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_handholding

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Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-11-08T22:48:20+00:00

Nice reply

Shunao

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Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-11-09T22:49:47+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Nice reply

edit: i think he fixed everything :v

[Mad]

418 posts

Joined June 2014

[Mad] 2017-11-19T23:57:24+00:00

Hello! from queue:

[Lukas]
00:28:590 (5) - this note doesnt have nearly the same importance as 00:27:701 (1,2,3,4) - these, maybe make it into a sliderend or even just remove it, like what you did at 00:24:812 (4) - or 00:35:701 -
01:06:812 (1,2,3,4) - these are literally the biggest jumps in the whole map, and im not sure why. on a side note, if you want spacing like this, shouldnt 01:17:923 - also have that kind of spacing?
01:29:923 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - spacing on this seems really underwhelming compared to what youve done earlier, but really im just wondering why 01:30:146 (2,3) - is stacked
01:59:701 (1) - ending point on this spinner feels weird, maybe somewhere like at 02:04:479 - where the higher instument cuts out?

[eLy]
00:00:812 - 00:05:923 - your rhythm choice in this section feels weird, you start by following the guitar then follow the barely audible symbol in the background, it might be better to completely follow the foreground instruments until the drum actually kicks in
00:17:479 (3) - feels odd to have such a strong sound on the sliderend here, maybe turn it into a 1/2 slider and a note, since there still is a sound on the red tick
01:23:034 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - not sure why the spacing is increasing here so drastically, the intensity is pretty much the same for every note
01:34:257 (1,2) - this double feels pretty unintuitive, maybe something like turning 01:33:923 (5) - into a 3/4 slider?
01:46:590 (3) - blanket xd
also kiai time on this one is different from all the rest

[Hard]
01:07:701 (5) - i dont agree with putting this here, the actual drum roll doesnt start til 1/4 beat after, and theres actually no sound on the white tick at all, id start it on the blue tick and make it a 1/4 slider, or even make it into a 1/8 repeat slider
01:16:368 (3) - theres no sound here, if you want to keep it simple since its a hard diff, maybe make 01:16:146 (2) - into a 3/4 slider?
01:30:812 (4) - ^
01:18:146 (4) - another thing here, theres no drum beat on the red tick

[Advanced]
01:01:479 (1,2) - id reverse the lengths of these to give 1 more emphasis
01:29:034 (3,4) - these are weirdly overlapping

[Normal]
00:46:368 (6) - theres nothing all that important on this note, maybe make 00:46:146 (5) - into a 1/1 slider?

[Easy]
01:27:257 (2,3) - blanket xd
01:31:701 (2) - the reverse on this seems pretty unnecessary, especially when you ignore the drums on the whit ticks

fun map, now rank so i can get free 300pp xd

GL!

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Erisan 2017-11-22T19:43:10+00:00

Shogud wrote:
Hello! from queue:

[eLy]
00:00:812 - 00:05:923 - your rhythm choice in this section feels weird, you start by following the guitar then follow the barely audible symbol in the background, it might be better to completely follow the foreground instruments until the drum actually kicks in
playing and there is no discomfort so keep this way
00:17:479 (3) - feels odd to have such a strong sound on the sliderend here, maybe turn it into a 1/2 slider and a note, since there still is a sound on the red tick
fixed
01:23:034 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - not sure why the spacing is increasing here so drastically, the intensity is pretty much the same for every note
fixed
01:34:257 (1,2) - this double feels pretty unintuitive, maybe something like turning 01:33:923 (5) - into a 3/4 slider?
fixed
01:46:590 (3) - blanket xd
fixed
also kiai time on this one is different from all the rest
oh, ty fix

http://puu.sh/yruNo/e3711e42bc.zip
ty mod

Shunao

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Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-11-25T01:43:11+00:00

Shogud wrote:
Hello! from queue:

[Hard]
01:07:701 (5) - i dont agree with putting this here, the actual drum roll doesnt start til 1/4 beat after, and theres actually no sound on the white tick at all, id start it on the blue tick and make it a 1/4 slider, or even make it into a 1/8 repeat slider kk
01:16:368 (3) - theres no sound here, if you want to keep it simple since its a hard diff, maybe make 01:16:146 (2) - into a 3/4 slider? there is a very weak drum if you listen carefully
01:30:812 (4) - ^ ^
01:18:146 (4) - another thing here, theres no drum beat on the red tick but there is vocal

[Advanced]
01:01:479 (1,2) - id reverse the lengths of these to give 1 more emphasis but on the head of slider2 there is a strong sound who need to be clickable imo
01:29:034 (3,4) - these are weirdly overlapping fixed

[Normal]
00:46:368 (6) - theres nothing all that important on this note, maybe make 00:46:146 (5) - into a 1/1 slider? there is guitar

[Easy]
01:27:257 (2,3) - blanket xd i raise slider renverse instead
01:31:701 (2) - the reverse on this seems pretty unnecessary, especially when you ignore the drums on the whit ticks ye fixed

fun map, now rank so i can get free 300pp xd lool waiting for bn now

GL!

Thanks for modding!~

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2017-11-25T21:11:55+00:00

Shogud wrote:
Hello! from queue:

[Lukas]
00:28:590 (5) - this note doesnt have nearly the same importance as 00:27:701 (1,2,3,4) - these, maybe make it into a sliderend or even just remove it, like what you did at 00:24:812 (4) - or 00:35:701 - No thanks, I like my current rhythm :/
01:06:812 (1,2,3,4) - these are literally the biggest jumps in the whole map, and im not sure why. on a side note, if you want spacing like this, shouldnt 01:17:923 - also have that kind of spacing? The part is very intense and it's the kiai itself which should be the hardest part of the map. I don't see why you would think that 01:17:923 - would have to spaced the same, it's less intense
01:29:923 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - spacing on this seems really underwhelming compared to what youve done earlier, but really im just wondering why 01:30:146 (2,3) - is stacked The part is calm and the vocals aren't intense, why those two circles are stacked is because of the same pitch in the background
01:59:701 (1) - ending point on this spinner feels weird, maybe somewhere like at 02:04:479 - where the higher instument cuts out? you can hear that the pitch of the guitar in the background goes lower so I thought that would be a good place to end the spinner

no change from me, sorry :/

Battle

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Joined February 2014

Battle 2017-12-18T18:29:54+00:00

[Easy]
00:08:146 - whistle works better for the head instead of clap for this diff since there's not really any like red or blue tick notes you can follow cuz easy lol

[Normal]
00:57:923 (1,2,3) - tbh this rhythm is awkward, i get you're trying to follow the drums but you're also kinda following the vocals in the kiai so having this where rhythm is prioritizing drums but also partially following vocals is just awk
01:12:146 (1,2,3) - same, in this case the repeat of 2 has the stronger vocal so it's more awkward that the weaker sounds are prioritized click-wise

[E. Insane]
01:24:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - prioritizing the white ticks (for jumps) here would make the jumps feel more meaningful, rn you have jumps that are all the same length that really take away from the build up in intensity here

[L. Insane]
00:18:368 (6) - having this as a 3/4 slider doesn't make as much sense as the previous once since there's some drum w/e going on in the bg clearly audible on the red tick
00:54:368 - tbh the thing that like REALLY bugs me about this diff is that there's like no introduction of anything with fast sliders so people just expect the 1/4 sliders like 00:55:034 (2) - to play like 1/2 because that's just how slow you've been making the 1/2 sliders

jumps feel somewhat overexaggerated imo, but w/e if you want to make a pp map go ahead i guess lol

not sure how i exactly feel about the last diff but other diffs are pretty fine (i really encourage ely to do his point though lol)

