction in SV, and spacing and angles that are more natural and consistent with the difficulty itself.
同上
00:35:664 - to 01:01:022 - SV改成1.2-1.3可以嗎? 我還是覺得现在的SV是臺高了，因為你的SV在kiai的時候也是1.5

你执意如此的话那我就从命了

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32,224,11961,5,0,0:2:0:0:
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314,180,18923,2,0,B|330:122|330:122|320:64,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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288,304,19918,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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288,304,21244,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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352,368,21907,2,0,B|294:383|294:383|235:373,1,120.000004577637,2|8,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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144,352,22404,5,4,0:2:0:0:
128,208,22570,1,2,0:2:0:0:
128,208,22653,1,0,0:2:0:0:
128,208,22735,1,8,0:2:0:0:
240,272,22901,2,0,B|253:203|253:203|237:155,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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16,272,23316,1,0,0:2:0:0:
16,272,23398,2,0,B|0:224|0:224|16:144,1,120.000004577637,8|2,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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128,208,23979,1,0,0:2:0:0:
128,208,24061,1,8,0:2:0:0:
240,272,24227,2,0,B|253:203|253:203|237:155,1,120.000004577637,0|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
16,272,24559,1,8,0:2:0:0:
48,144,24724,1,8,0:2:0:0:
256,368,25055,6,0,P|300:377|368:352,1,95.9999970703126,6|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
432,256,25387,1,10,0:2:0:0:
304,240,25553,1,0,0:2:0:0:
176,288,25719,6,0,P|132:297|64:272,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
32,144,26050,2,0,P|76:135|144:160,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
304,272,26382,6,0,P|342:279|408:249,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
336,144,26713,1,10,0:2:0:0:
208,176,26879,2,0,P|181:205|160:272,1,95.9999970703126,0|2,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
240,368,27211,1,0,0:2:0:0:
304,272,27376,1,10,0:2:0:0:
112,336,27542,1,0,0:2:0:0:
32,256,27708,6,0,P|16:224|16:160,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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208,288,28205,1,0,0:2:0:0:
128,208,28371,6,0,P|112:176|112:112,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
160,0,28702,1,10,0:2:0:0:
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224,160,29034,6,0,P|208:128|208:48,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
336,208,29365,2,0,P|313:240|240:272,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
320,96,29697,2,0,P|360:99|416:128,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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480,48,30194,1,0,0:2:0:0:
384,272,30360,6,0,P|384:352|400:384,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
480,320,30691,1,10,0:2:0:0:
368,192,30857,1,0,0:2:0:0:
288,256,31023,6,0,P|288:336|304:368,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
384,288,31354,1,10,0:2:0:0:
272,160,31520,1,0,0:2:0:0:
192,224,31686,6,0,P|192:304|208:336,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
288,256,32017,1,10,0:2:0:0:
176,128,32183,1,0,0:2:0:0:
96,192,32349,6,0,P|96:272|112:304,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
192,224,32680,1,10,0:2:0:0:
80,96,32846,1,0,0:2:0:0:
0,144,33012,6,0,P|0:224|16:256,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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208,352,33509,1,0,0:2:0:0:
128,176,33675,6,0,P|128:256|144:288,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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368,288,34503,2,0,P|379:234|384:192,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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416,16,36327,1,0,0:2:0:0:
416,160,36492,2,0,B|416:224|416:224|441:274,1,120.000004577637,0|10,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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224,160,37155,2,0,B|224:224|224:224|249:274,1,120.000004577637,0|10,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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32,160,37818,2,0,B|32:224|32:224|57:274,1,120.000004577637,0|10,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
320,352,38150,1,0,0:2:0:0:
256,256,38316,6,0,P|200:240|136:256,1,120.000004577637,0|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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384,272,38813,1,0,0:2:0:0:
320,160,38979,6,0,P|264:144|200:160,1,120.000004577637,0|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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176,112,39973,1,10,0:2:0:0:
64,48,40139,6,0,P|48:104|64:168,1,120.000004577637,0|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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288,160,40636,2,0,P|304:216|288:280,1,120.000004577637,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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176,112,41133,2,0,P|256:48|384:80,2,240.000009155274,0|8|0,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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400,208,42128,6,0,P|320:272|192:240,1,240.000009155274,0|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
288,160,42625,1,10,0:2:0:0:
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288,272,43288,1,10,0:2:0:0:
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128,304,43619,5,12,0:2:0:0:
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272,352,44117,2,0,L|416:368,1,120.000004577637,0|8,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
208,288,44448,1,0,0:2:0:0:
224,208,44614,1,10,0:2:0:0:
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320,256,46271,5,8,0:2:0:0:
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144,112,46603,2,0,P|160:176|144:240,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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128,256,46934,2,0,P|192:240|256:256,1,120.000004577637,0|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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320,96,49089,1,8,0:2:0:0:
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240,176,49531,1,0,0:2:0:0:
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448,26,52238,2,0,P|480:138|368:250,1,240.000009155274,0|8,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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320,160,53564,6,0,P|336:224|320:288,1,120.000004577637,10|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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128,240,54393,2,0,L|272:256,1,120.000004577637,0|10,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
336,192,54724,2,0,P|358:244|336:320,2,120.000004577637,0|2|0,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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176,208,56216,6,0,P|128:112|192:0,2,240.000009155274,2|10|14,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
272,272,57045,5,0,0:2:0:0:
32,288,57211,1,10,0:2:0:0:
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400,80,57708,5,8,0:2:0:0:
304,32,57874,1,10,0:2:0:0:
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272,128,58371,5,8,0:2:0:0:
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128,192,59034,5,8,0:2:0:0:
48,128,59200,1,10,0:2:0:0:
64,272,59365,1,0,0:2:0:0:
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176,32,60360,1,8,0:2:0:0:
272,320,60525,1,10,0:2:0:0:
368,64,60691,1,12,0:2:0:0:
80,288,61023,1,12,0:2:0:0:
80,288,62183,6,0,P|144:272|224:288,1,120.000004577637,4|2,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
304,160,62514,2,0,P|246:175|186:170,1,120.000004577637,8|2,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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480,240,63343,1,2,0:2:0:0:
304,320,63509,6,0,P|240:336|176:320,1,120.000004577637,0|2,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
240,224,63840,1,8,0:2:0:0:
416,256,64006,2,0,P|432:320|416:384,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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128,128,64669,5,2,0:2:0:0:
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351,64,65001,2,0,P|336:121|346:180,1,120.000004577637,2|8,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
128,240,65332,2,0,P|191:221|238:176,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
384,336,65664,2,0,P|336:290|273:272,1,120.000004577637,2|8,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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32,288,66078,1,0,0:2:0:0:
32,288,66161,2,0,P|16:224|64:144,1,120.000004577637,0|2,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
128,96,66492,1,8,0:2:0:0:
224,160,66658,2,0,P|241:103|224:46,2,120.000004577637,2|0|2,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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128,240,67404,1,0,0:2:0:0:
128,240,67487,2,0,P|192:272|256:272,1,120.000004577637,4|2,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
352,256,67818,1,8,0:2:0:0:
432,176,67984,2,0,P|464:240|464:304,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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