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2017-12-18T19:06:05+00:00

Battle wrote:
[L. Insane]
00:18:368 (6) - having this as a 3/4 slider doesn't make as much sense as the previous once since there's some drum w/e going on in the bg clearly audible on the red tick
00:54:368 - tbh the thing that like REALLY bugs me about this diff is that there's like no introduction of anything with fast sliders so people just expect the 1/4 sliders like 00:55:034 (2) - to play like 1/2 because that's just how slow you've been making the 1/2 sliders could you maybe recommend me a way to fix though, I'm a bit confused as to what I should do about it...

jumps feel somewhat overexaggerated imo, but w/e if you want to make a pp map go ahead i guess lol

not sure how i exactly feel about the last diff but other diffs are pretty fine (i really encourage ely to do his point though lol)

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Erisan 2017-12-18T21:36:33+00:00

Battle wrote:

[E. Insane]
01:24:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - prioritizing the white ticks (for jumps) here would make the jumps feel more meaningful, rn you have jumps that are all the same length that really take away from the build up in intensity here
add,nc

thank you for moddimng Battle

http://puu.sh/yJgEl/f5ef882e83.zip

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-12-18T23:05:46+00:00

Battle wrote:

[Easy]
00:08:146 - whistle works better for the head instead of clap for this diff since there's not really any like red or blue tick notes you can follow cuz easy lol kk c':

[Normal]
00:57:923 (1,2,3) - tbh this rhythm is awkward, i get you're trying to follow the drums but you're also kinda following the vocals in the kiai so having this where rhythm is prioritizing drums but also partially following vocals is just awk fixed i decided to make vocals clickable, it's sound good now i think..
01:12:146 (1,2,3) - same, in this case the repeat of 2 has the stronger vocal so it's more awkward that the weaker sounds are prioritized click-wise same here but added a note on red tick for vocals

not sure how i exactly feel about the last diff but other diffs are pretty fine (i really encourage ely to do his point though lol)

Battle

2,865 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2017-12-19T03:04:04+00:00

@lukas i would just decrease the sv so you could like notice that it's not 1/2 but still have the same like fast movement u do

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2017-12-19T11:27:22+00:00

ok nice
sorry for delaying the qualify Shogun xD

fix uwu

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Shunao

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Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-12-19T20:18:08+00:00

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

ok nice
sorry for delaying the qualify Shogun xD

fix uwu

osu file format v14

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Seolv

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Seolv 2017-12-21T18:28:55+00:00

had irc with battle and made some changes w

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Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2017-12-21T21:27:03+00:00

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Serizawa Haruki

1,693 posts

Joined June 2015

Serizawa Haruki 2018-01-04T04:05:29+00:00

Just a few minor suggestions about some things I noticed (not very important so you can also ignore this but whatever)

Easy

01:03:257 (3,1) - This blanket could be better tbh, you need to change the slidershapes a little and then rotate/move them
01:54:812 (1,2) - Same thing as above
01:56:590 (2,1) - You should try to avoid this overlap because you don't use overlaps anywhere else in this diff, it kinda looks weird right now

Advanced

01:17:479 (1,2) - Would look better if they were perfectly parallel

eLy's Insane

00:00:812 (1) - It would be more accurate to add a circle at 00:00:923 -
00:47:257 (1,2,3) - Blanket is noticeably off

Lukas' Insane

00:51:923 (5,6,1) - Blanket is off
01:37:923 (2,3) - Same as above

Btw I love this map <3 Good luck~

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2018-01-06T11:11:53+00:00

blanket mods *cries*

osu file format v14

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Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2018-01-14T00:48:56+00:00

J a c k wrote:
Just a few minor suggestions about some things I noticed (not very important so you can also ignore this but whatever)
Easy
01:03:257 (3,1) - This blanket could be better tbh, you need to change the slidershapes a little and then rotate/move them
01:54:812 (1,2) - Same thing as above
01:56:590 (2,1) - You should try to avoid this overlap because you don't use overlaps anywhere else in this diff, it kinda looks weird right now i added a overlap here because I want that the players notice a difference to warn the end <:
Advanced
01:17:479 (1,2) - Would look better if they were perfectly parallel

Btw I love this map <3 Good luck~

no reply mean fixed! Thanks for modding!~

Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2018-02-11T21:52:23+00:00

Hi. Here from queue. Hope this helps!

[Easy]

00:43:701 (1) – rotate by 1 degree clockwise and move to 61, 58 for better distance/visuals into (2). (I realize this suggestion doesn't matter, but I made it already, so deal with it)

00:50:368 (4) – I was slightly confused by this circle. What's it trying to do? It feels better to me to just delete the circle and let the player pick the rhythm back up at the strong note on 00:50:812 (1) - . I don't think this circle is doing anything productive, and let me explain why. By not putting an object at 00:50:146 - , you tell the player that this drum sound isn't important and you shouldn't follow it. But then with the circle at 00:50:368 (4) – you tell them you should have been listening to the drums. If you do something at 00:50:146 - , maybe this rhythm track could work, but I like the long 5/2 pause.

01:03:257 (3) – woops

00:54:368 (1) – This kiai could support whistle hitsounds that go with the singer. Particularly at 01:03:257 (3) – , it would be nice to have it not be so empty, so a whistle layer would fit nicely.

01:17:479 (3,4,1) – This 3/2 gap is weird. What do you want to do here? Do you want to go with the vocals or not? I like the vocals, Easy players like the vocals, you seem to like the vocals, so syncopating the (1) slider to start at 01:19:034 – is perfectly fine (then just make it a 3/2 slider. You can keep the hitsound a cymbal cuz it's a strong note and it makes sense). If you really don't want to miss the cymbal at 01:19:257 (1) - , then give up on the vocal notes at 01:17:479 (3,4) – and go with the drums.

01:35:257 (3) – The corners of the screen are a bit of an awkward zone (it's hard for someone to move their cursor all the way down there, especially if they haven't played the game before). I don't think there is anything magnificent gained by going into the corner, so I'm confident you can find a safer alternative for the Easy player that doesn't sacrifice anything.

01:56:590 (2) – Rotate this 1 degree clockwise by selection center for a better blanket with (1).

[Normal]

00:01:035 (1,2) – The rhythm is fine here and this isn't a suggestion. I can tell you're following the drum. But the melody is doing something different by strictly going with the white ticks, so I always get tripped up by this
01:40:590 (1,2) - ^

00:22:368 (1) – I expected there to be some kind of rest/pause here. This chain of rhythms at 00:17:923 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) – was a bit complex, so I expected some kind of reward for hitting this downbeat at 00:22:368 (1) – , and I think some kind of break would let the player feel that. The ½ slider, though, keeps it intense and makes me stay focused when I thought I already finished the section by clicking the downbeat at (1). You could do a 1/1 pause or a 1/1 slider, but do consider some amount of rest around this section.

00:35:479 (6,7) – This 3/2 rhythm is annoying, but I'm confident that this issue is on my end and not yours.

00:36:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – the note denisty increases compared to the last section, and I'm confused by that. It's hard to tell what (2) is trying to follow in the song because there really isn't a note there. Another problem I have is that the singer stops singing at 00:39:034 (6) – and then has nothing at 00:39:257 (7) - , so I expected a pause. This contradicts how you followed the singer at 00:31:257 (5,6,7) - . I get that you want to increase the pacing here and agree with it, but imo, you can communicate that change by following the vocals more densely since that is a more obvious track for the player to follow. Also, 00:38:146 – is an opportunity for you to get denser which allows you to insert a more intuitive pause earlier.

01:56:812 (2) – This object needs a hitsound. If it doesn't, then why is it here?

[Advanced]

00:17:034 (5,7) – These are very close which looks poor. Additionally, (6) could have 1.50x spacing. I think you mapped it this way because you don't very much room on the bottom. That's not really an excuse. Find a way to move 00:15:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – up and give yourself room.

01:00:590 (3,4) – Turn stacking on. Why is the DS 1.6?

01:01:034 (4,5) – The rhythm felt fast to me. Why not prioritize the melody by deleting (5) and making (4) a slider?

01:29:034 (3) – There isn't a note here in the music. Why have it be clickable?

[Hard]

00:39:701 – The rhythm around here felt off. The vocals and drum have a strong note here. I don't like that you're prioritizing the guitar's harmony over these stronger tracks. Making (4) into two circles would accommodate both rhythms, and the denser rhythm would also throw some zest into the circle → circle → slider rhythms. If you do, then consider other places to do this.

00:57:034 (5) – This slider is off-screen on smaller screen sizes. Find a way to move this to the right. And not just so that it's not clipping, leave a healthy margin as well.

01:27:257 (5,6,7,1) – The (6,7,1) is at this weird 177 degree angle which is a design that puts a lot of unwarranted emphasis onto how linear this is. The angle also doesn't look nice compared to the (5,6,7) angle. There are many ways for this to look better. One example: http://puu.sh/zl5UY/fefa41ef58.jpg

[Ely's diff]

00:13:479 (1,3) – The spacing between this is close which looks off. Can you space these out in some way, perhaps by rotating (3) by ten degrees clockwise?

00:21:479 (5,6,7,1) – I have trouble playing and understanding this pattern. It's hard to describe, but I think it's because (7) has a lot of emphasis because of its spacing, and when I play, I don't understand why this spacing is big while (6) has little spacing. I believe (6) is a stronger note than (7) since it starts the drum track. I'm also just bad at reading ¾ sliders and ¼ that aren't obviously ¼ sliders. However, I don't think there needs to be this level of complexity here in the music. Especially since the following section is quite calm, I don't like getting built up in a complex way only to turn that complexity all the way off. I think that the music at 01:07:479 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) – is more accepting of the complex rhythm/spacing because it's in the kiai, and I'm properly engaged with the song/map to do it.

00:51:257 – This is a strong note in the song, and it feels empty that you haven't put something here (like a slider end). Playing this rhythm would be nice.

01:19:257 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) – I have an issue with this. To explain, look at 01:23:923 (1,2,3) – The intensity around here doesn't feel strong enough spacing-wise. These later objects are fine, I think the real problem is at 01:19:257 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) – . These earlier patterns set the baseline of intensity that I expect to receive. This baseline is a bit high. As a result, 01:23:923 (1,2,3) – doesn't have enough punch relative to the patterns before it. I feel that the earlier patterns are too intense because of it's note density and spacing. Constant ½ circles are engaging enough to keep me hyped up, so putting in a couple well placed sliders would give rest to cool me off a bit (In my mind, 01:19:701 (3,4) – and 01:21:034 (1,2) – would be good candidates to merge). Additionally, nerfing the spacing into 01:19:479 (2) – would set the baseline of my expectations a bit lower, especially since (2) is a weaker ½ note. Consider a more diamond pattern for this combo (if you don't do sliders). Lastly, the part around 01:21:923 (1) – is a bit high, so consider taking some emphasis/spacing away from this downbeat and instead putting it on 01:22:590 (1) – to connect big spacing with the new section of music as opposed to the old.

01:38:368 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) – this section was really tame (spacing-wise) compared to 01:24:589 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - . I wanted to be challenged more here.

[Lukas's diff]

I would like to discuss some things with Lukas before modding to try to give a better mod for this difficulty.

That Discussion

17:04 pinataman: hey lukas, pleasure to finally chat with you
17:04 pinataman: do you have some time to talk about your map?
17:04 [ L u k a s ]: succ
17:04 [ L u k a s ]: lmao sure
17:04 [ L u k a s ]: you don't have to be so formal btw xd
17:05 pinataman: im sorry, thats the kind of person I am, I'm sure I'll loosen up as we go XD
17:05 [ L u k a s ]: yeah
17:05 [ L u k a s ]: I already found an issue btw
17:05 [ L u k a s ]: lukas4bn tbh
17:05 [ L u k a s ]: 00:02:368 (5) - wtf dis so high pitch why u gotta stack m8 ;w;
17:06 pinataman: well, what I want to talk about is your mapping process
17:06 pinataman: I want to understand your inspirations on motion
17:06 pinataman: what causes you to move the player one way
17:06 pinataman: versus another
17:07 [ L u k a s ]: idk
17:07 [ L u k a s ]: why's mapping so complicated td
17:07 [ L u k a s ]: also I'm not sure what you mean by that
17:07 pinataman: yeah, let me try again
17:07 pinataman: so consider this slider
17:07 pinataman: it points to the right
17:07 [ L u k a s ]: yeah
17:07 pinataman: one option is to point it up
17:08 [ L u k a s ]: but I don't wanna
17:08 pinataman: which motion would be nicer? and why is it the one pointing right?
17:08 [ L u k a s ]: you're refering to 00:02:368 (5) - ?
17:08 pinataman: fuuuuu
17:08 pinataman: 00:08:812 (3) -
17:08 pinataman: did i not copy it
17:08 pinataman: lol mb
17:08 pinataman: i feel dumb now XD
17:09 [ L u k a s ]: idk I wanted to
17:09 [ L u k a s ]: make a different pattern
17:09 [ L u k a s ]: idk
17:09 [ L u k a s ]: make it interesting or whatever xd
17:09 pinataman: yeah I know the feel, sometimes you just want to do the thing you want to do
17:09 [ L u k a s ]: the gimmick here is a lot of copy pasting with same patterns but different slidershapes, as show by 00:11:701 (1,2,3) -
17:10 [ L u k a s ]: but sometimes that thing isn't really justified
17:10 pinataman: alright, so why did you want to set up the gimmick?
17:10 pinataman: what from the music inspired you to do that?
17:10 [ L u k a s ]: uh
17:10 [ L u k a s ]: because I'm lazy xd
17:10 [ L u k a s ]: jk
17:10 [ L u k a s ]: I wanted to do something different I guess
17:10 [ L u k a s ]: and I felt like the part was repetitive enough
17:10 pinataman: alright, well let me tell you what I think about motion
17:11 pinataman: motion is another tool to compare and contrast the music
17:11 pinataman: if your motion stays the same, its because I feel the song is being the same
17:11 pinataman: if the song is different, I make the motion different
17:11 pinataman: kind of like spacing in a way
17:12 [ L u k a s ]: true
17:12 [ L u k a s ]: well, idk but sometimes the motion doesn't have to be that strict
17:12 [ L u k a s ]: like in most ranked maps, sometimes the flow isn't really good
17:13 pinataman: that's true, but I think we should try our best as mappers to bring out the music
17:13 [ L u k a s ]: I agree
17:13 pinataman: that's why I was concerned when I played this pattern 00:40:146 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -
17:13 pinataman: I feel the motion is very similar in each pattern
17:13 pinataman: and that didn't feel nice to play
17:13 [ L u k a s ]: it is
17:13 pinataman: I feel that sometimes the song changes, so I want to change with the song
17:14 [ L u k a s ]: if it's about the movement
17:14 [ L u k a s ]: then ok, I was doing everything randomly and didn't know what movement is and what importance it had
17:14 [ L u k a s ]: are you gonna bubble the map, because I'm going to remap the diff then
17:15 pinataman: I want to get a sense of how you want to remap it?
17:15 pinataman: to answer your question
17:15 pinataman: I would like to not bubble it in its current form
17:15 [ L u k a s ]: oh
17:15 pinataman: but I want to know how you would remap it before you invest your time into it
17:16 pinataman: because i think if you found another BN, they might rank it
17:16 [ L u k a s ]: I'm going to try to remap all the movement and correct some small issues such as rhythm and all
17:17 pinataman: okay, I'm happy to talk about other issues when I come back and mod the diff, I'm just concerned with the motion
17:17 pinataman: and I would like to see an example of what you would want to change
17:17 [ L u k a s ]: everything pretty much
17:17 pinataman: that's too vague
17:17 [ L u k a s ]: I don't like how the patterns were made, the flow, rhythm or anything
17:17 [ L u k a s ]: well idk how to say it otherwise really
17:18 pinataman: okay, can I point out something I might do that would address what I'm talking about?
17:18 pinataman: so at 00:43:034 (5,6) - , the rhythm changes from the drums to the guitar here
17:18 pinataman: this a pretty significant change in music
17:18 [ L u k a s ]: I already know all the issues yeah
17:19 pinataman: as a result, I wouldn't continue the clockwise motion that's been established
17:19 pinataman: alright
17:19 pinataman: cool
17:19 [ L u k a s ]: also some ignored vocals that are strong
17:19 [ L u k a s ]: 00:40:591 (3,3) - here
17:19 [ L u k a s ]: I'll call you when I remap everything
17:20 pinataman: well I'm happy that you like the vocals and want to map them, though I do feel that's subjective
17:20 pinataman: okay great
17:20 pinataman: thank you for discussing your map with me, I look forward to seeing what you do with it
17:20 [ L u k a s ]: thank you for improving it and showing all the mistakes I made

Will update this when I have finished my mod.

Last edited by Grrum 2018-02-16T19:58:43+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Erisan 2018-02-13T00:27:48+00:00

J a c k wrote:
eLy's Insane
00:00:812 (1) - It would be more accurate to add a circle at 00:00:923 -
00:47:257 (1,2,3) - Blanket is noticeably off

all fixed

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Erisan 2018-02-13T00:51:22+00:00

pinataman wrote:
[Ely's diff]

00:13:479 (1,3) – The spacing between this is close which looks off. Can you space these out in some way, perhaps by rotating (3) by ten degrees clockwise?

fix

00:21:479 (5,6,7,1) – I have trouble playing and understanding this pattern. It's hard to describe, but I think it's because (7) has a lot of emphasis because of its spacing, and when I play, I don't understand why this spacing is big while (6) has little spacing. I believe (6) is a stronger note than (7) since it starts the drum track. I'm also just bad at reading ¾ sliders and ¼ that aren't obviously ¼ sliders. However, I don't think there needs to be this level of complexity here in the music. Especially since the following section is quite calm, I don't like getting built up in a complex way only to turn that complexity all the way off. I think that the music at 01:07:479 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) – is more accepting of the complex rhythm/spacing because it's in the kiai, and I'm properly engaged with the song/map to do it.

changed

00:51:257 – This is a strong note in the song, and it feels empty that you haven't put something here (like a slider end). Playing this rhythm would be nice.

I want to make kiai stand out as much as possible by reducing the sound before kiai as it is

01:19:257 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) – I have an issue with this. To explain, look at 01:23:923 (1,2,3) – The intensity around here doesn't feel strong enough spacing-wise. These later objects are fine, I think the real problem is at 01:19:257 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) – . These earlier patterns set the baseline of intensity that I expect to receive. This baseline is a bit high. As a result, 01:23:923 (1,2,3) – doesn't have enough punch relative to the patterns before it. I feel that the earlier patterns are too intense because of it's note density and spacing. Constant ½ circles are engaging enough to keep me hyped up, so putting in a couple well placed sliders would give rest to cool me off a bit (In my mind, 01:19:701 (3,4) – and 01:21:034 (1,2) – would be good candidates to merge). Additionally, nerfing the spacing into 01:19:479 (2) – would set the baseline of my expectations a bit lower, especially since (2) is a weaker ½ note. Consider a more diamond pattern for this combo (if you don't do sliders). Lastly, the part around 01:21:923 (1) – is a bit high, so consider taking some emphasis/spacing away from this downbeat and instead putting it on 01:22:590 (1) – to connect big spacing with the new section of music as opposed to the old.

changed

01:38:368 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) – this section was really tame (spacing-wise) compared to 01:24:589 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - . I wanted to be challenged more here.

ty mod

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Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2018-02-16T16:38:05+00:00

pinataman

pinataman wrote:
Hi. Here from queue. Hope this helps!

[Easy]

00:43:701 (1) – rotate by 1 degree clockwise and move to 61, 58 for better distance/visuals into (2). (I realize this suggestion doesn't matter, but I made it already, so deal with it)

00:50:368 (4) – I was slightly confused by this circle. What's it trying to do? It feels better to me to just delete the circle and let the player pick the rhythm back up at the strong note on 00:50:812 (1) - . I don't think this circle is doing anything productive, and let me explain why. By not putting an object at 00:50:146 - , you tell the player that this drum sound isn't important and you shouldn't follow it. But then with the circle at 00:50:368 (4) – you tell them you should have been listening to the drums. If you do something at 00:50:146 - , maybe this rhythm track could work, but I like the long 5/2 pause.

01:03:257 (3) – woops xd

00:54:368 (1) – This kiai could support whistle hitsounds that go with the singer. Particularly at 01:03:257 (3) – , it would be nice to have it not be so empty, so a whistle layer would fit nicely.

01:17:479 (3,4,1) – This 3/2 gap is weird. What do you want to do here? Do you want to go with the vocals or not? I like the vocals, Easy players like the vocals, you seem to like the vocals, so syncopating the (1) slider to start at 01:19:034 – is perfectly fine (then just make it a 3/2 slider. You can keep the hitsound a cymbal cuz it's a strong note and it makes sense). If you really don't want to miss the cymbal at 01:19:257 (1) - , then give up on the vocal notes at 01:17:479 (3,4) – and go with the drums.

01:35:257 (3) – The corners of the screen are a bit of an awkward zone (it's hard for someone to move their cursor all the way down there, especially if they haven't played the game before). I don't think there is anything magnificent gained by going into the corner, so I'm confident you can find a safer alternative for the Easy player that doesn't sacrifice anything.

01:56:590 (2) – Rotate this 1 degree clockwise by selection center for a better blanket with (1).

[Normal]

00:01:035 (1,2) – The rhythm is fine here and this isn't a suggestion. I can tell you're following the drum. But the melody is doing something different by strictly going with the white ticks, so I always get tripped up by this
01:40:590 (1,2) - ^

00:22:368 (1) – I expected there to be some kind of rest/pause here. This chain of rhythms at 00:17:923 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) – was a bit complex, so I expected some kind of reward for hitting this downbeat at 00:22:368 (1) – , and I think some kind of break would let the player feel that. The ½ slider, though, keeps it intense and makes me stay focused when I thought I already finished the section by clicking the downbeat at (1). You could do a 1/1 pause or a 1/1 slider, but do consider some amount of rest around this section.

00:35:479 (6,7) – This 3/2 rhythm is annoying, but I'm confident that this issue is on my end and not yours. :v

00:36:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – the note denisty increases compared to the last section, and I'm confused by that. It's hard to tell what (2) is trying to follow in the song because there really isn't a note there. Another problem I have is that the singer stops singing at 00:39:034 (6) – and then has nothing at 00:39:257 (7) - , so I expected a pause. This contradicts how you followed the singer at 00:31:257 (5,6,7) - . I get that you want to increase the pacing here and agree with it, but imo, you can communicate that change by following the vocals more densely since that is a more obvious track for the player to follow. Also, 00:38:146 – is an opportunity for you to get denser which allows you to insert a more intuitive pause earlier.

01:56:812 (2) – This object needs a hitsound. If it doesn't, then why is it here?

[Advanced]

00:17:034 (5,7) – These are very close which looks poor. Additionally, (6) could have 1.50x spacing. I think you mapped it this way because you don't very much room on the bottom. That's not really an excuse. Find a way to move 00:15:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – up and give yourself room.

01:00:590 (3,4) – Turn stacking on. Why is the DS 1.6?

01:01:034 (4,5) – The rhythm felt fast to me. Why not prioritize the melody by deleting (5) and making (4) a slider? im not agree with that, i put 2 circles for emphasis more drums, normally it's a triplet but it's a advanced and i don't wanted to map it, I just want to highlight it to show that this part should be important for drums.

01:29:034 (3) – There isn't a note here in the music. Why have it be clickable? woops

[Hard]

00:39:701 – The rhythm around here felt off. The vocals and drum have a strong note here. I don't like that you're prioritizing the guitar's harmony over these stronger tracks. Making (4) into two circles would accommodate both rhythms, and the denser rhythm would also throw some zest into the circle → circle → slider rhythms. If you do, then consider other places to do this.

00:57:034 (5) – This slider is off-screen on smaller screen sizes. Find a way to move this to the right. And not just so that it's not clipping, leave a healthy margin as well.

01:27:257 (5,6,7,1) – The (6,7,1) is at this weird 177 degree angle which is a design that puts a lot of unwarranted emphasis onto how linear this is. The angle also doesn't look nice compared to the (5,6,7) angle. There are many ways for this to look better. One example: http://puu.sh/zl5UY/fefa41ef58.jpg

Will update this when I have finished my mod.

no reply mean fixed!

thanks for modding!

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2018-02-23T11:20:11+00:00

hey
sorry for late response but I just finished my diff and I noticed you changed the metadata, so I decided to change it as well before giving you the diff, and when I saved it just deleted my diff (it said "file exists with same metadata, do you wish to overwrite")

sorry but I don't think I can finish my GD at least for another two days or so, PM me if you want to rank it without my diff

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2018-02-23T17:03:51+00:00

here we go!

Nevo

Global Moderator

1,184 posts

Joined November 2015

Nevo 2018-02-24T06:02:31+00:00

Kalibe's Insane
00:57:257 (1) - maybe unnc this
01:25:257 (2) - could use more spacing since its not exactly that weak of a beat imo
01:26:146 (2,3,1) - i wouldnt stack this with 01:25:257 (2,2) - so you can reflect the change in the song
01:40:368 - circle here could work since theres a vocal
01:57:257 (3) - nc becasue finish
01:58:812 (3) - nc because kick
02:04:146 - have the hitsound volume decrease from this point because this is where the song fades and those slider ticks are pretty loud :<
silence slider end :<<<

i was only told to mod this diff so c:

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2018-02-24T11:30:37+00:00

Nevo wrote:
Kalibe's Insane
00:57:257 (1) - maybe unnc this want to be consistent with 01:03:923 (1,2,3,1) - etc
01:25:257 (2) - could use more spacing since its not exactly that weak of a beat imo just a little bit
01:26:146 (2,3,1) - i wouldnt stack this with 01:25:257 (2,2) - so you can reflect the change in the song ok
01:40:368 - circle here could work since theres a vocal ok
01:57:257 (3) - nc becasue finish d
01:58:812 (3) - nc because kick w
02:04:146 - have the hitsound volume decrease from this point because this is where the song fades and those slider ticks are pretty loud :<
silence slider end :<<< sure

i was only told to mod this diff so c:

thanks nevo :3c

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A r M i N

1,305 posts

Joined October 2014

A r M i N 2018-02-27T17:47:23+00:00

HI quick shit mod for lukas diff, as requested

00:07:034 - make this clickable
00:16:479 - sound here, so try https://puu.sh/zwTyE/7b5ec32af6.png
00:19:701 (2) - ^
00:29:034 (5,1) - stack
00:32:590 (6) - use ds pls, equal spacing to 5 and 7
00:50:146 (1) - nc
00:51:479 (2,3,4) - make it straight pls
00:54:146 (2) - bit hard to read, maybe move it away
00:56:923 (4) - blanket it like that https://puu.sh/zwTFV/0b061e3d9a.png
01:02:146 (2,3,4) - wtf spacing
01:11:257 (5) - here u use slider but here 00:57:034 (5,6,7) - u use circles, pls make it consistent
01:12:812 (3,4,5) - equal spacing plzzz
01:15:590 (8) - ^
01:16:479 (5) - ^
01:17:590 (2) - ^
01:18:257 (6) - ^
01:22:701 (9) - ^
01:26:146 (6,7,1) - ^
01:29:146 (4,5) - ^
01:47:590 (8,1) - ^
01:30:923 (6) -
01:29:701 (7) -

ETC... please dont be so lazy, and actually make straight lines with the same spacing, this happens on basically all triples.. this just doesnt look polished and Its not easy for the player to hit those notes consistently, since they are so randomly spaced pls fix

01:18:590 (8) - NC
01:32:812 (6) - 1/2 spacing lower than 1/4?

done, good luck :3

Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Chalwa 2018-02-27T18:02:43+00:00

only Lukas' diff how ShogunMoon (:D) wrote.

Disable Widescreen Support how it's made in other diffs.
00:09:923 (1) - The strong sound in the middle of this slider is just skipped which is kinda weird for player when he'll play next combo and has this sound clickable. I would suggest you to make here that rhythm how it is on 00:13:479 (1,2) or with three circles.
00:24:146 (1,2,3,4) - This jumps, especially a (2,3) aren't following a music. You followed vocal which is 100% fine, but then why you've putted the smallest DS in the strongest sound in pattern?
00:56:812 (3,4,5,6,7) - The burst has really good shape to this part, but the start of it is unreadable a bit. I felt when I was playing this diff 00:56:812 (3,4,5) has a 1/2 break within them. Since in the rest of the map you haven't putted a burst like this, could you make DS everywhere the same in burst?
01:42:367 (1) - The same as in first point.
01:59:479 - On that strong sound you should put a note especially when it's putted in 01:59:034 (4). Then just move the spinner to 01:59:590.

orz

also there are some ds warnings, but they aren't that bad how the one i've mentioned.

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2018-02-27T19:05:55+00:00

A r M i N wrote:
HI quick shit mod for lukas diff, as requested

00:07:034 - make this clickable I was trying to have lower density at the beginning, and the sound isn't as prominent if you listen to it without the hitsounds. Of course it's strong, but I think that the drum sounds on 00:07:701 (6,7,8) - are far more prominent, therefore deserve more emphasis
00:16:479 - sound here, so try https://puu.sh/zwTyE/7b5ec32af6.png same as above, I wanted drastic changes in note density for far less emphasied parts
00:19:701 (2) - ^ same as above, I wanted drastic changes in note density for far less emphasied parts
00:29:034 (5,1) - stack
00:32:590 (6) - use ds pls, equal spacing to 5 and 7
00:50:146 (1) - nc
00:51:479 (2,3,4) - make it straight pls
00:54:146 (2) - bit hard to read, maybe move it away rejected because it was my intention, that's what makes it an extra, not only the higher spaced 1/4
00:56:923 (4) - blanket it like that https://puu.sh/zwTFV/0b061e3d9a.png blanket wasn't my intention and it ruins the flow
01:02:146 (2,3,4) - wtf spacing
01:11:257 (5) - here u use slider but here 00:57:034 (5,6,7) - u use circles, pls make it consistent
01:12:812 (3,4,5) - equal spacing plzzz
01:15:590 (8) - ^
01:16:479 (5) - ^
01:17:590 (2) - ^
01:18:257 (6) - ^
01:22:701 (9) - ^
01:26:146 (6,7,1) - ^
01:29:146 (4,5) - ^
01:47:590 (8,1) - ^
01:30:923 (6) -
01:29:701 (7) -

ETC... please dont be so lazy, and actually make straight lines with the same spacing, this happens on basically all triples.. this just doesnt look polished and Its not easy for the player to hit those notes consistently, since they are so randomly spaced pls fix I remapped this 2 times please don't call me lazy TT

01:18:590 (8) - NC
01:32:812 (6) - 1/2 spacing lower than 1/4? it's same spacing, making it harder for players to read which was my intention to make it harder,
I put an NC tho

done, good luck :3

Chalwa wrote:
only Lukas' diff how ShogunMoon (:D) wrote.
Disable Widescreen Support how it's made in other diffs. why do so many people care about this it literally doesn't make a change aaaaaaaaaaa fixed
00:09:923 (1) - The strong sound in the middle of this slider is just skipped which is kinda weird for player when he'll play next combo and has this sound clickable. I would suggest you to make here that rhythm how it is on 00:13:479 (1,2) or with three circles. adressed in armin's mod
00:24:146 (1,2,3,4) - This jumps, especially a (2,3) aren't following a music. You followed vocal which is 100% fine, but then why you've putted the smallest DS in the strongest sound in pattern? I was following vocal pitch and organized my spacing in the whole map around that, when the pitch changes or gets more intense I put bigger spacing
00:56:812 (3,4,5,6,7) - The burst has really good shape to this part, but the start of it is unreadable a bit. I felt when I was playing this diff 00:56:812 (3,4,5) has a 1/2 break within them. Since in the rest of the map you haven't putted a burst like this, could you make DS everywhere the same in burst? nah, I wanted to make it harder for players, because extra diffs aren't just jumps, you need to have good reading skill to FC
01:42:367 (1) - The same as in first point. ^^;;
01:59:479 - On that strong sound you should put a note especially when it's putted in 01:59:034 (4). Then just move the spinner to 01:59:590.

orz

also there are some ds warnings, but they aren't that bad how the one i've mentioned.

uwuwuwuwuwuw

fix fix~

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Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2018-03-01T19:45:22+00:00

Kalibe's

01:59:479 (1) - slider goes on even after music is over. This feels too long, I'd rather just end the map. Consider ending at 02:04:590 – or 02:05:479 – (earlier the better imo).

Lukas

Disable widescreen support. It takes 2 seconds, so rather than type out a response, just change it.

00:21:923 (5,6,7) – This spacing is nuts. There's a huge jump from calm to intense, and it feels bad. I need some kind of transition between moving calmly and moving rapidly.
00:15:257 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – Part of the problem stems from this feeling wholly underwhelming. I get that the song is calm and you want to reflect that. However, I don't feel like I'm playing the game since these rhythms don't give me enough to interact with. As a result, this section is a bit boring rather than expressive.

00:30:257 (3,4) – This is nuts. The “tsu” lyric is a hushed vocal and isn't really sung at all, which makes me feel like the song is weak here. The map is the opposite. A ¼ rhythm like this plays very intensely, which also goes against the general calm feeling from this section. It's kind of like saying if someone sang “spy” in English, then they sing for two syllables. One is a hushed “su” lyric before a pronounced “pie” lyric. It's very similar to what's going on here, and it just plays like horseradish.

00:37:479 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) – I had a suspicion I wasn't really getting my point across when I had my chat with you. This pattern is also just moving in the same circle without showing off the differences in the song through motion. The problem that existed before still exists. As for the rest of the stuff you changed in this new difficulty, it's not that you made it better, you made it for a different audience who likes a different thing. That's fine, I can see the intended experience you're delivering, but I was one of the people who liked your other map more. I actually don't like ¼ spaced stuff, so I feel a bit bait-and-switched. Anyway, don't change anything here since I don't think it's worth your time to change something that's technically rankable.

00:55:479 (5,7) – Do these have to be perfectly stacked? It's hard for me to see them. Why make this hard to read? By offsetting the circles a little bit, I'm able to read the pattern better, which I feel provides a better play experience.

01:01:034 (6,7,8,1) – The 6 → 7 → 8 flow is a bit awkward. I have to move a tiny bit up to get to (7), and this really throws me off to then go the other direction to (8). I personally suck so much at ¼ spacing so I'm not sure if this is really an issue, but it also feels weird how 6,7,8 are just slightly off from being pure linear.

01:11:034 (3) – missing hitsound

01:56:590 (1,2) – Objects are really close. This looks a bit odd/poor. Also since we're here, 01:56:146 (6,1) – might be able to blanket, so consider a change like: http://puu.sh/zyr9X/e301698045.jpg

01:59:479 (1) – make a hitsound?

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2018-03-01T21:43:58+00:00

shortered slider

osu file format v14

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Seolv

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Joined March 2016

Seolv 2018-03-01T22:09:22+00:00

pinataman wrote:
Lukas

Disable widescreen support. It takes 2 seconds, so rather than type out a response, just change it. fixedddd

00:21:923 (5,6,7) – This spacing is nuts. There's a huge jump from calm to intense, and it feels bad. I need some kind of transition between moving calmly and moving rapidly. the drums are sudden so I think it fits enough, it's an extra after all
00:15:257 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – Part of the problem stems from this feeling wholly underwhelming. I get that the song is calm and you want to reflect that. However, I don't feel like I'm playing the game since these rhythms don't give me enough to interact with. As a result, this section is a bit boring rather than expressive. The song is calm, the part is calm, so it is expressive and representative of the song in the right way, in my opinion this wouldn't be much of a problem

00:30:257 (3,4) – This is nuts. The “tsu” lyric is a hushed vocal and isn't really sung at all, which makes me feel like the song is weak here. The map is the opposite. A ¼ rhythm like this plays very intensely, which also goes against the general calm feeling from this section. It's kind of like saying if someone sang “spy” in English, then they sing for two syllables. One is a hushed “su” lyric before a pronounced “pie” lyric. It's very similar to what's going on here, and it just plays like horseradish. true

00:37:479 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) – I had a suspicion I wasn't really getting my point across when I had my chat with you. This pattern is also just moving in the same circle without showing off the differences in the song through motion. The problem that existed before still exists. As for the rest of the stuff you changed in this new difficulty, it's not that you made it better, you made it for a different audience who likes a different thing. That's fine, I can see the intended experience you're delivering, but I was one of the people who liked your other map more. I actually don't like ¼ spaced stuff, so I feel a bit bait-and-switched. Anyway, don't change anything here since I don't think it's worth your time to change something that's technically rankable. I didn't really understand what I should've changed, the changes here are slight. Although it technically is rankable, I'd much rather have a better map than a just average and rankable map, so I'll try to apply your point as good as I can

00:55:479 (5,7) – Do these have to be perfectly stacked? It's hard for me to see them. Why make this hard to read? By offsetting the circles a little bit, I'm able to read the pattern better, which I feel provides a better play experience. Refer to my replies above, a point of an extra is to be somewhat challenging and that's what I wanted to achieve

01:01:034 (6,7,8,1) – The 6 → 7 → 8 flow is a bit awkward. I have to move a tiny bit up to get to (7), and this really throws me off to then go the other direction to (8). I personally suck so much at ¼ spacing so I'm not sure if this is really an issue, but it also feels weird how 6,7,8 are just slightly off from being pure linear.

01:11:034 (3) – missing hitsound I don't think that's unintentional tbh, there isn't a hitsound in that same part in the previous section either so I'm assuming it's on purpose

01:56:590 (1,2) – Objects are really close. This looks a bit odd/poor. Also since we're here, 01:56:146 (6,1) – might be able to blanket, so consider a change like: http://puu.sh/zyr9X/e301698045.jpg

01:59:479 (1) – make a hitsound?

uwu

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Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Shunao 2018-03-02T00:28:13+00:00

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Kensuke

1,856 posts

Joined April 2014

Kensuke 2018-03-09T04:16:17+00:00

mainly focus on rhythm
~~metadata?~~ eeeeee my bad

[General]

the difficulty gap between hard and eLy's insane is pretty high in terms of star rating and aiming. you could notice that hard difficulty uses constant spacing among difficulty, while eLy's insane difficulty uses high spacing between hitobjects (such as 01:58:812 (3,4) - ). so it might be better to add a difficulty between these difficulties, like light insane. in order to make the difficulty spread better.
02:06:368 - use 5%-volume green line here will be better since there is literally no sound here.
It's a cut version, so I'd recommend to add "cut version" in tags too.

[Easy]

00:53:479 (2) - since the sound here isn't really dominant, so i think this hitcircle shouldn't be here. might be better to make a reverse on 00:52:590 (1) -, in order to represent the song's intensity.
01:31:479 - the vocal here is pretty discernible, players could get easily confused that the slider 01:31:701 (2) - is placed at 01:31:479 -. and since the previous hitobjects have been followed the vocal rhythm, so i think 01:29:923 (1,2) - should too. for instance, you could do something like this in order to represent the vocal sound at here.

In general, I think kiai section could be more variety. Using only 1/1 sliders and 3/2 sliders might be a little bit uninteresting. I'd recommend to add 2/1 sliders for variety. For example, 00:56:146 (3,4) - could be instead 2/1 sliders. This will make variety among kiai section and looks more interesting.

[Normal]

I think you could better use circle size 3.2, in order to make it different from Advanced difficulty since current circle sizes of Normal and Advanced difficulties are the same.
00:03:479 (5) - idk what that sound called, but there is also the same sound at 00:03:701 -. so i think this spot could be a circle and a 1/2 slider with 1/2-beat gap long between each hitobjects instead of 1/1 slider, in order to emphasize the sound's rhythm better.
00:57:923 (1) - i don't think using 1/1 slider here is suitable with the vocal's rhythm. as the lyric here is "独り (ひとり)" so i'm pretty sure that there is a vocal at 00:58:146 -. So I think using a 1/2 slider and a reverse here could represent the vocal's rhythm better, rather than using a 1/1 slider.

[Advanced]

00:03:479 (5) - As same as Normal difficulty here, so using a circle and a 1/2 slider with 1/2-beat gap long between each hitobjects instead of 1/1 slider, in order to emphasize the sound's rhythm better.
00:36:146 (4,5,1) - since both the instrumental sound and vocal sound here are pretty dominant, making the hitobjects stacked to one another isn't really suitable with the song's intensity here since the hitobjects give really low movement to players, and that makes these give less feedback to players. So I'd recommend to unstack these hitobjects in order to make the hitobjects here give more feedback to players.
00:48:812 (5) - there is literally no dominant sound here to make this hitcircle at this spot exist. I think it might be better to make this part 00:48:590 (4,5) - become 1/2 slider instead.

[Hard]

00:43:701 (1,2,3) - will be better to swap these hitobjects since the vocal sound at 00:43:701 -, 00:43:923 - and 00:44:146 -, while there is no vocal sound at 00:44:368 - at all.
00:46:590 (4,5) - swap these too, because the vocal sound at 00:46:812 - has more density than the other vocal sounds in this part.
01:21:923 (3,4,6,7,1) - players could be easily confused since all of them are stacked to one another. since the previous hitcircles 01:21:923 (3,4) - are stacked with 1/2-beat long gap between hitobjects, players' intuition will understand that these hitobjects 01:22:590 (6,7,1) - also have 1/2-beat gap long among each hitobject too, making players gathering 100s or even a miss here. So I'd recommend you to unstack these hitcircles 01:21:923 (3,4) - instead to avoid making an unfair reading challenge for players.
01:58:368 (1) - might be better to use 2 circles with 1/2-beat gap long between each hitobjects instead since both sounds at slider start and slider end has the same dominant sound.

This difficulty itself is pretty fine but next time please try to use inconsistent spacing in some spots, for variety.

[eLy's Insane]

00:00:812 (1,2) - there is no other difficulty that map this part but you. So I think you could remove these for consistency among mapset.
00:07:701 (6,7,1) - The visual spacing here is as the same as the hitobjects with 1/2-beat gap between each hitobjects (like 00:07:479 (5,6) -). So try to make these hitobjects become nearer to each other or make the hitobjects 00:07:479 (5,6) - go further to each other, to make a distinct visual spacing to avoid having an unfair reading problem to players. As same as 00:13:923 (2,3,4,5) -.
00:21:923 (6,7,1) - the spacing between each hitobjects here is kinda ambiguous here. since the previous stacked hitcircles like 00:20:034 (4,5) - are stacked with 1/4-beat long gap between hitobjects, players' intuition will understand that these hitobjects 00:22:146 (7,1) - are also have 1/4-beat gap long between each hitobject too, making players gathering 100s or even a miss here. So I'd recommend you to add a reverse at 00:21:923 (6) - to avoid having an unfair reading challenge for players.
00:54:368 (2,3) - the spacing between these hitobjects is pretty huge compared to the rest of the kiai section. So it might be better to make the spacing here lower, by moving the slider 00:54:368 (2) - nearer to the slider's head of 00:54:812 (3) -.
01:36:368 (4) - might be better to make this slider become 3/2-beat long slider there is a dominant sound at 01:36:812 -. using the 3/2 slider will represent the vocal sound at here better than slider tick.

[Kalibe's Insane]

Widescreen support is inconsistent and this map doesn't have a storyboard, so disable it.
00:01:479 (2,3) - it would be better if you make this part here the same rhythm as 00:03:257 (2,3,1) -, so they could emphasize the instrumental sound better.
00:21:479 (2,1) - the flow here goes pretty unnaturally. since the slider 00:21:479 (2) - goes downwards, players' intuition will focus on downside instead. this could make players easily not see the slider 00:21:923 (1) -, which makes the players gather 100s or even a miss here. (I tried playing this in first time and I missed here xp) So I'd recommend you to move the slider to somewhere like this instead.
00:27:701 (1,2) - using the same rhythm as 00:24:146 (1,2,3,4) - will make the hitobjects in this part here emphasize the instrumental sound better. As same as 00:31:257 (1,2,3,4) -.

[Lukas' Extra]

It might be better to increase the overall difficulty, because you know.. it's extra difficulty. *shrug*
00:07:923 (7,8,1) - There is no sign to indicate players for the differentiation of this transition of the hitobjects gap, so these hitobjects might be too sudden for players. I'd highly recommend you to add a new combo here. As same as 00:21:923 (5) -, 00:36:368 (6) - and the rest among your difficulty.
00:48:555 (1) - Don't be edgy here.
00:57:034 (5) - Since the spacing changes, I'd recommend you to add a new combo also to indicate the transition in spacing. As same as 01:11:257 (5) -
00:58:590 (3,4,5,6) - It's technically spaced differently, but in my intuition, I think players could easily misunderstand that these hitobjects are also 1/4 because of the same visual spacing. Try to make the hitcircle 00:59:034 (6) - move further to avoid making an unfair reading issue to players.

I will see how you handle the mod and stuff, and consider if I'll nominate this or not.
It might be a little bit late, but this is my birthday present for you. :3c

Last edited by Kensuke 2018-03-10T04:25:39+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2018-03-09T14:47:07+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
[Kalibe's Insane]
Widescreen support is inconsistent and this map doesn't have a storyboard, so disable it. not really nessesary tbh but ok
00:01:479 (2,3) - it would be better if you make this part here the same rhythm as 00:03:257 (2,3,1) -, so they could emphasize the instrumental sound better. sure
00:21:479 (2,1) - the flow here goes pretty unnaturally. since the slider 00:21:479 (2) - goes downwards, players' intuition will focus on downside instead. this could make players easily not see the slider 00:21:923 (1) -, which makes the players gather 100s or even a miss here. (I tried playing this in first time and I missed here xp) So I'd recommend you to move the slider to somewhere like this instead. that was my intention to do antiflow here, next sounds 00:21:923 (1,2) - are pretty strong so i want to emphasize by it
00:27:701 (1,2) - using the same rhythm as 00:24:146 (1,2,3,4) - will make the hitobjects in this part here emphasize the instrumental sound better. As same as 00:31:257 (1,2,3,4) -. ok

hell ye

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Shunao

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Shunao 2018-03-13T01:19:20+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
mainly focus on rhythm
~~metadata?~~ eeeeee my bad

[General]
the difficulty gap between hard and eLy's insane is pretty high in terms of star rating and aiming. you could notice that hard difficulty uses constant spacing among difficulty, while eLy's insane difficulty uses high spacing between hitobjects (such as 01:58:812 (3,4) - ). so it might be better to add a difficulty between these difficulties, like light insane. in order to make the difficulty spread better. I don't think that the diff gap is a very big problem tbh, Hard has alot of triplets and is pretty dense i don't think that is a good idea to add a new diff :/
02:06:368 - use 5%-volume green line here will be better since there is literally no sound here. done!
It's a cut version, so I'd recommend to add "cut version" in tags too. ^
[Easy]
00:53:479 (2) - since the sound here isn't really dominant, so i think this hitcircle shouldn't be here. might be better to make a reverse on 00:52:590 (1) -, in order to represent the song's intensity. okk
01:31:479 - the vocal here is pretty discernible, players could get easily confused that the slider 01:31:701 (2) - is placed at 01:31:479 -. and since the previous hitobjects have been followed the vocal rhythm, so i think 01:29:923 (1,2) - should too. for instance, you could do something like this in order to represent the vocal sound at here. yup
In general, I think kiai section could be more variety. Using only 1/1 sliders and 3/2 sliders might be a little bit uninteresting. I'd recommend to add 2/1 sliders for variety. For example, 00:56:146 (3,4) - could be instead 2/1 sliders. This will make variety among kiai section and looks more interesting. yes you're right

[Normal]
I think you could better use circle size 3.2, in order to make it different from Advanced difficulty since current circle sizes of Normal and Advanced difficulties are the same. ok
00:03:479 (5) - idk what that sound called, but there is also the same sound at 00:03:701 -. so i think this spot could be a circle and a 1/2 slider with 1/2-beat gap long between each hitobjects instead of 1/1 slider, in order to emphasize the sound's rhythm better. i follow the guitar rhythm and this pattern work very well
00:57:923 (1) - i don't think using 1/1 slider here is suitable with the vocal's rhythm. as the lyric here is "独り (ひとり)" so i'm pretty sure that there is a vocal at 00:58:146 -. So I think using a 1/2 slider and a reverse here could represent the vocal's rhythm better, rather than using a 1/1 slider. yep
[Advanced]
00:03:479 (5) - As same as Normal difficulty here, so using a circle and a 1/2 slider with 1/2-beat gap long between each hitobjects instead of 1/1 slider, in order to emphasize the sound's rhythm better. like i said in the normal xd
00:36:146 (4,5,1) - since both the instrumental sound and vocal sound here are pretty dominant, making the hitobjects stacked to one another isn't really suitable with the song's intensity here since the hitobjects give really low movement to players, and that makes these give less feedback to players. So I'd recommend to unstack these hitobjects in order to make the hitobjects here give more feedback to players. okay
00:48:812 (5) - there is literally no dominant sound here to make this hitcircle at this spot exist. I think it might be better to make this part 00:48:590 (4,5) - become 1/2 slider instead.fixed!
[Hard]
00:43:701 (1,2,3) - will be better to swap these hitobjects since the vocal sound at 00:43:701 -, 00:43:923 - and 00:44:146 -, while there is no vocal sound at 00:44:368 - at all. i don't want to spam circles tbh and you can know that i don't wanted to map vocals atm i prefered mapped the rhythm
00:46:590 (4,5) - swap these too, because the vocal sound at 00:46:812 - has more density than the other vocal sounds in this part. fixed
01:21:923 (3,4,6,7,1) - players could be easily confused since all of them are stacked to one another. since the previous hitcircles 01:21:923 (3,4) - are stacked with 1/2-beat long gap between hitobjects, players' intuition will understand that these hitobjects 01:22:590 (6,7,1) - also have 1/2-beat gap long among each hitobject too, making players gathering 100s or even a miss here. So I'd recommend you to unstack these hitcircles 01:21:923 (3,4) - instead to avoid making an unfair reading challenge for players. ok
01:58:368 (1) - might be better to use 2 circles with 1/2-beat gap long between each hitobjects instead since both sounds at slider start and slider end has the same dominant sound. ok!
This difficulty itself is pretty fine but next time please try to use inconsistent spacing in some spots, for variety. fixed!

I will see how you handle the mod and stuff, and consider if I'll nominate this or not.
It might be a little bit late, but this is my birthday present for you. :3c Thanks a lot!! owo

i don't have time for normal, adavnced and hard now im gonna check this later

Last edited by Shunao 2018-03-16T20:19:15+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Shunao

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Shunao 2018-03-15T18:32:20+00:00

removed lukas diff since he's not here anymore, i send him some message (in discord too) but he didn't responded so i think he don't want to check his diff

Kensuke

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Kensuke 2018-03-18T13:07:32+00:00

Shunao wrote:
[Hard]
00:43:701 (1,2,3) - will be better to swap these hitobjects since the vocal sound at 00:43:701 -, 00:43:923 - and 00:44:146 -, while there is no vocal sound at 00:44:368 - at all. i don't want to spam circles tbh and you can know that i don't wanted to map vocals atm i prefered mapped the rhythm

i'm okay with your reason, but still.. making the sound at 00:44:368 - clickable doesn't seem to make sense at all. at least you could make 00:44:146 (2,3) - a 1/2 slider instead is ok.

00:01:035 - is it intentional to make 70% volume here? seems to be too high.

Shunao

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Shunao 2018-03-18T13:36:10+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
Shunao wrote:
[Hard]
00:43:701 (1,2,3) - will be better to swap these hitobjects since the vocal sound at 00:43:701 -, 00:43:923 - and 00:44:146 -, while there is no vocal sound at 00:44:368 - at all. i don't want to spam circles tbh and you can know that i don't wanted to map vocals atm i prefered mapped the rhythm
i'm okay with your reason, but still.. making the sound at 00:44:368 - clickable doesn't seem to make sense at all. at least you could make 00:44:146 (2,3) - a 1/2 slider instead is ok. ok fixed!

00:01:035 - is it intentional to make 70% volume here? seems to be too high. not at all, done!

Kensuke

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Kensuke 2018-03-18T13:38:24+00:00

late birthday present here

Shunao

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Shunao 2018-03-18T13:56:46+00:00

owo

edit: waiting ely reply to frontier

Erisan

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Erisan 2018-03-24T04:06:54+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:

[eLy's Insane]

00:00:812 (1,2) - there is no other difficulty that map this part but you. So I think you could remove these for consistency among mapset.
00:07:701 (6,7,1) - The visual spacing here is as the same as the hitobjects with 1/2-beat gap between each hitobjects (like 00:07:479 (5,6) -). So try to make these hitobjects become nearer to each other or make the hitobjects 00:07:479 (5,6) - go further to each other, to make a distinct visual spacing to avoid having an unfair reading problem to players. As same as 00:13:923 (2,3,4,5) -.
00:21:923 (6,7,1) - the spacing between each hitobjects here is kinda ambiguous here. since the previous stacked hitcircles like 00:20:034 (4,5) - are stacked with 1/4-beat long gap between hitobjects, players' intuition will understand that these hitobjects 00:22:146 (7,1) - are also have 1/4-beat gap long between each hitobject too, making players gathering 100s or even a miss here. So I'd recommend you to add a reverse at 00:21:923 (6) - to avoid having an unfair reading challenge for players.
00:54:368 (2,3) - the spacing between these hitobjects is pretty huge compared to the rest of the kiai section. So it might be better to make the spacing here lower, by moving the slider 00:54:368 (2) - nearer to the slider's head of 00:54:812 (3) -.
01:36:368 (4) - might be better to make this slider become 3/2-beat long slider there is a dominant sound at 01:36:812 -. using the 3/2 slider will represent the vocal sound at here better than slider tick.

ALL FIXED thank you modding

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